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Arshics

@Arshics

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aatma pe Bojh

Laga chunari main daag chupaon kaise

Ghar jaaoon kaise

Jaa ke babul se nazarain milaaoon kaise

Ghar jaaon kaise

Ho gayee maili mori chunariya

Kore badan si kori chunariya

Jaake babul se nazarain milaaoon kiase

Ghar jaaoon kaise

When we wrong someone we love

And break their trust

It burdens our soul

And scars our soul

Only when we are forgiven

Will the burden be eased

And healing take place

LN has a bojh on his aatma

He could not marry Dugba

This bojh will be eased

If Saras marries Kumud

LN has a bojh on his aatma

He broke his friends trust

This bojh will be eased

If Saras keeps that trust

LN has a bojh on his aatma

He was not a good husband and a father

This bojh will be eased

If Saras is a good husband to Kumud

Saras has a bojh on his aatma

What was the most beautiful and precious moment of his life

Has broken his Kumud

He doesn't not know why

He does not know how

But he feels guilty

He will forgive himself

If Kumud forgives herself

Kumud has a bojh on her aatma

She feels impure and needs to cleanse herself

She feels she has sinned

She might forgive herself

If she gets divine forgiveness

Gods will shower their blessings on her

When she marries Saras

Kumud today may not see it

But she has wronged Saras

She gave herself to him in love

Of her own free will

Yet now she has shut him out

And has demeaned their love

He may have already forgiven her

But she will always carry this bojh on her aatma

Kumud has a bojh on her aatma

She feels she has broken her mothers trust

She needs her mother's forgiveness

Maa aisi hi hoti hai

She did not judge her daughter

Or berate her

Just saw her daughters anguish

And embraced her

She will now do what she must

Arrange a speedy marriage for Saras and Kumud

They were in love

Their marriage was to be a union of love

They are still in love

But they must marry

Because on this union

Are hinged many lives

A lot of relationships and hearts will break

If their rishta breaks !!!

A good episode - 8/10

Dekhna Zaroor, and please Kumud ko forgive Zaroor karna

Sab theek ho jayega!

Today my heart went out to you Saras dikra

Tumhain uski sazaa mil rahi hai, Jo gunah tha hi nahi

Alpana Buch - 8/10, great job today!

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Nira Mukherjee

@M_Nira

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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautifully described...👍🏼

Loved each & every line...!!

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 12 years ago

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shazia

@tv_princess

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Posted: 12 years ago

brilliant post..wannee see Saras smiling again...

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 12 years ago

Kumud today may not see it

But she has wronged Saras

She gave herself to him in love

Of her own free will

Yet now she has shut him out

And has demeaned their love

He may have already forgiven her

But she will always carry this bojh on her aatma

the aforesaid words of urs r my thoughts too...frankly i feel kumud is suddenly demeaning all that has been so pure and bondless love from saras ...she is actually demeaning the love they have for each other

Today my heart went out to you Saras dikra

Tumhain uski sazaa mil rahi hai, Jo gunah tha hi nahi

Kumud needs to belive in her love and saras

Edited by shana0127 - 12 years ago

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Sangeetha

@Samsangeetha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful poem. So bojh, bojh, bojh, everywhere is bojh. Hum sab ko mann mein toh bojh hain. When it will be cleared? G(CV)OK.

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hunnybunch

@hunnybunch

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful post!

Saras felt euphoric and wanted to shout to the world that he had found his paradise, but Kumud pushed him away so hard, out of guilt, declaring it was but a SIN! Awww, poor Saras! He is hurt badly, he is going to walk all alone... Until she comes to him... Hoping she would come soon

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happychappy

@happychappy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arshicritic

Kumud today may not see it

But she has wronged Saras

She gave herself to him in love

Of her own free will

Yet now she has shut him out

And has demeaned their love

He may have already forgiven her

But she will always carry this bojh on her aatma
...
Today my heart went out to you Saras dikra

Tumhain uski sazaa mil rahi hai, Jo gunah tha hi nahi

...

Arshi, thank you for being there always

To express what we Feel

But cannot Say

Nearly as well as You do...

I have been struggling with the sudden changes in Kumud, and how she was hurting the same person she was so eager to love. Hope there's a resolution soon that doesnt cause more heartbreak. (first-aid box, where are you hiding?)

You make it all part of a bigger theme, so we can carry on watching... I have been reduced to (metaphorically) watching from between my fingers when Saras is on screen because it's so difficult to watch him deal with the pain.

Edited by happychappy - 12 years ago

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kaadal

@kaadal

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

Arshi, lovely post dear. It is indeed an episode where hearts are burdened and healing needed in every way.

Dughbaa finally has confirmation that Kumari is upto something. Not sure questioning her was a good thing but as a straight forward mother she did it. When a daughter answers back and starts a blame game, a mother needs to understand that things are not right. I think Dughbaa understood it and wants to talk to VC.

LN finally found penance for his past and asked Dughbaa to forgive him as well. The father - son conversation was good. LN trusts Saras in everything and wants him not to repeat any of his mistakes. I felt sad seeing Saras. The pressure on him is more now, he needs to fulfill his duties to a father, he needs to fulfill his duties to his in-laws and stand by Kumud as well, but is hurt now that Kumud is not with him. He had asked her yesterday whether she would stand by him always and today he is alone. There was that sadness in his face when his dad said he would leave only after fixing the marriage dates. The same would have made him so happy yesterday but today things were different.

Guniyal-Kumud scene was wonderful. A mother knows everything is not right by seeing her daugher's face. She feels like the earth has moved under her feet hearing the truth but seeing her daughter like this how can she blame her. Guniyal indeed is a strong mother who understood when her daughter said she didn't know how it happened. She has again become the mother for Kumud rather than the wife for VC. Again mother and daughter are going to hide something from VC which they think no one knows but sadly as usual Guman knows, Will VC be able to forgive both of them this time ? I don't think so. Will Saras be able to do something to unite them this time ? Again I don't think so, this is not a letter they have hidden, it is much much more than that.

I am not getting positive vibes seeing the precap as well. @hotdogg and Samarth, hope both your predictions come true as currently I don't feel any happiness seeing today's episode.

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MistyDawn

@MistyDawn

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

One of those times, when I have nothing much to add to what you have written in your post.. !!! I don't know who is hurt more..but it hurts nevertheless.. immensely.. !! The most beautiful moment of his life is the reason of the deepest sorrow and despair for her.. none of them can erase the memories of the night from their heart and minds..but unfortunately they will remember it for all the wrong reasons.. This is not how I wanted them to go for marriage.. as a means to fix a mess..
I don't know if Kumud will be able to wipe off the shadows of the tormenting memories from her face like Guniyal said.. She is carrying a huge burden on her soul... and has made Saras carry it too... I don't know if forgiveness is a solution to this either.. We need divine intervention I guess.. too messed up for me to think straight...

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kaadal

@kaadal

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: vaishali-AR
One of those times, when I have nothing much to add to what you have written in your post.. !!! I don't know who is hurt more..but it hurts nevertheless.. immensely.. !! The most beautiful moment of his life is the reason of the deepest sorrow and despair for her.. none of them can erase the memories of the night from their heart and minds..but unfortunately they will remember it for all the wrong reasons.. This is not how I wanted them to go for marriage.. as a means to fix a mess..
I don't know if Kumud will be able to wipe off the shadows of the tormenting memories from her face like Guniyal said.. She is carrying a huge burden on her soul... and has made Saras carry it too... I don't know if forgiveness is a solution to this either.. We need divine intervention I guess.. too messed up for me to think straight...

@bold Agree with you completely Vaishali. I am not sure what they are going to do or actually how SLB is going to proceed with this. Both of them remembering this for wrong reason is not something which is resolvable with a marriage date. Their souls are not united at this stage...I don't know.

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