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Posted: 13 years ago

thankyou all.. i will write whenever i have time.. but i read all of ur ffs daily...

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Posted: 13 years ago
kitna romantic hai... lucky! love you!
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ dakshna fan, neetu and aish

Thanks yaar.🤗.luv u all...I knew u will like itaur aap logo ki chehre pe muskurahat laana hi tho hamra kaam hein...😃..aur rahi baat naina ki surprise tho😊.,hum dakshu ke saath naainsaafi bilkul hone nahi denge😉..next part mein wahi hein.( surprise)..thoda wait karo..pata chaljayega😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

@ dakshna fan, neetu and aish


Thanks yaar.🤗.luv u all...I knew u will like itaur aap logo ki chehre pe muskurahat laana hi tho hamra kaam hein...😃..aur rahi baat naina ki surprise tho😊.,hum dakshu ke saath naainsaafi bilkul hone nahi denge😉..next part mein wahi hein.( surprise)..thoda wait karo..pata chaljayega😉

waitin, waitin😍...lekin yar zyada wait mat karvana😛...
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is 4 all my darlins in our FF world...luv u guys🤗
ps : romo/emo FFs n d wrks, til den dis shud do frm me 2 y'all😊😊😊
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
a very simple scene...
a morning in PH [after mrg]
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Naina and Ayi are busy in kitchen. Ayi has to make the arrangements in the pooja room. She asks abt Daksh and Naina rushes to room and she find Daksh is in sleep..(may be they took time to sleep in the previous night 😉 ). Naina calls him and makes him get up. [rem at that day Naina made him get up]. Daksh gets up and looks at the clock. Oh God he has a meeting in the morning. He suddently gets and do his jobs.. naina takes out his dress and put it on the bed and to Kitchen. Ayi leaves to poojaroom for the arrangements... Daksh comes hurry in kitchen. his collar is not corect... sleves are not set. in one hand a file other hand his bag... Naina puts a plate on the dining table and say: Daksh nashta kar lo...
Daksh: nahi naina, der ho jayega.. mein raste mein kha loonga...
Naina: aise kaise.. nahi... ek 5 minute hai na...
she notices daksh shirt is not perfect. she comes near him and corrects the collar. then comes back to the table and takes the break fast and runs behind Daksh...
Naina: mooh kholo..
she feeds him running behind.. meanwhile Daksh folds his sleves..
N: hah.. dekha.. ? kaise finish ho gara.. ab yeh chay bhi pee lo aur tum jaavo...
she takes the tea cup and give it to him. Naina rushes to the bag and checks whethr he took every thing. yah.. she made everything correct... naina takes the plate
Naina: ab jaavo... aur der mat karna...
Daksh: teek hai.. ab mein chaltha hoo...
Naina smiles and looks he leaves... Daksh abt to leave but stops and turns back...
Naina: kya huva...? kuch bhool gaye hai kya?
Daksh looks around and tells... : hanh... bohot important baat bhool gaya.. [Daksh puts the bag on the teapoy and looks around then walks towards her with a smile - u see he has no time for break fast even]
naina wonders then she understoood.. daksh came near her and tries to hug her (plate btn them).
Naina steps back: Daksh, kya kar rahe ho... shirt kharab ho jayega...
Daksh takes d plate from her hand and put it on the table... and tells: shirt kharab ho jaye tho hone do... ab mein yeh kartha nahi hai to mera poora din kharab ho jayega... (telling this he is about to hug)
Naina: kya daksh.. kisi ne dekha to...
Daksh: Dekha tho dekhne do... pati hoo mei thumhara. tho kya problem hain...?
Naina silent ho jati hai.. he slowly hugs her and gives a sweet cute kiss on her forehead...
Daksh with smile: ab me jata.. (naina puts the fingers on his mouth)
Naina: Jata nahi.. jakar ata hoo...(she borrows the words of Ayi ;) )
Daksh smiles and sweetly: teek hai.. jakar ata hoo... ayi se bhi keh dena...
Naina shakes her head (hah)... : bye.. ana khayal rakhna...
Daksh shakes his head.. :hanh... tum bhi...
[ayi standing seeing all these.. she is in her happiness seeing his son and dil.. she prays.. hey bhagwan in dono ka rishta hamesha hamesha isi khushi se rakh dena.. ]
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Posted: 13 years ago
neetu di...sooo domestic nd shoo shweeet😊😊😊...
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Posted: 13 years ago
@neetu

Yaar,,...so simple 👏and so...cute👏...Lved it..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh Wow Neetu 😉 so sweet and cute yaar 😳... Loved it 😃🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!! lucky !! so romantic!!😍 btw, i like when Naina takes the initiative... she does it in a very sexy way...hahaha😆😳 Daksh does it in a cute romantic way!!! cant wait for the nxt one lucky!!!

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