SS:Fanaa..An Impossible Love Story..!Chapter_3 updtd pg 20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: -Obsessed-

some one missed u too😳🤗🤗well someone missed u more😛

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Ayushi

@Ayushii_Angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Chapter_2

Stepped out of principal's office he sniffed..Still he feels the same fear just like a little school boy..Saras Checked his mouth by touching it "Thankfuly it didnt remain the same..!" to hide his nervousness he was using the only weapon he had "Wide Wide smile" from last 2 hours..
Sunny's number flashed on his phone's screen the same time elevator filled with his presence..
Sunny"Kaam hogaya dude?"
Saras "Haan thankfuly hogaya..Sach bata ye dad ka nahi tera hi idea tha na ke is saal Music school ko donation mere hi shubh hatho se dilwaya jaye?" He gritted his teeth..
sunny laughed "Jab pata hai to puch kiun raha hai.."
Saras"Tu janta hai mujhe ye principal ke office se alergy hai.."
Sunny"Alergy nhi hai..tu drta hai..Saaley tune planning mere sath ki aur khud akela india puhanch gaya..to ab wahan ke kaam bhi nipta..chahe dar lagey ya alergy ho!"
Saras anger turned into smile "Tu kabhi nhi sudhrega!"
Sunny"Haan ye to hai..par ye bata Accounts sare clear hein.. Mr.mehra itne saalo se donation ka kaam kr rhey hein.. check bhi to krna tha na.."
Saras"Haan haan sab clear hai usi ki details leine mein to 2ghante lag gaye..chal mein tujhe ghar pohanch ke call krta hun..bye"
Sunny"Ok bye..!"
Saras walked out of elevator and "Oh my God..Instead of pressing Parking plot button he has pressed Top floor button of School's building.."
He shook his head on his act but before he could turned to elevator..A soft music of payal (anklet) melt into his ears that caught his attention and made him walked towards the sound..
He didnt come to know how he reached there but he wanted to check the source of voice..
"Wow..! what a beautiful sight..Her hairs were fluttering with the air while dancing..Her each step was heart stoling made a viewer watch without blink..Her facsinating effects made him amused..Unable to saw her face but still he was impressed by her dance..What a perfect dancer..Her vibrant steps were passing enchanting effects to her spine..Oh My God..Her vibratives hanging through her ghagra's waist made his heart hammering inside his muscular chest..Just waving like a string,carefree of world..Her hairs creasing her cheeks almost hiding her face..Saras rested his shoulder by the door scanning her with amusement..
He jerked with sudden ringing of his cell phone..
He received "Bol.."
Sunny"Sari details mujhe mail krdena..!"
Saras"Haan theek hai shaam tak kr dunga.."
His gaze danced all over the class after disconnecting the call but she was no where..
He turned back in confusion and yup got scared..He kept his hand on his heart..
"Tum?Yahan?Tum yahan kya kr rhi ho?"
Kumud was standing behind him straighten her hair on her shoulder raised her eye brows "Agar mein ye sawal aapse karun to?"
Saras sexy lips stretched into playful smile "Oh mein ye kaise bhul gaya..Jis Music school ke principal aapke father hein wahan aap na ho ye kaise ho skta hai?You are awesm..I'm impressed..He circled around her while talking "Pehle Piano,phir singing aur ab dancing you are multitalented.. aur kya kya aata hai apko?"
Kumud turned..Saras lost in her almondanic ocean of eyes..
She tried to move away from him but he blocked her way by resting his both palms on the wall around her..
She looked at him "Aur apko kya aata hai..sirf dusron ke rooms mein jhankna...?"
Her clear taunt made him embarrass..He released her from circle of his arms..He tried to collect words to clear she walked from him nd continued "Aur ab bhi aap shayad yahan mere class room mein jhankne ke lie hi school aye hongey?"
Saras shook his head "Aisi koi baat nhi hai..Its just a co-incidence..Mein to dad ke kaam ke silsiley mein yhan aaya tha..
"Oh her Girly teasing expressions in womenly charm.."
He tried to have some mannerly conversation with her Just to hide his embarrasment "Aap yahan student hein?I mean sb kuch kitne achhe se aata hai.."
Kumud smiled "Mein yahan teacher hun.."
Saras amused to hear something new about her "Wow..u realy deserves that..waise..he cleared his throat nd tried to come back into the frame of pride in her eyes "Aap ko ye to pta hi hoga ke mein dubai se aaya hun.."
Kumud started walking through the corridor "Hmm..Aur ye bhi ke bohat jald wapis chale jayengey..!"
Saras heart's guitar once more started to play He joined her"Itni bhi kya jaldi hai..Abhi to mein aaya hun..Actualy humne yhin school ke kareeb mein hi ek bohat bara project start kia hai..Ek do din mein kaam shuru hojayega..Mein ooti ko bhi dubai bnane aya hun..She looked at him..He continued..Hum yahan bohat bara mall bna rhey hein..Takey is chhote se shehar ke logo ki bari se bari zarurat ko pura kar skein..Kisi ko bhi choti si cheez ke lie shehar se baahar na jana parey..We are building a family mall jis mein kids,young,old har age ke insan ke lie har cheez available ho..khushia hi khushian..Jahan sab kuch mil skega sab kuch..! "
Her pindrop silence made him stop..
