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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
^^^

Aaarshi!!...😲
You pretty well know your magic too! Don't you? ...But 'remove' the tricky part me-Or let me not be in a delusion over an inclusion- so as to suggest the 'removal'...You must be mentioning our two resident geniuses. And then your magic is pure and truthful! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: smrth

^^^


Aaarshi!!...😲
You pretty well know your magic too! Don't you?...But 'remove' the tricky part me-Or let me not be in a delusion over an inclusion- so as to suggest the 'removal'...You must be mentioning our two resident geniuses. And then your magic is pure and truthful!👏



You dear smrth are too modest. You are a also included in the jadoogar list. Rahiman heera kab kahe lakh taka mera mol
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
You love poetry, ghazals right? My Hindi is so poor.😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: smrth

You love poetry, ghazals right? My Hindi is so poor.😭



I love poetry, ghazals, songs, stories, sab kuch!

What I quoted above was a Doha from Rahim ji

Bade badayi na karein, bade na bolein bol

Rahiman heera kab kahe lakh taka mera mol


Rough translation - those who are great never claim to be so

Just as the diamond never calls itself precious

I will have to start writing more and more in English! 😕

Also the jadugar list is not limited to the 3 of you, the list has all members of the CB family, but the three of you at the top and i am sure this claim of mine will be unanimously supported by all!

Edited by arshicritic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
smrth,

First, you did caution. My neglect. Apologies 😳 Second, simple digression, to offer a more "practical" perspective (Again, only submit, greater chances that I may err... Requesting full indulgence)

My approach to SC is two-pronged and this I credit you with. Recall one of our initial back-and-forth... Taking the liberty to quote you here:

This deep insight is simply great. Much stimulating and elucidatory, but this depth also incites a question. Would the project be able to match the heightened expectations that the raised bar is calling for, given its inherently contingent nature as well ad-hoc environment that seems to be prevaiingl in its script creation department? Not least, the commercial (TRP etc.) as well external factors that inexorably keep on affecting it through out? Though i admit, PH's track record, inherent strength of source Novel, and talented cast are worth believing in. And then script too has gathered its act commendably lately- so to say.

My current concern: Can the depth of debate/the inconsistencies in character actions/the lack of crucial narrative elaboration/the haphazard track joins be divorced from the contingent nature, ad-hoc environment of the enterprise? To view thus, from a singular optic, that of the medium:

"His immediate revert"... Could commercial burden be reason for forfeit not remaining final? To make story more palatable, more accessible thus for a generation who would not understand, neither condone, in their entertainment product, renuniciation, and other matters 'arcane'? Our generation's core essence, is impatient. We prefer our romance and heartbreak, immediate. Post-that, we expect reunion. In long order or short, regardless. A three hour movie defines our pain threshold. An enduring saga of esoterics may encourage many to renounce show itself

This "haphazardness" you mention, perhaps evidentiary powerplay between channel and SLB? Or maybe production house itself attempting to aim for desired balance? Often times, SC felt both as "playing to the gallery" and aspiring ambitiously to the source... Quite unwilling to forfeit claim on one or another, if I may... At this juncture, will admit, many a times, to me, S and K do not make sense... I do even have any, "half-knowledge" either for comparative purposes... That makes your concerns doubly legitimate. But again, is the story, character, creativity, immune from the fickle nature of the work? Are any of us ever immune from the ever-changing factors of the environments we operate within? I cannot claim so.

Enroute to a day of meetings, hence offered this purely as something outside of box to think about. "Recalcitrance" (intriguing term!)... Keeps mind gears kicking & active... Keeps from becoming complacent. Welcome it! 😳 Will return to debate, from prior perspective, soon as work is out =)



Edited by IdiotViewer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: smrth

Hgg and iViewer

First of all, Huge thanks for your brilliant explanations and patience. You two are just awesome.👏

I Viewer- as I told you earlier, 'my canvas' as you said, may be wider for obvious reason, but it also has the fault of 'half knowledge' for not having understood it entirely.

