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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMystique

sweetaish, hehe ..no no...i was talking abt their wedding day...how its gonna happen and all..😛

In which marriage ceremonies do u go round and round 7 times? i like one of those to happen in dakshna's wedding...not like in abhi and naina's wedding...i want it to look like shistri and akshay's wedding😍

u call me aish...nahi to u kno wat i'l cal u😛...
jaan i thnk u hav dat custom in most indian mrgs...nd d one u r refferin 2, mene ab tak dekhi nahi hai, i've only read d Wus f d initial epis...i got hooked on2 ssbn halfway thru dr😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaish

helo my darlins🤗...me bak wit andr one😆..post my sneeze attacks, this may nt b d best one yet, me abhi se keh deti hu😛😊...

note :(1.)thoda lamba hai, i kno..(2.) nd i think i've over-abused the word cute in this one😆, but i'm sure u guys wont mind cos cute s wat dakshna r😊
early morning, dakshna's room [how early s early yar...my pops used 2 wak me up char baje ko😛]
Dakshu s peacfully slpin, drmin his swt drms [i tel u guys, a drming dakshu has 2 b a whol lot cuter dan a day-drming one😆] and he's drmin of a certain someone running her hands through his hair pyar se, and this light pressure on his gal pe...and he smiles in his sleep [cute, na😊]..

Naina plants another one on his forehead [do do gud-morning kisses😍] and gets up from his side; he holds her back; "Naina."
N : [smiles] Gud morning, Daksh.
He opens his eyes thoda sa, sees its still daybreak.
"Sunday he, naina," he croaks out. "Subha hui nahi he..."
N : Tumse kisne kaha...
He opens his eyes with some more effort and looks at her.
D : Tum itni jaldi kyu uth gayi...
[btw, she's jus outa shower wit damp hair n all nd s lukin cho chweet, but rite nw vakil saheb can only see his naina ke naina; stil fuzzy frm slp😛]
N : Me uth bhi gayi, aur naha bhi liya. Tumhara kab uthne ka irada he?
"Abhi nahi..." He tries to tug her down,decides its too much effort and settles for her hand, and goes right back to sleep.
She smiles, removes her hand gently after he's out and goes.

Ab to daybreak ho hi gaya, and eyes still closed, dakshu puts out his hand- No naina.
He sits up, vaguely remembers her trying to wake him, and then he notices a new photo frame on the bedside tabl. [of cours its their pic, million watt smiles on both thier faces...my cuties😊]
There s a letter beneath it, he takes it up.

Ab ye mat kehna ki subhe ko uthke mujhe nahi dekha.

in your own words cho chweet
He smiles and heads for the washroom. Brush nikala, he looks up and lo, next msg on the mirror : Kp pls jaldi ready ho jao, late ho jaoge...
"Ye naina kaha jane ki bat kar rahi he subhe subhe...?"

gr8 idea


He thinks, thinks all his way through his shower nd comes out thinking stil,wondering where he'd promised to take her, but then he knows he wouldnt forget anythin related to her...
There's a new shirt laid out for him on the bed now [pick ur fav color, guys...thought white, but whit's thoda sa cliched😉] He takes it, and decides to go ask her what's up...

So he goes downstairs, it's ladysville in the kitchen but he cant hear her voice among those...Baba who's at the table with his paper and coffee, tells him she's in the kitchen probably, and he goes in anyway.lekin Naina nahi he.
D : Ayi, Naina kaha he...?
A : Beta wo terrace pe hogi...

Terrace pe again naina nahi hai, its kaki, who tells him ki she jus went downstairs...
Now he's in semi KP mode, and goes down muttering, as to why she's makin him run around so much...Beech me he turns around- nope, not her. So he goes back to their room.

