The Shell of love SS Last part pg37 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Nice...want some romantic moments between kumari and Danny..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
Hope u read Danny-Kumari's red rose scene...did u read it?

Originally posted by: nehashtha

Nice...want some romantic moments between kumari and Danny..😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
love the update.
there should b some romantics moments btveen kumara and danny.
pls can u ?.
tf pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi sorry for late comment I was away, just read it now, verynice update. Love how u describe the story, it s like I m watching it. Love therose scene it was cute. Hope to see more romantic scene with our cute couple danri. I m also scaredof guman now what is she going to do with my angels. Ur ss is better than the serial, I love it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Awesome update ! Waiting to see what happens next !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update and a lovely story...
Loving it Jasmine...
Waiting for more...
Thanx for pm dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
The Shell of love Part 8
Danny-Kumari cracked jokes and patted each other.Guman who passed that way saw them and got angry.Danny-Kumari saw Guman.
Kuma:Danny...Guman aunty.
D:Chill Kumari.Just ignore her.


Danny went away.
Kumari found it difficult to face her.Guman came near her.
Guman smiled poisonously:So you trapped the right guy.The richest guy.I really admire your smartness,guts and talent to trap a rich guy.
Dughba who came that way watched this.


Suddenly Guman's face became red and scary:Have you ever thought whether you deserve my son?
D:Guman,what are you talking to my daughter?
G:You are asking me as if you don't know anything.You and your daughter trapped a rich guy.
Dugbha lost her control:Stop it Guman.That is not my daughter's culture.It's your tendency to trap rich men.Did you forget your past?
Guman's heart was pricked.
Guman left.
Kumari burst into tears.
Dugbha caressed her:Don't cry Kumari.Don't listen to her.She is like this.Her tongue is loose.

The next day also Guman approached Kumari.
G:Just because your mother supported you yesterday don't think you can do anything.Guess she does'nt know that you are romancing Danny behind her.What if she comes to know about it?
Kumari got scared.


G:So be careful.
Guman went away.

Kumari told this to Danny.
D:Kumari,don't be upset.I apologize on behalf of my mother.
Kuma:No need of that Danny.It's just that I became upset.I did'nt love you seeing your financial status.I loved you for your caring nature.
D:I know that Kumari.But my mom who has married my dad for money won't understand that.

Anyways before everyone mistake our relationship to be bad we should do something.
Because I don't want our pure relationship to be misunderstood by anyone.
Kuma:Thank you Danny.But what are you planning to do?
D:After tomorow's puja I am going to reveal our relationship to everyone.
Kuma:What?
D:Yes.It's an auspicious occasion to reveal it and God will be on our side for sure.
Kumari was nervous.

The next day...
Everyone got ready for puja.But Kumari and Danny were tense about what was going to happen after the puja.The puja went well.
Danny and Kumari went in front of everyone.
D:We want to tell you all something.
Guman got tensed.
Danny and Kumari looked at each other.He blinked his eyes giving her courage.
D:Don't get tense Kumari.I will manage.


D:We love each other.
All were shocked.
Kusum:Danny and Kumari love each other...?
Kumud:I am shocked.But is Kumari kidding?
Kusum remembered how Kumari fought with her when the family decided to fix Kusum's marriage with Danny.
Kus:No didi.Kumari is really serious.It's just that we have not seen her serious side.She showed only her kiddish side to us.
Kum:Means?
Kus:Yes..now it's been clear that Danny and Kumari love each other.That's why Danny refused to marry me.
Kum:I can't believe it.Anyways let's see what they are going to say.


Kumari and Danny looked at each other with tension.


D:We hope you all will bless us.
Saras:Danny,are you serious?
D:Yes bhaiyya.If I marry someone the bride will be Kumari.
Everyone smiled.
Kumud:Kumari...what do you say?
Kumari shivered.
Kumud:Kumari:Don't be nervous.You can share with us your heart's feelings.


