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Posted: 13 years ago

@ lucky,

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😍😍😍😍 so much romance! ill die!😍
ps: i dont blame physco for wanting to marry daksh so badly!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMystique

@ lucky,

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😍 so much romance! ill die!😍
ps: i dont blame physco for wanting to marry daksh so badly!😆


Yaar..uss psycho ko thodina pata hain ki dakshu itna romantic hain🤣..sirh humko aur naina ko pata hain😉😆

I thought iss FF mein love potion kum tha..but I like ur way of expression..😛Dnt die of happiness😆..baaki haoneymoon parts miss karoge kya? 😆aur ab tho dakshna ki shaddi ka news bhi aagaya..now we are more free to put more love potion kyu?😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Helo my darlins🤗...i'm bak😆...ok, din reali go nywer bt reunion versn 2.0 kal hi khatm hua tha...dis s sousou's idea, btw😊...

so, bkgnd : Ayi-baba nd Snkt r in darjlng, nd r done wit d mafi-mango session nd hav manaofied Naina...Lekin dakshu has nt arrivd yet, so Naina s thodi si put down.

Scene ye he ki vakil saheb lands up in BV, nd Naina madm refuses to let him off the hook for not coming with the others...

[ living room, BV ]

Ayi/Baba/Snkt r chatting with Anjali.Dakshu 2 has come jus in the morn, nd is wondering y Naina s givin him nakhre instd f talkin proprly 2 him.

D : [ 2 anjali ] Aunty, Naina kaha gayi...?

Anjali s about 2 answer him, when Naina dances in, all smiles. She wishes evryone exept daksh [ only a smil 4 him😛 ], then turns to her mom.

N : Momma, muje bahar jana he, Shruti se milne. Bahot imp he...

A : Acha beta. Jaldi ana...

N : Ha mom...

Gives her a quick peck on the cheek, and skips off merrily. Daksh is miffed. "Imp kaam...? Mujse zyada imp..." he murmurs.

A : Beta, kuch kaha tumne...?

D : Nahi aunty, kuch nahi...

Anjali smils and turns to her guests.

Daksh gets up after some time, leaving the elders to do the talking, and starts pacing the foyer.

"ye naina kaha chali gayi...kisse milne gayi he...mujse to theek se bat bhi nahi ki..."

Then he hears her voice; she's on her way in, nd has stopped outside to talk to the gardener.

Dakshu ka face lights up, den falls when he looks at his watch. " 15 minutes...? Itna imp kaam aur itni jaldi vapis...?" He starts frowning, ready to launch the Kp mode...

Naina walks in, humming to herself. She gives him a smile as she passes him, but keeps walking... [ Dakshu is full on KP now, and she's smiling to herself😆 ]

Daksh holds her hand, stops her.

D : Naina...

N : [ turns, smils ] Ha daksh...?

D : Kaha gayi thi tum...

N : Meri dost se milne...

D : TUmhara imp kam 15 minute me ho gaya...?

N : [ nods ] Ha, kyu? Tumhe bhi bahot imp kaam hote he na, jaise kal thi😛...

Daksh s about to say something, and the ph rings in the living room. Naina dances off to her mom.

"Mom..." she pulls out some package from her bag, gives it to anjali.

Jus then the maid asks anjali to pick the call; Anjali, hands full, requests her to put it on speaker ph...

It's Naina's frnd...

A : Ha beta, bolo...

Frnd : Aunty, me shruti bol rahi hu...Naina nahi ayi ab tak...?

Anjali, confused, looks up at naina. Naina meanwhil is ready to bolt, and steals a look at Daksh, who's fuming😆.

their eyes clash; Naina makes some excuse to the elders, and bolts out the back door...

KP dashes after Naina, gets hold of her out in the lawn.

Naina s laughing, flushed and breathless. He, poor guy, was furious a moment ago, lekin cant recollect y he was...he's lost in the wonder called Naina, whom he's holding in his arms right now...

She pulls his cheeks, exuberant.

"Mera KP," she says,laughing still.

Daksh reminds himself to switch on kp.

D : Imp kaam tha.

N : [ laughs ] Ha, tha.

He frowns.

N : Ph do apna.

D : Kyu?

N : Are...Ph do. reason batana zaruri he kya...

He pulls it out and hands it over but doesnt let her go.

She dials a number...

N : Ha shruti...nahi, me tumse kal sham ko milungi...Ha, imp kaam he...Nahi me kisi ki wedng plan nahi kar rahi abhi...Baraat...? Ha barat ayi he meri [ laughs ]...nahi, me tumhe call kar dungi...theek he. bye...

Daksh snatches the ph away, puts it back in his pocket and pulls her back to him.

N : KP...itne kanjoos ho kya? Muje pata he roaming pe he...

D : Ha, kanjoos hu. TUmhare sath jitna bhi waqt milta he, kam lagta he...usme se ek pal bhi me kisi aur ko nahi dunga. Samjhi.

N : Chodo muje.

