Dakshna FF(Fan fiction) - Page 34

Originally posted by: sweetaish

Hola peopl🤗...as per reqs, we hav Dakshu & Naina going downstairs after their terrace-pe-romanc session nd part one f d celebs😛 [jab we met, remember😆]...

Ok so Daksh nd Naina hav finali decided 2 shift d venue 2 their room [thnx 2 naina ke nakhre bechara Daksh hasnt bn able 2 do much on d terrac😆]

She opens d door, nd he steps out first with the toy train ka box nd the ribbons n all r trailin from it.
D : [stubbed his toe on the door ka frame] Ouch!
N : Kya hua... [in hushed tones]
D [grunts] : Kuch nahi, bas..
N : shh...dheere Daksh.
D : [whispers back] Ek to itni zor se lagi, aur tumhe baki sabki padi he..
N : KP, tum na mahan ho. [bends down to check his foot] Zyada damage nahi hua hai😆 [she gets up, grinning]...Waise box itni badi he kya ki tumhe dikhai nahi de rahi..
He frowns at her.
N : Acha theek he mujhe do...[she takes the box from him] Ab chalo,
He's stil frowning, KP mode.
N : Tum na. wahi khade raho. Me ja rahi hu.
She trips on her sari this time,he yanks her back, and she almost drops the box. Together they manag to keep it upright.
N : Ab dekho kya kar diya.
Daksh opens his mouth to protest, and they hear a light switch going on sumwer.
N : [all excited] Chalo na...
she takes his hand and starts down;poor guy is dragged along😆
D : Naina...
[they're stil talkin in loud whispers, mind u😛]
They reach the bottom f d steps, and someone s moving around the house now.
N : Ab to tumne sabko jaga diya..
D : Mene? Me to-
They hear ayi's voice from the other room "Chintu...beta tu hai kya...?"
"Ayi ! " Naina dashes off to their room, leaving daksh to handle ayi [phas gaya bechara😛]
He steps forward, and ayi walks in.
D : Ha ayi...
A : Beta tu itna late aya...?
D : Ha ayi bas, abhi thodi der pehle...
A : Ye tere gal pe kya hai...? [she raises her hand as if to check]
[lo lagva di lipstick mene😆 i kno forum pe koi to ab khush hai😛 ]
D : [touches his cheek experimentali, nd goes al cutie pink😆] Kuch nahi ayi... [decids 2 chang the sub] Muje to laga tha sab so gaye he.
A : Ha, bas, waha pani nahi tha...
D : Ha, mere room me bhi.
A : Chal, me leke de deti hu...
Dakshu has no choic but 2 follow. He looks back the way naina disappeared, heaves a sigh[bechara😆] and follows ayi into the kitchen.

He walks in with a jug f water. She's aram se sitting on the bed, smilin the million watt smil.
N : Gud mornin, vakil saheb.
daksh looks @ d clock; its way past 12, teknicali a new day.
[cudn resist dis Pj...its one f my favs wen mom scolds me 4 burnin d midnite oil😆]

Daksh sets the jug down on the dresser.
D : Tumhari gud mornin to me-
N : Kya hua? Thodi der pehle to tumhara sone ka bilkul mood nahi tha😆.
D : Wo to ab bhi nahi he. Lekin tum-
N : Ha, dekh ke bhi lag raha he.😛
D : Muje bolne nahi dogi na.
N : Nahi... [kyu bolne degi..she's havin way 2 much fun😆]
He starts to say sumthin, but is distracted by the train she's put out on his table and he smiles.
She comes up behind him.
N : Ayi ne kya kaha?
D : Ayi...?
he checks the mirror; sure enough, der's dis pink smudge on his face, and he takes it off; she starts laughing.
D : Has kyu rahi ho?
N : Nahi, bas soch rahi thi ki agar match karvane ke liye mene ek aur di hoti to ayi-
D : [turns around with his nahi-chodunga xpressn] Ha to mene mana kaha kiya...Karva do match...MAtch nahi bhi hua, to bhi chalega...
She backs off; yay peopl, chase is on...
N : Tum kuch keh rahe the pehle.
D : Ha, yahi ki agar tum hamesha mera sath aise deti rahogi-
N : Kaise?
D : Jaise abhi ayi ke samne muje ditch kiya na, vaise.
[she dodges him again]
N : [laughs] Maine kaha ditch kiya? Agar mene tume train ke sath choda hota to tume wo bhi xplain karna padta..
She skirts a chair, and he pulls it out of the way.
N : Daksh, abhi to bas ayi uthi he, aise to hum sabko jaga denge..
D : Ha, phir to tum nahi keh sakti na ki ' Daksh, sab so rahe he, shor mat machao' nd all...[vakil saheb nd his counter arguments😛]
She eyes the light ka switch, but he reaches der 1st.
D : Vaise tumne abhi lipstick kyu pehen rakhi he...
N [pouts] : KP kahi ka. Tumhe chashma rakh ke bhi kuch nahi dikhta he, sirf lipstick dikh raha he...[ha, bechari spent hours gettin decked out 4 u, nd tum ho ki]
He laughs and pulls her close.
D : [softly] Galat...
N : [caught now😳] Kya... [kho gayi dakshu ke ankho me...doob gayi uske pyaar me😆😆]
D : Tum isse zyada galat ho hi nahi sakti...
And he proceeds 2 show her exactly dat [nahi, nahi...lights off.dis WONT b d nxt FF, baki ka imagin kar lo😆😆😆]

