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lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#371

@ aish

Kya kahu..sweet aish mein sweet nikal kar Iss FF mein dal diya...sooo sweet.😛.aur not fair naina concentrating more on pan..😕 agr mein ho thi😍...aur naina se custurd kyu banvaya.😆.woh bahut buri custard banati hai😆( shayad ayi se seek liya hoga acha custurd banana)...aur competition mein tho jeet hamare pyare dakshu ka hi hoga😉

As usual bahut meetha hain👏

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: lucky.m
@ aish

Kya kahu..sweet aish mein sweet nikal kar Iss FF mein dal diya...sooo sweet.😛.aur not fair naina concentrating more on pan..😕 agr mein ho thi😍...aur naina se custurd kyu banvaya.😆.woh bahut buri custard banati hai😆( shayad ayi se seek liya hoga acha custurd banana)...aur competition mein tho jeet hamare pyare dakshu ka hi hoga😉

As usual bahut meetha hain👏

tho mene kab kaha wo pan pe concentrat kar rahi thi...dose r jus Naina ke nakhre😉 u think uska attentn kahi aur ho sakta he wen KP is THAT close 2 her😆😆😆

nd thanku🤗...its apna "sweet" reveng on d CVs😆😆...

head butt? chal copy kar le😆...its my fav 2 bt u alredi kno dat...aur lights chali gayi...age kya hai

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#373

@ Lucky... good surprise for Naina😉... Loved it 👏... Wonderful scene...😛

@ Aish... Agree with Lucky Naina bahut boora Custard banati hai yaar😆... bechare ne last time kaise bhi karke kha liya tha😆😆... But we know all Dakshu ko Naina ka kuch bhi banaya hua sweet sweet hi lagega... loved the scene 😛... too good dear... good that emo FF ko chod ke Rom.. FF likha... Thanks bud...😃

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan
@ Lucky... good surprise for Naina😉... Loved it 👏... Wonderful scene...😛

@ Aish... Agree with Lucky Naina bahut boora Custard banati hai yaar😆... bechare ne last time kaise bhi karke kha liya tha😆😆... But we know all Dakshu ko Naina ka kuch bhi banaya hua sweet sweet hi lagega... loved the scene 😛... too good dear... good that emo FF ko chod ke Rom.. FF likha... Thanks bud...😃

ouch...mujhe nahi pata tha...i only saw her feeding him chod na yar...i thot usse kuch meetha hi banva leti hu😆...nd lik lucky said, usne ayi se seekh liya hoga

thnx swty🤗...i'm glad ki emo likhke rulane ke jaga i got 2 giv u smils😊

nd emo likhungi to bhi alag post karungi, yaha pe nahi...dis space s reservd 4 sweetie cutie FFs😊😊...

yar btw u hv ny idea aj kya hua p-zoo me...bahot bura hua to PM kar na, yaha lagake kisiko darana nahi he na

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#375

friends... its being long time i hve written a FF.. now i plan to write a small one..

