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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

Ditto Ditto... Bechara Dakshu pyaar main poora pagal jo hai Naina ke 😆😆
Ha yaar agar friend Ladka hota to kya haal hota Daksh ka 😍
Loved the way u express dear😉 ... simply outstanding 👏🤗

@ sou
thanks dear for such a beautiful idea...

thnku darlin🤗...*low bow again* 😆😆 vaise credit goes 2 sou 4 d idea😊

nd neetu di...ek thnku apke liye bhi...plus ek🤗

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#482

helo mere pyaaro🤗...i'm bak wit andr one😆😆...

note : its only one half done...
but stil, i'd say hav fun😊😊😊
Morning, Dakshna's room...

Subha ki kirane filtering through the half open drapes, and Dakshu's awake, staring at his beautiful wife who's slpin contentedly in his arms. As ususal, he has this khoya-khoya expression and a half smile n his lips...Unable to resist the innocent smile of a drmin Naina, he strokes a finger down her cheek gently...

She stirs, opens her eyes and smiles into his. Dakshu's half smile blooms into a full fledged one, and he drops a kiss on her forehead.

D : Good morning...

"Hmm..." She plants a kiss on his jawline, cuddles up. "morning acchi hai..."

He smiles, holds her closer.

D : Tum kaho to thoda aur acha bana de...

She pulls back a little, eyes dancing. "Acha...?"

He nods. "Tumhare uthne ka hi intezar tha..." he leans in for a kiss...

and Naina's ph starts beeping

N : [ shocked ] meri alarm...[ grabs the ph from the nightstand ]snooze par?

D : [ holds up his hands in surrender ] Tum kal rat der se soi thi, isliye...

She punches his arm. "Me der se soi thi, to wo tumhari galti he KP..." [guys pls poochna mat kyu...me nahi bataungi 😆😆😆]

D : [ laughs ] Ha, jo bhi hua usme bas mera hi haath tha. tumne to kuch nahi kiya...

She hits him with a pillow. "KP kahi ka," gets off the bed in a hurry.

D : Naina...Itni kya jaldi he...me to aj late nahi hu.

N : [ bunches up her hair ] Tum nahi, me.

D : Naina...

N : Acha baba, sorry...[ climbs back on the bed, takes his face in her hands ] Sorry, sorry, sorry...[mind you, each sorry is punctuated with a kiss on each cheek, and then his nose😊 ]...lekin me late ho jaungi. tumhe sona he to thodi der aur so jao, me tumhe baad me utha dungi...[ with that she goes off for her shower ]

D : [ muttering ] subha ke sare plans flop. aur ye mujhe KP kehti he... [bechara😆]

he gets off the bed too...

Dakshna r gettin ready; KP is hunting for his watch and Naina is at the dresser, combing her hair.

D : Pata he naina, Kisi ne to ek bar kaha tha, "Me subhe uth kar sabse pehle apne pati ka chehra dekhna chahti hu, rat ko sone se pehle akhri chehra bhi me apne pati ka dekhna chahti hu..."

Naina laughs, remembering what she told Mrs. Achrekar wen she took daksh with her to the restrnt...

D : [ continues ] Aur ye bhi kaha, ki "meri duniya mere pati se shuru hoti he, aur unse hi khatm..."...Kya dialogs the.

N : Dialogs...[ giggles ] Sach hi to hai.

D : Acha? EK me hu, jo subhe uth kar tumhari palke khulne ke intezar me baitha rehta hu, aur tum ho ki...tumhare pas mere liye time kaha rehta he.

N : [ absently ] KP, tumhare liye hi to-- [ stops when she realizes she's about to giv away the secret ]

D : [ interested ] Mere liye kya?

He sits on the bed and pulls the socks on.

N : [ pretends ki kuch nahi hua ] Kuch nahi...me to ye keh rahi thi, ki tumhare liye hi to meri har subha aur sham he...

Daksh nods, smilin. "Ha. Wo me janta hu. Waise aj mere liye kya hai? surprise he kya?"

Naina s annoyed at being caught. "Kp, me kya din bhar tumhare liye surprises hi arrang karti rahungi...mera kam kaun karega."

