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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Superb
Kusum finally said yes to Sunny. That scene was superbly written loved that part so much.

Now want to read love between Danny and Kumar

The part between Saras and Danny was so emotional

Loved it update soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
awesomeee updatee😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
great update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
awesome updates😊😊..loved it❤️...waitng eagerly for the next update..continue soon...and thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Nice effort jasmine. Yes its true I talk exclusively about sunny and kusum only as I seem to be the only alien in a samud and even dari populated place and ignore the hate exhibits against kusum. However the idea of kusum loving saras (in the serial) so suddenly n out of the blue is awful indeed, it is inconsistent with the past story, the idea of two sisters loving one man might happen in a tv serial where both love him from the start but here it reads nonsensical as kusum appears to have developed sudden romantic feelings out of nowhere for him which is completely incongruous concerning her closeness to her didi. anyway I hate the show, characters are pretty dumb. I only ever liked sunny and wished kusum had loved him. I think if the serial were to follow your line of thinking it would be offering maximum satisfaction to a lot of people. frankly speaking though, I don't expect to see sunny back in the show, so its a dead end for me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
The Shell of love Part 6
I dedicate this to all Samud fans who love to see Samud romance.I dedicate this to maaneetdeewangi, linu82 ,nehashtha,Vabs who are waiting eagerly for Danny-Kumari confession,also to rangeeni who truly wants Sunny-Kusum to be a couple.In this update also I merged Danny-Kumari and Sunny-Kusum pics.


Saras-Kumud and Sunny-Kusum's engagement preparations were going on.Saras-Danny shifted to Kumud's house.
Saras went to Kumud.
S:Kumud,what are ou going to wear for tomorrow's engagement?
K:You can see it tomorrow.
S:No,I can't wait till tomorrow.Show it now.
K:Can't you wait for one more day?
S:No.
K:Ok.You go to your room.I will finish my work and come there.That time you can see it.
S:Sure?
K:Yes.
Saras went to his room.
After some time Kumud entered Saras' room wearing a beautiful saree.He sensed it listening to the sound of her waist chain.

Kuch Na kahe.. Bass Chup rahe
Khamoshiyaan hi keh jaye
Tham jaye yeh jahan aur pal bhi theher Jaye

S:Sit near me Kumud.
Kumud smiled.


She sat behind him on the bed.He was very happy.


Rahe na kuchh bhi darmiyaan
Mite yeh saari dooriyan
Milke bhi hai adhoori si ...yeh daastan...(2)


S:Sit a little more closer to me Kumud.Now why should there be a barrier between us?We are a couple now.
She blushed sitting close to him.Her tresses touched him.He felt nice.She smiled.

Rahe na kuch bhi Darmiyaan..
Meete Yeh sari Dooriyan
Milke bhi hain Adhoori si
Yeh Dastaan


He turned back and looked at her.That time only he saw her.He could'nt take his eyes off his marble like beauty.She blushed.

Zid thi yeh tumhaari, ki ham bhi kuchh kahein,
Hamein gila tha ki hum..chup rahe..
He caressed her face softly.She was shy.

Yeh majbooriyan aur yeh faasle
Chaah nahin ke bhi badhte jaayen..
He caressed her long hair.She felt nice.

Ab jo yeh ehsaas hai
Yeh jo adhoori aas hai
Rehne do yunhi mere..
Jo jazbaat hain...
Saras went more and more closer to Kumud.Kumud closed her eyes.

Rahe na kuchh bhi darmiyaan...
Mite yeh saari dooriyan...
Milke bhi hai adhoori si ...yeh daastan...

Suddenly they heard Guniyal calling Kumud:Kumud!
Kumud moved backward.
K:I am going Saras.
S:Oh!
Kumud smiled and ran out.

Kusum went near Sunny.
Sunny was excited:Kusum!
Kus:Sunny,tomorrow we are getting engaged.Before that I want to tell you something.
Sunn:Tell.
Kus:Don't you want to know towards whom I had infatution?
Sunn:What rubbish Kusum!Infatuation happens to everyone.I don't take it seriously.I don't want to know his name.So silly.
Kus:No Sunny.You should know.Because he is none other than Saras;your best friend.


Sunny was shocked.
Kus:I don't know how I fell for him.I started worshipping him seeing his sincere love towards didi.Then I felt I started loving him.But I knew that it was wrong.So I decided to get married to the person my parents choose.But nothing worked out.Later I could'nt think of getting married to anyone else.But Sunny...you taught me what true love is...you prevented me from doing a sin.You made me realize that what I felt for Saras was not love,but respect.
Sunny became emotional.
Kus:Sunny...I know you love me a lot.Still I can't say that I am in love with you.But I am really happy with you.Your presense makes me happy.You have become my closest friend and your friendship is more important than anything else in my life now.So I know that i will be happy with you.And I promise that I will try my level best to be a good wife.
Sunny,now you can take a decision.
He held her hand:I have only one decision Kusum.Because I have faith in my love and you will start loving me one day.
Kusum became very emotional:You trust in our relationship that much?
Sun:Yes.I really feel that our relationship won't be like my previous relationship.If so God would'nt have given me a second chance.If so,God would not have changed your mind and made you say 'yes' to our marriage.

They both smiled emotionally.