An evening in Padwarthan Niwas [b4 Dakshna mrg]
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Everybody out of house only Naina left at home - guess all others went for anyone's mrg. [rem in the early days of Nana @ PH - she meets daksh first time in ph]. Naina is busy with arranging the house vsiting room. she plan to hang a painting on the wall. she drags a stool and climbs on it and leans for hanging it. Meanwhile our daksh is coming to home after his office. Daksh enters to the visiting room and sees Naina standing on chair and trying to hang something. He finds the stool is shaking.. he becomes concerned.. rushes to Naina and tells "Naina, sambhal ke... ".. wah.. Naina turns and looks a daksh and falls form the stool. God.. ! Dakshtries to manage to hold her but fails.. both fall on the floor. Daksh is down and Naina is on him.. (rem the fall of Ayush and Akruthi on Holi day) . daksh ko accha lagtha hai.. Daksh looks at Naina;s eyes and smiles... Oh... now he finds another thing is coming towards them (falling from the wall). He suddenly takes the action and rolls with Naina. now Naina is down and Daksh is up (rem their first fall in PH). the thing fals on the floor... both look at it and continues looks in each others eyes. then tries to get up.:
Naina shows angry face: tumhe kisne kaha muje bulane ko? thats y i fell down na..?
Daksh: Kya meine giraya tuhem... ??? (daksh is abt to get up)
Naina (tries to get up): Ouch...!!! (with pain)
Daksh: kya huva..
Naina: pata nahi.. kuch laga hai (she points her shoulder/waist - u choose)
Daksh naughtily: accha.. muje dikhavo... mein massage kar deta hoo... sab deek ho jayega..
Naina becomes more angry: Shut up.. udo...
Daksh gets up.. naina tries to get up but cannot... she has good pain.
Daksh understands yah.. she is suffering.. as usual he becomes concerned and caring.. he helps her to get up..
Daksh: Dheere.. (he makes her get up sits her on the sofa)
Daksh low voice seriously: tum baido... Naina kya huva.. bohot dard ho raha hai kya..? muje dekhne do...
Naina reluctantly but shows him.. (rem after the goons kidnap incident 😉). Daksh gets up and comes back with the first aid box.. he takes the ointment and parts her hair and starts to apply it.. Naina turns her face and looks at Daksh with lot of love.. Daksh looks at her... "bohit dard ho raha hai..?"
N without telling anything completely turns towards Daksh and smiles.. simply nodds hr head :"nahi.."
She holds his hand & looks at his eyes wit lot of love & continues.. : tum saath hai to muje koyi dard nahi hota...
Daksh feels good... they slowly lost in their feelings... naina comes closer to him... slowly hugs him... they go to a deep cute hug.. after sometimes, daksh lfts her face with hand... "tum deek to hai na.." N again gets angry and gets up.. "phir se vahi poochte ho..?"
d: arre. guss mat karna... poochta tha na..
n smiles... : hah.. ab coffee peeyoge..
D smiles bak and holds her hand and pulls her towards him (naina falls on him): baad me.. ab thodi der bh mere paas aisa baido..
Naina smiles hugs him.. daksh feels good... scene fades..

Edited by ntsindia - 13 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#376

@neetu

Yaar..after a long time...Reading ur FF reminded me all cute moments of dakshna..lekin in holi fall naina neeche aur daksh upar hai.😉.anyways..uapr ya neeche jab tak dakshna saath saath hain..koi prblem nahi

😉

Very simple and sweet one dear..lve👏d it

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#377

Ek khoobsurat shyam, dakshna ke naam❤️

Contd...Part 3

Naina; daksh..lagta hain current chala gaya.😲.aur,,she turns towards daksh..daksh waha nahi hein..😲

Naina; lil worried; daksh..abhi tak yahi tha,, kaha chala gaya''hmm.shayad wash room gaya hoga.and she sits down..

Suddenly she hears voice of daksh...saying naina..( in mike)😛

Lights on...

Naina turns towards that direction and is surprised to see daksh with a guitar in his hand.standing along with muisc band...😍

Daksh; ladies and gentlemen..ye gaana meri jaan aur meri pyari biwi❤️..naina ke liye..he looks at naina and says; I love u naina.❤️.this is for u😍

Every body in restaurant look towards naina and clap..naina is lil embarssed but lots more excited..

Daksh starts singing the song, playing guitar( I am putting one of my fav..u can add ur fav)...

Song; Dil ko tumse pyar hua ) from rehna hain tere dil mein)....😉

After singing few lines..he keeps guitar aside comes and asks naina for dance( kneeling down before her with his hand).😍..naina apna haath deti hain..and both start couple dance, joined later by other couples..

https://favim.com/image/24038/

Both lost in each other.😳..daksh pyar se naina ke fore head ko kiss karta hain aur naina daksh ki dil par apna sar rakthi hain..😳.iss tarah kush dher dance karne ke

baad..

Naina; not bad vakeel saab.😛.kaafi acha dance kar lete hai aap aur guitar pe gaana..tho..kya kahu?Itna acha surprise..😊.bahut mazaa aaya😊

Daksh;tumhe acha laga! tho hamara mission tho poora hogaya mere pyare biwi ko khush karne ki.😃.rahi baat dance ki tum ne hi tho sikhaya shaadi se pehle ,yaad hein(FF of naina teaches dance to daksh)...tum kuch sikhavo aur mein naa sikhoo aisa ho sakta hain kya? 😆..plants one more kiss on fore head.😳.continue to dance...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/sapnon-se-bhare-naina/1750810/dakshna-ff-fan-fiction?pn=8( My ff where naina tecahes daksh dancing)

Dance khatam ho gaya...dono apna room pahuch gaye.😛..Wha kya hua? pata chal jayega..wait karo😉

contd...

Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago