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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayushii_Angel


Aww thanx alot my jaanu..ur darling nikki 🤗
m so glad u liked it.. 😳 Plz plz keep reading..ur wrds meant alot for me.. 😃
nd ya thanx for sending pm to ur frnz 😛


no problem dear...anytime 🤗
i have read before d last para 2 times...everytime i start from d beginning...
took a screenshot of ur update...ab kal metro me phirse padhungi 😆😳...
dekh me teri Fan ban gyi 🤣 😉😆
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Suffering from typhoid need prayers..will soon update once gt recover 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayushii_Angel

Suffering from typhoid need prayers..will soon update once gt recover 😭


hawww...bul/sahar...dear take care of urself 🤗
take ur time...d update isnt more important dan ur health ..okay
get wel soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayushii_Angel

Suffering from typhoid need prayers..will soon update once gt recover 😭


get well soon sehar. will miss you 🤗 🤗
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thanx bhavu..updating tonight.. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ginya


hawww...bul/sahar...dear take care of urself 🤗
take ur time...d update isnt more important dan ur health ..okay
get wel soon


thanx nikki m beter now ..Alhamdulilah..will update tonight 😊
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Thanx everyone for ur wishes..m gud thank u 😊
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Chapter_3

Saras's eyes opened when few drops of water got sprinkled on his face..The fragrance he could even recognise in deep sleep..Oh my goodness! "The angelic beauty was ruffling her hairs after morning shower..She sat beside him..Their eyes met for a long eye lock..She rested her hand on his chest.. His back left the comforter and made him sit..His hand slipped to her creamy waist..pulled her more closer..Saras moved his lips forward her's..Just inch aparted..He wanted to feel her breaths on his lips always..Her rapid breath were passing releif to his spine in such cold weather..He held her face by his other hand..She was lost in his eyes..Finding eternal love..He creased her juicy lips with his thumb..Cant resist more with his parched throat..He was just about to pressed his lips on her to calm his thirst..When bahadur shook him..Yes! Bahadur..
"Saraswati babu aap theek to hein..!"
Saras shoot opened his eyes hearing his voice..
Bahadur checked his fever by touching his forehead.. "Aapko ab bukhar to nahi hai..To phir neend mein..!"
Saras bit embarrass..unable to met eyes with him asked "Neend mein kya?"
Bahadur"Janey dijiye kuch nhi.."
Saras confused "Nahi.. btao mujhe..!"
Bahadur "Aapke hont..He was tried to figure out.. Aapko shayad bhook lagi hai mein nashta lgata hun..!"
Saras took sigh of releif by closing his eyes.."Gosh how wild my thinking have become..But no he hadnt any complaints..He wanted to sleep more and continued on the work that has been left incompleted by the mercy of bahadur.."
He shook his head wearing heart stolen smile on his face..
Bahadur "Waise saab aap itni jldi theek kaise hogaye..Mera matlab..Yhan to ek baar thnd lag jaye to mahino nhi jati..Chalo achha hai..khuda aap pr apni rehmat bnaye rkhey..!"He left ..
A playful smile played on his lips as the thought jumped into his mind "Kaarha peeney se tbyat theek hogae ..to..! Thank you to bolna parega.."
He hurriedly left the bed and took a hot morning shower..
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Kusum chocked while drinking juice "Kya?"
Kumari repeated "haan..Wo puch raha tha tumhari didi kaisi hain?Theek hein. .aayi nhi?"
Kusum"Tuney ghar aakar kisi ko btaya to nahi?"
Kumari "Nahi..chance nhi mila.."
Kusum warned her "Btana bhi nhi.."
Kumari"Lekin kiun?"
Kusum angrily "Pehle hi itna kuch face kia hai humney didi ne..ab dubara nhi.."
Kumari made face on her order.

"Ting Tong"
He withdrew his hand back after pressing the door bell ..
Guniyal opened the door and welcomed him smilingly
Saras"Meine socha apko kaarhe ke lie thank you bol dun..Aur ye glass bhi lautana tha..!"
Guniyal "thank you ki zrurat nahi beta..Ab kaisi tbyat hai?"
Saras "bilkul theek hun..Aapka kaarha bohat effective tha.."
His eyes were continuosly searching for his dream girl while sitting on comfy sofa but all in vain..
Kumari came and greet him..
He was still lost in his thoughts..
"May be she is at her room"
Guniyal noticed "kuch chahie"
Saras shook his head "Nahi.." Soon an idea struck in his mind "Aapka ghar bohat achha bna hua hai..so nicely decorated!"
Guniyal cheerfuly "Tumhe sach mein achha laga? Abhi to tumne Backside nhi dekhi..Mein bohat saaf safai rakhti hun..Kumari jao saras ko apna ghar dikhao.."
Kumari happily nodded and by this his 'plan successful'
Kumari was showing his house but he seemed to be un-interested in her bak bak..
Kusum called kumari unaware of what task she was doing..Unaware of saras's presence in her home..
Kumari excused him "Aap aagey dekhie mein aati hun.."
Saras nodded with a fake grin..
"Kahan ho tum?"

