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Posted: 12 years ago

Thnks To All...That U All Like My ff...And In Future If I ll Be Wrong In Some Part Then Plz Forgiving Me Tell 2 Recorrect It...

And Here I Go For The Next Part..

Part 16

Roli smiling and remembering sid. Then sim came

Sim: R u k?

Roli: yes didi i m..k..

Sim: k now u take rest.

Roli: k didi

Then suddenly roli's phn rings

Roli: hello Rahul(excitedly)

Rahul: hey roli..

Roli: wht? Whn u r coming haan?

Rahul: I ll come roli y r u so hurried?

Roli: rahul I m going 2 marry and u r nt here and also questioning me y m I hurry?

Rahul: (feeling sad) oh ya.. bt u knw na roli dat mom and dad is nt in d town and...

Roli: look I dnt want any execuses u r coming k..

SID IS CALLING ROLI..BUT HER PHN IS BUSY..

Rahul: bt roli y cnt u understand?

Roli: rahul u r my best friend and if u ll nt come then how can i..

SID STILL TRYING ROLI'S PHONE.

SID: whom is roli speakin 2? Its hour now.

Rahul: roli u r my bst frnd so I m saying u

Roli: rahul u r coming 2morrow..k & no more arguments'its final means final..

Rahul: roli. k I ll come

Roli: k..now its good k bye bye..tk cr

Rahul:bye roli..u too tk cr.

THEN ROLI'S PHONE AGAIN RINGS'

Roli: hello siddhantji..

Sid: roli y is ur no busy? Whom r u talking 2?

Roli: aanhan only engagement completed and my would me hubby's jasusi and inquiry started.

Sid: no roli nt like that..i was trying ur phn for hour so I asked.

Roli: k..k siddhantji..i was jst joking..i was talking wid rahul..

Sid:rahul!

Roli: ya siddhantji rahul my bst frnd.

Sid: ya ya roli..i know him..how could I forget him after a big argument wid him..

Roli: oh ya argument.. how could I forget that day..becoz of that argument nly I realize dat how much I love...

Sid:how much u love...wht?(confused)

Roli:ah! Nothing (biting her tongue)

Sid: k I hv called u 2 infrm dat 2 morrow u and sim r coming for shoping..Its mataji's order that me and prem shld buy saree 4 u both of ur choice.

Roli: oh! I thought u call me 2 talk wid u..bt whenever u call me u nly infrms me wht 2 do, where to go bagera...bagera...

Sid: oho so my sherni is upset wid me that I nly calls her 2 infrm'.k baba I m sorry again whn I ll call u ll talk wid u a lot.. k'

Roli: k'so 2 morrow at wht time we ll go?

Sid: u hvnt 2 come we r going 2 pick u..

Roli: k then..

Sid: k now u take rest..bye tk cr c u 2 morrow

Roli: bye siddhantji u too tk cr

THEN SIM AND MEENA COME 2 D ROOM ROLI INFRMS DEM WHT SID TOLD HER.

Next Day

RAHUL CALLS ROLI AND TELL HER THAT HE WILL REACH AFTER SOMETIME

After 1 hour

THE DOOR BELLS RING.ROLI RUSHES 2 OPEN D DOOR WID EXCITEMENT..SHE IS GOING 2 WELCOME RAHUL'WHILE OPENING DOOR..

Roli: u know frm 1 hour I m waiting 4 u & u r coming now rahul..

BT WHEN SHE SEE GIVE A SHOCKING LOOK'PRESID(PREM AND SID) R STANDING..SID ALSO GIVE A SRPRISE LOOK 2 HER

Roli: mm.. jiju, siddhantji

Prem: oh roli u come 2 welcome rahl bt we think we break ur excitement

Roli: no..no jiju.. its nt like that(sid gave her a look) u come naa.

PRESID ENTERS THE HOUSE..ROLI CALLS EVERYONE..THEY TOOK BLESSING OF ROSIM PARENTS..SID LOOKING AT ROLI WHOSE EYES R AT THE DOOR WAITING 4 SOMEONE. SID THINKS THE WAITING IS 4 RAHUL.HE GOES NEAR HER

Sid: roli were u really waiting 4 rahul?

Roli: yes siddhantji he has called me that he ll come soon bt look he hasn't come yet..

Sid: dnt wry roli he ll come u go and get ready..

Roli: bt siddhsntji if he ll come then

Sid: everyone in ur house present 4 his welcome..go get ready quickly we hv 2 go naa

Roli: k I m coming

SID SHOOK HIS HEAD. ROSIM WENT 2 GET READY..THEN AFTER SOMETIME THEY COME..

Prem: uncle if u dnt mind can they hav lunch wid us 2 day?

Jamnalal:its k beta..i ll nt mind

Sim: bt premji..

Sid: dnt wry simar everything is ready 4 u both in ur favorite restaurant.

Roli: bt siddhantji 2 day..i mean..

Prem: roli 2 da means 2 day..lets go..

