PREMAR OS: Do DIL Ek JAAN -- Completed Pt4 on Pg4 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha122



I can understand yar... So no need to be sorry...😃
Ya i ll update by tomorrow...



tnx u for understanding me
so nice of u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: justchillalways

Part 3 is mind-blowing Asha. Prem proposing simar , that too in an island. You have very nice creativity than SSk Cvs. Hope they read your OS. With the current track, yours OS is a kind of relief . The way you write is very easy to imagine and trust me , it is so beautiful and wonderful. Thanks a bunch for writing the OS and eagerly waiting for the next part. Please take your time to update but you are making us greedy with your wonderful OS to read again and again. Thank you once again.


Thank so much dear for ur compliment...❤️
will update soon yar...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LOVE_DIPISIM



tnx u for understanding me
so nice of u


u r welcome yar...😊😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome OS
this concept is really lovely nd heart-touching
amazing FF nd plzzz continue asha😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Asha , waiting for the final part. Thanks for the OS.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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waiting for final part can we get today?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys here is the last part... I dont know whether i reached ur expectations or not as my mood was not good after seeing Premar seperation again in SSK.. Tried my level best to give proper update.. Hope u ppl love it...
PART 4:

Next day morning the sight which greeted Roli was something which not just warmed her heart but brought tears in her eyes. She was happy would be an understatement.

Why is god unfair? Was the question she always asked when ever she sees some one start commenting about her sister

She didnt believe in god till few years back when for the first time after what felt like ages of joining college she saw her Simar didi smile.

And the reason was non other than Prem Jiju. When she had first got to know about him she was super apprehensive but everything vanished the moment she saw his love and concern for Simar not Pity.

Then onwards she never had to worry about Simar because she knows someone else loves her same as her infact more than her and that's Prem.

She tries to move away from there not wanting to disturb the couple but her mothers voice compels her to go against her wish.

She goes towards Prem and pats his shoulder slowly asking him to wake up

" Jiju utho! Its 6. College ke liye time hojayega." She whispered to him.

Prem who opened his eyes nodded and looked towards Simar who had snuggled into his arms with her head hid in the crook of his neck. He smiles and tucks her hair strand and wakes her up. Simar wakes up to see Prem smiling at her. She kisses him on the cheek which is her way of saying good morning to him.

"Good morning Simar" he too pecks her on her forehead.

"Okay come lets go. You go and freshen up its time for college and since today is the last day as the exam prep holidays are starting we need to attend it. And ya we even have a get together after that u remember right!"

"Hmm.." she said cuddling back to him trying to get as much sleep in 2 mins as possible.

"Simar get up na!" hearing him call her so lovingly she gets up.

Both Prem and Simar move towards their respective rooms to get ready.

And that is how the day passed. In the get together Prem stayed throughout with Simar because of the presence of Surbhi, which was inevitable.

Surbhi fumed with jealousy seeing Simar with Prem but she knew she had lost the battle as Prem and Simar were soon going to be no more friends but also going to be engaged.

Yes when their parents came to know about Prem and Simar's relationship they were happy would be an understatement. They blessed Premar with all their hearts and gave their yes for the marriage immediately. Mataji was no less in fact when she got to know that Simar is going to come to their house. It didnt matter for them whether she could talk or not. All that mattered for them was both their children's happiness.

Prem and Siddanth joined their business.

Life was very smooth for both of them. The title of fiance changed to the title of husband and wife.

That day it felt like the lady god herself came to dress Simar up who looked extremely beautiful. And the man was no less. Dressed in cream and blue sherwani he could send any girl's heart racing.

The marriage though happened it had few issues. The gossip of many people about Simar being dumb reached Prem ears but without getting angry he firmly told off all those guests that

If she (Simar) is the mind then I (Prem) am the voice

If she (Simar) is the thoughts then I (Prem) am the presenter

She doesn't need voice to communicate because however impractical it might sound I know she talks to me. I can hear her voice when she wants to say something to me, which you guys may not hear.

Any ways thank u for coming to my marriage hope you guys enjoy it! Because my to-be wife and me are extremely excited to start our new life together.

After the marriage Premar are marked as one forever.

Simar did not get her voice back. She was very happy in her life. Prem never made her feel like she is weak or disabled. He lived his life with her like any normal husband and wife would live. Fights and arguments were present even between them. Prem would shout at her where as Simar had her own way of arguing that is by throwing things or banging the things indicating her anger. But that was like once in a blue moon because their love for each other won single handedly many times.

They had a very cute daughter Anjali..!!! She was a chatterbox. She had both the qualities of Simar and Prem. The fact that Simar was dumb never mattered to her and even any one would comment on it in her school she knew how to give back to them. Simar would be so overwhelmed that many a times she would just crush her hugging her for the longest time possible.

And this is how they lived happily ever after....

TRUE LOVE ALWAYS WIN --- PREMAR❤️

Edited by Asha122 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for reading and giving you valuable comments will soon be back with one more OS and will update FF by tomorrow as today its not possible as my mood is not good after seeing today SBS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u sooo much dear..do keep updating in Premar separation more plzz...seriously handle this separation!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome updating dear ❤️

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