Dakshna FF(Fan fiction) - Page 20

LOL at main tumhe sone nahi doonga, great FF as usual, had any ideas about photo gift

Frends i m writing for first time FF so pls kuch galat likh du to sorry.

@Lucky hai hai 😳 kya sahi dialogues hai dakshu ke 😳 😉 ... And him calling Naina Mrs Patwardhan bahut accha lagta hai... Jate jate u gave a one more wonderful scene... Thanks yaar...

@ storyteller.. Which other ff are u saying... Trfed them over here... Accha Hoga Sab ek Saat honge to padne mein majja aayega...
Aur who photo ka u were saying can I suggest something what if instead of photo frame Naina gifts him an album where she has collection of all their memories starting their first meeting... Like at shriti's marriage, then at PH holi day, gudi padwa function, Aai baba anniversary, her office opening ceremony, she had al those photos remember... if she makes an album and then gifts it to him with empty spaces so that they can keep adding more photos to the album everytime... What say... 😛

@ muniras great scene... Like the birthday concept... Dakshu ka cake khilaneka idea too romantic yaar.. 😳 Kaash aaisa kuch ho par kuch nahi Hoga atleast imagine karne main koi burai nahi hai 😉
Aur Naina ko green net saree with red border kaise lagega?... What say?...
It doesn't look like ur first attempt... Keep writing more... Accha lagta hai... 😊

Thanks. and saree which u mentioned will look very pretty and beautiful on naina.

Purple color saree...

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

@Lucky hai hai 😳 kya sahi dialogues hai dakshu ke 😳 😉 ... And him calling Naina Mrs Patwardhan bahut accha lagta hai... Jate jate u gave a one more wonderful scene... Thanks yaar...

@ storyteller.. Which other ff are u saying... Trfed them over here... Accha Hoga Sab ek Saat honge to padne mein majja aayega...
Aur who photo ka u were saying can I suggest something what if instead of photo frame Naina gifts him an album where she has collection of all their memories starting their first meeting... Like at shriti's marriage, then at PH holi day, gudi padwa function, Aai baba anniversary, her office opening ceremony, she had al those photos remember... if she makes an album and then gifts it to him with empty spaces so that they can keep adding more photos to the album everytime... What say... 😛

I was thinking asimilar thing, I was thinking digital photoframe or old-style projection (she could add words), are u familiar with it, it shows a continous slideshow of whatever pics you put on it. But i thought they don't have a lot of pictures so didn't put the idea down.

😊😊Hola peopl...its my first FF...and am soo used to hinglish nd sms typos, pls excus the imperfect hindi.. Cheerios !😆

[Dakshna after marriage]
It has been a week or so, and Daksh has not been able to spend time with Naina. Either he comes home too late, or she is too tired and they dont get much time together even at night. So he hatches up a plan.

Part 1: He comes home for lunch (does he do that normally,peopl? i'm makin it unusual nyway😉). Ayi is surprised, he tells her he needs something, some file, and goes up to his room.

[In their room]
N : Kya hua Daksh?
D : Wo meri file nahi mil rahi thi to..[looks sheepish]
N : Kaun si file?
D : Umm..wo blue wali jo kal rat ko me le aya tha..
She looks at his table, exasperated. "Tum bhi na Daksh.." she finds it for him and hands it over, then starts setting the table right [it's a mess]
D : Naina..
N : Ha bolo daksh..
D : Naina wo..
She gives him a brief glance and goes back to tidying his things. "Bolo na."
Daksh in KP mode : Tumhe kam se fursat mile tab na.
She turns to him : Acha KP saheb ab me sun rahi hu, boliye [gives an amused smile]
D : Naina mujhe do din ke liye Lonavla jana he-
She cuts in between : Do din ke liye? Kyu..
D : Ab muje bolne dogi ki nahi?
N : [smiles] Sorry. Bolo..
D : Aj sham ko jana he, kal tak kam shayad ho jayega.
Naina looks a little put down, but she covers it up quickly with a smile. "Okay to pack karna he? Bas khana ban hi raha he, uske bad me kar deti hu-"
Daksh is slightly annoyed now.
D : Baki bolu ki nahi?
She nods.
D : Tum chalogi?
N : Kya? Me aise kaise chale au..Yaha kitna kam pada he..Tum vaise bhi kam par jaoge aur me-
[Ayi calls Naina once.]
N : Daksh, ayi bula rahi he, me abhi ati hu..
She moves towards the door, and he promptly pulls her back to him [u guys can imagin na😉]
D : Naina tum kaha bhagti rahti ho..Me chahta hu ki tum mere sath chalo.
N : Daksh tum-
D : [very seriously] Nahi Naina. [Looks into her eyes] Tumse door rehne ki adat nahi dalni he mujhe.
N [softly] : Daksh..
He doesnt say anything for a moment.
Naina smiles at him finally. "Acha KP, ab emotional blackmail mat karo. Me aungi. Bas ayi se kehne do-
Daksh gives his cute sa smile and pulls her closer for a kiss😳...And as usual dono ek doosre ke ankho me kho jate he...😍
And Ayi calls her once more.
Naina is jolted back to the present. "Ayi! " she tugs free of him and runs off.Daksh stands there, staring after her with a rueful smile...

