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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
UPDATE: 22


Sid and Roli did not understand about sudden decision of simar to marry prem.
Simar who noticed their confusion on faces gave them clarity.
Simar: Roli I did this for you. I know how weak you are after all this. Right now there is no one with you as support from your family. Now Iam there as your babhi to take care of you and also your bhaiyya. Trust me I will never let you suffer and bring back your old brother to you.
Roli hugged simar and cried but out of happiness for showing so much love on her.
While sid was imagining simar on mt.everest.
He felt proud to be brother of such a loving sister.
Simar released the hug.
Simar: Roli don't cry. You should take care of your health. Go and take rest. We will go to our house soon.
Roli smiled.
Simar: bhaiyya we will discharge premji as well and we will arrange ventilator and other required facilities in the house only.
Sid smiled at her caressing her hair lovingly.
After a while Roli left to her room.
Sid too came out from prem's room in a while and left Simar and prem alone.
Simar caressed and kissed on her forehead.

Sid went to roli's room.
He knocked the door before entering.
Roli who was in deep thoughts saw sid standing near the door.
Roli smiled.
Roli: come in Sidji. Why are you standing there itself.
Sid came and stood next to Roli.
There was silence in the room for few seconds.
Sid cleared his throat and started...
Sid: Roli... How is your health now. Don't take any tension and dress yourself.
Roli: yes sidji. Ofcourse when people like you and simar are around me I don't need to take any tension. Really now don't need to cry anymore for things I have lost. You both have become my biggest support sidji.
Her eyes dwelled up tears by now.
Sid: see you are crying again. This means what ever you said is not true.
Roli swiftly cleared her running tears and smiled.
Roli: no not at all. I mean what I say.
Sid: you know Roli you look so beautifully when you smile. Just like an innocent baby smile.
He admired her.
Before Roli understand what he said sid involuntarily moved towards her face and kissed on her forehead.
Roli was shocked on sid's action but in the mean while she liked it too.
Sid moved back on hearing the opening of door.
Renu entered inside the room.
For a while she stood statued seeing closeness of Roli and sid.
Renu: hey guys what is happening inside.
She asked forcing herself to smile.
Roli and sid kept quiet.
Renu came and sat beside Roli and placed her hand on her shoulder.
Renu: I am sorry for you Roli. I can understand your feelings now but it's all fate. Don't worry surely your brother will become alright.
Roli would have been feeling good on this words if someone else is saying all this but it was really irritating to hear her voice.
Sid saw change in expression on Roli's face.
Sid: renu lets go out. Let Roli take rest may be she is tiered.
Roli thanked sid with her eyes.
Sid and renu left the room.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Sorry for late updates di.
I was little busy yesterday.
So updating now. Hope you like it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Fab dear loved it really like a story a lot waiting for morr
Edited by sheetal1979 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
UPDATE: 23


In another two days prem was brought home.
They arranged all facilities of hospital within his room.
They arranged everything and made prem lye on his bed.
Then Simar, Roli and Sid came out of the room.
Sid: simar what you want to do now. I mean what will you tell in home.
Simar: bhaiyya I have a plan for that.
I will say them that we are on some project work and had to go out of city for that.
Sid: but simar we can't give this excuse for long time.
Simar: bhaiyya right now this is the only option we have. Let's see what happens later.
Sid and Roli agreed with simar.
Sid: ok now I am leaving. Make sure you call me immediately if anything required. I will come in the evening again and take you home. You can tell in home and come back.
Simar: ok bhaiyya.
Sid: take care of you both and also prem. bye.
Simar and Roli waved bye to sid.
Simar: Roli now go and take bath. We will have breakfast.
Roli went to her room.
After a while Roli came down and went towards the kitchen.
Roli saw simar deeply thinking about something.
Roli gently pat on her shoulder.
Simar came out of her thoughts and now d at Roli.
Roli: what are you thinking simar.
Simar: Roli I was thinking about that incident only. I think Iam able to relate something.
First thing we are sure that someone behind your's and premji's attack is same.
Then he did not involve directly in action. He heired people to do all this which we came to know from the bit of paper which we got in that place.
Then that DSP said the one behind all this is hidden and they need to trace them.
Roli: ha simar what ever you said is right but what is your concern now.
Simar:did you observe... Premji was shot right when he tried to tell you something. So premji knows everything so only he was shot before he open his mouth.
Roli: ha simar you are right. I too remember this. Bhaiyya was shot when he was about to say us something.
Simar: Roli do you remember that number which was written on that paper.
Roli: not sure simar. I just saw it once.
Simar: ok let's think about all this later and now let's have food.
They moved towards the dining table.
After finishing their break fast both went to prem.
Roli: hai bhaiyya. You know it is too boring for me. I am not able to tease my brother and missing your pampering a lot. Miss you.
She hugged prem.
Simar caresses her hair.
Simar: Roli now go and take rest. I will be with premji.
Roli with a smile left the room.


