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Posted: 14 years ago
hi,i am new to the forum. let me try one ff.
Naina is writing something in a piece of paper and she puts in a small jewel box and places on daksh's reading table. she goes off then.Daksh after coming back from office goes to his room. He notices the box.
Daksh:yeh kya hai?he opens and reads it. He smiles at it and then with a fake anger shouts
Naina ","Naina".kahan ho tum?
Naina kitchen mei hai. she rushes to daksh's room
Daksh : yeh kya hai naina? yeh tum kya likye ho?
Naina: yeh to chitti hai jo mei ne marathi me liki hai
Daksh:yeh marathi hai?arre mei tho marathi hi bhol javunga isse pad kar.he starts teasing her.Tum kab marathi seeki?
Naina :Aaj kal mei tho marathi serials hi dekh rahi hun. Aur yeh book bhi tho le ayi hun.Shows the book "how to learn marathi in 30 days".
Daksh: Achha ab mei samja.he reads every lines of the letter aloud and says bilkul backwaas liki ho
Naina comes closer to daksh , hold his hands and with tears in her eyes says"Mere liki galat ho sakthi hai lekin mere soch nahi.
Mei tumse bahut pyar karti hun . she says the marathi translation for that.
mei tumahare bina nahi jee sakthi.(marathi translation)
Tum hi mera sab kuch ho.(marathi)
Mei tumhare liye kuch be karungi.(,,)
Daksh: Arre tum tho bura man gaye.mei tho mazak kar raha tha.I am sorry. mujhe maaf kar do.Mujhe to bohut achha laga tumhare letter dekhe kar. yeh tumhari pehli love letter hai, mei issi frame kar ke rakunga.Aise aur likna.He wipes off her tears. Maine tume hurt kiya iske liye tum jo saja doge mei karunga.
Naina: Me jo kahungi tum karoge?
Daksh: han karunga.
Naina: Sure?
Daksh: han sure
Naina comes closer to daksh, turns her face,showing her right cheek and with a naughty smile
"kuch karo na".
Aab kya hoga you can imagine.
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Sitakshi welcome to the forum... 😊
very nice & simple scene... keep writing more...

@ Neetu & Lucky
agreed with Storyteller the forum will be quite for sometime...
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Posted: 14 years ago
@sitakshi

Hey, welcome to the forum.Hope u will have nice time here and coming to ur FF ,very good👏 and ur concept of naina learning marathi is refreshing..enjoyed reading it.😃.keep posting more




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Posted: 14 years ago
Sitakshi, welcome to the forum and great concept yaar, very realistic.
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Posted: 14 years ago
great lucky and sitakshi..:).lucky...u r too good in romatic scnes..love u for the scnes...dey r awesome..keep writing ..and sitakshi...ur idea is soooc ute...seriously..i thnk this can be shown in ssbn too...since naina sumtimes suffer from understanding marathi language...so many ffs have been written...i m nt really getting time to read dem..shit..but i m sure dey wud be amazing ...and i will try to finish all of dem... soon...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: niksidfan

great lucky and sitakshi..:).lucky...u r too good in romatic scnes..love u for the scnes...dey r awesome..keep writing ..and sitakshi...ur idea is soooc ute...seriously..i thnk this can be shown in ssbn too...since naina sumtimes suffer from understanding marathi language...so many ffs have been written...i m nt really getting time to read dem..shit..but i m sure dey wud be amazing ...and i will try to finish all of dem... soon...😊


@niksidfan

Thanks yaar

And u disappeared just like that.After many days I am seeing ur post.Where were u?
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Posted: 14 years ago
😉Hey guys

I manged to take out time and write this.Hope u will like it.Will miss forum and U all for few days, but will be back...Have fun till then

Contd...

Honeymoon trip continution...

Daksh is waiting for naina
Daksh; naina jaldi karo..kitna waqt laga rahi ho?
Naina ; aa rahi hoo baba..saying this she comes out in bath robe with damp hair

Aur daksh tho gaya kaam se.😆.he is stunned looking at his beautiful betterhalf and he keeps staringat her..Naina notices this but doesnt say anything..she takes her suitcase and says

Naina; daksh kya pehnu? saree ya salwar?
Daksh comes into this world and looks at naina and says " Tum par tho sab acha lagata hai...😉
Naina; tumse poochna meri galti hain.saying this she takes a saree and goes into other room and gets changed and starts getting ready aur woh apna baal banarahi hain

Daksh;ufff ye ladikiyan bhi na kitna dher lagate hain tayar hone mein aur ye make up.😆..naina jaldi karona..bahut bhook lag raha hain
Naina gives a smile and says; sab tumhari galti hain...tum nee mujhe utaya nahi..tho iss ki sazaa to milegi
Daksh; acha baba..galti hogayi..ayinda aisa nahi hoga..next he takes a moment and says mere paas ek idea hai taaki tum kabhi late nahi utoge😉
Naina; acha..kya(with interest)(turns towards daksh).