Bechara,
Naina the gr8 is shadowing him meanwhil, trying hard not to laugh...
Gr8 concept, Naina toh uski parchayi hai
He shakes his head, deciding to go check her office [says it loudly, too, u kno y😛], and she ducks behind the pillar.
He walks out, she sneaks in, and is about to sneak out again, when vakil saheb comes out from behind the very same pillar, and she's back in the room again.[um, nd KP closes the door too; ideas, nyone😛]
N [breathless] : Hi !
D : [pakad-liya expresn] Hi.
N : Tum ready ho na. Chale?
D [frowning] : Kaha?
N :[brilliant smile] Mandir. Darwaza kyu band kiya? Chalo na, waise bhi late he-
D [holds her there] : Pehle batao mujhe itna kyu bhagaya.
N : [she smiles] Shirt achi hai? [corrects his alredi correct collar]
D : ha, humesha ki tarah [stil tryin 2 figur t out; so r u, i kno😆]
N : Photo frame?
D [he nods] : Ha. Kya hai ye sab?
N : Tumhe kya lagta hai?
D : [frowning some more] Mera birthday to aj nahi he...
N : [laughs] Acha to kab he? Kal?
D : Naina.
N : [pyaar se] Hath chodo na daksh...
He losens his grip par chodta nahi hai.
D : Nahi. Vada kiya tha tumse ki nahi chodunga...
N : Acha theek he, mat chodo. Par mujhe mandir to jana hi hai. Chale?
D : [looks over her shoulder] Wo kya hai?
yep, table pe there is a small box, wrapped nd ready...
N : [laughs] Kuch nahi, tumhara birthday kal he na, gift bhi kal khol dena...
Ayi calls for Naina, and she moves to the door. "Tum khol ke dekh lo Daksh, me abhi ati hu..."
He doesnt let go.
D : Naina.
She turns back, smiles.
D [pulls her close] : Mera birthday aj hai.
N [smiles some more] : Tum na KP, genius ho.
D : Aur sabse achi gift tum mujhe bahot pehle de chuki ho...[head-butt; mega cute, i kno😛] Tumhara pyaar...
She hugs him, but then Ayi calls her again.
N : Daksh, Ayi bula rahi he, me dekh ke ati hu...
D : Nahi. Aise nahi jane dunga.
She smiles, kisses him on the cheek.
He shakes his head, smiling. So she kisses him on his other cheek too.
N : [softly] Ab jane do.
D : Nahi, meri bari...[eyes closed, peopl...privacy, privacy😆😆]
She pulls back😳, smiling. "Gadi nikal do, me abhi ati hu."
He nods and goes to get his gift. It's a watch, with a single needle,the date the only thing displayed on the dial.
"Naina.." he calls out to her, half amused.
"Ati hu..." she shouts back from the kitchen.
He smiles, and goes to get the car.

ok, it may not b cute al d way, but wanted 2 put t 2getr b4 CVs dash our hopes again sumhow [was in a rush cos f d ME-wala axe]...if u guys think its half baked, i'l edit t 4 y'all...

smil😊s,
it uber-cute and no editing required but maybe an encore
aish

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Posted: 13 years ago
I think Daksh luks nyc in black aswell and i really luv the headbutt 2
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: storytellerSSBN

I think Daksh luks nyc in black aswell and i really luv the headbutt 2

thnx sweetheart🤗...
nd head-butt ke fan club me apka swagat he😆😆😆...
nd yea, nxt tim i'l get Naina 2 giv him a blk shirt...dat seems 2 b d consensus f opinion😛...
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Posted: 13 years ago
❤️Dakshna honeymoon continution❤️

Iss tarah shower sse saath mein bahar aane ke baad..naina in arms of daksh😍..both lost in each other.Daksh slowly takes up naina's face into his arms..naina ke chehre pe kahi kahi paani ke boonde hain..😳tho daksh ne unhe hatane ka responsibility liya.
😆.
He starts taking them away with his lips...☺️slowly kisses naina on her fore head , then eyes..then cheeks...then.about to kiss her ..☺️
Phone baja..phone baja....😕
Daksh is not in a mood to pick up the( busy jo hai), 😆

Naina; daksh tumhara phone..( jaise usse pata nahi)😆

Daksh; bajane dona.aur tum mujhe disturb mat karo...aur phir se pane kaam mein lag jaata hein😉

Lekin phone bandh hona ka naam nahi le raha hain...naina asks daksh to pick attend the call first

Naina; daksh dekhona..kuch jaroori call hoga..warna itni baar call nahi karte..javo syaing this she puhses him way slowly😕
Daksh ; kya naina? acha mood kharab kar diya😕...iss phone ko tho😡...he starts going towards his phone which is on table..then he turns back and says; tum ye mat sochna ki tun bach gayi aur maine tumhe chod diya...😆

Naina; gives cute smile 😛and says aur mein bachna bhi nahi chahthi😍..mr.daksh patwardan...saying this.she starts wiping her hair

..Daksh picks up the phone, sits on bed and looks at calls..naina comes and sits besides him and asks..
Nains;kiska phone hein??😲
Daksh ; ghar se ayi ka..😛
Naina; ayi ka? tho call karona..mein baat karungi pehle..she snatches phone away from daksh and calls PH number aur loud speaker pe lagati hein😊

Ayi picks the call

Contd...

Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Contd...

Naina; ayi aap kaise ho? hum..teek hain ayi..yaha pe sab kuch teek hein..
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Hamra dakshu silent betne walo mein se nahi hein.he comes and hugs naina from back.and phir se kaam mein lag gaya😉...😆naina finding hard to concentrate.😉.

