SS~It's Complicated(story of Toni & Saras)p6 P54 - Page 3

Originally posted by: hunnybunch

Danny achche bachche nahin hei, he doesn't deserve this innocent pic😆

Originally posted by: -Amrita2010

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This is the first time I read such a story, unique idea, and I like it!

Beautifully penned as usual, and I shall follow this one until the end. 😈

And you finished at a cliff hanger , I know it's your common trick😆

Is it Saras coming to her? Were they friends or lovers before? I know i'm asking too many questions, but I am such a despo😆

Special mention to the VM, it is so beautiful, and I feel it tells the story by it self. I love the idea, you don't show Kumud's face here as she is not the girl featuring here👍🏼

Originally posted by: -bornalee-

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toni 😲 😲 ur 2nd vm i guess n its tooo good, gal i loved it perfect song n scene selection👏 👏 👏 👏

havenot read d story yet, but m sure its gonna superb..

n appy wonderful banner..u guys rockkk🥳

azzu di m coming to u after reading d actual story

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OMGEE DI...m speechless..aahhh its awesome,how can u think of such awesome ideas😳

toni n saras hayee,kisiki nazar na lage inko😉

toni ur very lucky gal..saras's lady love hmm😳😳

n saras wat have u done to toni??😳

i guess we need to find a jodi name for this new couple toni-saras😳SarNi kaisa rahega??😛😆

i have to say this, the whole idea,story,banner,vm n those gifs..a complete package,,👏👏

hats off to u guys..👏

Originally posted by: hunnybunch

Toni

See where i have put myself into 😆...this has to be forver

I hope this will inspire you to read more😆, and yes it's only Saras and Toni, let's see if he only calls you Toni😉

Originally posted by: hunnybunch

Thanks Bonu🤗

If you want I can pair up you with Danny🤣 and we can call DanBo😲🤣omg, can someone kill me, my thoughts are going nowhere😆

Jokes apart, SarNi is awesome hai ji😳 (thank you for suggesting)

Idea...My mind never rests😆

Originally posted by: veera25

exam prep se break le rahi hoon, just so I can comment on this lovely post! 🤗

First of all, hats off to Azu for such a lovely thread, with such lovely writing... Azu, aap bhi CV ban jao iss show ke... absolutely brilliant penmanship you have.. it's a real talent and an absolute treat to read! 😳 👏

Aur Toni, tumhara VM... iske baare mein main kyaa kahoon. I agree with Shana, tum sach mein guno ki khan ho... very talented, and your abilities shine with this brilliant VM! 😳 Lyrics se apt kitne the visuals.. I am super impressed! 🤗

Keep up the awesome work, gals! Can't wait to see how the rest of this story goes!

Originally posted by: Jjoshim

Good start! Looking forward to more!