Dakshna FF(Fan fiction) - Page 18

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

One more from me...

Its morning and Naina gets coffee for Daksh in his room & finds the room in complete mess. She hears shower noise and concludes Daksh is using shower so she goes ahead and start cleaning his room before he comes out.

N : ye KP bhi na kitna sab mess karke rakha hai ek chis apne jage pe nahi hai

She keeps all his files & folders properly in their place, adjust the bed'. Then takes out his clothes and keeps them on bed, his wallet, handky, watch besides the clothes'

Daksh comes out of washroom & notices naina busy doing all the work'

D: naina tum kab aayee'

N: tum jab shower le rahe the'aur ye kya hai KP kaise halat ki hi kamre ki'

D : arre wah'. Tumne to sara kamra ek dam saaf kar diya' aur waise bhi tum jo ho na sab thik karne' tumne hi kaha tha na tumhe mera kaam karna accha lagta hai, tumhara hi to haat hai mujhe ittna begadne main'

N: accha akkdu ye baat hai to abhi se ye sab nahi chalega' tumhare liye coffee laee hoon' chalo tumhe office ke liye late nahi ho raha'

Daksh comes close to naina and his arms around naina's waist'. Both get lost in each others eyes'

D: (in soft voice) nahi office jane ka jara bhi man nahi kar raha hai'

N: kyu? Kya hua tumhari tabyet to thik hai na'.

With concern she touchs his forehead and then neck to check whether he has temperature or not'.

N: sab to thik hai to phir aaj kya hua'.

D: bas yuhi nahi jana chahata tumhare saat rahena chahata hoon'. Naina smiles silently and reads daksh mind what he his upto'. But does not show it to him'. & try's to change the topic

N: ye accha bahana hai office nahi jane ka'. Chalo coffee pilo nahi to cold coffee pene padegi' & laughs..

Daksh doesn't like but still gets ready & while having the coffee an idea strikes his mind and he breaks the button of his shirt intentionally so that he can tell naina to fix it'.

D: Naina, ye shirt ka button ek missing hai ab kya karu dekho ye bhi ek ishara hai mujhe office mein nahi jane ka'.

N: accha KP kitne bahane banane lage ho tum uff' ruko abhi thik karti hoon'

She gets a needle & tread and comes to stitch the button'

Daksh puts his arms around Naina's waist and while she is fixing his shirt button Daksh pulls her very close to him & with a mild smile is admiring her very sweetly'. Naina feels a bit shy' she is trying to avoid eye contact but can't stop admiring him back'.

N: Daksh ye kya kar rahe ho tum' aaj kal tum bahut besaram hote ja rahe ho'. Koi aajayega'.

D: aane do main kissi se nahi darta' tumse pyaar karta hoon itna to haaq hai na mera'.

D: (slowly moves his fingers thru Naina's Hair and softly in her ears says) Tumhe baata nahi sakta ki main tumse kitna pyaar karta hu... jab bhi aakhane band karta hu to tumhe dekhata hu... jab aakhane kholta hu to tumhe hi doondta hu... meri Naina sirf aur sirf meri Naina...

She mischievously hurts Daksh with the needle so that he can leave her '.

He loses the grip and moves back "Ouch" Naina ye kya kiya dard hota hai'. Places his hand where the needle hurt him (doing all nautanki to scared Naina)

N: sorry sorry Daksh' zoor se laga kya dekhu to kahan '. She removes his hand kisses where he got hurt'.

D : abhi bhi dard ho raha hai' she gives one more kiss

D : abhi thik hai par yahan bhi dard ho raha hai (pointing finger on left cheek)

Naina puts her arms one by one slowly around Daksh, comes very close to him, leans on her toe and kisses him on his left cheek then on right cheek' aur ek doosre ke aakhon mein kho jate hai'.

Aai calls Chintu Naina Nasta ready hai, aajao'..

Both wake up from the moment, hug each other and go downstairs for Breakfast'.

Originally posted by: lucky.m

A romantic scene after their marriage😳

Daksh and naina got married and are on their honeymoon trip in darjeeling.