Soon his eyes fell on stairs..
"Apne room mein hi hogi.."
Without wasting a minute he reached upstair..
As he walked to the lobby.. beautiful anklet came under his shoe..He sat down and picked up that shining silver anklet from the floor..
He stood up and throw his glance around,but couldnt figure out which one is her's room..
Beautiful painting of kumud which was covering almost half wall caught her attention..
"Wow..How beautifuly God create her..Her Immense beauty was dripping from the painting also..He took steps forward the painting..Her glowing eyes,Wide smile..Emotions were alive in painting too..He noticed in painting the same payal (anklet) was beautifying her feet.He was about to crease her cheeks when his hand stoped with shiver hearing loud voice of Mr.Vidyachatur.. "Kumari..kusum..Kon hai upar?"
Saras hurriedly turned to go back..and put the anklet into his pocket..
Vidyachatur wonderingly saw saras coming down..
Kusum throw an angry glare on him..
Kumari apologise "Wo mein saras ji ko ghar dikha rahi thi..phir di ne bula lia.."
Vidyachatur "Beta tum kab aaye? Ab tbyat kesi hai?"
Saras " I'm fine uncle thank u..Bas abhi project dekhne hi jaa rha tha socha aapke karhe ke lie thanx bol dun."
Vidyachatur pat his back..
Saras " Aunty aapka ghar bohat khubsurat hai..Realy well maintained!"
Guniyal smiled on his compliment..
Saras unable to bare kusum's killing glare said "Ok uncle Mein chalta hun.."
He instantly looked up to balcony as je stepped out of Desai house..but she was no where..
His juicy lips took one more sip from luckiest coffee cup..
Evening's wind blowing calmly ruffling his silky hairs to his forehead..But his saddish eyes were telling the story..Ofcourse What a person feels when he became addicted to someone..And hadnt met her from last 22 hours.. Saras closed the files annoyingly..He hide his face in his palms "Ye mujhe kia hogya hai? Mein to pehle aisa kbhi nhi tha.." He held his forehead "Ek pal ke lie bhi tumhara khyal mujhse juda nhi hota..kya..kya yahi pyaar hai?"
For the first time in his life he was nervous, for the reasons he couldn't comprehend!!
Sunny's number flashed on his cell..he received the call frustrated..
Saras "Hello..!"
Female Voice "Hello saras..Yeh mein kya sun rahi hun?.."
Saras came back to his senses "Kya hogaya maa?"
Saraswati "Meri kal to tujhse baat hui thi tuney to mujhe nahi bataya..ye sunny kya keh rha hai?"
Saras frowned "Oh God kahin sunny ne maa ko us larki ke baarey mein to nahi bta dia?"
Saras tried to explain in his broken words "Maa aisa kuch nhi hai..Sunny jhoot bol rha hai..Pta nhi mujhse konse janam ki dushmani nikalta hai ye idiot..Aap iski baat mat suno..I swear maa..Aapka beta aisa nhi hai apko pta hai..!"
Saraswati confused "Kya?? Saras is mein sunny ki kya galti hai? usne to bas mujhe btaya hai ke tumhein flu hua hai.."
Saras was hell confused "Flu?"
Saraswati "Tum barish mein..kaise?? Mein to bas ye keh rhi hun beta ke medicine time pe ley lena tum apna zara khyal nhi rkhtey ho.."
Saras sniffed "Bas yahi baat hai..?"
Saraswati "Haan..Kiun koi aur baat bhi hai..?"
Saras "Nahin maa..Mein aapse baad mein baat krta hun aur han mein bilkul theek hun..Dont worry.."
Sunny took the phone from her "Ab kaisi tbyat hai..'beta'?"
Saras"Tu dost hai ya dushman..?"
Sunny"Abey saaley dost hun isilie aunty ko kuch nhi btaya.."
Saras"Tu nhi sudhrega.."
Sunny laughed "Wo to hai..Achha bata naam kya hai uska?"
Saras was out of words.. he sniffed "Pata nhi.."
Sunny shockingly "Kya?Abhi tk uska naam nhi pta..Mein bekar mein itna khush ho rha hun.."
Saras face turned more pale..sunny continued "Beta tera kuch nhi ho skta..Tu ek kaam kar humne jo plannings ki thi na tu wo kar..Lake pe ja fresh ho ja..ghum phir aur project start kr ke wapis aaja.."
Saras dissapointed "Ok..bye"
Sunny disconnected the call..

