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Posted: 10 years ago
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Siddhant.. So serious.. Anyway I love angry Siddhant always. He looks damn hot when he is angry😉 Nice update Archana.. BTW my name is Divya. Call me divya😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: diyasri

Siddhant.. So serious.. Anyway I love angry Siddhant always. He looks damn hot when he is angry😉 Nice update Archana.. BTW my name is Divya. Call me divya😃


Ohhh... Couldn't agree more Divya!! Are you there on FB by the way? Here's a link to my page! 😃

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Roli-Siddhant/822345567787701
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Originally posted by: srdevi

Amazing update Archana.

😃Thank you dear!
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Originally posted by: Archana_Vinod


Ohhh... Couldn't agree more Divya!! Are you there on FB by the way? Here's a link to my page! 😃

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Roli-Siddhant/822345567787701

Yes I am in FB. I have liked your page.. Thanks for the link...
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THE CELEBRITY - PART 16

An original story by Archana Vinod

Siddhant turns on the ignition and races the engine for a moment as if he is expecting something to happen. And sure enough, Roli hops into the front seat beside him.

Prem stands at the doorway and watches sadly as they drive away.

A while later, Sid pulls up his car close to the temple and step out. Roli follows suit.

Sid prays intently for a while and takes a brief glance at Roli before leaving. Her eyes are closed and lost in prayer and ... pain. Siddhant feels sorry for how he had reacted a while ago. Maybe I should have just apologized for what I did and left. I shouldn't have got so angry... especially at Roli. She hasn't done anything wrong. Instead, she took so much care of me when I was knocked out. I have put her through enough already. But it's a promise I made, I will make it up to her. And today is that day. He steps out of the temple and waits for Roli.

Just then, he spots a vendor passing that way with cotton candy. Hmm. Roli likes cotton candy. Kiddo. I'll get her one. That should cheer her up. He stops the vendor and gets two of them. Suddenly -

BAAAWOOO - BAAAWOOO - BAAAWOOO - BAWWWOOO

They jump out of their skin! What the hell is that blaring sound!

It's Roli! Outside the car with her ears clamped shut. And she looks petrified! She had tried to open the car's door without unlocking it and it had set off the burglar alarm! Siddhant quickly unlocks the car with his remote. It stops. Whew!

He is beside Roli now, glaring at her furiously. She is shaking now.

"Roli, what's wrong with you? Don't you know you shouldn't open the car like that?" he blasts at her. Roli is so petrified that she looks like she will cry any minute.

"Get in the car and sit there! And don't touch anything! I don't want to see this car rolling down the street for God's sake!"

She quietly gets in the car and sits there feeling a little dazed. I just want to get home as soon as possible, she thinks sadly. It's so hard to be near Siddhantji when he is angry. It makes me feel so uncomfortable.

Siddhant gets in and closes the door. He glares at Roli as he adjusts himself. She can't meet his gaze and looks away. A smile starts to spread across Siddhant's face. Aw, she looks so cute when she sulks, he thinks.

"Here you go," he says seriously as he passes her the cotton candy. She quietly takes it from him, but doesn't touch it. She looks away out of the window. Oh dear, he thinks, she's definitely upset. That's okay; she's going to cheer up soon.

"Arrey! What happened to your face? Something bit you kya?" he asks, concerned.

Roli turns to look at him, surprised. What could have happened? She touches her face cautiously. Maybe something bit me?

"I mean... it's as big as a pumpkin. So I thought that something could have bitten you," he jokes.

Ohh... That's when Roli gets it. He was just pulling my leg. Siddhant bursts out laughing but she quickly looks away. That was funny, but she doesn't want to laugh though she feels like it.

He starts the car and begins to drive. A while later, they drive into the parking lot of MADRAS CAF, a fancy South Indian restaurant. Roli looks around a bit surprised. Why have we stopped here? I thought that we were going home, she wonders.

Siddhant notices the question mark all over her face. He unbuckles his seat belt. "Today we'll have some South Indian breakfast," he says cheerfully, "just for a change. What do you say? Nice fluffy idlis, crispy dosas and some tangy sambar! Wah! I can smell it already! Ready?"

They step out of the car, walk into the restaurant and find a table. The place is already high on traffic. Siddhant browses through the menu while Roli sits there quietly with her cotton candy. "So what will you have?" he asks her.

"Anything," she mumbles quietly.

"I didn't hear you," he says.

"Anything," she repeats firmly.

"Sorry, what?" he leans a bit forward now.

She sighs. "Anything," she repeats again.

