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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Ok guys, yaha se its all eye-speak until i mention otherwise😉...

Dakshu ki ankhen : Bahar ao...

Naina ke naina : Abhi nahi...

D : Pls...

N : Busy hu...samajh jao na...[ holds up her hands, all covered in flour ]

D : [ baby face ] not fair...

N : Aww...

She smiles, blows him a kiss.

Dakshu is mildly KP by now, and goes to put his things away.


Oh..my Ioved this part👏..simply awesome..😍aankhon ki gustakiyan😳.I can imagine the whole scene 😍 .hmmm aish kya concept hain.🤗.👍🏼.LOved it.👏.tho hogayi aaj meri gudnt😉


Superb scene lekin maar tho tujhe padenge.😡..surprise agar next part me nahi mila tho...and I am serious😆😆

thanku my darlin🤗...nd don wori. i'm typin up d surpris deal rite nw😛...subhe tak it'll b here...khatm karke hi i'l go 2 slp pakka😊...fir marne ki sochna😉...swt nit n cute drms 2 u🤗...
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Posted: 13 years ago

halo my darlins🤗...bahooot lamba he, don mind...but iss bar bhi surpris nahi dala to tum log meri dhulai kar doge😛, so here it is...

Dakshna's room...

Dakshu is in his Pjs, on the phn wit sum1. [ betwn her leg pulling nd ph call, bechara has 4gotn bout d compensatn😆 ]

Naina comes out of the washroom in this cute sa white lace gown [ i soo love her in white...remember psycho ka bday...angel lag rahi thi naina😍 ], smiles at dakshu...

and Dakshu ka jaw drops [ye to gaya😉 ]...the person on the other end prompts daksh. Daksh finalli says something in return, and finishes the call.

N : Kaisi lag rahi hu...? [ twirls around a little ]

D : Pari lag rahi ho tum.

She laughs, delighted. "Are wah, KP...nayi line..."

He puts the phone down and walks upto her, pulls her into his arms. "Nahi...sach me pari lag rahi ho."

She puts her arms around hs neck. "Sach me...?"

He holds her ekdam close. "Sach me." he leans in to press a kiss onto her cheek. "Compensation ye he meri...?"

She smiles, then suddenly remembers something... "Daksh...me apna ph offic me bhul gayi...leke aaoge, pleeease...?"

D : Naina...tum hamesha...

N : Pleease, daksh?

D : Ab itne rat gaye kaun call karega...[ pulls her back to him ]

N : Pls, daksh...agar momma ne call kiya to...ya phir--

D : [ mild KP again ] Acha theek he. Me le ata hu. USke bad mujhe koi interruptn nahi chahiye.

N : [ bright smile ] deal. Ab to le aao na...

Dakshu huffs and goes off...

He opens the office ka door, switches the light on...Par lights on nahi hui...

He frowns, tries the next switch...

And these blue fairy lights glow, on Naina's table. There s the flick of a lighter behind him; its Naina, nd she's lighting a candle.

N : [ softly ] Vahi khade rahoge ya baki jalane me meri madad karoge...

He takes the lighter from her and goes about lighting the rest of the candles placed on every possible surface, wondering what els she's upto...

She lights up the few in the vicinity of her table with her candle, den closes the door.

Dakshu turns to her when he's lighted up the last one; She's standing by the table, million-watt-smile.

Mesmerized by the play of candle light on his angel, he walks up slowly...and then the music starts...

Nop, not rock/ soul...its an old kishore-lata duet...

[ sun lo guys...i soo fell in luv with t😍 ...

]

Isharo isharo me dil lene wale...bata yeh hunar tune sikha kaha se...

Naina smiles, holds out her hand.

Daksh takes her hand, smiling quizzically.

nigaho nigaho me jadu chalana, meree jan sikha hain tumne jaha se

She eyes the gramaphone on the table, and Dakshu is like...speachless [kab se he, i kno, bas superlativ degree😉].

mere dil ko tum bha gaye, meree kya thee iss me khata...