As I said, The Model brilliantly explains much of the actions in serial...but then, some important actions remain much baffling or even misleading in their reasons or logic. They are so because they are directly tracing their origin in a haphazard adaptation of the Source, where a track is joining the original but with out concurring elaboration available in the book- done rather with a jump skip. For instance, SC's simultaneous appearance in SN is one such. His immediate 'revert' is a complete reverse from the source. In book, his decision to renounce was final; again, reason there was ostensible 'relief' to Kumud. But he did not 'revert'. And then, he surfaces in Suvarna Puri after three months. Even then, he does not 'want' her back. The 'forfiet' stays final. Regret arises only over Kumud's plight. On the other hand, Kumud, 'learning' his benevolent motive, is not only immediately forgiving him, even considers herself 'guilty' for causing him a 'flight' from his home (for her good'!) But her moral dilemma is also on; 'continue loving ex fiance while married to other'...Notice, this last stage is incorporated in the script here...a track as per original, but without effecting operatives of the original. Result, an imbalance/ incongruency in analyzing Kumud's actions/drivers; 'she did not wait. So she too is 'guilty' of 'egotist steps'. 😕(alpha nature?) similarly 'Saras 'revert' so some sort of exculpation on 'renege'. (beta?)...now again, his instruction to Kumud (a letter) to marry elsewhere was final and conscious in the book- unlike a temporary impulsive 'blunder' as painted here. But then his other 'follow up' here is following the book! Now Author's logic behind SC's action- conscious renunciation is underpinned on pure spiritual concept of 'detachment'. He cites a philosophy, where his ultimate goals standing on 'liberation' from any worldly attachment are his prime drivers...

The question is, how do we compartmentalize this Indian concept in 'alpha- beta' model?

Hgg, if we are predicting/analyzing them per se, then aren't we analyzing/reacting to a very complex author's 'living' world view as transcending the century through characters of this story? Would it then be confined to mechanical analogy of inanimate C.P.U. and electrons light-racing the layers?

The brilliant (and I bow) poem is much, much elucidating. I cant thank you enough. But at the fulcrum 'Still' point, I would place 'spiritual consciousness of the author' and all the ensuing Dance flowing from it- correctness or incorrectness of Author's world view is subject matter another debate (which, am deferring at this point).

Q-Was not Bhagwat Gita some sort of influence on Four Quartet!?😲

I am lacking Hgg's neat coherence or iV's awesome articulation. I wouldn't have nagged you so much over an Indian soap (!)😲- but extraordinary depth of you two is simply inducing me to go lay out the misconceptions more and more. Indulge the recalcitrance.😊

As well, apology for tardy response...out with friends and stealing peeps and now some time to write the respons...naturally afraid of errors plethora it must contain, please take the import'

P.S. Understanding model's application with better clarity..thanks! friends.



smrth..

@Bold1 - Because it is not direct copy from the source and both kumud & saras characters have also been changed (from what you to describe of the novel, it seems both saras & kumud were beta) where kumud is an alpha and saras beta here...this model helps to a certain extent to explain their behaviour, since I guess SLB in his adaptation itself has changed the core characteristics...

@Bold 2 - since alpha / beta are the core characteristics...they are sort of universal and all other 'applications' (preference, opinions, ideas, etc.) flow from this...so extending this model to the author...what if the author was a beta (which I think he was, considering the entire defeatist attitude prevailing through the novel)?...do you think his core characteristic heavily influenced his preferences, world - view, opinions...which found representation in the novel...the cast, story, characteristics etc... Food for thought, but which I think will require an entire new discussion? 😊

@Bold 3 - From @Bold2 response & like the CPU analogy I think we have the freedom to go to a still deeper level ...which could be the alpha / beta characteristic...I would still think that a person's (incl. the authors) preference, opinions & adherence even about spiritual consciousness flows from his inherent nature...i.e. a person's "sense" & "response" towards spiritual consciousness is also determined by his alpha / beta characteristic and not vice - versa...

Some analogies...
1) it's like the relationship between the primitive brain (we are not even conscious of its presence but it regulates all our critical processes like auto hear-trate, digestion, breathing, immune response etc) and the cortex (we are conscious of it...it is rational, but at the most fundamental level it exists to support the primitive brain and not vice versa)...and even its lowest, simplest level of activity is distinct from, flows from and is bound by the demands of the primitive brain.

2) something like the movie 'Inception'.

Also while people think (incl. all of us) that people who contribute to CB are lunatics...some readers have started to post that we are now crossing the extremes of extending the discussion from an epi...

...So again that is food for thought for another discussion...😎

@Bold4 - Interesting observation...now that you mention it, maybe? Will need to check..


Edited by hotdogg - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
@arshi...

Lovely lines 👏

And you are too modest...
You are the creator of ideas (the alpha / beta so to say since we are on that topic!), most of us are the adders / tinkerers...
We can't tinker if nothing has been created!

Also...the discussions with all the people on CB threads follow the Musketeers oath... "One for all and all for One!"

😎


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hotdogg



smrth..

@Bold1 - Because it is not direct copy from the source and both kumud & saras characters have also been changed (from what you to describe of the novel, it seems both saras & kumud were beta) where kumud is an alpha and saras beta here...this model helps to a certain extent to explain their behaviour, since I guess SLB in his adaptation itself has changed the core characteristics...