D : [ resolutely ] Nahi chodunga.

N : To me tumhe tumhari gift nahi dungi.

D : Gift? Kya gift?

N : Tum pehle chodo to sahi...

He losens his grip. She opens her bag and pulls out one red rose, and he frowns.

She holds it out to him.

N : [ tongue-in-cheek ] Lo. Tum mere liye nahi laye, isliye mene tumhare liye li.

Daksh takes it, frowning still.

D : [ wounded tone ] Kyu...Me aa gaya hu, kafi nahi he kya...?

She puts her arms about his neck. "Ha baba, kafi he. Tum jo mil gaye muje, to duniya ki sari khushi mere pas jaise aa gayi...😊 Vaise kya "imp" kaam tha tumhara...?

D : [ cutie smile😊 ] Nahi bataunga. Surpris he.

N : [ coaxing ] Batao na daksh...pls...

D : Wo me- [ realizes he's about to tel her, stops ]

Bechara...simply cant resist her in anythin😆😆😆

D : [ chiding ] Naina...Abhi bata du to fir wo surpris kaise hogi...

N : Batao na...Pls...

D : Naina...

N : Acha theek he. Ye batao ki kal kya kiya tumne.

D : Kal me- Niana. [ she starts laughing again ] Aur koshish mat karo. Nahi bataunga.

N : Acha...[ mischievous smile ] me janti hu tumse answer kaise nikalwana he...

He doesnt reply. He's lost, lost, lost in her eyes...

Anjali calls out to them. Naina disengages herself, plants one on his cheek and dashes in. Daksh stares after her with this half lost, dreamy smile...

ps : as per orders frm sousou, done😉...hop u guys had fun 😛 [pun, intended😆😆😆😆]dher sari smil😊s,aish
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Naina s laughing, flushed and breathless. He, poor guy, was furious a moment ago, lekin cant recollect y he was...he's lost in the wonder called Naina, whom he's holding in his arms right now...

@AISH

Super beautiful scene 👏lekin agar dost ladka hota tho😉..tab daksh ka kya hota😆

@ blue; iss lines pe tho jaan qurbaan kardoo😛.kya expression hain.loved it😉 aur tumhare liye🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Naina s laughing, flushed and breathless. He, poor guy, was furious a moment ago, lekin cant recollect y he was...he's lost in the wonder called Naina, whom he's holding in his arms right now...


@AISH

Super beautiful scene 👏lekin agar dost ladka hota tho😉..tab daksh ka kya hota😆

@ blue; iss lines pe tho jaan qurbaan kardoo😛.kya expression hain.loved it😉 aur tumhare liye🤗🤗

thanku thanku...😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Naina s laughing, flushed and breathless. He, poor guy, was furious a moment ago, lekin cant recollect y he was...he's lost in the wonder called Naina, whom he's holding in his arms right now...


@AISH

Super beautiful scene 👏lekin agar dost ladka hota tho😉..tab daksh ka kya hota😆

@ blue; iss lines pe tho jaan qurbaan kardoo😛.kya expression hain.loved it😉 aur tumhare liye🤗🤗


Ditto Ditto... Bechara Dakshu pyaar main poora pagal jo hai Naina ke 😆😆
Ha yaar agar friend Ladka hota to kya haal hota Daksh ka 😍
Loved the way u express dear😉 ... simply outstanding 👏🤗

@ sou
thanks dear for such a beautiful idea...
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Posted: 13 years ago
So true! Naina's friend should have been a guy😆 but then KP would have gone and beat him up...then everything cancelled and dakshu dear will go to jail😆 so better not make him too angry now that he is finally united with his jaan😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
LadyMystique ,
it is very nice..!!! pls continue... superb!!!
Lucky,
as usual fabulous!!
Sweetaish..
u created FF simply beatufully...very nice..
hats off you all... !!!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish

Helo my darlins🤗...i'm bak😆...ok, din reali go nywer bt reunion versn 2.0 kal hi khatm hua tha...dis s sousou's idea, btw😊...

so, bkgnd : Ayi-baba nd Snkt r in darjlng, nd r done wit d mafi-mango session nd hav manaofied Naina...Lekin dakshu has nt arrivd yet, so Naina s thodi si put down.

Scene ye he ki vakil saheb lands up in BV, nd Naina madm refuses to let him off the hook for not coming with the others...

[ living room, BV ]

Ayi/Baba/Snkt r chatting with Anjali.Dakshu 2 has come jus in the morn, nd is wondering y Naina s givin him nakhre instd f talkin proprly 2 him.

D : [ 2 anjali ] Aunty, Naina kaha gayi...?

Anjali s about 2 answer him, when Naina dances in, all smiles. She wishes evryone exept daksh [ only a smil 4 him😛 ], then turns to her mom.

N : Momma, muje bahar jana he, Shruti se milne. Bahot imp he...

A : Acha beta. Jaldi ana...

N : Ha mom...

Gives her a quick peck on the cheek, and skips off merrily. Daksh is miffed. "Imp kaam...? Mujse zyada imp..." he murmurs.