Dakshu runs a hand over this stack of ghazals kept next to the gramaphn, wrapped in a big red ribbon...

mujhe jis ne tadapa diya, yahee thee woh jalim ada...

He smiles, takes her in his arms.

yeh ranja kee bate, yeh majanu ke kisse

alag toh nahee hain meree dasta se...

She smiles, pulls his cheeks.

mohabbat jo karte hain woh, mohabbat jatate nahee

dhadakane apanee dil kee kabhee, kisee ko sunate nahee...

He takes her hand, places it on his heart at that...

maja kya raha jab ke khud kar diya ho

mohabbat kaa ijahar apne juban se...

Now he leans in, whispers " I love you..." in her ear, trails these butterfly kisses down her face😍...

She starts returning the favor😳...

[ Naina's cell s beeping frm sumwer btw...]

the rest of the song plays on low...

And then Ayi calls for Naina from somewhere...

[i kno, i kno...spare the joote for a few more secnds pls😉 ]

Daksh is mega KP now, and straightens up.

Ayi calls out to Naina again.

N : Daksh...

D : [ frowns ] mere sath ye har bar kyu hota hai...

N : [ smiles, thoda sharmake😳 ] Tum vapis room me jao, me dekh ke ati hu. [ kisses him on the cheek and starts off]

Daksh yanks her back. "Zyada wait mat karvana mujhe." [ totali husky tone😍 ]

She kisses his other cheek as well. "Nahi. Jaldi aungi. Promis..."

Dakshu is pacing in their room, eyeing the clock on the wall.

3 minutes, 5 minutes...he sits on the bed, fuming.

7 minutes...And Naina steps in, closes the door and comes up, sits on the bedside with him.

N : Lo. Aa gayi me vapis.

D : Kya hua tha.

N : [ happily ] Momma ka ph tha. Meri mobil pe call nahi lagi, is liye...

DAkshu is annoyed cos idhar bechara he is all workd up, nd she s all chirpy nd happy.

Naina notices this.

N : Kp...sorry...kaan pakad ke sorry [ does it, too😛 ] ye plan ka part nahi tha...sach me nahi tha.

D : Iska compensation kab dogi.

N : [ considers ] Abhi du...?

He pushes her onto the bed. "Hmm. Abhi ke abhi."

She smiles, pulls him down with her.

Ayi calls again..

A : naina...beta tumhari ph yaha bahar he...

D : [ in hushed tones ] Chup. Bilkul chup.

N : [ whispers back ] Lekin ayi...

Daksh reaches out his hand, snaps the lamp ka switch. Ouch, lights off peopl😆😆...

N : Daksh...

D : Hmm.

N : Ayi...

D : Samaj jayegi.

N : Lekin--

umm, he manages to shut her up then, poocho mat kaise😆😆😆 [mysti if u insist PM kar dungi😉 ]...

ok. ab bhi joote he to...i'll duck dem😆😆😆

😊hoping d wait ws worth t😊...

smil😊s,
aish
ps : pata nahi rafi he ya kishor, lata he ya asha😆...jo bhi he, i'm stil atkofied on t yar...kya gana he😍...hop i pikd d rite song 😊
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Aish

Cute surprise yaar😛.👏.lekin ye phone bhi kabab mein haddi😡..dakshu ko msg kardungi iss baar phne off karne ke liye😆..ayi tho samaj hi jayegi..mysthi ke FF mein dakshna ko aisa dekhne ke baad 🤣tho bilkul samjegi😉

AUR gaana , thanks for download link...Down load karkr sunke PM karungi..

And to all my buddies and forum members

HAPPY DUSSERA..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wish all my Buddies and SSBN forum vasiyo Happy Dashera 😃

Aish sweety thanks dear for making my Dashera morning so good one😛... This FF of urs has bought a million ton smile on my face 😃😃 I am still smiling while replying 😃...