Also while people think (incl. all of us) that people who contribute to CB are lunatics...some readers have started to post that we are now crossing the extremes of extending the discussion from an epi...
...So again that is food for thought for another discussion...😎



Hgg... Most ably explained again 👏 If I may, building up on your points:

Re: Bold1 Saras, especially has been made more "palatable"... His mother's backstory, his past trauma provides a "crutch" to his fallibilities... He is not as "detached"... If anything, his attachment is too great. And that leads him to inadvertently hurt the ones he strives to protect. Saras, started out as something else... Closer to source... But in Ratnagiri, to paraphrase Sunny, the Sanyasi turned into a Romeo. He is a "hero". He fights, he cries, he laughs, he romances, he pines, he makes mistakes, he apologises, he commits sins... And he will atone for them. GMT's, yes, but will "renunciation" sit as easily on SLB's Saras...?

@Bold... Got to know of fact last night itself... Left me conflicted. Thus, my response proper veering on the practical... Not losing sight of the objective. Feet firmly on the ground... Mind prone to flights unimagined... =)

Edited by IdiotViewer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: IdiotViewer

smrth,


First, you did caution. My neglect. Apologies 😳 Second, simple digression, to offer a more "practical" perspective (Again, only submit, greater chances that I may err... Requesting full indulgence)

My approach to SC is two-pronged and this I credit you with. Recall one of our initial back-and-forth... Taking the liberty to quote you here:

This deep insight is simply great. Much stimulating and elucidatory, but this depth also incites a question. Would the project be able to match the heightened expectations that the raised bar is calling for, given its inherently contingent nature as well ad-hoc environment that seems to be prevaiingl in its script creation department? Not least, the commercial (TRP etc.) as well external factors that inexorably keep on affecting it through out? Though i admit, PH's track record, inherent strength of source Novel, and talented cast are worth believing in. And then script too has gathered its act commendably lately- so to say.
My current concern: Can the depth of debate/the inconsistencies in character actions/the lack of crucial narrative elaboration/the haphazard track joins be divorced from the contingent nature, ad-hoc environment of the enterprise? To view thus, from a singular optic, that of the medium:

"His immediate revert"... Could commercial burden be reason for forfeit not remaining final? To make story more palatable, more accessible thus for a generation who would not understand, neither condone, in their entertainment product, renuniciation, and other matters 'arcane'? Our generation's core essence, is impatient. We prefer our romance and heartbreak, immediate. Post-that, we expect reunion. In long order or short, regardless. A three hour movie defines our pain threshold. An enduring saga of esoterics may encourage many to renounce show itself

This "haphazardness" you mention, perhaps evidentiary powerplay between channel and SLB? Or maybe production house itself attempting to aim for desired balance? Often times, SC felt both as "playing to the gallery" and aspiring ambitiously to the source... Quite unwilling to forfeit claim on one or another, if I may... At this juncture, will admit, many a times, to me, S and K do not make sense... I do even have any, "half-knowledge" either for comparative purposes... That makes your concerns doubly legitimate. But again, is the story, character, creativity, immune from the fickle nature of the work? Are any of us ever immune from the ever-changing factors of the environments we operate within? I cannot claim so.

Enroute to a day of meetings, hence offered this purely as something outside of box to think about. "Recalcitrance" (intriguing term!)... Keeps mind gears kicking & active... Keeps from becoming complacent. Welcome it! 😳 Will return to debate, from prior perspective, soon as work is out =)




@red,
Exactly...while I was writing above reply, an incongruence in analysing (over?) on something 'fickle' hit me first. But than, we are creating our own conversation which has substance of its own!
@ 'impatient generation', yes kinda instant gratification! But considering inherent dangers we witnessed, I so wish, SLB would not have aimed for 1000+ episodes. If he felt 3 hours format inadequate- and so rightly-, kaash, he would have opted for a 50-100-200 episodes 'seasonal' format. What a product it would have been- everything pre laid out, pre conceived, nothing incongruent, inconsistent, contingent! Have you seen/ heard about a Pakistani Serial " Meri Zaat Zarra e benishaan he"? Exactly similar concept on lead, albeit different mould! again I Wish SLB would have opted setting a new trend- or rather recalling an old trend!

P.s. I viewer, I noticed, last two episodes, my impression posts echoed many features you laid out so stunningly...and this a 'brag' I am proud to impose! 😳Your writing is such insightful!⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Re: us being crazy mavericks doesnt bother me much infact in a sense it is true and I take pride in that

Jo kiya junoon se na kiya to kya kiya

we spend so much time here give our hearts minds to it apply our thoughts and learning share andanalyse learn and educate

give utmost respect to author makers actors

Critique in a manner that is healthy and look for deeper meaning and real life connects

If going beyond hai woh kitna hot hai is lunacy toh lunacy welcome.

Not for me return to mediocrity just to be called normal

We are a group of like minded people who love to debate and discuss

We do not pass judgement on others so lets take none from others

Its a democracy and we love what we do

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