"What? I can't hear you? Be a bit louder!" he leans close enough to plant a quick kiss on her cheek and sit back. Roli is dumbfounded and speechless. She looks around the restaurant as she hopes that no one saw what happened. "Are you mad or what?" she begins, "if somebody -"

But he cuts her off with a cheeky grin and a wink. Awww no! This is it! She quickly looks away as she blushes like crazy!

"Be careful. Don't blush too much. Or else they'll think that you're a beetroot and put you in the sambar."

"Ho-ho, very funny," she remarks sarcastically.

"Wow! So you knew how to talk?" he says, "That's amazing!"

"Shut up!" she chuckles as she looks away.

Just then, a steward stops by. "What would you like to order?" he asks politely.

Sid looks at Roli. "How about idlis with sambar and chutney?"

"Your wish," she replies.

"Fine, two," he places the order. They casually look around the restaurant. It is packed to full capacity already.

Siddhant drums his fingers on the desk softly as he sings in a low voice, "Tujhe dekha toh yeh jaana sanam, pyaar hota hai deewana sanam."

"You know Roli," he begins, "this morning I discovered an excellent home remedy for constipation."

"Hmm. What's that?" she asks.

"The results are instant. You don't need anything else. Just one Kumar Sanu song."

"Huh?" she's puzzled. What has Kumar Sanu got to do with this?

He makes a funny face as if something is stuck somewhere and begins to sing again in an uncanny funny impersonation of Kumar Sanu's voice. "Tujhe dekhaaa... toh yeh jaaannaaa sanammm"

Roli bursts out laughing.

Siddhant groans as if he's actually there'. "Pyaaar hota hai..."

"Stop!" Roli laughs, "come on! Don't make fun of Kumar da! He's an awesome singer! And those are one of my all time favourites!"

"I'm not making of him yaar, even I'm a big fan of Kumar da's songs. It's just all that pressure if you know what I mean."

Roli laughs like anything now.

"Before singing, just make sure that you don't need to go or something. You could end up in big trouble!"

"Hahahahahaha!" she's red in the face now.

"Oye beetroot. They're coming to put you in the sambar. Just chill."

"Let's just wash and sit," she says.

"Yup. Come on."

They move off to the wash area.

Sid and Roli wash up and prepare to move off to their tables. Just then --

"Roli?" someone taps her on the shoulder. She turns around to see a very handsome guy with sharp features standing in front of her. He seems to be in his early 30's. "Is that you?" he asks.

She looks at him puzzled. Where have I seen him? I know this guy"

Who could it be? Let's find out...

... TO BE CONTINUED

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Posted: 10 years ago
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it is cute. Please update soon
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QUESTION OF THE DAY:
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Hey friends, on a personal high now as THE CELEBRITY begins to progress to part 17 and I can sense some serious tension coming up in RoSid's lives. Being a screenwriter and filmmaker, I've tried to write it just like a movie, making sure that you see and feel each and everything that happens in a scene. Hence, I'm quite anxious to know how you guys find it so far? Do you like it? Which is your favourite part of the story so far? Do you have any suggestions or scenes you'd like to see? I'm not sure if I'll be able to incorporate it into the story. But I'll try my best to do it. As I progress writing, something or the other will come up in my mind, possibly even some of your suggestions.

So inbox me your suggestions, feedback, scene ideas, or even complaints. Hehe ;) Would love to hear from you guys!

And like always, it's nothing but your love and support backed up by my craziness for RoSid that keeps me writing! Thank you so much guys and love you always! RoSidians rock!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing update archana👏
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Working on it dear 😃
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I'd like to thank a sweet RoSidian who sometime back suggested this brilliant idea of getting Sid jealous. So... shall we see his possessive side in this installment? Enjoy folks :)

THE CELEBRITY - PART 17
An original story by Archana Vinod


Siddhant notices the guy with Roli and pauses. What's going on? Is he troubling her? He moves in closer.

"Remember me buddy?" the guy asks Roli.

"Roli, everything okay?" asks Siddhant.

Roli's eyes are wide with excitement. I know him, she thinks wildly. "Shaan, is that you?" she asks as the tension builds up in her.

"Yes!!!!" he punches the air with excitement and pulls Roli into a tight embrace. Siddhant's eyes almost pop out of his skull. Did he just touch her now!!!?? How dare he!!!

Roli hugs him awkwardly for a moment and pulls herself back, a bit embarrassed. "Oh my God!" she shrieks gleefully, "I can't believe my eyes! Where on earth have you been all these years, Shaan?"

"Ohhh, that's a long story. You tell me buds. How have you been? Are you married? When did this happen?" he asks as he notices the sindoor on her forehead.

"It's been quite a while," she blushes and laughs.