Kumud replied to her questioned look "Khushian bhi?"
He looked at her confused..She continued "Pyar bhi?Wafa bhi?Mohabbat bhi?Sachai bhi?Ehsaas bhi?Kya ye sab cheeze bhi milengi wahan..?"
He was speechless..She added "Mr.Vyas ye sab cheeze kharidi nhi ja skti qk inki koi keemat nhi hoti..Aur ye cheezein na hon to zindagi bemaainey hoti hai.."She said wd a sarcastic smile "Khushiyan milna itna aasan nhi..!"
Saras went deep down in her words..When his bubble of thoughts brust he realised she has left..
He slipped his hands in his pocket "Tum pehli ho jisey mera NRI hona,Bank balance,property,Car ye sab impress nhi kr ska..par ye bhi sach hai ke tum pehli ho jisko Saras Vyas impress krna chahta hai..Kab tak bach paogi.."
He took a deep breath still thinking "Why he wanted to impress her..Why he want a place in her heart..Why?..Why he is behaving so different?"
And the only reply his heart gave him was "Because SHE IS DIFFERENT.."
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Saras's eyes were capturing the sight again nd again while sitting into the garden..His eyes dissapointedly shift to laptop..
Bahadur "Saras baba andar aajaiye kisi bhi waqt baarish hoskti hai mausam bohat khrab hai.."
The loud thunderbolt were alarming of a heavy down pour..The puffs of wind were blowing in wirily manner..
He atlast shut down his laptop and stood up..Ya his frustration was suited,after all he was waiting from last full hour.."60 minutes..You cant even knw the Value of 60 minutes..Its like a 60 centuries in the wait of a person who gave u life in first sight..Who gave releif to ur spine by her single glimpse..Her one smile works for him like a medicine for a sick.."Aaj mein intezaar kar rha hun to ab tak nhi aayi.."A thought struck in his mind but "No!!..Never..Sochna bhi mat.." he just scolded his heart..He cant even imagine to go up and peep in her room to check where is she..After a clear taunt he received in the morning.."
He rushed to the shelter of his haveli's gallery as the first rain drop kissed the floor..
He get inside and pulled close the glass door..
Saras"Bahadur ek cup black coffee mere room mein le aao.."
He kept laptop on the table and turned to go up to his room..His dissapoint sight turned to look at the rain outside.."Oh my goodness..He could see her from the glass..His heart refused to beat..His eyes glued to her immense beauty..Scanning her from head to toe..Her fitted black choli sticked to her wet skin made him looked awat but..naahh! he cant resist..He pushed opened the glass door for a better view..Lucky Rain drops were kissing her cheeks and travelled down through her long neck to her silky valley..Creasing her visible soft stomach to down her dress..He rested his elbow to the door just watching her without a blink..
She was dancing in rain..stretching her arms just like welcoming him..His twinkled eyes were became more wide seeing her beautiful back..Oh her backless dresses..The only desire was left to pulled her dancing string of choli once and the result would be more hot beyond imagination..
His wild desires were seemed to overcoming him when his mouth became dry and parched throat just wanted to suck each rain drop from her beautiful creamy skin..Why Mr.Byas have become so lusty..? Specialy her juicy lips..Her curved lips..Her innocent smile..No not more..he wanted to see her more closely..His steps dont know how automatically moved towards her..Thunderfall drenched him completely..She while enjoying raindrops on her noticed him standing beside..turned to her..He could see her angelic face more closely..Fairy..Totaly untouched and pure.. the closeness between them..Aahh..She was just looking like a dancing rose in dew drops..She filled rain water in her hands and threw on him..He closed his eyes on her sudden mischievous..Her laugh echoed around..She ran away creating 'chham chham' on grassy floor..
His lips stretched into a wide smile..He opened his arms receiving rain shower on him..He was happy..So happy..
Bahadur "Saras baba apki coff..ee..He wondered seeing him soaking in rain..Aap waha kya kar rhe hein ..Aapko to baarish bilkul pasand nahi..!"
Saras"Aajse pehle nhi pta tha baarish itni khubsurat ho skti hai..!"
Bahadur"Ji??"
Saras laughed "Kuch nhi..coffee rakho mein aa raha hun..!"
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Aachhoo!! Saras wiped his hairs with towel..His pink nose turned red..
Bahadur gave him tissue box "Babuji meine to apko btaya tha ooti ki baarish ke mazey har koi nahi le skta..Aap to waise hi baahar se aye hein..Yahan ek baar kisi ko srdi lag jaye to mahino nahi jati..!"
Saras throw a glare on him wiped his nose and tried to spoke something.."Its Saraaa..Aachhii..Saras!"
Bahadur shook his head "han wahi..Saras baba aap apne kamre mein aaram kijiye..Khuda krey aap jaldi theek hojayen..!"
Saras"Mein chala jaunga jao tum aaram kro..!"
Bahadur"Lekin baba aap.."
Saras didnt let him complete "Khan Bahadur..meine kaha naa..Aachhi..!"
He nodded and left to his room..Saras eased his back on the sofa sitting in the hallway..
Sunny's call made his cell phone ring..
Saras"Hello.."
Sunny"Tu soya nahi abhi.."
Saras wiped her nose "Tujhe pata hai tujhse baat kie bghair kahan sota hun!"