Morning after their first night

Daksh is on his bed asleep with smile on his face.Daksh wakes up but still with closed eyes , he spreads one of his arms on bed lazily saying " naina",but he doesnt find naina besides him.He opens his eyes sits on the bed and looks for naina.He finds her standing in balcony .He puts on his clothes, and goes to the balcony

Naina(in night gown) is lost in her thoughts, looking at the beautiful mountains,daksh comes and wraps her with his shawl(both are in same shawl) and hugs her from back and gives light kiss on her cheek and naina also cuddles in his arms

Naina gives a smile

Daksh; goodmorning jaan😛

Naina;gud morning, itni jaldi utt gaye?Tum itne ache neend mein the ki mujhe laga ki tum late utoge😛

Daksh; tum jo mere paas nahi ho..iss liye😆, aur yaha kya kar rahe ho? itni thand mein??

Naina; bas aisi hi daksh.. aur kisne kaha mujhe thand lagaraha hai,pehle thoda lagraha tha ab tun aagaye ho..bilkul nahi lagta..waha dekho kitna acha nazara hein aur kitna khoobsurat dikhraha hain yaha se..daksh hum waha jayenge😃

Daksh looks at mountains and says' haan khoobusurat hain and looks at naina and says ,lekin tumse jyada nahi😉

Naina turns towards him , gives a smile and says ; acha..

Daksh; haan..

Naina; chalo daksh, tayar hokar bahar chalte hain.mujhe bahut saare places dikhana hain tumhe ,chalona...

Saying this she starts going inside, but daksh pulls her back ,nice slow romantic muisc , an intense eye lock

Daksh; Jaana jaroori hai kya??😲

Naina ; kyu, din bar yahi rahoge kya,yaha kya karoge?😲

Daksh;(with naughty look)..buat kuch kar sakte hain..tum kaho tho dikhadu😉

Naina understand his intentions and blushes☺️ ,daksh comes little closer to her and is about to kiss her, she pushes him and runs away from there into room and daksh follows her.Daksh tries to catch her and naina keeps running from him.Atlast daksh gets hold of her and in this process they both fall on bed, daksh on naina, intense eye lock..daksh comes closer to her and scene fades...😊.

Originally posted by: lucky.m

@neetu, dakshna fan, storyteller ssbn ,and all others who responded..thanks yaar..

Guys..I am out of town next week and I will just be able read from mobile but can't respond,so for this week this is last fiction part(may be I can come up with one more tommorow, not sure

Heres the part

❤️Dakshna honey moon part,another version of the same day,❤️

Early morning after first night

Scene opens up with daksh and naina on bed,naina cuddled in arms of daksh , both turned side wards😳

Daksh wakes up, opens up his eyes. He looks at naina with all that pyar in his eyes, kisses her on her fore head .Naina is sleeping peacefully,so he gets up ,takes bath and comes back and sees naina is still asleep.He gives a cute smile looking at her.He gets on bed, goes near naina and whispers in her ear

Daksh; naina..good morning

Naina wakes up with a smile and truns towardsdaksh and says, gud morning and then opens her eyes and sees daksh and says love u

Daksh kisses her on cheek and says luv u too

Daksh; Agar aap ka neend khatam hogaya tho..kahi bahar chale

Naina still lazyily asks time kya hua and daksh shows her the clock.Naina suddenly gets up in shock

Naina; 10.30 looks at daksh (lil angry);.itna dher hogaya, mujhe pata hi nahi chala,tume mujhe utaya kyu nahi?😡

Daksh; tum sote hue itni cute lagrahiti ki utane ka mann nahi tha.issliye, lekin mujhe kya pata ki tumhe sona itna pasand hai 😛

Naina; kya daksh utana chahiyatha..dekho tum tayar bhi hogaye aur mein?

as soon as iread this line, i knew what you were gna make daksh say. Hilarious

Daksh; ab thi tak mein ready kaha hoon sirf nahaliya.(with naughty look in his eyes) haan.agar tumhe boora lag raha hein ki tumhe akela nahana padega mein company desaktha hoon😆 😳😉

Naina ; besharam kp..☺️.(shy) saying this and then she gets up and is about to go to wash room

Daksh says; sochlo..Kp hamesha aisa offer nahi deta..acha mauka hai..😆

Naina; Aap ki offer ke liye bahut shukriya..lekin abhi mood nahi hain vakeel saab😳

Saying this she goes in, meanwhile daksu gets ready and keeps waiting for naina

CONTD...