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yaar pls update next part soon can't see roli like this at step of death😭😭😭
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bring her out of this as soon as possible...waiting to see that
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Oh god...roli is suffering a lot...what's next..
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oh..god...worst life so sad for Roli plz end soon...can't see roli like that
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WARNING: The following update may contain scenes which are disturbing for some readers. I do not intend to offend anyone; rather my only intention is to portray at least some of the horrors of real-life sexual assault and the aftermath of the same. Please proceed at your own risk.


UNDER THE SKY LANTERNS - PART 40
An original story by Archana Vinod


AT THE DUMPING SITE - NIGHT

Wow-wow-wowowowooo----

Prakash almost jumps out of his skin, startled.

At about ten feet away, he spots a couple of red orbs gleaming at him - stray dogs. They warn him with threatening barks.

PRAKASH: (mutters angrily) These bas***ds will ruin everything!

He bends over to pick a stone but recoils in startling pain.

PRAKASH: (clutches his hand in pain) What the---

Just then, a passing vehicle's headlamps briefly light up the site.

Prakash ducks low and hastily gets behind a mound of stinking garbage as the vehicle pulls over.

It's the municipality's garbage truck! But this time, it's empty. No garbage.

The driver gets down along with two of his sidekicks and begins to clean out the truck with a shovel.

Prakash remains obscured in the shadows.


BACK AT THE CRIME SCENE

The dog squad has arrived! By now, Raman has left the scene.

The dogs begin to prowl around, sniffing for clues and whereabouts of the victim. One of the dogs fishes out Roli's phone from the bushes. The policeman retrieves the evidence and keeps it aside.

The squad takes off after the dogs as they begin to trace out the path.


BACK TO JAMANLAL

Jamanlal is still at TechSearch. Just then, he gets a call from Meena.

JAMANLAL: Hello?

MEENA: Haan ji, any news?

JAMANLAL: No dear. I'm at her office. It seems that her team mates had planned for an outing this evening, but she's not with them yet.

Vikrant on the other hand is engaged on the line with Remo. He looks shell-shocked and takes quick glances at Jamanlal.

VIKRANT: (in a whisper, to Remo) You can't be serious.

REMO: I wish so too. Hope she's alright. Sid's there at the scene, I'm headed there with Vimla.

VIKRANT: Alright. Just keep me in the loop.

Vikrant hangs up and looks towards Jamanlal who's still engaged on the call. How am I going to break this to him, he wonders.


THE DUMPING SITE

Prakash waits impatiently for the men to clear out. All the while he hopes that Roli doesn't come around.

The men smoke cheap cigarettes and scrape off the remaining bits of filth from the truck as they laugh and tease each other.

PRAKASH: (mutters to himself) Enough, bloody idiots! Just finish up and get lost! I'm suffocating to death in here!

And in fact he is! The pain on his hand seems to have grown worse. Unbearably worse! It begins to spread up his arm! His stomach hurts and he feels like throwing up. His muscles scream in intense agony and his head begins to reel.

Why do I feel so sick? What the hell is happening?

He checks out his hand and is horrified to see two pin pricks of blood!

PRAKASH: (breathlessly) Oh-my-God...

A familiar sound sends a chill down his spine. The sound of something heavy crawling over the dirt and grime... Could it be...?

And then he sees it in spite of the darkness - a large glossy black snake with a white diamond pattern all over its back.

PRAKASH: (falls back in utter fear) Oh my Gawww---

The reptile strikes again FURIOUSLY!

Prakash is senseless with fear and struggles to scamper away. But the poison has already begun to act within his body. It travels through his blood and begins its destructive work of damaging the tissues and cells, coagulating the blood and shutting down his system...

The angry snake STABS him again just above his ankle and delivers another truck load of poison.

PRAKASH: HELP!!! HELPPP!!!

His desperate cries of help are heard by the corporation guys. They abandon their cleaning work and come running to his aid. But by then, the snake has gone...

One of the men pulls out his shirt and begins to tie it around Prakash's hand, just above the bite, but -

BWAHHH! BWAHHH!

Prakash begins to throw up furiously.

They quickly tend to him and help him into the truck. By now, Prakash is in a mess - he begins to foam from the mouth and vomit uncontrollably!

PRAKASH: (cries) Help me! Help me please!

DRIVER: Stay calm! We're getting you to the hospital!

SIDEKICK 1: Did you see the snake? What does it look like?

But Prakash only throws up as an answer.

PRAKASH: (in utter panic) Oh my God! My stomach! Hurts like hell! Somebody! Help me!

SIDEKICK 2: You guys take him to the hospital fast! I'm going to stay back and look for it.

The driver hands him a heavy stick and a torch.

DRIVER: Be careful! And give us a call once you find it.

They hurry off with Prakash, meanwhile Sidekick 2 flashes the torch around and begins his search.

In a moment, a faint moaning catches his attention.

He turns around startled and finds a gunny bag moving weakly - Roli.