A : Beta, kuch kaha tumne...?

D : Nahi aunty, kuch nahi...

Anjali smils and turns to her guests.

Daksh gets up after some time, leaving the elders to do the talking, and starts pacing the foyer.

"ye naina kaha chali gayi...kisse milne gayi he...mujse to theek se bat bhi nahi ki..."

Then he hears her voice; she's on her way in, nd has stopped outside to talk to the gardener.

Dakshu ka face lights up, den falls when he looks at his watch. " 15 minutes...? Itna imp kaam aur itni jaldi vapis...?" He starts frowning, ready to launch the Kp mode...

Naina walks in, humming to herself. She gives him a smile as she passes him, but keeps walking... [ Dakshu is full on KP now, and she's smiling to herself😆 ]

Daksh holds her hand, stops her.

D : Naina...

N : [ turns, smils ] Ha daksh...?

D : Kaha gayi thi tum...

N : Meri dost se milne...

D : TUmhara imp kam 15 minute me ho gaya...?

N : [ nods ] Ha, kyu? Tumhe bhi bahot imp kaam hote he na, jaise kal thi😛...

Daksh s about to say something, and the ph rings in the living room. Naina dances off to her mom.

"Mom..." she pulls out some package from her bag, gives it to anjali.

Jus then the maid asks anjali to pick the call; Anjali, hands full, requests her to put it on speaker ph...

It's Naina's frnd...

A : Ha beta, bolo...

Frnd : Aunty, me shruti bol rahi hu...Naina nahi ayi ab tak...?

Anjali, confused, looks up at naina. Naina meanwhil is ready to bolt, and steals a look at Daksh, who's fuming😆.

their eyes clash; Naina makes some excuse to the elders, and bolts out the back door...

KP dashes after Naina, gets hold of her out in the lawn.

Naina s laughing, flushed and breathless. He, poor guy, was furious a moment ago, lekin cant recollect y he was...he's lost in the wonder called Naina, whom he's holding in his arms right now...

She pulls his cheeks, exuberant.

"Mera KP," she says,laughing still.

Daksh reminds himself to switch on kp.

D : Imp kaam tha.

N : [ laughs ] Ha, tha.

He frowns.

N : Ph do apna.

D : Kyu?

N : Are...Ph do. reason batana zaruri he kya...

He pulls it out and hands it over but doesnt let her go.

She dials a number...

N : Ha shruti...nahi, me tumse kal sham ko milungi...Ha, imp kaam he...Nahi me kisi ki wedng plan nahi kar rahi abhi...Baraat...? Ha barat ayi he meri [ laughs ]...nahi, me tumhe call kar dungi...theek he. bye...

Daksh snatches the ph away, puts it back in his pocket and pulls her back to him.

N : KP...itne kanjoos ho kya? Muje pata he roaming pe he...

D : Ha, kanjoos hu. TUmhare sath jitna bhi waqt milta he, kam lagta he...usme se ek pal bhi me kisi aur ko nahi dunga. Samjhi.

N : Chodo muje.

D : [ resolutely ] Nahi chodunga.

N : To me tumhe tumhari gift nahi dungi.

D : Gift? Kya gift?

N : Tum pehle chodo to sahi...

He losens his grip. She opens her bag and pulls out one red rose, and he frowns.

She holds it out to him.

N : [ tongue-in-cheek ] Lo. Tum mere liye nahi laye, isliye mene tumhare liye li.

Daksh takes it, frowning still.

D : [ wounded tone ] Kyu...Me aa gaya hu, kafi nahi he kya...?

She puts her arms about his neck. "Ha baba, kafi he. Tum jo mil gaye muje, to duniya ki sari khushi mere pas jaise aa gayi...😊 Vaise kya "imp" kaam tha tumhara...?

D : [ cutie smile😊 ] Nahi bataunga. Surpris he.

N : [ coaxing ] Batao na daksh...pls...

D : Wo me- [ realizes he's about to tel her, stops ]

Bechara...simply cant resist her in anythin😆😆😆

D : [ chiding ] Naina...Abhi bata du to fir wo surpris kaise hogi...

N : Batao na...Pls...

D : Naina...

N : Acha theek he. Ye batao ki kal kya kiya tumne.

D : Kal me- Niana. [ she starts laughing again ] Aur koshish mat karo. Nahi bataunga.

N : Acha...[ mischievous smile ] me janti hu tumse answer kaise nikalwana he...

He doesnt reply. He's lost, lost, lost in her eyes...

Anjali calls out to them. Naina disengages herself, plants one on his cheek and dashes in. Daksh stares after her with this half lost, dreamy smile...

ps : as per orders frm sousou, done😉...hop u guys had fun 😛 [pun, intended😆]dher sari smil😊s,aish



Thank u Thank u so much Aish...
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊soumya...thnx dearie...but for ur daydrm, me ye FF kaha likhti...so dis s 4 u🤗🤗
smil😊s,
aish.
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago

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