Lo, hum ghoom phir ke vapis bedrm me hi le aye dono ko akhir😆...hop u guys had fun😊

[note 2 lucky :wat d'u say bout a pillo fight...aj to dono ko bahot dauda dia na, chase n all,isliye no room 4 pillo fights😛..u giv t a try na😆😆..]

ps : guys kal tak to net ws totali jamd, so due to time constraints [din me kuch 5/10 minuts ke liye hi milta tha net😊] i cudn do as much editin as i'd wantd 2, may hav overlukd a few minor details [jaise i 4got 2 tel u N got al decked up 4 her KP, nd how she decoratd d terrac etc], don mind...wo bhi imagin kar lena😆...

loads f smil😊s,

aish

pps : pata hai ps comes afte evrythin els, but stil...bear wit me😆

Originally posted by: sweetaish

Hey guys🤗...been toying with this idea for some time nw. Pace thoda slow he, not exactly my usual😛...

note : pata he 1st half kuch zyada hi colorful he, don mind d orange ones😆

Daksh nd naina hav sme functn 2 attnd [kisi ki to shadi he, who cares kiski, we can get them both dresd up 2 our hearts' content😉]...

Daksh s standing in front f d dresser in this golden shervani, tugging at his sleeve, wondering why they had to go to the function today [vakil saheb ke kuch aur ideas the, guesses nyone😛]. Naina dashes in, in this red and gold sari, unadorned as yet [vo kam mene dakshu ke liye choda hai guys, thoda sa wait karo😛...].

She sees daksh [who's so obviously sumwer els], goes nd pulls his cheek. " Tum aaj bahot cute lag rahe ho. cute, cute KP," and gives him an impulsiv peck on the cheek.
Dakshu is brought down to earth by that [par uski imagintn ki flight s on the runway😉] and he notices she's yet to wear the jewelry nd stuf [ahem. vakil ko ideas aa rahe he.]
She smiles when he finali smiles back at her,and she dances off to the mirror.

[KP ka imaginatn has really taken off now; do i hav 2 tel u guys she's lukin amazing😆]
D : Naina.
She chooses her bangles. " Ha daksh?"
D : Mera jane ka man nahi kar raha...
N [laughs] : Par mera to hai. Mujhe nai le jaoge?
Dakshu phas gaya. Poor darling, ab naina ko na to nahi keh sakta na..par ha, mana sakta he😉
He looks put down, all puppy face, and naina takes pity on him.
N : Daksh, muje ye pehnake doge?
He looks up; she's holding up a necklace, and he willingly takes it from her.
N : Kya hua...?
D : Aj sunday hai [fastens the clasp ]
N : Ha, aur?
He looks up. "Hafte me ek hi sunday milta hai, naina," he says plaintively.
N : [laughs] To sara din waha thodi rahenge. Wapis ghar hi to aa rahe he na.

Daksh doesnt reply; she looks up,and their eyes meet...