Sunny "han mein late hogaya busy tha.. Yar mujhe mails mil gae thi..uncle ko details de di hain..! abhi free hua"
Saras sneezed on the phone "..Aachhi.."
Sunny"Saras tu theek to hai?"
Saras"Haan yar bas flu hogaya!"
Sunny wondered"Tujhe flu kaise hogaya?"
Saras wiped his mouth "Aaj yahan bohat baarish hui thi.."
Sunny stood up while talking "Baarish ka tere flu se kya lena dena?Tu aur baarish totaly Opposites.. Dont tell me tu barish mein bheeg gaya..!"
Sunny eased her self on office table of his cabin.. "Tu to dubai mein jis din barish hoti thi kbhi office tak nhi jaata tha..tu phir ooti ki barish! U hate rains..!"
Saras tried to clear "Nahi ab barish itni bhi buri nhi hoti..I mean kbhi kbhi achhi lagti hai.."
Sunny's clear mind easily understood reason behind "Oh..Barish Achi lgti hai?"
Saras nodded" hmm.."
Sunny raised his eyebrows added"Aur barish mein bheegti hui larki aur bhi achhi lagti hai..!"
Saras again nodded in his thoughts "Hmm.."
Sunny with playful smile..'Achha..?"
Saras soon realised what he has said "Nahi.."
Sunny teased him "Haan..Ab ye bta kaisi dikhti hai wo?"
Saras sneezed at wrong time "Aachhiii.."
Sunny laughed "Achii..ya bohat achi..?Zahir hai tujhe pasand hai to bohat achi hogi?"
Saras scold him "Kuch bhi mat bol..aisi koi baat nhi..Bas ek do baar mile hein..!"
Sunny again raised his eye brows in amusement "Ek do baar mile ho,Aur mujhe btaya tak nahi?
Saras"Pehle mujhe khud ko to kuch pta chale tabhi to btaunga..Achha mera dimaag khrab na kar..I'm going to sleep..!"
Sunny laughed"Chal theek hai tu rest kar..Good night.."
Saras"Good night..!"
Saras glance fell on her and he stood up remain stern "Aap yahan..?Wo guard.."
Kumari wearing Xtra large smile "Mein watchman kaka se puch kar hi andar aai hun..Maa ne aap ke lie kaarha bhijwaya hai..!"
Saras was confused "Kaarha?"
Kumari added"Maali baba ne btaya ke aap baarish mein bheeg rahe they..wo kya haina ke ooti ki baarish mein survive krna har kisi ke bas ki baat nhi hai isilie.."
She handed him glass "Aap ye pee ke jldi theek hojayengey.."
Saras hearts became happy on the thought "Wow kya andaaz hai..Maali baba ka naam use kya..us waqt to waha bus hum dono they..Itna khyal tha mere bheegne ka to khud kiun nahi aayi..Dard bhi khud dete hein dawa bhi..kya baat hai..!"
Kumari was confused "Kya hua?"
Bubble of his thoughts burst "Nahi kuch nhi ..Wo..Apki didi nahi ayin?I mean wo theek hein?"
Kumari frowned"Didi bilkul theek hein..kiun?"
Saras sneezed "Nahi kuch nahi waise hi..Umm..Aunty ko thanx kahiega..!"
Kumari nodded "Good night.."
Saras sat on the sofa.."Yuck"
Kaarha was so bitter..
Saras sniffed "Beta saras ye barish kitni mehngi par gae.."
To add more to his bad luck lights went off..
Saras closed his eyes in dissapointment "Lagta hai powercut hua hai..Bahadur..Candles kahan hain..lamp ley aao.."
After a while he realised usko to meine khud hi bhej dia..He stoop up to find candles but thn sat again.."Nahin..Pichhli baar ki chot ab tak theek nhi hui..Lekin..Mein aise andhere mein bhi to nhi beth skta..Aachhi..! Oh God..Wt the.."
He carefully walked towards the drawers started fumbling..
Thankfuly he found candles..He set them onto their stand kept on the table..but.."Arghh..Lighter was missing..!"
Saras thought annoyingly"Its better to go to sleep..He looked at Kaarha kept on the table.. "No..!"
He turned to go to his room..Just after taking few steps he sensed Golden lights spread behind him..he immedietly turned and remained stunn..Unable to beleive on his eyes..
Kumud was standing behind..Her skin was fulminated in golden light of lantern hanging through her delicate hand..She was looking like a Statuesque..
He stammered "Tum..Tum yahan is waqt?"
Sound of payal echoed throughout the hall way as she took steps towards him..
Kumud "Maa ne kaarha bohat pyar se bana kar bheja tha..!"
Saras embarrasly rushed towards it "Nahi..Haan mein wo bas peene hi laga tha.."
Just to show her he sat nd took a sip from it and her pathetic face was showing the story about Kaarha..
Kumud was standing beside him,she kept the lantern on table..
Saras helplessly looked at her "Bohat karwa hai..!"
Kumud sat beside him..Saras became uncomfortable sensing goose bumps inside him..A sudden type of shiver ran to his spine feeling closeness between them..He knew that she cant even imagine what he thinks about her..He was looking at that fairy wdout a blink..
Kumud picked up the glass from the table and gave it to him "Kaarha hai to krwa to hoga..par is se aap jald hi theek hojayengey.."
Saras didnt took it from her delicate hands.. He doesnt wanted to touch them cause he knew that he wont able to handle the sensations..
She made him gulped down kaarha in few sips..He was just lost in her eyes that forgot bitterness of it..
Kumud kept glass on the table and stood up to leave..
Saras "Aap ja rahi hain..?"
Kumud wdout turning replied"Aap aaram kijiye..Good night.."
She left carrying lantern..He stood up ran fingers in his hairs..Happiness of his heart was clearly visible on his face through his smile..
Lights came back..He smilingly sniffed and realised no more redness on his nose..He was feeling so releif..Perfect now!
Ofcourse why not..After all She herself cure my disease..