Daksh walks upto her, puts his around her. "Tum surprises nahi dogi, to bhi chalega. Roz subhe uth kar wo smile jo deti ho...Poora din ban jata he."

She relents at that, leans back into him. "Waise tumhe wo sari bate yad he?"

He laughs. "chahkar bhi nahi bhool sakta. divorc lawyer se criminal lawyer. luv marg lekin arrangd marrg. kya haal kar diya tha tumne mera...ek hi din me mujhe KP se ideal pati bana diya..."

she laughs too.

D : [ softly ] Tumhari har shararat, har mazak, har ek bat mujhe yad he. 16-A se lekar.

[umm, ok, giv dem a moment 2 reminisc😉]

N : Daksh...

D : Hmm.

N : I love you...

D : [ gentle squeeze ] I love you too. Ab chale...? tum "late" ho jaogi...

He helps her up, and they go downstairs...

... 😆 baki under construction 😆 ...

loads f smil😊s,

aish

click 4 part 2...😊

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#483

@ aish

Sweet and cute scene buddy.😉.Loved it😊

Tum surprises nahi dogi, to bhi chalega. Roz subhe uth kar wo smile jo deti ho...Poora din ban jata he."😍

👏👏..Loved this dialogue...

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: lucky.m
@ aish

Sweet and cute scene buddy.😉.Loved it😊

Tum surprises nahi dogi, to bhi chalega. Roz subhe uth kar wo smile jo deti ho...Poora din ban jata he."😍

👏👏..Loved this dialogue...

thnx sweetu🤗...vaise part 2 me Naina ka chota sa surpris he😉...

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#485

Sooo cute scene hai yaar sweetu 😉 Dil khush kar diya 😛 Loved dakshu in the whole scene 😳 Loved it yaar 👏 🤗

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan
Sooo cute scene hai yaar sweetu 😉 Dil khush kar diya 😛 Loved dakshu in the whole scene 😳 Loved it yaar 👏 🤗

thnku thnku thnku🤗 nd dakshu to he hi sweet😊😊😊

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LadyMystique

@LadyMystique

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#487

So Im continuing my FF'.

Everyone at PH is in a very joyful mood bcz of Naina's birthday😃. Everyone is laughing and joking around.. All take part in morning pooja and all the elders bless Naina. Even kaka comes near her and says "jeeti raho beta"😆, and gives her a very small but cute, pretty birthday card. He makes sure no one sees this and then carries on with his usual rude comments on everyone( specially on rohini😉).. Naina is very happy. Seeing her smiling broadly, daksh keeps admiring his beautiful wife and cant stop staring at her😳. After breakfast all gather in the garden as if for a picnic and its present time!!!!!!😊😊🥳

Aku, aayi and kaki have already given theirs to Naina. Aku has given her a framed photograph of both of them together😊'Sanketh gifts her a beautiful, silver watch and Naina gets a pretty and a very elegant dress from rohini( remember what she wore for the dinner with her boss?...but this dress is much more sexier and wayyy more elegant'just like Naina) Vedant had just returned from college a few days ago so he doesn't have time to buy a present. Hence he makes a cute bouquet of pink paper flowers and gives her with Happy Birthday note attached to it.. (remember he learnt it from Naina when he helped her out in her office) Since baba is a professor he gives Naina a wonderful classic novel (u decide what it is guys)😊

Naina admires each and every gift and thank them all for their love. But her face becomes a bit gloomy bcz she didn't get any present from daksh besides the loving wishes and the kisses in the morning😔. She looks at him curiously and sees him keep staring at her with a cute naughty smile..😆😍 she blushes and thinks to herself that the best gift out of all she's got is daksh .she goes near him and hugs him tightly.😳

Daksh: Madam, tumhe pata hai tum muskurati ho to kitni pyari lagti ho❤️...Aj to kuch aur hi he'😉 saying this he strokes her cheeks gently..😍

Naina:oh really? Tum aise hi bol rahe ho ya phir...?

Daksh: Me tumse jhoot kyu bolu? KP kabhi jhoot nahi bolta...😉

Naina :Ha, ha me janti hu...KP ko to jhoot bolna ata hi nahi he..'.and rolls her eyes..

