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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update dear waiting for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update dear...Waiting for more rosid scenes...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely updates dear waiting for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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tq friend fr ur cmnts..thought to give update yesterday..bt yesterday also office is there..so didnt get tym..next upd on d way
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 4:
she was shocked

she asked cofusingly

sinchan r u alright?

i replied bluntly no misthy..not at all..ur nt my bestie..u changed

wat made uu think like that..im still ur misthy

no u changed...u frgt me...roli remeber one thing..friend is nt only share hapiness ..a friend is the one who stand beside when ur in difficulties

u didnt even tell me abt anything..n ur staying in orphanage

nw she understud my concern

she took deep breath

she came towards me

i turned my face

she smiled

she holded my pinky finger

its our friendship gesture

i looked at her

she kept puppy face

cant u frgve ur misthy

i laughed by cing her cute expressioon

bt still im nt intrested to show that

i again turned my face

she cupped my face

that touch brought some feelings in me

she made me to look into her eyes

she said slowly

sorry na yar

i just cant hold myself

i pulled her

n hugged her

n tears came in my eyes

in my childhood also i used to hug roli as friendly nature

bt that day when i hugged her..i got some sort of feelings which i cant understand

i hugged her tightly n said i missed u yar

she too told me that she missed me

i broke hug

i didnt c any feeling in roli

i thought may b she is feeling that hug as friendly gesture

i hold her neck

if u again try to leave me..jaan lelunga

she smiled

never think abt it( she said)

i asked...nw tell y u didnt infrm me abt uncle n aunt

she lowered her eyes n said with low voice

i dont want to becum burden to anyone

i glared at her

roli hw can u becum burden to me

she started her narration

no sid...not like that...when maa n papa died my relatives r busy in thinking abt sharing property bt nt in me...they thohgt to share me also..3 mnths in uncle house 3 mnts in another aunt house...i was fed up..so i ran frm there..then i found nirmala aunt..she is warden of this orphanage...she made me join here,,,fr my relatives itself i became burden..so i decided not to depend on others...so i didnt inform anyone abt my where abts...

i felt bad by hearing that

ok roli wat happened is happened..leave it..lets go...

she looked at me confusingly

where? she asked

i said immediately : to our house

she refused" no sid i cant

i was shocked: bt y?

roli: sid nirmala aunty wrkd hard to bring up .all of kids here...bt she took loan to build this building...becz of her im here..so its my duty to repay loan

at that tym i heard voice

ok i vl give money u pay

i lukd in that direction

its noneother than papa

roli felt happy by cing them

she rushed to him n hugged him

n took blessing frm mataji

bt she refused to take money

i asked: y roli wats ur prblm

she said: no sid i vl only pay

ofcouese i was lost before my stubborn roli

ok u only pay..bt atleast come to our house

she refused: no sid..i vl ...once repay loan



i was irritated

bt roli hw u repay that much amt

she smiled

sid..u dont know ur friend inner talent..i already got half of amt i have to pay

i was shocked

bt hw?

ur friend is writing novels with pen name rosid

i was literally shocked

roli r u kidding..ur the writer of the novels with pen name rosid..i cant believe it..im die hard fan of u yar

she smiled

i asked curiously..by d way rosid means?

she called me near to her

she said in ears: secret

sid: u???? u never change? as usual naughty



ok .nw say wats ur next plan

roli thought fr a while

have to search fr a job

i was surprised: y

eoli answered: all d amt im getting through writings...im using fr loan purpose n also some other purposes...n too maintain these many kids..i have to earn na

i started: no roli..this tym i wont agree..those expenses vl b take care by papa..ur nt going to wrk

roli is abt to intrupt

no roli..dont try to intrupt

n another thing..ur admission is confirmed in the clz where i m going to study

roli was shocked

sid: ..my admission confirmed when? hw?

sid: nw itself i decided..so u r admission confirmed..i looked at my papa

n asked..am i right papa

my papa came n said..of course..roli ure admission confirmed


( sry guys. if any illogical points plz ignore it...i dont know hw its going)

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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Wow fabulous update dear loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
roli wrote the novels with pen name Rosid so that means she also loves sid is that the secret 😉 waiting for more dear update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome dear i liked when they r calling as shinchan n mishty luvd it
Waiting for nxt update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
part 5:
roli too accepted to join in clz

i was on cloud nine

i spent some tym with her

n left the place half heartedly

that day n8 i cant able to sleep

roli is filled in mind

i got up

i was confused abt this new feeling

i scolded myself

sid wat r u doing...roli is ur beste..hw can u think abt her like that...wat she think abt u? u may loose ur friendship if u continue this

i compramised my heart

bt this heart is there na...so crazy

i cant able to cntrl myself when i was with roli

days going

our friendship grown deeper according to roli

bt according to me my love grown deeper

yes i realised its nt mere attraction

i truely fell in luv with her

becz of her simplicity..her chirpiness, totally totally i fell fr her

v ruled clz

total clz knows v r besties

bt only one knows i luv roli

yes he is my frnd rohan

he asked ,me so many tyms to propose roli

bt i was scared

ya im nt feeling shy to say im scared...