For a moment, time ceases to exist. Nothing else matters, na necklace, na kisi ki shadi,and its just the two of them...She's lost in his eyes, and he's lost in hers...
[peopl, i'm tempted 2 writ another poem : "dance of hearts"😍]

He gives this half smile and places his hands on her shoulders.
N : [sotly] Kya soch rahe ho...
D : [rests his chin on her shoulder] Yahi...ki meri naina aj kitni pyaari lag rahi he...
She closes her eyes and leans into him. "Roz kya lagti hu..."
He laughs and puts his arms around her. "Aj pata nahi kya hai..."
He closes his eyes too, and ek aur choti si freeze frame moment...
D : Naina...
N : Bolo.
D : Jana zaruri he...?
N : Daksh...
D : hmm. [now he's hoping, hoping, hoping😍...]
N : [slowly] Jana zaruri hai.
Kaboom. Vakil ki flight crash landed.
He releases her. "Pata tha tum yahi kahogi..."
She laughs and takes up the bangles.
D : [takes them from her] Lao, mujhe do...
He takes a few together and puts them on her. Kahi to chubha; he felt her wince, and looks up. She smiles; its okay.
D : Naina, hum ek-do ghante late nahi ja sakte?
N : [laughs again] KP, late jana rude hota he.
D : [takes the next one up] Bilkul bhi nahi?
N : Nahi. Tum kya kar rahe ho? [he's slipping them onto her wrist one by one, with the care and precision f a cardiac surgeon]
D : Tumhe lagi thi.
Naina smiles. "Nahi."
Bangles done with, he straightens and helps her up.
D : Theek he, do minute to tum mujhe de sakti ho.
N [considers] : ha...
D [pulls her closer] : panch?
She nods, smiling.
D : [softly, in her ear] : Das...
N : Kp...
D : Ha keh do na...
N : Kyu vakil saheb, agar me ise bhi ha keh du, to phir kaha tak jaoge...
D : Pehle ha to keh do...
She laughs and hugs him. "Sochne do. Do ghante to bilkul nahi, Bahot rude lagega."
D : Ha to me pehle se KP hu...kya farak padta hai.😆
She laughs again, and bats his hands off.
D : Naina.
N [goes to the dresser to check her make up] : Ho gaye tumhare do minute poore.
D : Acha?
Their eyes clash in the mirror, he smiles, she smiles; gues kar lo, i kno u guys kno ki wat hapns nxt...

yep, it ends in our al-time-fav chase, and dakshu gettin his five-minutes worth of promisd time [describ nahi karungi, sry😆] nd Naina having to correct certain elements f her make up...and kisi ke gal pe kuch lagi he😆😆😆...

i kno dis one's thoda diff, hop u guys had fun😊.

loads f smil😊s,

aish

ps : is bar idea drought serious hai, plus i'v a touch f flu😔...so nxt one may take more tim dan usual.tak car, peopl😊luv 2 all...

lucky, misty, R & S...

helo my darlins🤗...me bak wit andr one😆..post my sneeze attacks, this may nt b d best one yet, me abhi se keh deti hu😛😊...

Naina plants another one on his forehead [do do gud-morning kisses😍] and gets up from his side; he holds her back; "Naina."
N : [smiles] Gud morning, Daksh.
He opens his eyes thoda sa, sees its still daybreak.
"Sunday he, naina," he croaks out. "Subha hui nahi he..."
N : Tumse kisne kaha...
He opens his eyes with some more effort and looks at her.
D : Tum itni jaldi kyu uth gayi...
[btw, she's jus outa shower wit damp hair n all nd s lukin cho chweet, but rite nw vakil saheb can only see his naina ke naina; stil fuzzy frm slp😛]
N : Me uth bhi gayi, aur naha bhi liya. Tumhara kab uthne ka irada he?
"Abhi nahi..." He tries to tug her down,decides its too much effort and settles for her hand, and goes right back to sleep.
She smiles, removes her hand gently after he's out and goes.

Ab to daybreak ho hi gaya, and eyes still closed, dakshu puts out his hand- No naina.
He sits up, vaguely remembers her trying to wake him, and then he notices a new photo frame on the bedside tabl. [of cours its their pic, million watt smiles on both thier faces...my cuties😊]
There s a letter beneath it, he takes it up.

Ab ye mat kehna ki subhe ko uthke mujhe nahi dekha...