Roli in her room was thinking about what Simar said.
She is struggling to remember that number.
She took paper and pen and started writing what ever she remember.
But she felt none of those numbers are correct.
She tried again and again.

Sorry to make you wait guys
Please never miss to bring it to my notice if story seems out of track or boring. I welcome your feedback though positive or negative. Any changes please pm me.
sheetal1979 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Not any changes dear I like the update eagerly waiting for more and possible give some rosid scene without any interference of anybody
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
no changes updates are awesome give more Rosid scenes loved the part sid kissed on roli forehead but that stupid renu throw her out of Rosid life plz
sameera.2397 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Thanks for all te comments my dear friends.
I will give updates after12:30 mid night.
I Know I am little harsh for now but please bear me.
I will surely give ROSID scenes. But have to wait for atleast 5 updates.sorry again.
sheetal1979 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: ramya2397

Thanks for all te comments my dear friends.
I will give updates after12:30 mid night.
I Know I am little harsh for now but please bear me.
I will surely give ROSID scenes. But have to wait for atleast 5 updates.sorry again.

no prob dear we'll wait till mid night but rosid scene after 5 updates 😭 that means those update u provide in midnight there is no rosid scene bcoz u said 5 updates so is that possible that u give more than 5 updates no na so we have to wait till next weekend will try to wait 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
UPDATE:25


Roli was scratching her head over that number.
She drifted to sleep slowly.
In a while she started dreaming. She dreamt of the same incident.
Roli and Simar going to that place. Finding a bit of paper with some number...
Then they being forced into a room...prem getting shot...
Roli suddenly got saying No...
She was sweating. She drank some water to calm her down.
She immediately rushed to prem's room.
She returned back to her room conforming that he is alright.
She layed down on her bed again.
She was thinking...
Why Iam not able to recollect the number. oh god I have become so weak in memorizing number.
Please help me God...,
She slowly drifted to sleep.
In a while she felt a soft hand caressing her forehead. She opened her eyes.
She was happy to see that person infront of hre. She smiled.
It was siddanth...siddanth slowly moved toward her cupping her face... He kissed on her forehead head. Roli smiled and got up from bed. She too cup his face and moved towards him. She kissed on his forehead then on his cheeks. Both looked at each other. They had an eye lock for a while. Both involuntary moved towards eachother closer and closer until they felt each others lips touching theirs.
Their kissed started as a soft peck and slowly turned to passionate one when sid invade into Roli's mouth. Roli too responded to him equally. Their tounges fought to show their dominance in love. They enjoyed for long till Roli gasp for breath clutching her hold tightly around him.
Sid pressed his lips on Roli softly before breaking the kiss. Roli was still closing her eyes tightly out of shyness. Sid moved a bit away from Roli and asked to open her eyes...
Roli opened her eyes slowly.
She was shocked. She found no one in her room. Instead she found herself hugging the pillow.
She swiftly got up from bed. She realized it was her dream. She blushed remembering her dream. But swift put break as she knows he is already in relation and also was not sure what made her dream such a thing. She was confused. She without her knowledge wish this was true.
She no more got interested to sleep and walking downstairs. Hmmm there he was.
Sitting in sofa talking in his phone.

I don't know if it was up to the mark as I did not plan for rosid scene in this update. hope you like it friends.
Sorry for not being able to give more updates. But I wi compensate them tomorrow evening.
Good night.

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Posted: 9 years ago
wow what a dream dear lovely will wait good night

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