Originally posted by: sweetaish
helo my darlins🤗...me bak wit andr one😆..post my sneeze attacks, this may nt b d best one yet, me abhi se keh deti hu😛😊...
note :(1.)thoda lamba hai, i kno..(2.) nd i think i've over-abused the word cute in this one😆, but i'm sure u guys wont mind cos cute s wat dakshna r😊
early morning, dakshna's room [how early s early yar...my pops used 2 wak me up char baje ko😛]
Dakshu s peacfully slpin, drmin his swt drms [i tel u guys, a drming dakshu has 2 b a whol lot cuter dan a day-drming one😆] and he's drmin of a certain someone running her hands through his hair pyar se, and this light pressure on his gal pe...and he smiles in his sleep [cute, na😊]..
Naina plants another one on his forehead [do do gud-morning kisses😍] and gets up from his side; he holds her back; "Naina."
N : [smiles] Gud morning, Daksh.
He opens his eyes thoda sa, sees its still daybreak.
"Sunday he, naina," he croaks out. "Subha hui nahi he..."
N : Tumse kisne kaha...
He opens his eyes with some more effort and looks at her.
D : Tum itni jaldi kyu uth gayi...
[btw, she's jus outa shower wit damp hair n all nd s lukin cho chweet, but rite nw vakil saheb can only see his naina ke naina; stil fuzzy frm slp😛]
N : Me uth bhi gayi, aur naha bhi liya. Tumhara kab uthne ka irada he?
"Abhi nahi..." He tries to tug her down,decides its too much effort and settles for her hand, and goes right back to sleep.
She smiles, removes her hand gently after he's out and goes.
Ab to daybreak ho hi gaya, and eyes still closed, dakshu puts out his hand- No naina.
He sits up, vaguely remembers her trying to wake him, and then he notices a new photo frame on the bedside tabl. [of cours its their pic, million watt smiles on both thier faces...my cuties😊]
There s a letter beneath it, he takes it up.
Ab ye mat kehna ki subhe ko uthke mujhe nahi dekha.
in your own words cho chweet
He smiles and heads for the washroom. Brush nikala, he looks up and lo, next msg on the mirror : Kp pls jaldi ready ho jao, late ho jaoge...
"Ye naina kaha jane ki bat kar rahi he subhe subhe...?"
gr8 idea
He thinks, thinks all his way through his shower nd comes out thinking stil,wondering where he'd promised to take her, but then he knows he wouldnt forget anythin related to her...
There's a new shirt laid out for him on the bed now [pick ur fav color, guys...thought white, but whit's thoda sa cliched😉] He takes it, and decides to go ask her what's up...
So he goes downstairs, it's ladysville in the kitchen but he cant hear her voice among those...Baba who's at the table with his paper and coffee, tells him she's in the kitchen probably, and he goes in anyway.lekin Naina nahi he.
D : Ayi, Naina kaha he...?
A : Beta wo terrace pe hogi...
Terrace pe again naina nahi hai, its kaki, who tells him ki she jus went downstairs...
Now he's in semi KP mode, and goes down muttering, as to why she's makin him run around so much...Beech me he turns around- nope, not her. So he goes back to their room.
Bechara,
Naina the gr8 is shadowing him meanwhil, trying hard not to laugh...
Gr8 concept, Naina toh uski parchayi hai
He shakes his head, deciding to go check her office [says it loudly, too, u kno y😛], and she ducks behind the pillar.
He walks out, she sneaks in, and is about to sneak out again, when vakil saheb comes out from behind the very same pillar, and she's back in the room again.[um, nd KP closes the door too; ideas, nyone😛]
N [breathless] : Hi !
D : [pakad-liya expresn] Hi.
N : Tum ready ho na. Chale?
D [frowning] : Kaha?
N :[brilliant smile] Mandir. Darwaza kyu band kiya? Chalo na, waise bhi late he-
D [holds her there] : Pehle batao mujhe itna kyu bhagaya.
N : [she smiles] Shirt achi hai? [corrects his alredi correct collar]
D : ha, humesha ki tarah [stil tryin 2 figur t out; so r u, i kno😆]
N : Photo frame?
D [he nods] : Ha. Kya hai ye sab?
N : Tumhe kya lagta hai?
D : [frowning some more] Mera birthday to aj nahi he...
N : [laughs] Acha to kab he? Kal?
D : Naina.
N : [pyaar se] Hath chodo na daksh...
He losens his grip par chodta nahi hai.
D : Nahi. Vada kiya tha tumse ki nahi chodunga...
N : Acha theek he, mat chodo. Par mujhe mandir to jana hi hai. Chale?
D : [looks over her shoulder] Wo kya hai?
yep, table pe there is a small box, wrapped nd ready...
N : [laughs] Kuch nahi, tumhara birthday kal he na, gift bhi kal khol dena...
Ayi calls for Naina, and she moves to the door. "Tum khol ke dekh lo Daksh, me abhi ati hu..."
He doesnt let go.
D : Naina.
She turns back, smiles.
D [pulls her close] : Mera birthday aj hai.
N [smiles some more] : Tum na KP, genius ho.
D : Aur sabse achi gift tum mujhe bahot pehle de chuki ho...[head-butt; mega cute, i kno😛] Tumhara pyaar...
She hugs him, but then Ayi calls her again.
N : Daksh, Ayi bula rahi he, me dekh ke ati hu...
D : Nahi. Aise nahi jane dunga.
She smiles, kisses him on the cheek.
He shakes his head, smiling. So she kisses him on his other cheek too.
N : [softly] Ab jane do.
D : Nahi, meri bari...[eyes closed, peopl...privacy, privacy😆😆]
She pulls back😳, smiling. "Gadi nikal do, me abhi ati hu."
He nods and goes to get his gift. It's a watch, with a single needle,the date the only thing displayed on the dial.
"Naina.." he calls out to her, half amused.
"Ati hu..." she shouts back from the kitchen.
He smiles, and goes to get the car.
ok, it may not b cute al d way, but wanted 2 put t 2getr b4 CVs dash our hopes again sumhow [was in a rush cos f d ME-wala axe]...if u guys think its half baked, i'l edit t 4 y'all...
smil😊s,
it uber-cute and no editing required but maybe an encore
aish