FF:Not just a fairy tale-Chap4 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice OS...😊
Thanks for the Pm...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the OS. I hope that he realises soon what the connection is between him and the girl. 😳Poor Claire she had a lot of work to do today on behalf of him. 😆

Thanks for the PM. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guyzz...it's not OS its FF...a fan fiction...
there's gonna b a lot many chapters
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey buddy !
Loved it totally !!👏
I always loved the supernatural kinda stories n ur FF has SaMud in it !
So, i'm very happy !
Please continue ! 👏
P. s: if you don't mind can you PM me when you update it ! pls?! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ressy again! 🤣
Dont kill me for this please! I'm gonna unres soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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realiy good start pls continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RECAP: Saraswatichandra walked into the elevator and went down in the lobby. Claire, his personal secretary waved at him. He sits in his lusty car. He drives himself to the native place.


Chapter 2

He drove deep into the woods, the sounds of the wild is clear and strong. He notices a well in a near distant and pulls down his ear plugs. Again, he gets those flashback, again he sees that cute little girl. His feelings and his memories began to get sturdy. He gets a mini flashback at every different spot.

He forgets to follow the sign boards but he knows that he's not lost. Somehow, his memory manages to bring him back to the place he had left long back. Saraswatichandra plans out everything before enacting. But this time, everything's perfect even without him making plans. He drowns into the ocean of memories. He drowns whenever he tries to forget the past. The destiny has its design made the only thing which matter now is-what is the design. He gets those positive vibes from the place. Somewhere deep in his heart, he knows he's not here just for him Mum but for someone else too. He eyes hunt for that girl even today but he won't ever say or share.

After a drive of 2 hours, he reaches his destination. He sees a small house with a veranda and 2 cows. He quickly walks in and finds a young teen boy.

"Hey there, where is the lady who owes this house?"

"She's there in her bedroom", the boy says as he points at one corner of the house. Saraswatichandra speedily enters the room.

"Maa?"
He is quite astonished to see no one in the bed. He rapidly turns around to catch hold that boy. But he finds an old lady leaning over her stick. She looked at him with her sparkling eye and Saraswatichandra recognizes her to be his mother.


"Maa'look! Mai wapas aa gaya hu."

"Kitni der kar di beta."

Saraswatichandra's eyes got stuck with his mother's. He moved slowly towards her, to feel her presence. His eyes fill up with water. Yes, he was indeed emotional at the moment. All he wanted was to run straight to his mother and hug her. Now, he wanted to take care of her.

"Ab kya door se he baat karega? Ya paas b ayega? Bhool gaya kya apni ma ko?", she said in a sweet loving voice.

"Abhi aya Maa'", he goes near her mother and hugs her tightly.

"Saalo se tumhe nai dekha beta, ab jab samne ho toh dekh kar yakeen nai hota ki mera chota sa nalayak beta ajj itna bada aadmi ban gaya hai."

"App he ki wajah se ajj mai is mukaam tak pahucha hu"

"Bas kar, bachpan mai bhi esse hi makkhan lagata tha," she smiled in delight.

"Maa...apki tabiyat toh kharaab thi'app khadi kyun hai fir. Aaram kariye."

"Hat pagle! Mai toh ekdum theek hu", she coughs as she says. "Bas thodi khasi hai aur kuch nai. Aur waise bhi essi beti payi hai maine jo mujhe kabi bimaar padhne he na de."

"Beti?"

"Wo sab baad mai batati hu, pehle tum ye batao ki ajj agar bimaar hone ka natak nai karti toh kyat um kabhi nahi ate wapas, apni maa ke paas?", her voice was shaking, seems like she was crying from inside.

"Maa'essa mat boliye. Mai hu na'apnke paas!"

"Haan, haan'saal badhte jaa rahe hai'ab toh bas so-char dino ki baat hai uske baad shayd mai rahu ya'."

Before she could complete, Saraswatichandra stops her.

"Shh Maa'kuch mat boliye. Aaram kariye. Ma'am change kar ke ata hu'" Saraswatichandra turns back and is about to leave.

"Beta'ruko. Golu!!!", she shouts.

"Haan badi Maa" The boy comes running into the room. "Golu, zara Saras ko kamara dikha do na. Aur Kumud ko kehna ki maine use yaha bulaya hai'mere kamre mai."

"Kumud?", Saraswatichandra whispers.

He feels as if he has heard the name before. He grows curious to meet the person but before that, Golu takes him to his room. He keeps on looking here n there.

"Ye raha apka room", Golu says.

"Okay'thank you!"

And the door closes.


PRECAP: Naa jane kyun mai tumhe janta hu. Kya tum wahi ho''..Haan, yahi hai Kumud''..Badi Maa mai Golu samjha deti hu ki vo Saras ka khayaal rakhe

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I'm starving for feedback. Please do comment. 😊 Love you all.

Edited by Cameryn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hope they will meet soon...!!!!
Nice chappy...
Thanks for the pm...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow !! Saras meets his maa after so many years !
N saras's mom is with kumud ! 😲
Loving the twists buddy !! 👏
Will saras see kumud?!
Waiting for the nxt chapter !
Keep writing !! 👏
Posted: 12 years ago
#20
the twist factor is keeping me hooked...😃

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