First of all Dakshna ka naino ke baat karneka tarika dil ko chu gaya yaar... I could imagine the whole scene... and thanks dear Puron poli to intro karne ke liye... mera fav hai (I know I know tera bhi hai)😳

Bechare Dakshu ko itna tang karke Naina ka surprise super duper hit hai yaar...
Naina ko white bahut hi suit karta hai i agree she looks like an Angle (Dakshu ki)😉

Gazals ka gift bhi intro ke liye thanks yaar... Dakshna ke fav hai na😉 ...
Kya kahu main one of my fav. old hindi songs (Shammi kappor ka hai na love all his songs) Perfect song choose kiya hai tune... and those romantic moments hai hai marjava... bas ye phone gadbad kardeta hai sab main... Lucky is right sab main phone hi kabab main haddi hai... and aai to samaj hi gayi hogi🤣

Loved it till infinity👏 U deserve a big big jadu ki jappi dear 🤗 Thank u Thank u Thank u🤗🤗🤗
Edited by DakshnaFan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

@Aish


Cute surprise yaar😛.👏.lekin ye phone bhi kabab mein haddi😡..dakshu ko msg kardungi iss baar phne off karne ke liye😆..ayi tho samaj hi jayegi..mysthi ke FF mein dakshna ko aisa dekhne ke baad 🤣tho bilkul samjegi😉

AUR gaana , thanks for download link...Down load karkr sunke PM karungi..

And to all my buddies and forum members

HAPPY DUSSERA..😛

thanku darlin🤗...nd kebab me haddi d ph s d reason 4 so many cute interruptns don u thinkTongue
nd HAPPY DUSSEHRA 2 U 2...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

Wish all my Buddies and SSBN forum vasiyo Happy Dashera 😃


Aish sweety thanks dear for making my Dashera morning so good one😛... This FF of urs has bought a million ton smile on my face 😃😃 I am still smiling while replying 😃...

First of all Dakshna ka naino ke baat karneka tarika dil ko chu gaya yaar... I could imagine the whole scene... and thanks dear Puron poli to intro karne ke liye... mera fav hai (I know I know tera bhi hai)😳

Bechare Dakshu ko itna tang karke Naina ka surprise super duper hit hai yaar...
Naina ko white bahut hi suit karta hai i agree she looks like an Angle (Dakshu ki)😉

Gazals ka gift bhi intro ke liye thanks yaar... Dakshna ke fav hai na😉 ...
Kya kahu main one of my fav. old hindi songs (Shammi kappor ka hai na love all his songs) Perfect song choose kiya hai tune... and those romantic moments hai hai marjava... bas ye phone gadbad kardeta hai sab main... Lucky is right sab main phone hi kabab main haddi hai... and aai to samaj hi gayi hogi🤣

Loved it till infinity👏 U deserve a big big jadu ki jappi dear 🤗 Thank u Thank u Thank u🤗🤗🤗

thnku thnku thnku🤗🤗🤗...for all ur ideas, includin d ghazal wala...but man, i am totali fida ovr d song😍...acha laga janke ki tera bhi fav hai😊😊😊
😊HAPPY DUSSEHRA dr...
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Speaking through eyes...wow!! thats so romantic😍and cute also😉 we have seen that for real in SSBN...so heart warming 😃 and Naina should remember to keep her phone away at night otherwise poor dakshu...i love ur line where he says," y is this always happening to me😭?" awww...so cute...

Lovely FF aish👏! waiting for more!!!!!!!!!!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dakshna Honeymoon continution..After love court.❤️...