Part 2 coming up soon.. 😊

[ps : guys pls bata do if u do feel lik rdng dakshu's pln ka part2 nd i'l typ t up..i'm nt sure ki u guys lik dis one r nt na dats y...]

Originally posted by: sweetaish

😊😊Hola peopl...its my first FF...and am soo used to hinglish nd sms typos, pls excus the imperfect hindi.. Cheerios !😆

[Dakshna after marriage]
It has been a week or so, and Daksh has not been able to spend time with Naina. Either he comes home too late, or she is too tired and they dont get much time together even at night. So he hatches up a plan.

Part 1: He comes home for lunch (does he do that normally,peopl? i'm makin it unusual nyway😉). Ayi is surprised, he tells her he needs something, some file, and goes up to his room.

Naina is helping Ayi in the kitchen.
[Daksh calls out to her from his room.]
Ayi : Naina beta, Chintu bula raha he, zara dekh ke ao kya he..
Naina : Ji Ayi.

[In their room]
N : Kya hua Daksh?
D : Wo meri file nahi mil rahi thi to..[looks sheepish]
N : Kaun si file?
D : Umm..wo blue wali jo kal rat ko me le aya tha..
She looks at his table, exasperated. "Tum bhi na Daksh.." she finds it for him and hands it over, then starts setting the table right [it's a mess]
D : Naina..
N : Ha bolo daksh..
D : Naina wo..
She gives him a brief glance and goes back to tidying his things. "Bolo na."
Daksh in KP mode : Tumhe kam se fursat mile tab na.
She turns to him : Acha KP saheb ab me sun rahi hu, boliye [gives an amused smile]
D : Naina mujhe do din ke liye Lonavla jana he-
She cuts in between : Do din ke liye? Kyu..
D : Ab muje bolne dogi ki nahi?
N : [smiles] Sorry. Bolo..
D : Aj sham ko jana he, kal tak kam shayad ho jayega.
Naina looks a little put down, but she covers it up quickly with a smile. "Okay to pack karna he? Bas khana ban hi raha he, uske bad me kar deti hu-"
Daksh is slightly annoyed now.
D : Baki bolu ki nahi?
She nods.
D : Tum chalogi?
N : Kya? Me aise kaise chale au..Yaha kitna kam pada he..Tum vaise bhi kam par jaoge aur me-
[Ayi calls Naina once.]
N : Daksh, ayi bula rahi he, me abhi ati hu..
She moves towards the door, and he promptly pulls her back to him [u guys can imagin na😉]
D : Naina tum kaha bhagti rahti ho..Me chahta hu ki tum mere sath chalo.
N : Daksh tum-
D : [very seriously] Nahi Naina. [Looks into her eyes] Tumse door rehne ki adat nahi dalni he mujhe.

love this dialogue

N [softly] : Daksh..
He doesnt say anything for a moment.
Naina smiles at him finally. "Acha KP, ab emotional blackmail mat karo. Me aungi. Bas ayi se kehne do-
Daksh gives his cute sa smile and pulls her closer for a kiss😳...And as usual dono ek doosre ke ankho me kho jate he...😍
And Ayi calls her once more.
Naina is jolted back to the present. "Ayi! " she tugs free of him and runs off.Daksh stands there, staring after her with a rueful smile...

Part 2 coming up soon.. 😊

[ps : guys pls bata do if u do feel lik rdng dakshu's pln ka part2 nd i'l typ t up..i'm nt sure ki u guys lik dis one r nt na dats y...]

gr8 FF, I eagerly want to know what Daksh's plans are,