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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
aww d way u penned down RiNy scene was superrr awesomee <3 n cutee
samud was nice too <3
n sunny enters do continueee
wish cvs wer as creative lyk u are
n wish dey unite the 2 couples
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay sunny is here, for kusum! I like that u kept it vague for his intro, how will the relationship move beyond friendship?.. my curiousity is piqued! If only the cvs picked up on this, sunnys presence is important, his light heartedness is contagious n no one comes close to such lightness of being and natural charm which he possesses. he would have tidied the present chaos that the family have fallen in, but more than being merely a friend to others, he deserves his own love story as much as saras deserves kumud n kumari deserves danny whom is too young n boyish for kusum. I'm partial to sunny n kusum, and I don't care as they don't aeem to have as many votes as the other pairs
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
amazing update😊😊
loved it❤️
waiting for the next update..continue soon
and thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesomeee updates👏
loved ittt😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow wonderful update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
awesome update dear, loved danny-kumari and pramad is no more. so sad, continue soon and thank you for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
This was special update to me. Love Kumari and Danny conversations. Cute couple for sure. Great intoduction to Sunny. He missed Kusum the most. 😉
Edited by Punkin22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Hey update soon, I feel so depressed wiyh danny, he is doing my nerves aswell now. I was so hoping to see the next part. It will make my week end please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The Shell of love Part 4

I dedicate this part to linu82 because for her only I am updating this part so fast and specially for her I added Danny-Kumari scene.






Sunny changed his clothes and came out.He saw Saras and Kumud chatting with each other.
Sunny smiled and came towards him.
Sunny:Danny told me that here romance is blooming between you both.
Kumud and Saras were shy.



Sunny:Anyways I am not disturbing you guys.
Kumud:Nothing like that Sunny.You are not a disturbance for us.Infact Saras was talking to me about you.You are his best friend.You are the one who stood by him when he went through the bad phase of his life.
Sunny:I am happy for both of you.Destiny has once again united you both.
Saras-Kumud smiled.

Sunny was in the terrace.Kusum brought tea for him.
Sunny sipped the tea:Nice tea Kusum.
Kus:Thanks.
Sunny:Kusum,now a days you don't look cheerful like before.Why?
Kus:Nothing like that.
Sunny:You look as if you lost your love.
It pricked her heart.
Sunny laughed:Just joking.
Kus:Sunny...how is your girl friend?


Sunny:That has become my past.
Kus:Means?
Sunny:We broke up.
Kusum was shocked:Why?
Sunny:She was not happy with my busy schedule.We could'nt get along with each other.
Kus:You are upset?
Sunny:Initially I was.But now I am not.Maybe she was never my destiny.If so we would got back to each other again like Saras and Kumud.They are true lovers.That' why destiny reunited them.Now I feel our love was not true.If so our little fight would not ended up in break up.


Kusum thought:God...love is so confusing.I am in a shell of love now.I should break it for our own good.But what is my destiny?God...please show me the right path.
Sunny looked at her and smiled:Iam not depressed.I am sure that God has found my soul mate somewhere.I just have to recognise her.
She smiled.



2 months passed by...
Sunny-Kusum became very good friends.Kusum became really comfortable with Sunny.Sunny started feeling for her.
His eyes always followed her which was noticed by Saras.
S:Sunny,Am I guessing right?
Sunny was embarassed:What did you guess?
S:That you feel special for Kusum?
Sunny was shy.
Sunny:Yes.
S:Then you should confess your love to her soon.
Sunny:i want to.But I lack the courage to do that.
S:Oh!
Sunny:How will I confess my love to her?
Kumud came from behind:I will help you.
They were surprised.
K:Even I have been watching your closeness with Kusum.
Sunny:But I am not sure about her feelings for me.
K:I know Kusum very well.She cannot reject you.She feels very happy with you.
Sunny smiled.
K:I will talk to Kusum first.After that you should propose directly.
Sunny:Thank you so much Kumud.
K:All the best Sunny.
They shook hands.


Saras smiled.Sunny went.
S:Kumud...will Kusum agree?
K:I don't know Saras.
S:If Kusum rejects he will be shattered.He had already gone through a painful break up.
Kumud became dull.


K:But I have hope that she also likes him.Kusum can jell only with a few people and Sunny is among them.
Saras smiled slightly.
K:Ok I am going.
Kumud turned back to walk,but she slipped and her foot got sprained.
Saras made her sit and twisted her foot.

K:Ahhh!
S:Your pain will go now Kumud.
He caressed her foot softly.Kumud felt nice.
They both looked at each other to exchange a romantic eye lock.

Kuch Na kahe.. Bass Chup rahe
Khamoshiyaan hi keh jaye
Tham jaye yeh jahan aur pal bhi theher Jaye


Kumari was studying in her room.Suddenly she heard some noise from behind.She turned back only to see Danny trying to peep into her room through the window.She ran towards the window.
Kuma:Danny,what are you doing?
D:Because of you I am doing this.


Kuma:What did I do?
D:Now a days you are avoiding me.You forgot that you have a friend here who is bored of loneliness.
Kuma:How come you are alone Danny?You have so many people around you.
D:Yes.But no one can replace you.Right?
A small smile appeared on her face:What?
D:Means...only you can be my best friend and I am missing my best friend these days.
She smiled.
Kuma:Sorry Danny.My internal assessment tests are going on.That's why I am busy with my studies.
D:Ok.All the best Kumari.Wish you all the best for the internal tests.But promise me that you won't forget your best friend.
He extended his arm.She held his hand with a smile:Ok yes..promise.
They shared a cute eye lock.
Becoming shy looking into his eyes Kumari broke the eye lock.
Kuma:Ok Danny.We will see later.Let me study.
D:How can I go?
Kumari asked softly:Why?
D:Because you are holding my hand.Only if you leave my hand I can go.Right?
Kumari was embarrassed.She left his hand.
He gave her a cute smile:Ok Kumari.Bye.
She smiled:Bye.
He went back.Kumari smiled.

Kumud went to talk to Kusum.
K:Kusum,I know that you hesitate to get married.But still I think when a good proposal comes you should not reject.That's a luck.
Kus:Didi,I understand.
K:That means you are ready for a good alliance?
Kus:Yes.
K:That's so nice.Kusum,tell me what you think of Sunny.
Kus:He is nice.
K:Kusum,I think Sunny really likes you.Do you mind marrying him?
Kusum was shocked:Didi!
K:Kusum..Sunny is a nice guy.You both bond very well too.I think he suits you.

And he would like to marry you.
Kusum could'nt believe it.
K:You think carefully and take a decision.Never take a hasty decision.
Kumud went out.Guniyal whooverheard it approached Kusum.
Gun:Kusum,what decision are you taking?
Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago

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