The Engagement function...
Kumud and Kusum reached.Saras and Sunny were blown away seeing their ladies.
Saras went near Kumud and whispered:You look gorgeous Kumud.Yesterday itself I wanted to tell you this.But I could'nt.
Kumud blushed.


Sunny went to Kusum.
Sunn:You look very pretty Kusum.
Kusum smiled:You look handsome Sunny.
Sunn:First time somebody is telling that I am handsome.
She smiled:Your heart is more beautiful Sunny.Who else will accept a girl like me who loved her own sister's man...?You know that I had feelings for your own friend.Still you accepted me.You are great Sunny.


Sunn:It's easy to fall in love with you Kusum.Anyone in your place would have hidden this from her fiance.Bt you confessed it even before our engagement.How can I not fall in love with a sincere frabk girl like you?Your heart is even more beautiful Kusum.You even decided to sacrifice your happiness for your sister.That made you internally and externally more beautiful.

(This is a merged one)


Kus:I am happy that I got an understanding partner.Thanks a lot for your support Sunny.


Sunny:Thanks to you too Kusum.
They smiled at each other.Suddenly Kusum's face became dull.
Kus:But Sunny...If I am not able to love you...?
Sunny lost his smile.
Sun:Kusum...I told you..I have faith in our relationship.Because our relationship is based on honesty.We know each other's truth very well.
Kusum smiled.

Saras-Kumud,Sunny-Kusum exchanged rings.



Sunny-Kusum,Saras-Kumud were very happy.

Saras held Kumud's hand with a sweet smile.She smiled.

He caressed her palm.It became a passionate touch which could really felt by Kumud.Both of them got lost in each other forgetting the surroundings.
Kuch Na kahe.. Bass Chup rahe
Khamoshiyaan hi keh jaye
Tham jaye yeh jahan aur pal bhi theher Jaye

Danny's eyes were fixed on Kumari.

D:Kumari,shall we move to a side?


Kuma:Why?
D:I want to talk to you.
He took her to another room.
Kuma:Danny,why did you bring me here?We wrre enjoying so much there.
D:I can't resist myself Kumari.You look so gorgeous in saree.
Kumari smiled:This saree is good.Right?I bought this from my favourite shop Kareena Karishma.
D:Saree is beautiful.But you are more beautiful than this saree.
She blushed.
Kuma:Ok Danny.I am going.Maa will be searching for me.
She began to walk off.But Danny held her hand.
She looked at him:Danny!
D:Kumari...I love you.
She was stunned.
Kuma:Danny,are you joking?
D:No Kumari.I am serious.I love you and I want to spend the rest of my life with you.


D:I had been trying to tell you this for a long time.But I could'nt.Now I managed to open my heart.
Kumari became very emotional.Her eyes got filled up with tears.
Kuma:Danny..you know that I had an affair with Umesh.


D:I don't care about that Kumari.For me what matters is you...only you.Tell me Kumari...you also feel the same for me.Right?
Kuma:Danny,you asked me many times why I got frustrated knowing about you and Kusum.Now I am telling you the real reason for my anger.Because I could'nt stand you with anyone else.
D:Because?
Kuma:Because I love you.
They both smiled at each other.
Kalika who is Kumud,Kusum,Kumar's cousin Yash's wife/Kumud's ex-husband Pramad's ex-girl friend watched this secretly.
She said in her mind with an evil smile:Now see what I am going to do.

Saras brought Kumud to his room which was decorated with lit lamps.She was surprised.
K:So beautiful.
He was happy to see her face glow.He looked at her deeply.She blushed.He caressed her face romantically.Kumud was lost in him.
Rehke bhi sang hain juda,
Bhoolega na kabhi jahaan

Saras came closer to her.Kumud came back to her senses.She held his hand.

Hai alag hi daastan,
Sarasatichandra ki...
K:Saras,once we crossed our border.This time it should not happen.We should wait more.
S:Yes Kumud.Now I know my limits.And I know very soon we will be together.
They both smiled at each other.

Kalika dailed Guman's number in dubai.
Guman attended the call.
Gum:Hello..
Kal:Hi Gumanji...
Gum:Who are you?
Kal:I am Kalika from Desai family.
Gum:What?
Kal:I am Yash's wife Kalika.
Guman did'nt care.
Kal:You must be wondering why I called you.Have you enquired where Saras is after he left you all?He is engaged to Kumud now.


Guman was shocked:But Saras and Kumud's marriage got cancelled.Right?
Kal:Yes.But look at destiny.They got reunited.
Guman was shocked.
Kal:This is not a big shock Gumanji.The real shocking news is awaiting for you.Your son Danny has found his soul mate.Do you know who she is?
Guman's heart beat fast:Danny...?
Kal:None other than your biggest enemy Dugbha's daughter Kumari.
Guman was so shocked that she felt that her head was spinning.


Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
awesome update ha
loved it
saras ana kumud conversation is so cute
and then kusum and sunny to
now coming to danny and kumari
they professed their love to each other
wow
and this kalika huh i hate her
kya jarrurat thi guman ko baatane
pata nahi ab kya hoga
update fast
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Superb yaar i loved the danny kumari confssion
They look so cute 😳
Hope that kalikw doesnt ruin their sweet moment
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Wonderful update. Loved all the couples in this update. I love Saras and Kumud together finally. Sunny and Kusum confession was beautiful between them. Danny and Kumari are so cute together too. Kalika is a evil witch. What is going to happen now?

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