Next day morning
❤️
9.00 am

Still dakshna on bed.asleep in each others arms..😍.Naina is first one to get up...she slowly releases herself from daksh who is deep in sleep; looks at clock..and realises its already too late..she picks her dress from floor ,pehne ne ke baad😉

She starts waking up daksh..
Naina; daksh utona...dekho bahut late hogaya..uto
Daksh; halfsleep🥱; kya naina..sonedona.,raat bhar sone nahi diya tumne😆...😆...pls bahut neend aa raha hain🥱...turns sidewards

Naina; imitates him; bhuat neend aa raha hain.aur maine sona nahi diya?..aisa nahi chalega..utona..comes near his ear... gives him a good morning kiss😳

Daksh ki chehre par smile aajata hain😛..still with closed eyes..turns towards naina; opens his eyes,looks at her face and says; sirf ek??😆

Naina smiles gives him one more😍..gets up from bed and says; tumhe sona he tho sojavo..she goes and starts taking her clothes out of cupboard.daksh still on bed lookin at his loving better half with.❤️.naughty looks( sirf do?)😉

Naina turns back and says; baad mein ye mat kehna ki maine dhoka diya uar akele nahaliya..😛

Listening this daksh ek dum se bed pe se utt jaata hain;aise kahona..dekho main utt gaya.😆..he gets down wrapped in blanket goes near naina and whispers in ear; tho chale..😳

Naina pushes him away; mein tho tumhe utane ke liye aisa kaha..and and runs into the wash room and closes door.Daksh gets into his pants comes and knocks wash room door..

.
Daksh;Ilil angry) dekho naina..ye galat hain..phir se dhoka? darwaja kholdo warna..😡
Naina( from inside); warna kya?😆
Daksh; darwaja thod dunga😆.keeps on knocking..kholona naina..but no response..
daksh thoda kp banjaata hain aur mooh pulakar bet jaata hain,

Daksh; tum bahar tho avoge..tab dekhna..main tuhmhe bilkul nahi chodunga..saying this he goes way from there..😡

From inside naina is curious ki daksh kya kar raha hain.😲.slowly she opens the door and peeps into room.She doesnt find daksh.she comes out of the wash room, looks here and there

Naina; kaha chala gaya? gusse se bahar chalagaya hoga..Kp kp hi rahega😛..saying this he goes inside wash room closes door turns back...lol..its daksu inside😆(😆 when naina came outside daksh ander cahala gaya)😳

Naina( ek dum shocked)😲; daksh tum yaha..kaise?..Tum pehle javo yaha se..

Daksh comes closer to naina.😍.; mujhse bhagna chahti ho?tumhe kya laga..tum mujhe rokh dogo haan...

Naina; kya bachpana hain daksh..pls javona.
Daksh ; nahi..

Daksh ;..pulls her closer; kya naina? itna bhi mat tadapavo apni pati ko..😛.

Naina; pushes him; acha..tho tum nahi javoge? daksh nods his head saying no.Naina comes forward towards daksh..daksh is exactly under the shower..

.naina smiles and says; tho nahavo😉 and turns on shower..phir kya..ek dum se shower start hogays aur dakshu ke sar par paani hi paani..😆naina plans to run way from there..lekin hamara smart dakshu some how gets hold of naina's hand and pulls her under shower...😳Dakshna completely wet; 😳

Naina;looking at het wet clothes; daksh dekho kya kardiya tume

Daksh;( naughty look)😉he walks towards naina..naina takes steps backward. utill she finds herself backed up against wall.phir se eye lock.and daksh says;abhi tak tho kuch nahi kiya.😉😆
Naina understands his intentions aur sharmajaati hain☺️.😳.daksh comes closer to naina..more closer..more closer...😍

PS; Cut cut...hogaya scene khatam..😉..😆

Contd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG Lucky itna naughty naughty Dakshu 😳 wow loved it 😉 superb Lucky superb 👏 Aur itne jaldi kyu khatam Kiya scene ko... Abhi next part tak intezaar karna padega aage ke liye 😍
Now a days tu hai na Bahut sahi time Pe scene ko freeze kar diti hai yaar 😆 loved this pyaara dakshu 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
lucky...kya yar...scn cut...baki kaha gaya😕...smart dakshu vaise😳😆😆😆...nd "abhi tak to kuch nahi kiya"🤣...luvd t yaar...maza aya😆😆😆😆😆
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago

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