Kumari blushed:I love Danny.
Everyone smiled.
Laxminandan smiled:I am happy that both my sons are getting married to the Desai sisters.
D:I don't need your consent.
Laxminandan was hurt.
Everyone became dull.
D:I want to know the others' opinion?
Laxminandan:It is yes from our side.
Everyone smiled.
Kumud:Kumari...I never knew that you could be so serious about a relationship.You have grown mature.I am happy about it.Your selection Danny is really nice.
Kumari smiled.
D:And Dugbha aunty?
Dughba looked at Guman who was fuming with anger.
Dugbha:By God's grace you are good at heart.My Kumari won't get a better life partner.
Kumari and Danny were very happy.
Kumari ran towards Dugbha and hugged her:Thank you so much Maa.I really got scared.
Dugbha:I always support true love.
Everyone smiled.
Danny:Thank you so much Dugbha aunty.
Guman:I am Danny's mother.Nobody bothered to ask me my consent?
Laxminandan:Guman,our son's happiness is our happiness.And Kumari is a nice girl.Danny is lucky to have a nice girl like Kumari.
D:Please mom.Don't create a scene here.You have lost your right to interfere in my life.I don't care if you give me the consent to marry Kumari or not.Because I love Kumari and I don't need your consent to marry Kumari.
Guman was shattered:Danny!
D:Vidhya Uncle...we would like to get engaged fast.
Dugbha:Yes Vidhya bhai.Danny is right.We should conduct their engagement soon.
V:Why not?This moment itself we will start the engagement preparations.
Danny looked at Kumari.She blushed.
Kusum thought:Even Kumari did'nt hesitate to open up her heart before Danny.But look at myself.I am simply testing Sunny's patience.Since he is too nice he is waiting for me.But not anymore.
Sunny was standing at a corner.Kusum went near him.
Sunny seemed to be very happy:It's so happy to know that Danny and Kumari are uniting.
Kusum smiled.
Sun:Danny was always a funny cool easy going guy.I could not believe that he was in love.
Kus:I could'nt believe that Kumari could fall in love.Because she is the smallest in our family.
Sun:This love is so sstrange.We don't know with whom we will fall in love.


Kus:You are right.Love is strange.We cannot predict when love happens.
She looked at his eyes deeply:Like I fell in love unexpectedly..I never thought that I would fall in love.
Sunny looked at her face carefully.
Kus:I don't know when I fell in love Sunny.But a few days back I realized that I have fallen in love with you.
Sunny could not believe his ears.He was excited.
Sun:I knew that one day you will love me back Kusum.Because I love you very much Kusum.
Kusum smiled.


Suddenly Vidhyachathur said:Today is nice.Why don't we have sweets to celebrate this day?
Laxminandan:Is there any need to ask it?Tell Dugbha to distribute the sweets made by her.Her sweets are yummy.
Guman was fuming with jealousy when Laxminandan praised Dugbha.She stared at Dugbha which made Dugbha smirk.
All had sweets and enjoyed each other's company playing games.Kalika also joined them.


Kumud thought:Seems that Kalika has really changed and become the member of our family.
Kumud was very happy.

Dugbha went near Guman who was irritated.
Dugb:God is punishing for your deeds Guman.Good that Danny is like his brother Saras though you gave him birth.
Gum:Enough Dugbha.Let the engagement take place.But I won't let the wedding take place.
Dugbha did'nt care:You cannot do anything if they are meant for each other.Though Saras and Kumud got separated God reunited them.So even if you separate Danny and Kumari they will unite again.
Guman was lost for words.
Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Oh I love it. Im so happy that danri didnt hide their relation to the family. If something between them would have happened in the serial, I think it would have been same as u described. The pictures match well the story. And danny and kumari are really cute. Glad that all family support them. Hope to see some romance between them. U r doing a good job, did I tell u I m ur fan. Keep it up and update soon. [=D>]
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Nice ... Nicely written :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
update was superb.
dani and kumara awesome guys.
they confessed their feeling infront the whole family.
good courage both have.
whole family 1st😕.
but after word they accepted their decision 👏.
but joint system noke jhok leg pulling is every one.
tf pm.

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