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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: saru143
awww..too gud. 👏👏wat a piece it was yar.👍🏼.fell in love with it..😳Thanks for the link...🤗.🤗.🤗

thanks a lot dear🤗

glad you loved it, me and my 'muddy' mind😆

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: -sweetgal19-
Beautifully written <3 Loved it Azuu !! 🤗

thanks sweetie <3🤗

glad you loved it😳

p.s. love the pic of DD in your pp...so cute

Edited by hunnybunch - 12 years ago

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

@akrk

thanks dear🤗

will try to write more!

@ridhi3rox

thanks a lot 🤗

@thesaurus

thanks dear🤗

@k2navi

thanks hun🤗 will try to write more!

@ mandygil

thanks a bunch🤗

Edited by hunnybunch - 12 years ago

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

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Loved it! it's awesome!👏👏

how I love the mud <3

do write more!

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-bornalee-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

aww..its awsum..saras ur gone sapno mein bhi kumud.our sanyashi bigad gaya hei😈😆
u write really well👏
loved all d parts..keep writing more 😳

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zerro

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

👏👏👏👏👏oh my GOD!!!!!!!! what have u done!!!!!!!!!!!! ok i will come to "an embrace to remember" later,let me speak about the earlier one first."falling in love" it was NOT small.u know so far,i understand,instead of following story like format,which has a beginning middle n end,u capture moments.moments as though they r pictures of a heart's album.they dont begin or end,they clasp in them a feeling which is both life n death.an end and a beginning.ur thoughts dont conclude to anything,they remain open 4 newer meanings👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.which is precisely what i love about u.ok now ur e xtract-it is lighter in vein😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳.very sweet in texture."an embrace"almost throbs in its feral heatbeat,but just like the feeling of love itself,u have kept the rhythm of this piece as soft as the murmuring heart.hats off to u 4 being sooo subtly creative👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.the incidences u wrote were gleeful and joyous.they had a feel good quality.i loooved ur ending line" Little did she know that what ever he did and said came deep from his heart. "
this happens to be ur greatest talent as not only a very good writer,but an equally perceptive person,u NEVER go overboard with emotion YET u NEVER lack the required intensity(esp. the character potrrayal of Saras)BRAVO!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.
SARAs actually likes to touch kumud😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉but his touch does NOT stem 4m physical tension or attraction,but 4m a deep sense of adoration which he feels 4 kumud.the gestures u portraited,this entire para

""Why don't you tie your hair?" questioned Saras as her trails bothered him so much. "It would be more beautiful if you tie it" he lifted his free hand and kept her trails aside. She felt that a shock wave ran through her body as his gentle fingers brushed against her already blushed cheeks. She closed her eyes with all her might trying to control her feelings. Every time he gets closer to her, she forgets her promise of not falling for him. Seeing her closed eyes Saras traced a finger from her forehead to the base of her neck. Knowing that he could not control his feelings either, he whispered into her ears"see how beautiful you look now".
is an excellent specimen where u have brought out XACTLY THAT.MARVELLOUS👏👏👏👏👏👏.NOW my request.plsss DONT burden urself.u write,ONLY when u have the mood and time.ur fans will always understand and be patient.but frankly those who keep on telling write soon soon soon there is no means to ever satisfy them.u plss take care.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊👏👏👏👏👏 last i have a lot to write about "embrace..."but i am half dead with sleep.will write tomorrow my feedback promise.😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: -Amrita2010
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Loved it! it's awesome!👏👏
how I love the mud <3
do write more!

Thanks dearie 🤗

Glad you loved it!

Will write more when I get time😊

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: -bornalee-
aww..its awsum..saras ur gone sapno mein bhi kumud.our sanyashi bigad gaya hei😈😆
u write really well👏
loved all d parts..keep writing more 😳

thanks dear🤗

aahaa! we could have it in our wishful thinking, right? sapno mein bhi aur real mein bhi Kumud

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

@Zerro

Thanks a ton honey <3

Your words means a lot to me, love reading your detailed comments <3

You know me so well, I guess. I don't feel like writing long stories but love writing short ones. I write these scenes after watching the serial, trying to capture their inner feelings, and happy that you appreciate it.

I was supposed to dedicate 'An embrace to remember' to you, forgot to edit, after posting...so now I'm doing it. I had your words in mind while writing it, I know I haven't judged it properly. But I tried to maintain the characters as they are shown.

I owe a lot more than just a thank you to you for encouraging me so much

P.S. Now tell me your name, dearie😳

waiting for your comments on 'an embrace to remember'😉

Edited by hunnybunch - 12 years ago