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Posted: 13 years ago
@ aish

Hmmm, tho shaym ko compensation from naina to dakshu.😉..😆I am already dreaming...😍.kya hoga shyam ko??😉..😉😆😆

Dakshu is sooo cute in all our FF's..I love him..😳...aur aish..cute cute sa scene...👏..baaki comments shyam ke programme ke liye bacha liya..😉😆 kahi kam na pad jaye😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

@ aish


Hmmm, tho shaym ko compensation from naina to dakshu.😉..😆I am already dreaming...😍.kya hoga shyam ko??😉..😉😆😆

Dakshu is sooo cute in all our FF's..I love him..😳...aur aish..cute cute sa scene...👏..baaki comments shyam ke programme ke liye bacha liya..😉😆 kahi kam na pad jaye😛

😆😆😆tu aur cmmnts kam...its lik sayin KP ko jhoot bolna ata he🤣
thnku darlin🤗 pata tha tujhe acha lagega😊...nd KP s such a cutie...i luv him 2🤗 lucky nainaDay Dreaming
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Mysti
Very nice surprise from Dakshu yaar... Loved the whole birthday concept movie, room decoration and the present necklace with I love U too good yaar... And thanks for using head butt yaar ye apna Dakshna ka trademark hai koi bhi FF main accha lagta hai... 😉 Liked the way u included all the characters in ur FF...
Apne FF main Daksh is so sweet and cute... Loved it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aish yaar while reading ur FF I could imagine dakshu ka Har ek expression 😆 😆 bechara dakshu shayam tak to behal ho raha hoga 😆 way to sweet hai apna Daksh 😛 U are enjoying while writing the FF is making me more anxious what is coming next 😉 😍
Loved it dear 👏 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish

helo mere pyaaro🤗...i'm bak wit andr one😆😆...
note : its only one half done...
but stil, i'd say hav fun😊😊😊

Morning, Dakshna's room...

Subha ki kirane filtering through the half open drapes, and Dakshu's awake, staring at his beautiful wife who's slpin contentedly in his arms. As ususal, he has this khoya-khoya expression and a half smile n his lips...Unable to resist the innocent smile of a drmin Naina, he strokes a finger down her cheek gently...

She stirs, opens her eyes and smiles into his. Dakshu's half smile blooms into a full fledged one, and he drops a kiss on her forehead.

D : Good morning...

"Hmm..." She plants a kiss on his jawline, cuddles up. "morning acchi hai..."

He smiles, holds her closer.

D : Tum kaho to thoda aur acha bana de...

She pulls back a little, eyes dancing. "Acha...?"

He nods. "Tumhare uthne ka hi intezar tha..." he leans in for a kiss...

and Naina's ph starts beeping

N : [ shocked ] meri alarm...[ grabs the ph from the nightstand ]snooze par?

D : [ holds up his hands in surrender ] Tum kal rat der se soi thi, isliye...

She punches his arm. "Me der se soi thi, to wo tumhari galti he KP..." [guys pls poochna mat kyu...me nahi bataungi 😆😆😆]

D : [ laughs ] Ha, jo bhi hua usme bas mera hi haath tha. tumne to kuch nahi kiya...

She hits him with a pillow. "KP kahi ka," gets off the bed in a hurry.

D : Naina...Itni kya jaldi he...me to aj late nahi hu.

N : [ bunches up her hair ] Tum nahi, me.

D : Naina...

N : Acha baba, sorry...[ climbs back on the bed, takes his face in her hands ] Sorry, sorry, sorry...[mind you, each sorry is punctuated with a kiss on each cheek, and then his nose😊 ]...lekin me late ho jaungi. tumhe sona he to thodi der aur so jao, me tumhe baad me utha dungi...[ with that she goes off for her shower ]

D : [ muttering ] subha ke sare plans flop. aur ye mujhe KP kehti he... [bechara😆]

he gets off the bed too...

Dakshna r gettin ready; KP is hunting for his watch and Naina is at the dresser, combing her hair.

D : Pata he naina, Kisi ne to ek bar kaha tha, "Me subhe uth kar sabse pehle apne pati ka chehra dekhna chahti hu, rat ko sone se pehle akhri chehra bhi me apne pati ka dekhna chahti hu..."

Naina laughs, remembering what she told Mrs. Achrekar wen she took daksh with her to the restrnt...

D : [ continues ] Aur ye bhi kaha, ki "meri duniya mere pati se shuru hoti he, aur unse hi khatm..."...Kya dialogs the.

N : Dialogs...[ giggles ] Sach hi to hai.

D : Acha? EK me hu, jo subhe uth kar tumhari palke khulne ke intezar me baitha rehta hu, aur tum ho ki...tumhare pas mere liye time kaha rehta he.

N : [ absently ] KP, tumhare liye hi to-- [ stops when she realizes she's about to giv away the secret ]

D : [ interested ] Mere liye kya?

He sits on the bed and pulls the socks on.

N : [ pretends ki kuch nahi hua ] Kuch nahi...me to ye keh rahi thi, ki tumhare liye hi to meri har subha aur sham he...

Daksh nods, smilin. "Ha. Wo me janta hu. Waise aj mere liye kya hai? surprise he kya?"

Naina s annoyed at being caught. "Kp, me kya din bhar tumhare liye surprises hi arrang karti rahungi...mera kam kaun karega."

Daksh walks upto her, puts his around her. "Tum surprises nahi dogi, to bhi chalega. Roz subhe uth kar wo smile jo deti ho...Poora din ban jata he."

She relents at that, leans back into him. "Waise tumhe wo sari bate yad he?"

He laughs. "chahkar bhi nahi bhool sakta. divorc lawyer se criminal lawyer. luv marg lekin arrangd marrg. kya haal kar diya tha tumne mera...ek hi din me mujhe KP se ideal pati bana diya..."

she laughs too.