Everybody at PH goes inside'.dakshna remain in the garden. Naina puts her arms around daksh's neck and leans in closer..and with a cute but sad baby face says,

Naina: accha to Mr. KP , Mujhe itne sare presents mile aaj😔'.par pata nahi aisa kyu lag raha he ki kuch kami he...

Daksh: Kya kami he...? ( he is trying not to laugh)

Naina: (pouts) tumhare present ki.

Daksh: oh mene to kuch kharida nahi he...( Naina looks dumbstruck but tries not to not to show it. meanwhile daksh is having fun teasing her) actually Naina im sorry. Mujhe na, aj subhe uthne ke baad yaad aya tha...'.Ab subhe subhe me kaha se gift le aau...? Sorry meri jaan'...Kaan pakad ke sorry... and holds his ears as if to apologize.🤣

Naina is a bit hurt inside but hides her emotions and says in a bit of a sarcastic voice but she manages to sound less sarcastic : Acha baba..Theek he.'Zindagi bhar ke liye KP jo mila he mujhe...'Isse acchi gift to mujhe mil hi nahi sakti...😃

Saying this she turns to go inside with a furious look on her face and mumbles to herself: KP kahi ka😭...Apni biwi ka birthday bhul gaye mere patidev😡... Aur wo sari kisses aur shower aur...! Sab bas cover up karne ke liye! Me to kabhi uska nahi bhulti...Urgh! KP!!😡"

Daksh senses that Naina is mad and smiles to himself and runs after her. Finally when he catches up with her inside the house daksh says😃 : Naina...me to tumhe movies par le jane wala tha sham ko'.DDLJ dekhne...! Pls pls pls gussa mat hona mujse...pls...?'.and gives his trademark cute smile along with a baby face. At the sound of DDLJ Naina's face lits up but doesn't show it to daksh..😆

Naina: Theek he. Jayenge. and she storms off to their room..

Daksh( to himself): itna gussa! Lagta he mrs. KP ko cool down hone me thoda time lagega'...and he also follows Naina upstairs..😉

IN THE EVENING.

Dakshna's room'.

Naina: Daksh pls jaldi karona.. Mujhe kuch miss nahi karna he.'tum jante ho ye meri favourite movie he!

Daksh:Kitni bar dekhi he Naina...? (Corrects his sleeves and wears his watch)'.ek-do minut choot gaye to kaun si badi baat he?.

Just then Naina turns towards him with anger😡. She has become Mrs. KP again! And she is worse than Mr. KP guys.😉😆

Naina: Mera birthday he.😡 Aur koi ise kharab nahi karega. ab chalo. Jaldi!...and she leaves the room..daksh smiles to himself and he knows that Naina's hurt.( don't worry guys.. he has a plan)

Naina is waiting for him downstairs with the KP mode on and daksh comes running and says: aayi ham nikal rahe he, humara intezar mat karna '..khana bhi ham bahar se kha ke ayenge'he holds Naina's hand,takes car keys and goes out . before he walks out he looks at aku and vedant and winks at them. aku winks back and vedant gives a thumbs up..😆😆😉

AFTER THE MOVIE,

Naina and daksh both come home laughing heartily. daksh is relieved that Naina's mood has improved.😛

Naina:Mujhe SRK aur Kajol itneee ache lagte he.Maza ata he jab wo use tang karta he to...Pata he daksh, hamare life me jaise unke roles reversd huy he'Me tumhe kitna tang karti thi na...😆

Daksh: hmmm.Theek keh rahi ho tum Naina'.tum pehle itni irritating hua karti thi...vaise ab bhi meri tang kheechne ka ek bhi mauka nahi gavati ho tum.