"I even dont know her name. . "
He picked up her anklet,kept on his table..
His eyes twinkled and lips stretched into heart stoling smile, just with the feeling "It belongs to her..!"
His lungs passed out a heavy one and filled him with a fresh breath..
With a deep sigh he uttered "Lake..!"

Saras parked his car near the beautiful 'Garden Alive'
It is famous for its fresh alive greenery in every weather..The fructified Place and the beautiful sight of lake gave the immense pleasure to visitor..
Warm leather jacket nd woollen mufler were enough to protect him from light snow fall..
May be weather and the time of night was the cause of deserted garden where nobody was found..
He started walked through the bridge straggingly..
He struggled to calm his self..Few Snow drops falling into a lake was creating a Beautiful panorama.. Like stars are falling istead of snow..
Rolling his palms on bridge's edge..
His eyes twinkled seeing his shadow with moon on lakes's shining water..But instead of enjoying the sight he was visulaising her glowing face..
True..True to his assumptions..Unable to beleive he witnessed her shadow on the lake..He started frowing..He blinked freakishly but couldnt resist nd looked up to the place..
"Oh my God..If i asked anything else to God, would surely found it..But what better than this i could ask.."
With unusual smile his fast steps took him to another end of bridge to her, where she was sitting,playing with the cold water by her feet..moving them slightly..
Saras sat beside her..Unable to beleive his eyes..He got his breaths back in him..He atlast found his life back..

"Yeh to sach mein wishing lake hai..Aap yahan..koi khas wish?"
{Kindly play the song while reading..Banjaara..from Ek villain"}


Jise zindagi dhoondh rahi hai
Kya ye woh makaam mera hai

Yahaan chain se bas ruk jaaun
Kyun dil ye mujhe kehta hai

His words stopped in his mouth as she looked at him..
OH my..
Jazbaat naye se mile hain
Jaane kya asar ye huaa hai

Ik aas mili phir mujhko
Jo qubool kisi ne kiya hai

His heart sank seeing her round big eyes moist..She looked away back..Her pink nose twisted,trying to hide her sadness..

Saras tried to look at her face but she moved away..
He held her chin rotate her face to him but she refused to looked into his eyes..Her leaned eyes were enough to stole his senses..He removed her hair strands that were creasing her blushing cheeks..
The fairy about which he kept on studying in books till today could see in her..
Haan..Kisi shaayar ki ghazal
Jo de rooh ko sukoon ke pal

He brought his lips more closer to her lips..She looked up into his eyes..Her eyes's story has been changed into shyness from sadness..Thankfuly that gave releif to his senses..
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjaare ko ghar

She instantly stood up smilingly..But he held her wrist..He stood up..Looked at her face more closely..She allowed him to peeped in her oceanic eyes looking at him..
Eyes lock nd its conversation exchanged their "Haal-e-dil"
And she ran away shyly...

Saras happily cheered up in Fresh wind extended his arms..
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(Next Morning)

Saras forgot to blink when he came to his balcony to seek fresh morning warmth and witnessed Kumud on her window..Swirling on her room enjoying Sun warmth extended her arms just like a dancing sunflower
Naye mausam ki sehar
Yaa sard mein dopahar
Her skin was glowing in golden warmth..That made his eyes twinkled..
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjare ko ghar ..
Her eyes fell on her nd she hide behind curtains shyly..That made him smile more widely..

Hmmm...

