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Posted: 11 years ago
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Marvelous story. I really like Danny and Kumari, really cute couple. Glad Umesh got beaten up by Danny and police took him off. Now Kumari is seeing Danny true heart...⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
great update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Great work each part of ur ss are well written and leave the readers desperate for the next part. Update soon I cant wait. And the story is interesting and going well so keep it up [=D>]
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Awesome! Plz continue soon..Im really very excited!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
aww sorryyy...
but promise from next time wud comment on all parts..!!!
plzz plzz update...i loved ur.. ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Why next time?this time itself u can comment.right?😉

Originally posted by: kriyansh_tanya

aww sorryyy...

but promise from next time wud comment on all parts..!!!
plzz plzz update...i loved ur.. ff

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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Very nice... Read parts 1n 2 together n the story is good, I like it alot!
Please do continue soon n thanks for the PM :)xx
Edited by ArHiLover-x - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
The Shell of love Part 3
I realized that I cannot write without my current favourite couple Samud.So from this part onwards Samud will also play a main role.
Kumari:Danny...I am sorry.I misunderstood you.Kusum told me everything.
D:What did Kusum tell you?
Kuma:That you both are not dating.
D:Hearing that you became happy?
Kumari was embarrassed.
Kuma:Nothing like that.I am going.
D:Kumari...wait...why were you actually angry with me?For falling in love with Kusum or for hiding it?
Kumari did not know what to say.
Danny smiled.


He said in his mind:Open your heart and say Kumari.
D:You looked really frustrated hearing about me and Kusum.What was the real reason?
K:I am going.
She went out.Danny smiled.

Danny met Kumari outside.
Kumari could'nt believe her eyes.
Kuma:Danny,you are again in front of me?Are you following me?
D:Yes.I was in search of you.


Kuma:Why?
D:Why don't we go to a restaurant and have food?
Kuma:Restaurant?I am scared.
D:Why?I am there with you.Please come Kumari.
Kuma:Ok.
D:Now that's Kumari.

Danny took Kumari to a restaurant.
Kumari was surprised to see the decoration.
Kuma:Danny...this decoration...
D:I did it for you.Because you like this.Right?
Tears dwelled in her eyes.
Kuma:You did so much for me.But I kept yelling at you.


Danny wiped her tears:I did this to bring smile on your face,not to bring tears in your eyes.
She smiled.
D:When you smile and yell at me you are very sweet.But when you cry you don't look good.
They both giggled.

Saras entered Kumud's room panting.
Kumud:What happened Saras?
S:Kumud...just came to know that Pramad is suffering from liver syrossis.He is in his last stage.
Kumud was shocked.
S:He is in the hospital.Very serious condition.He wants to see you.
Kumud was shattered.

Saras took Kumud to Pramad.Seeing Kumud Pramad's tears rolled down his cheeks.
P:God punished me for torturing you..for not loving a gem like you.I deserve this.I tried to take your life.So God is taking my life.Only Saras deserves you.Because no one can love you more than Saras loves you.
Kumud's eyes were full of tears.
P:Kumud...this time i have really changed.Trust me.Please tell me that you forgave me.
K:Pramad!
P:Please Kumud..
K:Yes..i forgave you.
Pramad was relieved:Now I can die peacefully.
Kumud and Saras felt pity towards him though he was their enemy.
P:I have only done bad things in my life.But now I want to do a good thing before I die.I have only tried to separate you from Saras.I will correct that mistake.
He held Kumud's hand and kept it on Saras'.Saras and Kumud looked at each other emotionally.
Suddenly they felt that Pramad's hand was not moving.They looked at him.He was lifeless.
Kumud screamed.

Pramad's funeral...
Pramad's parents cried.Kumud and Saras felt sad seeing them.

Weeks passed by...

Kumud had'nt still recovered from the shock.Saras went to her with a box.
S:A gift for you.
She took it:Thanks.
S:Hope you will like it.If you liked it come to my room.I will wait for you.
Saras went to his room.
Kumud opened the box and smiled seeing a lovely saree.
Saras looked at the mirror.His face blossomed seeing Kumud's reflection on the mirror.She was draped in the peach saree he gifted.


He turned back and looked at her.
She smiled:How do I look now Saras?
Saras came towards her:Beautiful.
She blushed.He caressed her face.She closed her eyes.They both got lost in each other.

Kuch Na kahe.. Bass Chup rahe
Khamoshiyaan hi keh jaye
Tham jaye yeh jahan aur pal bhi theher Jaye...


Everyone was surprised to see the person at the verandah.It was Sunny.Everyone was happy.
Saras hugged Sunny.
Sunny:Hey buddy...how are you?
Saras:Fine.
Sunny:Got busy with work.Otherwise I would have come long back.
Sunny hugged Danny:Hey...
Kumari:Good that you came back Sunny.We all missed you a lot.
He looked at Kusum:Really Kusum?Is Kumari telling the truth?Did you all miss me?
Kusum smiled:Yes.When you were around us this house was active.Now again you will make our haveli active.

Sunny:Sure.

Not only that.Saras really needs a friend like you.He will be very happy if you are with him.

Sunny:Yes..I am here for Saras.
They smiled.
Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Nice update, kumari and danny scene very cute I love the way u describe kumari discomfort. Nice introduction of sunny looks like he missed kusum more than anyone and of course samud was nice aswell. The story is going well cant wait for your next part. Good job [=D>]
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Awesome update 👍🏼

RiNy part was really cute :)

Pramad is out of Samud's life
Finally Sunny has arrived 😃 Can't wait for the next part!!

Edited by MaaneetDeewangi - 11 years ago

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