Naina: Jo bhi he...Me thak gayi hu, aur muje bahot neend aa rahi he🥱...Chalo ab sote he...and grabs daksh's arm and pulls him along with her😉

Naina gets to the door of their room first and opens it...and she is absolutely stunned!!😲The room is decorated with white and red roses and candles are lit everywhr😍 .the bed is white and there are rose petals on it and all over the floor. it looks mesmerizing just like their honeymoon(right lucky😉?)and the fragrance of the roses is just mind-blowing. Naina is speechless.😲

Naina: daksh ye sab...ye sab kya hai..?and she turns and sees him leaning against the door with the most romantic look on his face, eyes filled with love and that trademark cute KP smile.😍

Daksh in a very low but very romantic voice says: Surprise! and comes towards her ..Naina doesn't move. he slowly puts his hands around her waist and pulls her closer❤️ .and leans in his head on hers and stares at her eyes.😳

Daksh:tumhe kya laga? Me apni naina ka birthday bhool jaunga?😆😉 Kabhi nahi...'.saying this he gives a soft kiss on her lips'.❤️

Naina: daksh im sorry😔...me to isliye naraz thi kyunki muje laga tum sach me bhool gaye...Aur ye sab karne ki kya zarurat thi...maine ye sab expect bhi nahi kiya tha...

Daksh:chup! And he keeps his finger on her lips'😍..muje bura laga jab tum mrs. KP ban gayi.uski punishment to tumhe milegi😉, par wo sab bad me..(Naina still looks sad) abhi to meri surprise khatm hi nahi hui he😃...'.( Naina looks up confused 😕'what can be more surprising and romantic than this?).Naina, ankhen band karo...😊

Naina: daksh kya-😕

Daksh( now a bit stern):Naina..ankhen band karo'.nahi to me KP ban jaunga theeke!😳

Naina: acha theek he'and she closes her eyes'

Daksh holds Naina's hand and takes her slowly near the mirror in the dressing table'. Then she feels something around her neck and daksh's fingers on the back of her neck'.

Daksh: ab ankhen kholo...

Naina opens her eyes and looks at herself and her daksh in the mirror. then she sees a beautiful necklace around her neck. the chain is made of white gold and there is a heart shaped pendant made of a big , real, sparkling white diamond stone ❤️😍(remember the titanic necklace guys? Something like that)its glowing by the light from the candles and looks beautiful on her😳. Naina touches it gently and looks at Daksh in the mirror with warm eyes ☺️.

Daksh puts his arms around her waist and kisses her neck slowly☺️ ( both are still facing the mirror) and says'..kaisi lagi gift?...

Naina slowly turns and takes daksh's face in her hands and says..daksh...its...its too beautiful😊...thank you sooo much'she has tears in her eyes .she kisses him on both cheeks😳 and looks at the pendant again.

Naina: daksh'ye kitna expensiv hoga...kya zarurat thi iski...

Daksh..still with arms around her waist pulls her closer and says: ha, expensive to ye he, par muje lagta tumhe ise gaur se dekhna chahiye.😉

Naina twists and turns the pendant and tries to figure out what daksh is trying to say😕. meanwhile daksh is looking down at her smiling.😛

Naina: daksh...ye pendant bahot sundar he...tum kya keh rahe ho...😕? She looks at him and he is still smiling😍. Naina gets confused😕 and checks again. she again tries.. just then she discovers a small group of words faintly visible in shining silver colour beneath the diamond stone. she reads them in her mind. it says "I love u Naina" she mouths the words. she looks up at him delighted!😃😃😍

Daksh: Naina tum janti ho kis sari duniya me mere liye sabse keemti ek hi cheez he, aur wo meri Naina he😍..i love u Naina' i love u so much❤️❤️...tumhari khushi ke liye me kuch bhi kar sakta hu..😳(takes her face in his hands and brings it closer to his☺️)mere paas kuch nahi bhi hota, to bhi me tumhare liye wo sab lata..tumhari iss pyaari si muskan ke liye kuch bhi😍...tum meri zindagi ho...and saying this he kisses her forhead , cheeks and finally lips.❤️

Naina feels like crying bcz she is so happy and she has gone bright red in the face😆...she throws her arms around him and hugs him tightly🤗. daksh hugs her back with lot of love.❤️

Naina: I love u daksh'I love u❤️ 'me jaanti hu ki tum mujse kitna pyaar karte ho...aur ye mera vada he ki me tumse hamesha, humesha pyaar karungi😍...me chahti hu ki tum khush raho hamesha, aur ye cute si smile hamesha tumhare chehre pe rahe😳😃( she gently touches his face)

Daksh: Me janta hu Naina ki tum mera sath dogi🤗...hamesha...and he gives a small headbutt😉 (sryy aish😆)and suddenly his naughty smile replaces the cute smile😛😉 and says.. lekin mrs. KP banne ki saza to tumhe milni hi he😃...and eyes towards the bed😉.