Uskey deedar pey jo mera Ikhtiar hota..
Yahi roz roz hota,yahi baar baar hota..

Hit Like.Eagerly waiting for ur comments.

This beautiful banner ix made by Aryana..sorry for late..plz keep reading😊

Edited by Ayushii_Angel - 11 years ago

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Ayushi

@Ayushii_Angel

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

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Edited by Ayushii_Angel - 11 years ago

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Was eagerly waiting... and you finally updated *victory dance*

Mind blowing and fabulous as always😊

Keep writing!😛

Good night and sweet dreams.😊

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Bhavya

@Obsessed07

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Ayushii_Angel
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kya hua sehar?

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Bhavya

@Obsessed07

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Updated!!!!

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Cant wait to read. And tht banner is just beautiful.

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Its just beautiful. Loved the rain dance. 😳 Cant wait for them to fall in love. I like the characterization of Saras.

Update soon. 😃

Edited by -Obsessed- - 11 years ago

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believerintruth

@believerintruth

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

ReS !

Thanks gor the pm my jaan !

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

lovely banner.when there is no passion in the show now u r bringing back d old SLB magic.So much of passion.Saras enjoying her damce without seeing her face...then loving rain after seeing her in rain...desiring 2 suck the rain drops in her...and d last scene btw samud...so romantic.very passionate

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shubh20

@shubh20

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Good going and well written👏

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Ayushi

@Ayushii_Angel

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: -Obsessed-

kya hua sehar?

bhavu pc khrab hogaya mera 😭 i didnt pm thts y..Could u pm link of my ch2 to ur buddy list plz.. 😊
Otherwise on nxt chapter readers gonna complain abt no pm 🥱

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