PREMAR FF: Destined to be together -- Updated Pt 27 on Pg 36 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Premarlove455

Superb dear
Wish it was Simar listern
But that suhbi came in 😡
🥺

But awesome dear

Thank you dear... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Note:
I need a suggestion i have two ways to continue the story pls suggest how do you prefer to see it

1) Simar ll have memory loss and she wont remember anything regarding prem then how prem ll win her heart
2) Simar will be giving silent treatment without talking to prem then how ll prem clear all MU's between them


If you want any other way u can suggest

Edited by Asha122 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
What I really want is would be
I want prem to tell Simar the truth in the same temple where they meet for the first time.

Also dear do add simars birthday and for deep details I am already explained u dear
How I want to .
Don't want to say it coz other members will know the story.
Other wise it wouldn't be interesting to read if I say it now.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Premarlove455

What I really want is would be
I want prem to tell Simar the truth in the same temple where they meet for the first time.

Also dear do add simars birthday and for deep details I am already explained u dear
How I want to .
Don't want to say it coz other members will know the story.
Other wise it wouldn't be interesting to read if I say it now.


Ok so u dont want simar to have a memory loss.

As the story progresses he will say simar the truth in temple...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yes I do want simars memory lost
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Posted: 10 years ago

NOTE: Here is the next part. Pls ignore if any mistakes as i am posting through mobile. It may be emotional pls bear it.

PART 15:

They say generally a person's life will flash infront of his eyes when they are going to die. But for Prem it's entirely different he is not going to die and it's not his life that flashed infront of his eyes. But all the happy, sad moments and even fights flashed infront from the day they met.😭

For a second he felt as if his heartbeat is stopped and lungs were not taking in air. After truck hitting her how did he reach her? He don't know he ran like crazy across the street where she was lying in pool of blood with no movement

He kneeled down next to her and his hand which was shaking felt her pulse. It's like as if finally he is breathing. He whispered "Simar I will not let happen anything to you" by taking her in his arms😭

He drove the car as fast as he can in the busy streets ignoring all the traffic signals and finally reached hospital

He shouted doctor please save Simar I cannot live without her😭

Doctor: Don't worry will try our level best. Nurse take her to OT we need to operate immediately

Prem kneels down and says I am really sorry Simar because of me u r in this position. Please give me one chance I will make everything proper and will never hurt you😭

He calls Siddanth and informs him to take everyone and come to hospital

Everyone reaches hospital as fast as they can. By seeing Prem covered in blood scared them a lot. Everyone asked what happened. But Prem is still in shock😲 and speechless as he stood in front of Operation theater

Everyone thought to ask later as he is not in a state to answer

Doctor comes out only then prem comes out of his memories and asks "Doctor how is Simar?",

Everyone is shocked 😲as simar is the one who met with accident..

Doctor did not answer immediately once again prem asked how is she? Still doctor is hesitant.

Roli: Pls doctor tell us how is my didi

Doctor: We can't say anything clearly, as of now she is in critical condition

Prem felt shattered😲 and he leaned against the wall as doctor continued we are monitoring her state. If she wakes up within 72 hours then she will be out of danger. If not we cannot do anything

Prem felt as if his heartbeat is going to stop.💔

Siddanth: Prem nothing will happen to Simar

Prem without saying anything goes stands near a window and breaths deeply thinking what happened in the past few hours. A tear rolled down his cheek. What if anything happens to her? How will he live?

I cannot loose her. If anything happens to her my life will be empty and unbearable.💔

Finally everyone went home except Prem, Siddanth and Roli

Simar is shifted to ICU. Prem went inside and sat beside her. Nurse tried to explain that there was no need for him to stay with her. But he is adamant and said "I will not go anywhere by leaving my wife" and he is not moving an inch

Nurse called doctor. Doctor said to let him be.

She had all sort of machines linked to her body and she is looking weak. He says pls wake up Simar I cannot see you like this. Lying on bed like this doesn't suit you plz wake up.

(Song plays in the background)

Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena (What Is Life Without You)

Bin Tere Tya Hai Jeena (What Is Life Without You)

Meri Dil Ki Rani Tum (You Are The Queen Of My Hear)

Meri Kushiyon Ka Masusam (You Are The Season Of Happiness For Me)

Mere Kwaabon Ke Tabeer (You Are My Hopes Personified)

Mere Sapno Ki Tasveeer (The Reality Of My Dreams)

Bin Tere Kaisi Yaaar (There Is No Excuse/Barrier If You Are Not There)

Woh Jeet Ho Ya Haar (Whether Its Win Or Loss)

Tere Sang Hai Sab Kuch (Life Is Complete With You)

Tu Naa Ho To Bekaar (Life is meaningless without you)

He stayed by her side by catching her hand and talking with her until he dozed off

Morning:

Everyone reached hospital. Mataji woke Siddanth and asked where Prem is. He told he is with Simar.

Mataji went inside and saw him asleep beside Simar. She woke him up. He opened his eyes he is looking very tired. He saw Simar his eyes are welled up with tears. Just then doctor enters to examine so he goes out along with Mataji

Sujatha: You three go home fresh up and come

Prem: No maa Siddanth and Roli will go but I stay here with Simar

Sujatha: Prem we all are here atleast you go home and change your dress

Prem: No maa I can't go by leaving Simar😔

Rajendher: Prem doctors are examining Simar. You can't do anything by staying here. So, go home change and come back

Prem: No Papa I want to be here. I want to see her to see first if she wakes up. I won't leave her and go😔

Mataji: Prem plz go and come. Nothing will happen to Simar. If Simar was here she also wants you to go and come

By listening Simar wants him to go he agreed and left with Siddanth and Roli

They reached home.

Prem entered their room. He remembered all their memories from the day she entered the room.

He kneeled down in room and started crying again. After some time he wiped his tears and said nothing will happen to you Simar. We will be together again I have confidence. He got up went to take shower so that he can reach Simar soon and be by her side.

Like this three days passed but still there is no improvement in Simar's condition it's getting worse day by day.

Doctor: Prem I think your wife can't make it

Prem felt like as if world stopped. Without knowing he placed his hand on his chest to find whether his heart is beating or not.

Everyone are shocked and will be talking with Doctor to do something

But Prem is in his own world and is not able to imagine his life without Simar. Tears are flowing from his eyes without his knowledge😭😭

Doctor: Please listen to me Miracles do happen but we can't keep hopes on that only. So, it will be better if you are prepared for worst scenario

Prem shouts NO. Everyone turns to him

Prem catches doctor collar and says you are not god to say that, "nothing will happen to MY SIMAR I will not let her leave me at any cost."

Siddanth makes prem leave the collar of doctor and says sorry to doctor

Prem leaves from there by saying "I will not let Simar leave me"

Prem (St): He is not any god to say that. I cannot give up on my wife. She is my life, my love and everything to me.

He contacted the doctors whom he knows but everyone said same thing.

His world totally shattered. He kneeled down on road and started crying like he never did before and this pain is too much for him to bear.😭😭😭

So what happens next how will Simar survive let us wait and see?

Edited by Asha122 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dear
One request when u write something in Hindi please to translate into English.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Premarlove455

Dear
One request when u write something in Hindi please to translate into English.


Ok dear i updated it for part 15. Pls check
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asha122



Ok dear i updated it for part 15. Pls check



Thank you dear
Superb

Superb the way u have written prem's feelings ,emotional

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Posted: 10 years ago
Simar is prem's only and only
And no one can separate them

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