**Rabir FF: True Love 2 - DISCONTINUED - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nividances

Thread 2? I never imagined it would happen. This story was originally supposed to end in 10-12 parts but now I've written 55 and I still don't have a specific ending in mind.

Thank you to everyone who has read this story, the silent readers as well, and showered it with likes and comments.

A special shout out to the friends I have made, the amazing girls that comment on nearly every single part without fail. If it wasn't for you guys encouraging me, I don't think I would have made it this far.

Kelly, Nurit, Bennu, Sharlene, Poonam, Selina. 🤗

You have all made this journey more beautiful and well worth the effort. 😊


Congratulation dear. It all your best word we just inspire you to keep going.
I always enjoy your story. it so funny when you start write story and you don't find the end and you have lots of parts. remind me my self when I write story. this the effect of writing when you start you can stop. thanks for your lovely story keep it up 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
before i read the part, i want to say just
congrats for your 2 thread🥳

it was and still is a pleasure to read about this amazing ff, 👏
there was not a single part, where it was just boring..you have wrote it soo well,
you make me fall in love, with this love from rachna & kt...
and now im excited to read about the next part,


congrats once again, hope to see more threads of this story

you dont have to thank us, we should thank you for this ff🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow its really amazing dear , the scene between kabir and sneeha was so emotional that it nearly made me cry , keep up this good work .Thanks for pm .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You always know how to give us feel like we in the story. What I like in your story is that you written it in simple language and with lots of detailed that help us to imagine what happens in any part. What I have to say is that you doing good homework lol.
About the part.
Poor Rachna I am happy that she talk with sneha mausi. maybe now that sneha tell her own story to Rachna maybe now Rachna will look on her station in other way. I meet many woman that cant have kids of own but I did see many of that I know that they get one of their own in the end. I hope Rachna will also believe it soon. it really the hard part in woman life.

I like how KT Call Sneha mausi ma so sweet. he finely find what he looking for. the love that ma give to her kids. I am happy for KT.

I also like what he write in the note. he is so in love with her. he like her the way she is this what all woman wishing for. the part she hug the note really touch me and the way she touch the words that was write on the note. amazing part dear
I hope Rachna and KT Will talk with each other because the both need each other now.

Thanks for the lovely part I really love it waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on thread 2 🥳
Will read and comment later
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
awsome nivi. actually i wanted to post comment from a long ago. but i was always late😒 . now i decided that i will comment in each chapter u write in future. i have same opinion that u write great.😛. thanks 4 giving time to it despite of a busy schedule. keep writting.😊. . and congratulation 4 thread 2.🥳
nivi, can we hope 4 rabir romance in the future updates ? i feel sad seeing rachna and kabeer both in this situation😭. hope that they'll clear misunderstanding soon. 😛 you know, when u started giving it on weekends, i started calling it 'weekend serial' . but now it's my almost regular serial. bcoz everyday i wait for it as i used to wait 4 sslk. when i read ur written updates, i feel i'm watching the serial. want to give u a tight hug 4 nice updates🤗. best of luck 4 future updates👍🏼
your fan
ekra.
yeah, i was a silent writer[ in ur language😊] but now i'm not. actually i first read it during my exam. after completing my exam, i logged in this forum only to comment. and as 4 ur writing they r not kind words, they're really true. and i think u r older than me. so, can i call u nivi apu[sister] or friend? plz don't say no
Edited by ekra101 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Congrats for thread 2 for your beautiful creation of RaBir👏
I loved the way Sneha mausi talke about her personal life and showed the clear feelings of Kabir and making understand it to Rachna.

Letter by Kabir was really touchy

Nice Update👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Aarti.1

Hi Nivi!
I typed out responses to each of the chapters in a word document but it was mistakenly deleted this morning when I was cleaning out my hard drive of excess junk. I therefore apologize for not being able to give you my analysis that you had mentioned you liked reading. I have caught up completely and I have to commend you on some chapters that were noteworthy. The analogy to the birds was great, the revelation of the Tripathi family's truth was great, the father-son reconciliation was great, the engagement was great, the fight was tense and appropriate, and lastly, the entire chapter 55 took my breath away with how beautifully it was composed. There are of course more things from each update that I would have loved to write an essay about but I think you get the sense of how much I enjoyed reading the story thus far. You my dear have an amazing talent and I think it has flowered even more beautifully in the last 20 or so chapters that you have written. I am ecstatic that I am all caught up to your updated chapters but I hate that I will now have to wait for you to post each update and I won't just be able to move on as soon as I finish reading. I will certainly be giving you my essay comments so if that entices you to post each update quickly I can happily write you a book. I am waiting to see how you resolve this fight. Also, I don't know if you have planned this or not but will the Garg aunts be making a return at all? Congratulations on the second thread and I wish you lots more success in the future as well. Good luck and keep writing.

Best,
Aarti

@Bold...Told you so Nivi...There has been a definite progression in your writing and now you have an English Major confirming it...not someone who studied Accounting😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Nuritzur


Congratulation dear. It all your best word we just inspire you to keep going.
I always enjoy your story. it so funny when you start write story and you don't find the end and you have lots of parts. remind me my self when I write story. this the effect of writing when you start you can stop. thanks for your lovely story keep it up 🤗


Thank you Nurit for the lovely comment as well as the PM. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: hangok

before i read the part, i want to say just
congrats for your 2 thread🥳

it was and still is a pleasure to read about this amazing ff, 👏
there was not a single part, where it was just boring..you have wrote it soo well,
you make me fall in love, with this love from rachna & kt...
and now im excited to read about the next part,


congrats once again, hope to see more threads of this story

you dont have to thank us, we should thank you for this ff🤗


Thank you Bennu! 😳
@bold: The best compliment you could ever give me! 😃

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