rosid ss: lout aaona yar rosid scene added part 3( completed)

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harsha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

tried smwat different in narration hope u lyk it..next update vl b soon

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sheetal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

honey u have time to give updates ? bcoz u r busy till pongal na and story is so gud after give updates its difficult if u not give update bcoz u r busy

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harsha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: kshamaDeeksha
Nice update

tq dear

Edited by honeyrosid-6 - 9 years ago

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harsha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sheetal1979
honey u have time to give updates ? bcoz u r busy till pongal na and story is so gud after give updates its difficult if u not give update bcoz u r busy

hm i understud dear..frm tmrw agin busy. bt ..thought to give rosid intro as its haunting me frm yesterday n if nt.. i vl frgt as u know im ghajini typ

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sheetal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: honeyrosid-6

hm i understud dear..frm tmrw agin busy. bt ..thought to give rosid intro as its haunting me frm yesterday n if nt.. i vl frgt as u know im ghajini typ

true😉

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InToTheUnknown

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

superb updates didi...may not b able to read u till next sunday...well will read altogether then...bye...

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harsha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: RoshniMenon88
superb updates didi...may not b able to read u till next sunday...well will read altogether then...bye...

tq dnt wry dear...becz i too cant update till pongal..bt if possible i vl try on jan 1st

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harsha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

part 3:

my papa rajendra

he is md of bhardwaj industries

he is my papa n maa too

he luvd me lot

n i have sweet grany

sry u already know na

k nw i introduce roli parents

roli father is jamanlal

n her mom meena

jamanlal uncle is my papa best friend in his school days

bt they r seperated after schooling

after some yrs

my papa met him

my papa introduced his family to me n mataji

that is the first tym i met roli

i came to know she is joining in my school

v both became good friends

like rahul n anjali in kuch kuch hota hai

by passing years our friendship grew more

bt to my fate

papa decided to shift U.S

so v went to U.S

BT I Missed my friend roli

initially papa is cnct with uncle

n i too talked with roli

bt later distance increased

papa became busy in business

n im in studies

after 10 yrs

papa toli v r gng back to india

i felt happy

as i can c my roli

v reached india

im eager to meet roli

bt v came to know jamanlal papa n meena aunty died in accident

v felt bad

my next thought is wat abt my roli

v got to know she is staying in orphanage

i decided to bring roli back

me papa n mataji went to that orphanage

i told papa n mataji to sit in car

n i went to ask abt roli

i went inside

i found all r busy in some preparations

ya then i remebered its nov 14 childrens day

so they all r decorating orphanage

sid saw so many children there

he felt bad

while he going inside

he saw a girl frm backside

she is standing on ladder n trying to tie flower strings on top

n a small girl is giving flowers to her( helping her)

( here auther pt view )

sid moved towars her involuntirily

small girl: didi...plz let me go..all r playing..i too wanna play

girl: sweety...just two more ..after i tie this u can go

small girl: roli di plz

sid thought that means she is only roli

then she looked at sid

small girl sighed sid to give those flowers to her di...when she asked

sid noded

small girl left place

roli didnt looked back

roli: sweety give next one

sid gave those

roli tied them

after finishing it

roli looked at them

roli: perfect..i know u vl decorate beautifuly ..no one can beat u

sid smiled

he wanna c her

bt roli long hair is nt letting him to c her face

sid: abt to call roli

roli without cing back

roli: sweety hold it tightly im gettiing down( she told to hold ladder)

sid cant understand wat to hold

roli: sweety..did u hold

sid is confused

sid hold her waist frm back

roli is shocked

by sudden hug frm back

she turned back

n shocked

by her sudden turn

ladder lost it balance

roli n sid both fell down

roli fell on sid chest

both shared an eye lock

both lost in each other eyes

they r in same position fr so much tym

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harsha

@honeyrosid-6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

tq n sry guys in advance..i dont know when i vl give update..sry fr making u wait

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himani_692

@himani_692

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

fab updates dear waiting for next

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