He smiles and heads for the washroom. Brush nikala, he looks up and lo, next msg on the mirror : Kp pls jaldi ready ho jao, late ho jaoge...
"Ye naina kaha jane ki bat kar rahi he subhe subhe...?"
He thinks, thinks all his way through his shower nd comes out thinking stil,wondering where he'd promised to take her, but then he knows he wouldnt forget anythin related to her...
There's a new shirt laid out for him on the bed now [pick ur fav color, guys...thought white, but whit's thoda sa cliched😉] He takes it, and decides to go ask her what's up...

So he goes downstairs, it's ladysville in the kitchen but he cant hear her voice among those...Baba who's at the table with his paper and coffee, tells him she's in the kitchen probably, and he goes in anyway.lekin Naina nahi he.
D : Ayi, Naina kaha he...?
A : Beta wo terrace pe hogi...

Terrace pe again naina nahi hai, its kaki, who tells him ki she jus went downstairs...
Now he's in semi KP mode, and goes down muttering, as to why she's makin him run around so much...Beech me he turns around- nope, not her. So he goes back to their room.

Naina the gr8 is shadowing him meanwhil, trying hard not to laugh...

He shakes his head, deciding to go check her office [says it loudly, too, u kno y😛], and she ducks behind the pillar.
He walks out, she sneaks in, and is about to sneak out again, when vakil saheb comes out from behind the very same pillar, and she's back in the room again.[um, nd KP closes the door too; ideas, nyone😛]
N [breathless] : Hi !
D : [pakad-liya expresn] Hi.
N : Tum ready ho na. Chale?
D [frowning] : Kaha?
N :[brilliant smile] Mandir. Darwaza kyu band kiya? Chalo na, waise bhi late he-
D [holds her there] : Pehle batao mujhe itna kyu bhagaya.
N : [she smiles] Shirt achi hai? [corrects his alredi correct collar]
D : ha, humesha ki tarah [stil tryin 2 figur t out; so r u, i kno😆]
N : Photo frame?
D [he nods] : Ha. Kya hai ye sab?
N : Tumhe kya lagta hai?
D : [frowning some more] Mera birthday to aj nahi he...
N : [laughs] Acha to kab he? Kal?
D : Naina.
N : [pyaar se] Hath chodo na daksh...
He losens his grip par chodta nahi hai.
D : Nahi. Vada kiya tha tumse ki nahi chodunga...
N : Acha theek he, mat chodo. Par mujhe mandir to jana hi hai. Chale?
D : [looks over her shoulder] Wo kya hai?
yep, table pe there is a small box, wrapped nd ready...
N : [laughs] Kuch nahi, tumhara birthday kal he na, gift bhi kal khol dena...
Ayi calls for Naina, and she moves to the door. "Tum khol ke dekh lo Daksh, me abhi ati hu..."
He doesnt let go.
D : Naina.
She turns back, smiles.
D [pulls her close] : Mera birthday aj hai.
N [smiles some more] : Tum na KP, genius ho.
D : Aur sabse achi gift tum mujhe bahot pehle de chuki ho...[head-butt; mega cute, i kno😛] Tumhara pyaar...
She hugs him, but then Ayi calls her again.
N : Daksh, Ayi bula rahi he, me dekh ke ati hu...
D : Nahi. Aise nahi jane dunga.
She smiles, kisses him on the cheek.
He shakes his head, smiling. So she kisses him on his other cheek too.
N : [softly] Ab jane do.
D : Nahi, meri bari...[eyes closed, peopl...privacy, privacy😆😆]
She pulls back😳, smiling. "Gadi nikal do, me abhi ati hu."
He nods and goes to get his gift. It's a watch, with a single needle,the date the only thing displayed on the dial.
"Naina.." he calls out to her, half amused.
"Ati hu..." she shouts back from the kitchen.
He smiles, and goes to get the car.

ok, it may not b cute al d way, but wanted 2 put t 2getr b4 CVs dash our hopes again sumhow [was in a rush cos f d ME-wala axe]...if u guys think its half baked, i'l edit t 4 y'all...

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Wow aish...cute..super cute..as usual👏...very simple 😍, damn sweet and damn damn cute😛, waise kya kal daksh ka b'day hai?(lol)😆

aur mein daksh ko black mein dekhna chahthi hoon...😉 and no need of editing at all its rocking dear...😉