Naina smiles broadly and puts her arms around his neck and says: Me tumhari hu😳...Aur muje tum jo saza do, manzur he...Daksh...meri ye birthday ab tak ki sabse special birthday banane ke liye thank you...🤗

Daksh pulls her closer and Naina closes her eyes.❤️

Scene fades...and what happens next? don't ask me ok?😆 please? U can imagine whatever u want😉.. that's all for now. I know its bloody long...but I didn't wanna cut it and chop it in to small small parts (right sweetaish??😆😉 Hehe). Hope u enjoyed this and hope its satisfying..

Edited by LadyMystique - 13 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#488

mysti...i'm tho totali blown over darlin...kash aisa hubby milta😍...

absolutly fab dearie👏👏👏...keep rocking...

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#489

Hey guys🤗...part 2 of aj subhe ka FF...[naina ne dakshu ke plans flop kiye na wo wala😉]...was havin way 2 much fun with t, isliye ek aur instalment ayega iska, pls don mind😆😆😆...

Evening, Daksh's office...

Dakshu is doing his work, but is thinking bout her.

He opens the laptop for something, still thinkin bout her...and lo...desktop pe bhi wahi he.

He smiles, gets his cell out and calls her. It rings, rings...

She picks up after the nth ring.

D : [ mildly KP ] busy ho kya...?

N : Nahi [ laughs ]...tumhare liye to bilkul nahi. Bolo kya he...

D : [ bechara KP; laugh me diffuse ho gaya😛 ] Kuch nahi...wo...tumhari bahot yad aa rahi thi.

N : [ surprised ] Daksh? Kya hua?

D : [ sulky ] Ab hona kya he. Subha ke sare plans to tumne flop kar diye the.

N : [ half to herself ] subha ke plans...[ and then it dawns on her ] excuse me.

D : Nahi. Excus nahi karunga.

N : [ smiles ] tumse nahi kaha tha. Ab kaho...subha ke kaun se plans...

D : Naina...

N : Acha baba samajh gayi. Sham ko compensate kar dungi.

D : [ vakil s getn ideas now 😉] sham ko...? sham ko kya...

N : Tum kaha ho daksh?

D : [ looks around ] Office me?

N : Acha offic me aur kaun kaun he?

D : Simr-- [ he stops, goes all cute pink😳😆]

Simran looks up from her work.

S : Ha sir?

D : Uh, kuch nahi...

He gets up and walks out of the office hoping Simran didnt hear anything.[ fat chanc, KP😆😆 ]

Naina starts laughing, imagining a cute pink KP. "Daksh tum kabhi itneee cute lagte ho, jee karta he ek badaa sa hug du...🤗"

D : sirf ek😔...

N : Ek se kam chala lo. Ek kiss bhi de deti hu...

D : Ek se kabhi kam nahi chalta.

N : Phn pe ek hi milega...Mene kaha na sham ko compensate kar dungi...

Dakshu smiles [ cutie KP😊 ]. "Nahi kiya to--"

N : [ with a smile in her voice ] Nahi kiya to case kar dena...Ab me rakhu pls...clients wait kar rahe he...

D : [ mildly shocked ] Naina, tum kaha khadi ho ?!

She laughs again. "Office ke bahar..."

D : [ releivd ] Acha...theek he.

N : Daksh...?

D : Ha...

N : Sham ko😉. bye.

She cuts the call,and KP s smiling to himself...sham ko😍...

ps : pata he. mene kaha tha 2 parts. par kya karu...lik i said, was havin way 2 much fun with t 😆...no worries, nxt part cumin up😉

click 4 part 3...😊

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#490

@mysti

How cute and romantic😍.😳.and what alovely present!!!😍.Movie..room decoration aur the best part.chain..❤️oh I am love in it😆...Kitna acha surprise hain dakhsu ka..😛.Loved the whole scene and dialogues...👏 yaar

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