... TO BE CONTINUED

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When will roli come out from that whack can't see her 😭😭like this any this any more make it soon dear send sid soon to her
update soon, don't take any pause now😲😲
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didi i loved ur way of giving punishment to one of the bloody (******) bt this is not enough...he should feel the pain more like hell...both of them nd they should feel like its better to die than suffering like this...bt don't kill them soo fast...at least they should suffer in this ff...
sorry if i said something more or wrong 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: greshin

didi i loved ur way of giving punishment to one of the bloody (******) bt this is not enough...he should feel the pain more like hell...both of them nd they should feel like its better to die than suffering like this...bt don't kill them soo fast...at least they should suffer in this ff...
sorry if i said something more or wrong 😃


😆Thank you dear. I'm glad that you see the "positive" side of this update 😃 And of course, he will suffer like hell. He has been bitten by a viper. Vipers are known to kill one with their poison inch by inch. 😉
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Originally posted by: kshamaD

When will roli come out from that whack can't see her 😭😭like this any this any more make it soon dear send sid soon to her

update soon, don't take any pause now😲😲


Sid's coming to get her. Hang in there. 😉
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UNDER THE SKY LANTERNS - PART 41
By Archana Vinod

THE DUMPING SITE - IN A WHILE

The air reeks of petrol, garbage and blood.

Faint lights flicker over a barely conscious Roli. She has now been discovered and freed from the sack, but her bare torso and ravaged below remains obscured within the gunny bag until Siddhant wraps her with the saree retrieved from the crime scene.

A bit off, the sidekick is interrogated by the cops.

Anand flashes his cell phone light as Siddhant kneels down, wraps up the disheveled girl in her tattered saree and lifts her off the ground. He carries her in his arms to his car.

Two of the cops assist him by flashing a searchlight on his path and opening the rear door to his car.

Anand gets behind the wheel whereas Siddhant gently loads Roli into the back seat and gets in himself.

ANAND: Ready, Siddhant?

SIDDHANT: Just a minute.

With utmost care, he settles down and places her battered bleeding head onto a safe and firm surface - his lap.

SIDDHANT: Ready.

Anand starts the car.

In a while, they are on the streets, zipping past the city traffic with blaring sirens of the police jeep on their tail.

Siddhant's blank stare comes to rest on Roli's ravaged body. She is laid out limp on the back seat, her head still resting on his lap. All of sudden, he has fleeting and terrifying images of the havoc wrecked on Roli as he runs his eyes over the fearsome bite marks, bloody scratches, blue and purple bruises on her face, cut lips and bleeding head. Oh my God, what have they done to her, he wonders painfully. How can they do something like that?

He notices blood seeping through the bandages on her head and soaking into his lap. He leans forward and gently mops it up off her face and the back of her head with his handkerchief.

He is shaken beyond words. It is hard to digest the turn of events - just yesterday he saw her all pepped up and bubbly but tonight she is fighting for her life. She is barely alive! Sad, angry tears spring to his eyes. He reaches out for her limp hand and holds it gently.

Hang in there buddy, he assures her silently, you're going to make it. I know you will... you're a lioness after all.

IN A HOSPITAL ELSEWHERE - AN HOUR LATER

Prakash is soaked up in his own retch and diarrhea. He throws up another pint of blood.

His punctured hand has doubled in size by now and has turned a fearsome shade of purple. He writhes in intense agony and goes into a convulsion as blood begins to ooze out of his nose and all other openings in his body!

They push him off to the emergency room.

DRIVER: (to his sidekick) The doctor thinks that it could be a viper which bit him.

SIDEKICK: Is he going to make it?

DRIVER: I'll be surprised if he does. Question is: what the hell was he doing there?

AT ANOTHER HOSPITAL - MEANWHILE

The emergency team is ready for them as they arrive. They swiftly but gently remove Roli from the car and rush her off to the emergency room.

Siddhant paces up and down the hall as Anand settles down on a vacant chair. Just then, he notices a flustered Jamanlal walk in through the door with Vikrant.

VIKRANT: Siddhant! What's happening?

SIDDHANT: They've taken her in for a series of tests.

His eyes dart towards Jamanlal who looks unusually quiet and expressionless. He almost looks numb!

Just then, a doctor cloaked in a crisp white overcoat hurries towards them.

DOCTOR: Has any of her concerned relatives or guardians turned up?

JAMANLAL: I'm her father.

DOCTOR: Ok, sir. We'll need your signed permission to perform a surgery.

The word "surgery" sends a chill down Jamanlal's spine.

JAMANLAL: Surgery? How bad is it?

DOCTOR: I can fill you in with the details in a while. We're also out of O-ve blood, so you'll need to get the prescribed from the blood bank.

JAMANLAL: B-blood--- (his hands tremble as he takes the chit from the doctor)

SIDDHANT: O negative? That's my blood group as well!

DOCTOR: Wonderful! That makes things easier and quicker then! You can go to the room at the end of this corridor. The nurse will set you up for the transfusion.

Jamanlal glances blankly at Siddhant and notices dried up smudges of blood on his hands, shirt and pants. As he does, his heart sinks with a thud to his guts...

That must be Roli's blood, thinks Jamanlal painfully, what did those animals do to my girl? Did they hurt her a lot?

He looks over at Siddhant's face again. This boy... he saved her. He saved my daughter...

On the other hand, Siddhant hurries off to give his blood as instructed by the doctor.

A police officer joins them in the hall. He is NITIN SHARMA.

Anand nods quietly to acknowledge his presence.

Nitin walks off to the doctor's cabin.

Jamanlal is restless and paces up and down the hall.

OPERATION THEATRE

A team of two doctors and nurses gather around a sedated Roli to perform the surgery for her broken arm and head. She is clothed in green scrubs and laid flat down on a table.

Outside, Jamanlal and the rest of them wait with bated breath.


... TO BE CONTINUED

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