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Saras sat in the garden just to take the releif of her sight..
She was collecting flower..Enjoying their smile, creasing them with her silky palms..
She stopped..And looked at him..That tells she knew it that he was watching her..
He instantly shifted his eyes on newspaper..She raised her brows..He checked wether she still looking at him..And got caught..His embarras look made her laugh out lout that made him smile too..He rushed to her held her basket nd she kept collecting flowers moved forward..
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While jogging his glance fell on her..What a breath taking sight..
She was racing with little childrens in the park..
She noticed him as he reached near him..She called him waving her hands..Her beautiful smile didnt let him refuse..
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He sat on his knees tired while little kids forced him to stamd up nd play more with them..
Kumud looked at him resting her hands on her waist..
He realised her soft feelings for little angels..She offered him her hand..
For him she was offering him life..That he accepted..Touched her for the first time..That ran shiver to his spine..Send a new life in him..
Jaise koi kinaara
Deta ho sahaara
Mujhe wo mila kisi mod par..
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Saras crossed his arms and leaned on the pillar of his balcony amazed at Glowing Fairy that has landed on the earth..He could saw her eyes shining through the reflection of midnight stars in them..
Koi raat ka taara
Karta ho ujaala
Waise hi roshan kare woh shehar..
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Saras visits Music school making excuses of meeting Vidyachatur just to have her glimps..Leaving her project work at constructing building..
That made her smile shyly..
Dard mere woh bhula hi gayaa
Kuch aisa asar huaa
Jeena mujhe phir se woh sikha raha..
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He remind that rainy night and how she cares for him that Just came to check wethr he is fine or not..Only that soulful moment gave immense pleasure to his soul..

Jaise baarish kar de tar
Yaa marham dard par
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjare ko ghar
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Saras brought car to school, offered her to drop her home but she refused..Instead of leaving her..He drove with the same speed she was walking to her home that made her blush and shook her on his silly acts..
Naye mausam ki sehar
Yaa sard mein dopahar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjaare ko ghar..

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Saras was waiting for her outside of the school,There a little kid got hurt while running on the road..Saras bandaged his leg by his mufler,and gave him candy to make him smile,He left happily..Saras remained paused with her sudden appearence..She had witnessed the scene happened..He was looking at her without blink..For the first she herself has come so closed to him..

Muskaata yeh chehra
Deta hai jo pehraa

Jaane chhupata kya dil ka samandar
Auron ko toh hardam saaya deta hai
Woh dhoop mein hai khada khud magar

He present a bookeh of red roses to flower loving lady that made her cheeks blush just like them..She creased them in excitement and got little hurt by a thorn..
Chot lagi hai usey,Phir kyun
mehsoos mujhe ho raha hai..


Saras immedietly held her midfinger nd gv into his lips..

Dil tu bata de kya hai iraada tera ..

She was looking at him with twinkling eyes just like a barbie doll..He looked at her and she informed that the third finger was the hurted once..That made him embarrass and she laughed out loud..

Main parinda besabar
Tha uda jo darbadar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjarey ko ghar ..


They walked together to home..His innocent talks made her laugh through all the way and her laugh made his heart sank through the whole way..

Naye mausam ki sehar
sard mein dopahar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjarey ko ghar..


They reached home she turned to go inside but he was still standing there..
She turned back to him and said "Aapne puchha tha na..'Kumud' my gud name.."
She said with giggle and turned to go..but stopped and turned again to 'Wearing childish smile Saras' and ruffles his hairs and ran inside...He cheered up happily..

Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjarey ko ghar
Koi mujhko yun mila hai
Jaise banjare ko ghar
Jaise banjare ko ghar..
Jaise banjare ko ghar...
Jaise banjare ko ghar...


Saras kissed her anklet,ya stolen anklet, sitting calmly in blanket on his bed and kept it safely in his bed side table..He turned off his lamp and went to sleep..Unaware..
Unaware of the fact, that the complete 'Pair' of it was present in his room now..Yes same anklet,In the corner..Under his bed...
Edited by Ayushii_Angel - 11 years ago
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Hey frnz hope u like it😳..M so sorry for being late..yes ur writer was suffeting from typhoid😭..but m well now Alhamdulilah 😊just because of ur well wishes..Thanx for ur love nd support..😳
Hope u liked the update..😃Ignore mistakes..Kindly leave comments as they meant alot for me..So the mystery begins..So plz plz plz keep reading😉..And ya dont forget to hit the like button nd visit the banner edited on first post.. So keep loving..thank you..wd love Bul.. 😃
Edited by Ayushii_Angel - 11 years ago
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Woah Update aya 😳
Reswaa 😆😃
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unres
chalo padh liya pora 😆😳
bahut acha thaa 😳
as usual
itna reply isliy kyuki me padhte padhte kho jati hun..n den baithe baihte so jati hun 😕
so gain bar bar parhna padhta h 😆😳
but mazzzaa ata h 😃
sehar u write really well 👏😉
mystery 😆
good work bul n Eid mubarak tumko 😳🤗
Edited by ginya - 11 years ago

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