"And how come you never informed me? I've looked for you everywhere. Facebook, Twitter, Google+, but never found you anywhere!"

"That's funny. Never thought of looking for me at my home?" Roli jokes.

"Hahaha! You are still funny Roli! Just like you've always been!"

That's when Roli notices Siddhant. "Oh! Shaan! I would like you to meet my husband, Mr. Siddhant Bharadwaj!"

Shaan offers his hand to shake. Siddhant accepts with hesitation. I don't like this guy already, thinks Siddhant, but smiles sarcastically.

"Siddhant? Super star Siddhant Bharadwaj?" he asks with admiration and disbelief.

"Oh! He's always my hero," says Roli laughing.

"Wow! Roli! You're married to Siddhant Bharadwaj and you never told me about it? You lucky devil, you! So amazing dude! I can't believe this! Splendid job! Love your movie!"

"Thanks," smiles Siddhant sourly.

"Siddhantji," begins Roli, "this is Shaantanu Agarwal. My best friend from school!"

"Hmm," Siddhant struggles to smile. He's finding it hard to accept this guy. Best friend? How can Roli have a guy like him as a best friend? Yeah, right, he looks great and all that. But I don't like the way he talks. Who the hell does he think he is? Hrithik Roshan? And how dare he just hug my Roli like that? And that too in a public place?

"Best friends alright," adds Shaan, "we would talk about anything and everything under the sky. And we'd do all the craziest things in the world. Remember?"

"Ahhh! Don't remind me of all that," giggles Roli shyly.

Siddhant is a bit worried now. What all have they talked about? Craziest things done? What about that? What did they do exactly? From the sound of it, I don't think that they were collecting seashells.

"Ermm... if you don't mind, can we move to our table and talk?" says Siddhant.

"I agree with you bro," chirps Shaan, "this place is kind of awkward."

They move to their table and sit down. Breakfast is there already. "Would you like to join us for breakfast?" asks Siddhant casually.

"No, thank you so much, you guys carry on, I'm done for the morning," he adds, "just finished a while ago. That's when I bumped into Roli. I still can't believe that I saw her! And that too after a gap of so many years!!"

Roli smiles as she digs into her breakfast. Siddhant starts off too, but he just lost his appetite. I wish this bugger would clear out soon, he thinks frantically. I don't like the way he walks around Roli.

"And look at yourself!" says Shaan overwhelmed, "you've become so damn sexy! Wow!"

Siddhant's vision blurs with anger. This guy is going to get it in the face now... just like Mehul did. I wish I had some rum with me now. Seriously!

"What have you done to yourself by the way? Years back when I saw you, things were much different. You're all carved now and you look amazing!" remarks Roli.

"Thanks buddy," blushes Shaan, "guess I'm lucky."

Siddhant feels a bit sad now. Is she admiring this guy? She said that he looked amazing! Suddenly, Siddhant feels crappy. This guy does look amazing. He could easily become a model or a superstar, provided he knows how to act.

"Hey, what's your number by the way?" Shaan asks Roli, "let's stay in touch."

No! No! Don't give him! Siddhant screams in his mind. But of course, no one hears him.

"Haan, note it down," says Roli with a mouthful of idli and sambar, "9987512345."

"Nice choice of numbers," he quips.

"Yeah," Roli replies, "Siddhantji specially picked it for me, because that's a lucky number."

Siddhant looks away as he eats. I've been so wrong about that lucky number, thinks Siddhant.

"I've given you a missed call on your phone," says Shaan, "got it?"

"Yeah! Got it!"

"What's your number dude?" asks Shaan.

"Ermm, I'll give you a missed call. Roli has your number, right?" Siddhant replies as he tries not to sound uncomfortable. He doesn't want Roli to sense his jealousy.

"That would be great man," Shaan replies stylishly. "Chal," he gets up, "I loved talking to you guys. Wish I could stay more. But you know, I really got to make a move now."

Good, thinks Siddhant as he gives Shaan a big happy smile, clear off the premises fast and stay away!

"Laterz buddy," Shaan winks and waves at Roli as he makes a leave.

Siddhant almost coughs up his breakfast. Cough! Sputter! Choke!

"Siddhantji! What happened? Are you okay?" Roli taps him on the head. "Here, drink some water."

Siddhant gulps down the water in one go. "I'm fine, chill," he says breathlessly.

"I can't believe it!" says Roli almost hopping in excitement, "it's been so long since I've seen him! What a day!"

"Roli," Siddhant begins seriously, "how come you never told me about this best friend of yours?"

Roli is a bit shocked for a moment. Coming to think of it, why didn't she?



... TO BE CONTINUED

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