Ayi; chintu kaha hein?❓
Daksh ayi; mein yahi par hoon..ghar pe sab kaise hain?😲
Ayi; hum sab bhi teek hain..tho tum log wapas kab aarahe ho?

Dakshna look at each other..naina smiles and gives an expression batavo?

Daksh; ayi mein kab se keh raha hoon ghar chalte hein..lekin aapki bahu.😆..ghar wapas aanae ka naam nahi leti..😆...kehti hain ye jagah bahut acha hein aur..😆

Naina ; nahi ayi..daksh joot keh raha hein..jhoota..saying this takes a piloow and hits him

Daksh( acting); ahhh😛 naina.kya kar rahi ho? chodo mujhe, kuch dher bhi wait nahi karsakthi.😳.thoda sabr karo😉 winks at her 😆with naughty smile)😊

Naina opens her mouth looking at daksh..( saara iljam uss par jo laga raha hein)😉

Ayi understands the situation and asks them to take care and disconnects call

Naina..mrs kp look ke saath dakshu ko dekh rahi hein.😡

Daksh; aise kyu dekh raho?mujhe bahut darr lag raha hain.😆.saying this he falls on bed and starts laughing😃.Naina sits on bed and starts hitting him with pillows

,daksh; arey naina..naina..lag jayega..

Naina; tumne ayi se jhoot kyu kaha? maine kya kiya?pata nahi ayi mere baare mein kya soch rahi hogi?

Daksh; arey tumhe boora laga..tho ek kaam karte hein..pulls naina towards him..(daksh neeche pillow in b/w aur uske upar naina)..jhoot ko sach mein badlte. hain.kuch karne se maine tumhe rokha tho nahi.😳..saying this he takes of pillow b/w them😍😍
An intense eye lock..❤️.naina sharamake;😳 aaj kal bilkul besharam hote jaa rahe ho? kuch tho sharam karo

Daksh gets up sits on bed and says; excuse me ;sharmana tho tum ladkiyon ka kaam.jaise kuch dher pehle tum sharmarahithi..agar dono sharmate rahenge..tho honey moon kaisa hoga..😉

Naina; stands up( puts a hand on her waist) ; acha.tum tho aise baat kar rahe ho jaise tum kabhi sharmate nahi..
Daksh; main? aur sharmana? kabhi nahi?😆(jhoota)

Naina slowly gets onto the bed..comes closer to daksh aur daksh ko bed par giarti hain.daksh surprised at naina's behaviour

Naina( in very romantic way)❤️..😉oh daksh..tumhe pata hain..tum bina shirt ke kitna hot lag rahe ho😆,,tumhe aise dekh kar mere dil mein kuch kuch ho raha hein😆😆

Daksh ek dum se cute cute pink KP banjaata hein😳☺️..aur sharmaane lagata hain☺️

Naina sees at his face and starts laughing😆; ab dekho..tumhara chehra...kaise sharmarahe ho continues to have fun..

Daksh lil angry., gets up;.; acha ,tho ye sab kuch apne point prove karne ke liye kiya..

Naina; haan aur nahi tho kya? lekin tum sachmuch hot lagrahe ho..kyu tumhe nahi lagta? saying this she gets up

Daksh; pulls naina to bed..comes closer to naina and says;muje lagta hain mein hot tab ban jaato hoon jab tum mere saath hote ho...😉

Phir se dono khogaye..lekin ab position change..naina neeche, daksh upar😍

Naina; daksh ..aaj hamara bahar jaane ka programme?😲..they take turn on bed

Daksh; programme cancel😆kyunki mujhe kaam adhoora chodne ki aadat nahi hey...comes closer to naina...scene fades...😉

PS; Sunday jo aagaya..DDLJ khatam hogaya..was feeling lil bored..so thought of this..hope u will like this😉



Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lucky,
the love potion dose is really strong this time...😉 i think u finished the whole bottle😆...or do u have more left for another FF?
anyways well done again👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
yay...lucky nd d lov potion s back here😆😆😆...maza aya yr...fultu naughty phirse😛 aur end me PS nd poetry [do line ki hi sahi😛]...lucky babe...luv u😆😆😆
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
🤗Kya bolu abhi main😃 I am short of words 😛 Wonderful Lucky Very Very sexy and romantic scene...😳 Loved it 😃 ☺️ Thanks for maintaining the love potion dear 😛 👏
Loved the naughty Dakshu ☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ mysti

Yaar, dakshna ke liye hamare pass unlimited love potions ke bottles hain..lekin dosage depends on situation😆.Honeymoon pe ho tho itna tha banta hain na😉..U liked it right!

@ Aish & dakshna fan

Thanks buddies..🤗.and poetry(I am trying😆) is for u aish 😉and love potion dose jyada maine tumhare liyae dala dakshnafan😉..

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