Love at first sight: ROSID FF (Part 10) 13/03/14 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: diyasri

Sorry for late reply sakthi... It was so nice... Oh sim is someone's fiancee not prem's hehe... Waiting for the next update... Continue soon... Thnx for the pm😊

its ok dear...thankk u dear😳 i will try to update asap...ur welcome 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rosid

i am really sry i didn't post comment for ur updates and i read ur all update its really superb continue ur next part soon dear

No pb dear...thank u so much😛 try asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AmreenBanoManso

wow this is nice 👏

sorry for late comment
i like your ff
and the mandir scene is too good 😛
keep writing
waiting for next part


no pb amreen... thx for taking time to read my ff and thank u so much for ur comment dearTongue try asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rolisiddhant

lovely update shakti...


sorry for late reply...

waiting for the next one update soon...

Anu thanks 😳 its not at all a pb😉 try asap dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update i loved it and sorry yaar for being so late y lappy is not working i m so tensed and exams are also going huhuhu please forgive i ll be regular as soon as possible
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wamavasant

very nice update i loved it and sorry yaar for being so late y lappy is not working i m so tensed and exams are also going huhuhu please forgive i ll be regular as soon as possible

Shriju, its not at all a pb...i understand dear... concentrate on ur exams...all the best for ur exams shriju...thank u so much for ur comment😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 4
In the hospital
Roli: mam where is the ICU?
Recep told them the way. Roli ran close to the ICU when sid saw her with this gorgeous dress and had a big smile.😳
Sid(in the mind): wow temple girl! Y she is coming here?
Jamnalal: ur the person who took aakash here?
But sid was still staring at roli. Jamnalal touched his shoulder and he came back to his sense.
Sid (stammering): ha... yes...yes... its me!
Jamnalal: How is he? Is it serious?
Rani (aakash's mother) (crying): tell me... how is my beta?
Sid: I don't know aunty. Doc is inside.
Raghu (aakash's father): Don't worry rani. Our son will be alright.
Aakash parents and rosim parents were so tensed.
Jamnalal: Roli, stay with simar.
Sid (in the mind): temple girl name is ROLI, nice name
Simar couldn't speak; she was still in the shock. Roli consoled simar.
Roli: didi, jiju will be alright.
Sid (in the mind): that person is temple girl's brother-in-law. This girl is roli's sister. God, please save that guy, otherwise roli will be heartbroken and I couldn't see her sad. No, sid stop this. y u can't see her sad? U don't know her.
Sid was still staring at roli.
Sid (in the mind): Look her face sid, she is so beautiful, she has an innocent face. She takes care of her family. What do u want more sid. She will be a perfect life partner for u.
He shook his head and said no sid stop this. u've gone too far.Stop this. 😆
Suddenly, roli turned when her eyes saw sid's eyes, they had a long eyelock.
All of a sudden, the doc came out of the ICU and rosid broke their eyelock.
Everybody rushed toward him.
At the same time, sid's phone rang so he went out to pick up.
Rani (crying): how is my son?
Doc: he is in a critical condition so I cant say anything. We have to wait for this night.
Then doc left.
Near the reception, sid was in the phone.
Sid: hello, what happened?
Manager: sir, Mr ashok saxena is waiting for u. When will u come?
Sid(in the mind): oh god. I forgot it. Im late. He is a very important client.
Sid (in the phone): im coming. I will be there in 10 min. Put him at ease.
Manager: ok sir.
Sid went without saying anything to anybody bcz he was very late.
In the hospital,
Rani: its all bcz of this girl, she is responsible of my son's condition. I already told him that she isn't good for our family.
Rosim and their parents r shocked.
Meena: what r u saying raniji? How could our daughter be responsible of this?
We also didn't expect this situation and we r so sad as u.
Rani: she brings just bad luck.
Simar was shocked and crying but Roli couldnt tolerate this at all.
Roli (angrily): aunty, its not my didi's fault, its all that guy's fault who did the accident. Where is that guy?
She was searching that guy but she couldn't find him.
Jam: roli stop it.
Roli: but papa they r saying that didi is a bad luck.
Meena took roli who was still angry.
Meena: roli calm down. simar life is at stake.
Roli: ma, how could didi will live happily if they r speaking like this abt didi?
Meena: but roli aakash beta loves simar.he will keep simar happy. Roli calm down.
Roli hugged meena and they came back.
At night,
Doc: he came back to consciousness. Now he is fine. U can see him.
Everybody entered to the room and rani sat near aakash who was conscious.
Rani: beta tum tiko na? (ur fine na ?)
Aakash : im fine ma.
Simar went near aakash to touch him but suddenly rani pushed her hand.
Rani: don't touch my son.
Simar saw aakash but he was silent and he turned his head. Rosim, meena and jamnalal couldn't believe this.
Simar: aakashji what happened to u?
Roli: jiju y do u behave like this?
Aakash: ma was right. I saw my death in front of me. Sorry simar I want to live a long life with my family. I cant marry u.
Everybody was shocked except rani and Raghu who were happy to hear this from his son.
Rani: oh at last u understand this, beta.
Simar went out of the room without saying anything as she lost everything. She was totally heartbroken.
Roli searched simar but she couldn't find her so she went to look for her. After some time, she found simar who was still walking. She touched simar shoulder from behind and simar stopped. She saw roli and she broke down in tears.
At the same time, a long argument was going btw rosim parents and aaskash parents. And finally,jam said,
Jamnalal (angrily) : we don't want this marriage, with ur family my daughter wont be happy. And look my daughter isn't a bad luck.
Jam and meena went out and they saw rosim hugging who r still crying.
Meena: simar, come on. Let's go.
In Dwivedi house, next morning,
A house was so calm. Nobody ate anything till yesterday morning. They didn't also sleep. Meena were in rosim room with them, simar's head was on her lap.
Roli (in the mind, furiously): its all that guy's fault, if I see that guy somewhere, I wont leave him. He made the accident and went without saying anything.
But suddenly jam came and said.
Jam: y we r sad? On the contrary, we should be happy that this marriage didn't happen with this inresponsible guy. im sure, simar will have a guy who will take care of her, will love her. Don't worry simar, we r all with u beta.
One month passed , the situation was slowly coming back to normal.
Roli: papa, can I go for shopping with my friends today?
Jam: of course beta u can but don't get home too late.
Roli: ji papa
In front a coffee shop, roli was with her friends.
Roli: guys, let's have a coffee?
Friends : ok roli
They entered in the coffee shop and roli saw sid who was with some people. In fact, sid came with their important clients to have a coffee. Roli was very furious that he was happy whereas her didi was very sad. She couldn't bear this. She went near sid to insult him in public like that he couldn't forget this day and sid saw her and he had a big smile.
I know that im killing English language 😆 im trying my best. sorry for my mistakes
Guys i want know what do u thing abt aakash character? 😊
Edited by rosidsakthi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic update!

Loved that Rosid eyelock I can't wait for your next update...it'll be interesting to read rosid's first conversation 😆 The part where sid thinking about making roli his life partner was so cute and funny... 😳😆

I have no feelings towards aakash atm...yes he is stupid to believe in such superstitions but lets see how his character shapes up.


Thanks for the PM 👍🏼

Edited by malihaahmed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sakthi your english is fine and do not worry about 1 or 2 mistakes.everybody makes mistakes...you should be happy that we love your fff. It is really very intetresting. pls update the next part soon,as i am very eager to read what will be sid's reaction when roli blame him for everything.
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...👏👏👏 pls update soon...😊😊

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