D : [ softly ] Tumhari har shararat, har mazak, har ek bat mujhe yad he. 16-A se lekar.

[umm, ok, giv dem a moment 2 reminisc😉]

N : Daksh...

D : Hmm.

N : I love you...

D : [ gentle squeeze ] I love you too. Ab chale...? tum "late" ho jaogi...

He helps her up, and they go downstairs...

... 😆 baki under construction 😆 ...

loads f smil😊s,

aish

@ blue,
loved this part aish!👏 so romantic😍
@ red,
I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!!!!!😭😳 please tell me ok? only me😉
@ green ,
poor dakshu!😆 Naina always ruins his morning romantic plans!😆😛
@ pink,
agree with lucky! lovely dialogue aish!👏👏👏
@ brown,
its so sweet how daksh remembers every word Naina has uttered, eventhough he really hated her at that time😍 so romantic!!
Superb FF aish! cant wait for the surprise now! jaldi! jaldi!😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

@Mysti
Very nice surprise from Dakshu yaar... Loved the whole birthday concept movie, room decoration and the present necklace with I love U too good yaar... And thanks for using head butt yaar ye apna Dakshna ka trademark hai koi bhi FF main accha lagta hai... 😉 Liked the way u included all the characters in ur FF...
Apne FF main Daksh is so sweet and cute... Loved it 😳

thanks yaar!!!!!!! im glad u liked it! i wanted everyone in the FF to highlight the fact that dakshu didnt get a present for her😆😆😆thats y...and i wanted kaka to give Naina a surprise too😃 loved him today btw! and the headbutt! its even more romantic than a kiss to me😍 thanks to aish, lucky and neetu...learning loads from you all😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

@mysti


How cute and romantic😍.😳.and what alovely present!!!😍.Movie..room decoration aur the best part.chain..❤️oh I am love in it😆...Kitna acha surprise hain dakhsu ka..😛.Loved the whole scene and dialogues...👏 yaar

thanks lucky!!🤗 u got daksh to give naina a diamond ring huh?? hehe😆 so i thought of a necklace😉 Naina is one damn lucky girl!!Day Dreaming in today's world u cant even expect a guy to gift u normal kind of ring even!! haha😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish

mysti...i'm tho totali blown over darlin...kash aisa hubby milta😍...

absolutly fab dearie👏👏👏...keep rocking...

Thanks aish!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
guys guys guys...aa gayi me vapis😉 got carried away thoda sa😆😆😆... so aa raha he ek aur instalment Naina-ke-surpris ka...
marna mat pls...i simply cudn help t.😊😊😊...

Evening, PH...

Dakshu [ u can imagin his frame f mind na😆 ] walks in with this beeeg smile. He hears Naina in the kitchen, so heads that way...

Naina nd Ayi r busy makin somethin. Ayi is instructing Naina, nd she's hanging onto every word...

Then Dakshu pokes his head in, nd Naina looks up.

Ok guys, yaha se its all eye-speak until i mention otherwise😉...

Dakshu ki ankhen : Bahar ao...

Naina ke naina : Abhi nahi...

D : Pls...

N : Busy hu...samajh jao na...[ holds up her hands, all covered in flour ]

D : [ baby face ] not fair...

N : Aww...

She smiles, blows him a kiss.

Dakshu is mildly KP by now, and goes to put his things away.

Dining table...

Naina and Daksh hav made up, via another eye-speak session between carting the dishes to the table [ he volunteered to help out ayi nd naina ].

bahanebaaz...vakil finali found a way out😛

Ok, back to dinner.

Naina s serving him the puran poli she made when daksh came in the evening. Ayi tells him Naina made it, and Dakshu s thoda sa apprehensive [ u guys warnd me bout the custard deal na isliye😉 ], and Naina frowns.

He tries it, smiles. tells her its wonderful, and she smiles back.

Ayi-baba also do, nd everyone deems it fit for royalty.

Then ayi notices Dakshu's permanent smile...

A : Chintu...kya baat he, aj tu bada khush lag raha he...

N : Ha ayi, wo daksh keh raha tha ki shaam ko--

daksh bechara chokes into his water; Naina pats him on the back.

N : [ softly ] kya hua daksh?

Daksh gives her an i'll-get-you-for-this look, and she smiles, takes a piece and feeds him sweetly.

Ayi smiles at them.

A : Ha beta, tu kya bol rahi thi...?

N : Kuch nahi ayi, wo Daksh ki sham ki meeting bahot acchi gayi thi, bas...

They exchang glances again; Naina smiles even more sweetly. KP goes back to his food. Naina's smile is wider now. She alredi has the compensation wala plan in place na...

ohk...comin up is the real deal, the crux of this particular series of FFs yaro😉...Naina ka surpris...thoda lamba ho gaya tha henc it becam instalment 3😛...don mind😊...nd muje marna mat...think f doing dat only afte rdng d nxt one😉
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Ok guys, yaha se its all eye-speak until i mention otherwise😉...

Dakshu ki ankhen : Bahar ao...

Naina ke naina : Abhi nahi...

D : Pls...

N : Busy hu...samajh jao na...[ holds up her hands, all covered in flour ]

D : [ baby face ] not fair...

N : Aww...

She smiles, blows him a kiss.

Dakshu is mildly KP by now, and goes to put his things away.


Oh..my Ioved this part👏..simply awesome..😍aankhon ki gustakiyan😳.I can imagine the whole scene 😍 .hmmm aish kya concept hain.🤗.👍🏼.LOved it.👏.tho hogayi aaj meri gudnt😉


Superb scene lekin maar tho tujhe padenge.😡..surprise agar next part me nahi mila tho...and I am serious😆😆

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