PREMAR FF: Destined to be together -- Updated Pt 27 on Pg 36 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: shabeena25

nice ff by asha actually past 1 month had a tight work schedule so only not active forum daily... but whenever had a time i am a silent reader...

sorry for the delay reply but it awesome

after this month i would be free so ill give feedback daily yr but ple continue as it is super...


AWE job yr👏👏


No problem dear.. 😊

Happy that u read and you liked it...
Thank you...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE: Here is the next part. Ignore if any mistakes as i am updating it through mobile.
May be it will be filmy little bit so pls adjust it

PART 13:

Everyone reached their room after enjoying near waterfalls

Surbhi: Didi I can't loose prem at any cost I want him in my life. I think he started loving simar

Pari: Don't worry he won't forget you.

Surbhi: No didi I listened to their convo Prem is going close to Simar. To get him I said many lies and did many things. At any cost I want him in my life and I will get him. I know wat to do

Pari: What you lied and what you did?

Flashback (Prem ll be thinking and surbhi saying to pari):

Three years back:

Rajeev: Prem I feel like eating marriage food now

Prem: Ok come lets go

Ramesh: No marriage is there of whom we know

Prem: This total india is ours. See there some marriage is happening we can have food there.

Rajeev: Wow ok then come let's go.

In Marraige:

Prem along with his friends entered the venue and will be having food

But there will be some problem in Marraige, groom father will be shouting and ll be asking for more dowry where bride father will be begging him

Prem: They should not do this Marraige

Ramesh: If your sister is there in that position will you do samething

Prem: Ya in future if we come to know she died by doing suicide or due to gas blast then we should cry and bear the loss than that not doing this Marraige is best

At the same time some girl comes to the mandap and says uncle don't do this Marraige by begging them

Bride dad: What beta if we cancel what will happen to my daughter future

Girl: Uncle if you beg now and do this Marraige but in future if we come to know she died by doing suicide or due to gas blast we can't do anything otherthan crying.So, than that not doing this Marraige is best.

She goes to bride and says think about future the person who is not supporting you now will he support you in future if you face any problem.

Marraige is not compromise its a beautiful relationship where two people will be one and face each and every situation together till end with love. Think and take decision.

Prem is amazed by her answer but he is not able see the face of girl. He is able to see only back

Rajeev: Prem do you know her. She said the same as you

Bride: I don't want to do this Marraige

Bride father: I am sorry for wat happened pls think its a get together so enjoy and have food

Prem: Rajeev I want to see her come let's go to other side

Rajeev: No. If anyone sees us they will ask who are we

Prem: Nothing will happen come let's go

They go to that place but she might have left from there. He sees Paayal and remembers it's of that girl and keeps it with him.

Prem: Now where to find that girl I want see her. How to find?

Rajeev: why u want to see her? Come we ll go

Prem: No I want to see her its final.Come we ll ask anyone

Prem finds some uncle and he asks him about that girl but he says he don't know

Prem: Now I want to see that girl wat to do. Ya Rajeev come we ll go to groom and ask her

Rajeev: Are u mad? We dont know them if they know come to know that they will kill us

Prem: Ya about her i am mad. what ever it is I want to find about her for that I am even ready to die.

Rajeev drags prem from there and goes

Rajeev: You just listened to her talks didn't even see her face with in that u started loving her

Prem: No need to see face my heart feels she is my soul mate and I ll find her at any cost

Rajeev: U became mad.

Prem: What ever start searching for her?

Rajeev: How we don't have any details

Prem: I have he says and shows him Paayal of that girl

Rajeev: laughs and says With paayal u ll find her great go ahead

Prem: I hv confidence I ll surely find her.

Almost he searches in each and every way possible but he won't find

One day surbhi comes to prem at that time he ll be seeing that Paayal and she asks how come this is with you I lost same kind one year ago in one of my friends friend marriage

Prem gets shocked will think are you the girl who I was searching for?

Prem will ask about her existence and what happened there she says everything correctly.

But still why am I not feeling anything in my heart how I felt on that day. As rajeev said I am thinking too much

Surbhi: Prem wat r u thinking? give me that paayal

Prem: No let it be with me as ur remembrance

Surbhi: Why?

Prem says about his feelings and she accepts

Flashback ends

Surbhi: Like that I made him believe I was the girl and lied in all ways possible

But suddenly all this happened simar came in his life.

Though I proved him I was that girl he was not even free with me I used to force him for outings and all but he took two times only. But now with that Simar he is going near her by himself without any force. I am not able to bear it. When ever I see both of them together I feel like killing her. From today mrng he is showing her more concern and taking care of her as if she is some glass piece.

Pari: You leave everything you lied to Prem so if he comes to know the truth thats it. So, stop all this and forget about prem and move ahead in life

Surbhi: No way I can't forget him

Prem: You have to as I got to know about it

Surbhi and pari are shocked

Prem: You played with my emotions. But my love is true so only I got married to the girl whom I love.

Surbhi: What?

Prem: Yes today morning only I got to know. So I am warning you don't ever think about Simar if anything happens to her I will not bear remember it.

He leaves from there

Surbhi: I love you prem I won't leave you so easily

Prem while going to his room he remembers what happened in the morning

Flashback:

Mrng after enjoying panipuri and icecream Premar entered their room. Simar went to fresh up and prem will be simply walking in room by mistake Simar jewellery box, make up kit everything will fall down

He will be arranging everything suddenly he sees paayal then simar comes and he asks about it to simar. Then she says she lost one of it in Marriage.

Prem asks further and then she says everything what and all happened

Prem is shocked. She takes paayal from his hand and says that its my favourite I lost it. so from that day I stopped wearing paayal.
By saying so she leaves to get ready

Prem (St): It means Simar is the one who I searched like a paagal almost for a year. Surbhi lied to me. So only when ever I see Simar or go near her I feel I m connected to her now I understood why I was feeling like that from the day I saw her.

He feels happy and says I LOVE YOU SIMAR. I ll never leave you.

Flashback ends

Prem: Tomorrow after reaching home I will say you my feelings Simar

Surbhi: I ll never let you say your feelings to simar. With in that I will make sure she will start hating you

Prem: By seeing simar photo he says What ever it is now I ll not let anyone to come in between us.

Let us see what's plan of surbhi? How Premar love will overcome it?

Edited by Asha122 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
awesome dear...it is sooo nice...the way u show premar is amazing...wt is surbi plan? ohh i cant wait...i forgot ssk reading ur FF...plzz update soon😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Vassu_123

awesome dear...it is sooo nice...the way u show premar is amazing...wt is surbi plan? ohh i cant wait...i forgot ssk reading ur FF...plzz update soon😛

Thank you so much dear... I am really happy u r liking it...😊
Will update soon... As i am busy i am able to update only one part😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Great FF dear
Plz do update soon!!

-Nisha-
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Hi Asha,
This is so great. You are increasing the suspense day by day. I am waiting how Prem proposes to simar and see surabhi get more jealous.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Thank you dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Love_Nisha

Great FF dear
Plz do update soon!!

-Nisha-

Thank you dear😊
will update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Thank you yar...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: justchillalways

Hi Asha,

This is so great. You are increasing the suspense day by day. I am waiting how Prem proposes to simar and see surabhi get more jealous.

Thank you dear...😊

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