Love at first sight: ROSID FF (Part 10) 13/03/14

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is the first time im writing a story so sorry for the mistakes.
A girl was going to the mandir. She was so beautiful that all guys eyes r on her.
In the temple, she is praying with her wonderful eyes closed.
Girl: matarani, today is my result day. Please make me pass.
In that same time, a guy rang the temple bell.She turned to see who was that. But she couldn't see that person. So she turned back and continued her prayer.
Girl:thank u so much for this bell matarani.im reassured. And tomorrow is my didi's engagement day. Im sure jiju will keep my didi happy. Most important that didi and jiju love each other so much. Hope everything will be fine.
The guy is with his all family members to thank god that his business is going well after a long critical period in business.
Guy and his family r praying. The girl finished her prayer, she is passing next to the guy when her dupatta touched slightly the guy's face. He was lost with that when the girl's dupatta left his face, he came to his sense and turned to see who was tat girl. The girl was going when a little girl fell down in front her and she went near her and she helped her to get up.
Girl: r u ok? Are u hurt?
Little girl: no im alright. Thank u.
Little girl hugged that girl and kissed her on her cheek. Little girl hurried to join her mother. During this time, the guy was watching this scene and he mesmerized by her beauty and her cuteness with that child. Suddenly someone hit him; in a split second he lost sight of that girl. He runs to look for her.
Guy (in the mind): y r u searching her? Y r u doing this????????? U had never watched any girls in ur life ?? y this girl?
Someone calling: prem, where is siddhant? Im searching him where is he?
Prem : ma don't worry. Im going to look for him.
Guy was still searching that girl. When someone touched his shoulder, he jumped up and turned.
Guy: prem u scared me!
Prem: SIDDHANT r u ok? What r u doing here? Ma searching u.
Siddhant: ha im ok. Come on. Let's go.
Siddhant and his family left the temple.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yayy me first😛

Wow I loved it! Mandir scene was well written, don't quit...continue soon😃


Thanks for the PM😳


Edited by malihaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start sakthi 😃 Loved the intro of rosid 😳 Waiting for the next part. continue soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandraj

Awesome start sakthi 😃 Loved the intro of rosid 😳 Waiting for the next part. continue soon 😃

Thank u so much for ur comment sandra Embarrassed im glad that u liked it. i ll continue soon 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok ill continue soon😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice starting sakthi😊...keep it up👏...all the best👍🏼...and thanks 4 te pm...😊
Edited by shikhanair - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great start Shakti, continue and pls update as soon as u can. tks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its awesome sakthi...

pls do continue...
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Nice start sakthi😛... Please do continue...All the best😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NICE NICE START... ITS AWESOME... THNX FOR THE PM... UPDATE SOON...

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