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Posted: 12 years ago
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Deewar

Majabuur Ye Haalaat, Idhar Bhi Hai Udhar Bhi

Tanhaai Ke Ye Raat, Idhar Bhi Hai Udhar Bhi

Kahane Ko Bahut Kuchh Hai, Magar Kisase Kahen Ham

Kab Tak Yuunhi Khaamosh Rahen, Aur Sahen Ham

Dil Kahataa Hai Duniyaa Ki Har Ik Rasm Uthaa Den

Divaar Jo Ham Dono Men Hai, Aaj Giraa Den

Kyon Dil Men Sulagate Rahen, Logon Ko Bataa Den

Haan Hamako Muhabbat Hai, Mohabbat Hai, Mohabbat Hai

Ab Dil Men Yahi Baat, Idhar Bhi Hai, Udhar Bhi

movie : Silsila


Uska asli jeevan saathi uski raksha karega!!!

Kumud:

Jis agni main jala dala tha Saras ki yaadon ko

Aaj usi Agni ko Arpan kar diya

Sara gussa, krodh, akrosh

Aur bhi nikhar ke aaya hai

Ehsaas

Atal amar anashwar prem ka!


Her mangalsutra is like a shackle around her feet

The sindoor ki rekha is the lakshman rekha

That forbids her from crossing the threshold

Her marriage a deewar, that is impenetrable!

And tears of joy soon change to those of helplessness


Par, dekha kaisa adbhut khel

Aaj pramaad ne khud Kumud ko

Dehleej ke paar dhakel diya

Saras ke thoda kareeb!


Unexpected again, knowing that he had come, for her

Was enough to melt away all her anger!

Nothing existed except their ehsaas,

Memories of love, of belonging to each other

Memories of being one!

But they both are aware

Of the wall that separates them

And helpless!


Loved the anguish in Saras's eyes when pramaad appeared on scene

Loved Kumud's joy at realising that Saras came for her

Loved it all

Today it was Jen's day! -10

And Gauti's day -10

And a 10 even to creepy disgusting Prammad, I mean Anshul

Episode rating 9/10


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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ Kaadal, your poem of yesterday, even more relevant today!

@hgg - the Harry met Sally quote in reverse - kept haunting me in the scene when pramaad faced Saras
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Posted: 12 years ago
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samud are helpess poor souls cant bear it and pramad rude as hell
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was yesterdays cry saga continued 😭

here is my renting , have a look

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/88199326

Edited by shana0127 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heart breaking
their helplessness cant bear it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very apt.
Didnt see the episode but read the WU.
Kumud forgiving Saras so quickly was a superb move by the makers. Shows how strong the love is in her. And she is not completely unaware of his situation when he said no. She knows. Now the focus is shifting subconsciously to the knee-jerk reaction of hers to get married because of the messy life she has been pushed into.
And Saras's pain increasing manifold seeing and understanding what Kumud is going through in her sasuraal.
Yesterday's splendid show of emotions by Saras still comes to mind. First surprise, then shock from realization of her marital status, then sadness, guilt and helplessness. Finally the apology. And how she breaks down seeing that apology.
There is a seriousness and no-nonsense approach to the narration where it is required. This is what I like about the show. No character is superlative.But the story is.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arshii...




Oh ... How apt are these Beautiful lines from SILSILAA for the present situation that both of them find themselves in. 👏

( Btw , Silsila was studded with gems ... but i have always felt that this one is the brightest of them all ... and when Mr. Bachchan recites them in that unmatched deep , sonorous voice of his ... Aaahhh... Goosebumps ) 😊

As for the episode ... Ohh... soo much Pain everywhere ...in their Hearts ... in their Eyes...

But soo Beautiful that one could not take one's eyes off them even for a minute ... cause these two Beautiful Souls are bearing this Heartbreak with soo much Dignity ...

The Angst soo Intense ... but Heartbreakingly Beautiful

( i had unshed tears in my eyes , almost through the length of the episode )


and when that horrid Pramad made that absolutely disgusting move of givng him money ... the way Saras first looked at him and then at Kumud ... Shocked and Unbelieving at first ... and then the hurt and horror of realization ... of the kind of Creep that Kumud has got herself tied to... of the Hell that Kumud has landed herself in ... Hats off to Gautam again .



@ Kaadal ... your poem in yesterday's CB was soo Beautiful ... truly Fantastic . 👏

So good to see so many wonderfully Creative people here .
Edited by twila - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arshi great post as usual. And yes I was feeling the same when I was watching the episode. She wanted to run to him, she realised her Saras had come for her. Even I had the same thoughts like you.
Kumud ke payre pe zanjeer hai apne nayi zindagi ki, kisi aur ke mangalsutra hai uske gale main, mathe pe kisi aur ki sindoor and naam se vo kisi aur ki patni hai. Jo chavi abh dik raha hai vo Saras ki Kumud ki nahi, kisi aur ki hai tho kaise jaaye Saras ke paas. Pramad threw her out but she still can't go far. She still has to stay within the confines of the new wall which life has built around her.
Saras wanted to meet her, his Kumud whom he was searching was near to him right here. But his guilt, knowing he had pushed her into this life doesn't allow him to face her. What will he answer her, how can he give her the life which he had stolen from her. He too is bound by the new walls life has built around him.
Navinchandra..Kumud was surprised & shocked and Saras not able to face her. Kumud had questions written on her face but she has lost the right to ask him anything.
Pramad sees Kumud as his foe, a person who has come into his life restraining him from all his normal activities and getting him punished by his father who already is not happy with him. So Kumud against Pramad and Saras still as her indirect ally. Kumud is happy knowing he had come but sad that she is in this place because of her love.
The scene where both of them sat on both sides of the wall was so touching. So near but still so far. Can't reach out to each other nor call each other names. Kumud will gain strength with him around and Saras from her.
Itne paas hai phir bhi hai ek diwaar ki dooriyan
Ek haath iss taraf tho doosra uss taraf
Ek se aasu tapke tho doosre ka dil bar aaye
Dadkan hai ek inke phir bhi
Taqdeer ne aise zanjeer hai daale.
Ansooni Ankahi baatain hai dil mein
Ashkon ka sailab umad pada hai
Chahthe hai kuch thum kaho, kuch vo kahe
Lekin iss bebasi par chup hai dono
Taqdeer ne aise zanjeer hai daale.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Crying-wala Love is here to stay, looks like... And that too, on either side of a Deewar...
I think we shall just have to let them get on with it! I just like the really solid wall they chose to depict S&K separation... I'm sure that genda phool garland must also have been the most perfect example of its kind! SLB doesnt stint on quality even as far as cinematic devices go...😆

Loved the Silsila song-choice, Arshi, and the rest of your post, as impeccable as ever! Signs of awakening in the Desai household continued apace, and quite literally, in Dukhba's case!

In honour of Saras-Kumud crying their way to their (hopeful) reunion, I've unearthed some shaayari as well, Mirza Ghalib, no less!

Dil hi to hai na sang-o-khist
Dard se bhar na aaye kyun
Royenge hum hazaar baar
Koi hamein sataaye kyun
...

Edit- to highlight the author's name...😲
Edited by happychappy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG ... Kaadal ...


More Beautiful lines from you today ... they are soo Good ... Great job again . 👏

( and i had just edited my post to express my admiration for your yesterday's poem ) 😊

and if i remember correctly , Hindi is not even your language ... still such lovely verses ... it is really Commendable !!

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