SID UNDERSTAND WHT ROLI WNT 2 TELL.PREMAR SIT IN FRONT SEAT AND ROSID IN BACK SEAT..ROLI IS SAD THAT NOW SHE CNT WELCOME HER BST FRND..SID UNDERSTAND AND KEEPS HIS HAND ON ROLI'S HAND 2 CONSOLE HER..

Sid:roli I told u naa everyone is in ur house 4 his welcome..dnt wry..

Prem: wht happened sid?

Sid:are nthng she is little upset dat she cnt welcome her bst frnd..

Sim: siddhantji u knw roli never give chance 2 anyone 2 welcome her best frnd..she even dnt allow anyone 2 interfere between their talk or no else can sit wid them while their gossips...she nt even allowed me also

Sid: really..bt roli never told me abt dis

Sim: she hvnt told me also bt I can realize it.and I think u hvnt interfere betwn them in clg

Sid: no nt 4 a single time..

Sim; so the reason u didn't realize'

Sid: hmm..

SID LOOKS AT ROLI WHO IS THINKING SOMETHING ELSE AND HV NT CONSENTRATE ON THEIR CONVERSATION..

Sid: (in mind) roli I dnt know why u r so much possessive of rahul..bt I feel little insecure..and jealous'hope u ll nt break my heart.

Roli looks at sid suddenly and says 2 him slowly

Roli: dnt worry siddhantji I l never break ur heart'..and also dnt be insecure.

Sid is shocked hearing roli's word..roli goes close 2 him

Roli: (slowly) wht r u thinking how could I know and read ur mindcoz ur heart and my heart r connected 2 each other.understood

Sid shook his head wid a smile and hold her hand'

Prem then tell them 2 stop their romance as the shop is nearer'then they goes 2 shop..premar and rosid goes 2 opposite direction

Rosid

Roli: siddhantji u select a saree for me

Sid: me bt I m nt so much.i mean...i..

Frm back

Rahul: if he cnt I ll chose 4 u

Roli look back and is happy 2 see rahul. He then come near them. Both starts selecting saree. Sid is upset wid rahul words & little insecure he cnt see any guy wid roli except himself. he feels that roli forget him while she is wid rahul and he was jst abt 2 go whn roli holds his hand ant tell him nt 2 go leaving her.while they selected saree rahul asked roli

Rahul: roli I wnt 2 talk wid u..

Roli: yes tell.

Rahul: nt here lets hv a seat..

Roli; ya

Roli holding sid hand and taking him wid her..sid is confused as he know wht sim told him.. they goes 2 sit..rahul saw sid then..

Rahul: roli I want 2 talk..

Roli: yes tell

Rahul look at sid.sid understand as well as roli..

Sid: u guys carry on I m coming

Roli: no siddhantji u ll be here..

Rahul is surprised wid roli's words.as she never allows anyone between their gossips.rahul then told roli that he cnt stay 4 her marriage..but as usual roli win in her arguments and make rahul 2 stay till her marriage day while this argument rahul was observing roli who has changed a lot and she has hold sid hand so tightly as if she is telling sid nt 2 go leaving her wid other person.then rahul say bye 2 both rosid and went away

Roli then look sid. Sid is thinking and feeling sad..

Roli: siddhantji I knw wht r u thinking?

Sid: wht?

Roli: that y? I told u 2 stay wid me whn I never allow anyone 2 interfere between us right?

Sid shook his head

Roli: siddhanji I m ur.only ur u hv every rights on me..u hv right 2 know whom m I talking wid and wid whm I m going outside'u hv evry rights on me siddhantji and I cnt give dis riht 2 anyone else rather then u'.understand my would be husband

Sid smiles and tell

Sid: roli u r so sweet

Roli: I know I know

Both then laughs'premar then comes they all goes 2 d restaurant 4 lunch and then they return home.

DIWEDI HOUSE

Sim: roli u knw wht?

Roli: wht didi?

Sim: roli papa has given a small party and also invited our in laws 2 morrow evening..

Roli: wht? Bt why?

Sim:he wnts that we shld enjoy our last party in this house wid our parents and in laws.

Both of their eyes feel wid tears...

To be continued...

PRECAP: roli opens door and gets another parcel and is scared...

Edited by rolisiddhant - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for the late reply...
superb update 😊 didn't expect family's entry...superb...that slap too!i guess that person is veeru...waiting for next update!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arabjan

sorry for the late reply...
superb update 😊 didn't expect family's entry...superb...that slap too!i guess that person is veeru...waiting for next update!





update hv a look...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing. I liked when Roli understands what is going on in Sid's mind. Really adorable that u have written that Rosid understand each other. THnx for the pm. Update next soon
Arabjan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update!
i liked heart-2-heart connection very much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
rosid uunderstanding wow super😊bt dont want this rahul really nice update thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear...roli holding sid's hand is superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...so nice to read that roli understands wat sid thinks in mind and sid being jealous.pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.I like every portion of ur update.I like if some big accident happend with Roli& Sid's care & love bring back her from mouth of death like "Vivaha".
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update with roli understanding wat sid feels.

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