Daksh starts moving slowly toward naina nand , looks into her eyes and says...
Daksh; yahi ki jab tak hum apne honeymoon pe he mein tumhe bilkul sone nahi doonga..tho prblem solved😳😉

Naina pushes him and says
Naina; hmmm very smart..lekin shayad tum bhool gaye ki mujhe sone nahi doge tho tum bhi nahi so sakte..sochlo😆( u can imagine how would naina say this dialogue in her style)
Daksh sits on the bed, looks at naina nad says... Badi sochnewali baat hain mem saab..baaki logom ka mujhe pata nahi lekin mein apne honeymoon par sone ke liye nahi aaya hoon.tumhari tarah...samjhi mrs patwardan😉
Naina as usaul thoda sharmake😳; haa haa samajgayi., mr daksh patwardan...saying this she turns towards mirrior aur Naina kuch chain pehne ki.koshis kar rahi hey lekin usse thoda muskil ho rahi hey
phir Daksh comes puts hand on chain and says; main kardeta hoo 😳

Naina leaves the chain to daksh.He pushes naina's hair forward and helps her, naina turns towards daksh and they both share a cozy moment☺️
Clock pe ghanti bajta hain..they both look at clock ,
Naina; daksh, chale..lekin kaha?😲
.Daksh puts hand on naina's shoulder..pehle kuch kahalete hain aur baad mein tum mujhe darjeeling dikkhado..😛
Naina nods her head with smile and dakshna are out of their room

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Take care guys..😛 bye for now😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m


@niksidfan

Thanks yaar

And u disappeared just like that.After many days I am seeing ur post.Where were u?

lucky sorry yaar...i m very busy dese days...due to some official purposes and also since i m studying also..i had to complete my assignment...but...lucky..thnk u yaar...the ffs are tooo good..n sooo very romantic..iska romanticism ka level reduce mat karna yaar...i just love reading dem...i will just finish all the previous one i missed in one go some time soon ...😊 pata hain i have left the show...its just soo boring...now i will spend my off time reading this beautifull ffs...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
😉

Originally posted by: lucky.m

😉Hey guys

I manged to take out time and write this.Hope u will like it.Will miss forum and U all for few days, but will be back...Have fun till then

Contd...

Honeymoon trip continution...

Daksh is waiting for naina
Daksh; naina jaldi karo..kitna waqt laga rahi ho?
Naina ; aa rahi hoo baba..saying this she comes out in bath robe with damp hair
i thnk only towel wud be great na...heheh...sorry sorry..😛☺️

Aur daksh tho gaya kaam se.😆.he is stunned looking at his beautiful betterhalf and he keeps staringat her..Naina notices this but doesnt say anything..she takes her suitcase and says

Naina; daksh kya pehnu? saree ya salwar?
Daksh comes into this world and looks at naina and says " Tum par tho sab acha lagata hai...😉
Naina; tumse poochna meri galti hain.saying this she takes a saree and goes into other room and gets changed and starts getting ready aur woh apna baal banarahi hain

Daksh;ufff ye ladikiyan bhi na kitna dher lagate hain tayar hone mein aur ye make up.😆..naina jaldi karona..bahut bhook lag raha hain
Naina gives a smile and says; sab tumhari galti hain...tum nee mujhe utaya nahi..tho iss ki sazaa to milegi
Daksh; acha baba..galti hogayi..ayinda aisa nahi hoga..next he takes a moment and says mere paas ek idea hai taaki tum kabhi late nahi utoge😉
Naina; acha..kya(with interest)(turns towards daksh).

Daksh starts moving slowly toward naina nand , looks into her eyes and says...
Daksh; yahi ki jab tak hum apne honeymoon pe he mein tumhe bilkul sone nahi doonga..tho prblem solved😳😉
toh kya karega...daksh shud drink boost den...he require energy na😉

Naina pushes him and says
Naina; hmmm very smart..lekin shayad tum bhool gaye ki mujhe sone nahi doge tho tum bhi nahi so sakte..sochlo😆( u can imagine how would naina say this dialogue in her style)
Daksh sits on the bed, looks at naina nad says... Badi sochnewali baat hain mem saab..baaki logom ka mujhe pata nahi lekin mein apne honeymoon par sone ke liye nahi aaya hoon.tumhari tarah...samjhi mrs patwardan😉
Naina as usaul thoda sharmake😳; haa haa samajgayi., mr daksh patwardan...saying this she turns towards mirrior aur Naina kuch chain pehne ki.koshis kar rahi hey lekin usse thoda muskil ho rahi hey
phir Daksh comes puts hand on chain and says; main kardeta hoo 😳

Naina leaves the chain to daksh.He pushes naina's hair forward and helps her, naina turns towards daksh and they both share a cozy moment☺️
Clock pe ghanti bajta hain..they both look at clock ,
Naina; daksh, chale..lekin kaha?😲
.Daksh puts hand on naina's shoulder..pehle kuch kahalete hain aur baad mein tum mujhe darjeeling dikkhado..😛
Naina nods her head with smile and dakshna are out of their room

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Take care guys..😛 bye for now😉

lucky...again a perfect honeymoon couple wala scene⭐️ ...daksh is soo romantic...i m sure..noone exept naina can ever imagine dat daksh is like dis...aur woh apni biwi ko itna paresan karta hoga😊 and pls dont kill me for ultra vulgar cooments..kabhi kabhi chalta hain😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

i was thinking of moving my old FF's here, is it a gud idea you think.

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