bt really i dont want to loose my friendship

so i didnt confessed

one day i went to dad

hesistatingly i said..papa i want to ask one thing

ha beta y r u asking permission..my papa said

i started...papa y cant v pay total loan of orphanage

yes beta v can..bt roli is nt agreeing na

ha dad..she is stubborn...bt y cant v donate as anonymous donar to orphanage

ha gud idea...v vl...bt can i know wat is reason behind this? he asked with naughty smile

papa...i was stamering

tell me...im waiting : he said

papa...if i allow roli like that ..she vl take so many years to come to our home

ok wat is there in that..let her stay in orphanage..he said by looking into my face

papa its nt good to allow ur daughter in law to stay in some where else when our house is there r8 here

i said lowering my head...trying to avoid his expression

he came to me n hugged me

i was surprised

i asked hesistatly..papa that means ur ok with my love

y not..im double ok..sid i wished that i should get good daughter in law bt im happy im getting daughter

i was excited n hugged him..tq papa

ok did u tell to roli abt ur love..he asked

no papa i was scared..wat if she rejects

dont wry..she wont..first confess ur luv...im sure she vl accept...all d best..

next day

im with rohan..rohan is giving some ideas

bt im nt satisfied

atlast he came up with some idea

i decided to implement it









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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
part 6:
ya v decided to implement our plan

i saw roli entering into clz

rohan left place n stud some wat far

roli entered excitingly

she came to me

sid u know wat..im so happy today...wnt u ask reason?

i said: even though i wont ask..i know u vl tell

she smiled

u know wat? an anonymous donar donated money..with that i can pay whole amount( roli rejected when raj told he vl pay loan..bt she accepted donation becz rajendra told he vl give mny becz of his personal concern on roli. Roli doesnt lyk this..bt donation came to orphanage. So roli is happy abt it)

i felt happy by cing her happiness

is it its really good news..

ya it is.. she hugged me

after that she broke hug

i asked doubtedly: roli wats next

she is confused...n later she smiled..ya next im going to give treat

i dont need party...bt roli i wanna say something to u

ya tell... she said

i sat on my knees n forwarded a red rose

roli i luv u na yar..i luv u so much..i cant live without u...

yes atlast i confessed

i was trying to read roli expression

but before i can read

rohan came

wahva sid wat an acting..u did wat i said perfectly...

roli was confused

acting????? she asked

rohan replied: yes roli..im going to direct short film..im searching fr hero character...sid flashed in my mind..bt i want to test his acting skills...so i asked him to propse u..n he did it perfectly...n sid ur my hero in film..its final

roli glared at me n left the place

i was more tensed nw

i lukd at rohan: u ididot becz of u only..

wat i did...?

arey baba..im trying to read roli expression ..bt before that only u eneterd into scene

oh wrong timing aa: he said scratching his head

ha..ok leave it..nw im tensed..roli is serious...i dont know y?,...becz of playing these games? ok u go to class..i have to pacify her

rohan left place

i went to search fr roli

i saw her in canteen

i went n sat infrnt of her

she lukd at me seriously

when i abt to say sry..she stud up n started moving away

i followed her

roli plz yar meri bath suno

she is nt at all listening me

at last i pulled her near tree

she is abt to speek

i clzd her mouth

i started speeking

roli..im really sry..i dont wanna hurt u..bt rohan forced me to act...so i agreed

still she is glaring at me

she held tightly my palm with her teath

i took my palm frm her mouth becz of pain

roli wat is this???

before i can say anything i saw tears frm her eyes..

i was shocked

roli...y r u crying..i told sry na...its all becz of that rohan

no..its becz of u...she said with tears

me??/ i asked surprisingly

ya its becz of u...i was not hurt when u said u luv me...i was hurt when u said its just acting

i was shocked

im nt on floor

i thought its dream..i pinched myself..oh god its paining

i asked : roli u mean??/

she said: ya i mean it..bt ur buddhu..even though i confessed directly still u cant able to understand...i cant cope up with u..idiot..dont talk with me bye...im going.

when roli is abt to go

i pulled her

she fell on my chest

i hugged her tightly

i already told..dont try to leave me...jaan lelunga...roli i luv u na yar

at that tym i found

she too hugged me

she said with her cute voice...the 3 magical wrds...i luv u too na yar

v both r in our own world

after that roli broke hug

she punched me on my chest..u idiot?? u gave audition to that donkey rohan so called short film

i smiled

roli u know wat? its all our plan

she was shocked

wat?

i again smiled

roli...u know..that rohan dont know hw to take pics only then hw can he direct short film?..today i decided to confess my luv...bt i was tensed..wat if u reject..so i asked rohan to give idea...he told me that confess ur luv..c roli expression..if she smiles its ok..if she is serious then i vl enter n cook up some stry..im trying to read ur expression..bt he came in wrong tym n spoiled everything

roli smiled

she pulled me by coller

hw can u think i vl reject u sid..ur my life...

i smiled

nw i sat on my knees n gave red rose to roli

roli...i luv na yar...i cant live with out u..i vl nt leave u..vl u becum a part in my life...i vl show the life which u missed in these 10 yrs...i vl becum ur mother by feeding food...i vl becum ur papa by patting u when u sleep..im nt only ur best friend bt vl also becum best husband..tell me roli will u marry me

she smiled n took rose frm my hand

she had tears in her eyes

she nodded her head...yes i vl

i wiped her tears...frm nw..there vl nt b any tears roli..only happiness..

she hugged me

i too hugged her





Edited by honeyrosid-6 - 9 years ago

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