*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1) - Page 80

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Posted: 10 years ago
Catching up at last.
Chapter 43:
Awesome update!
Kabir and absolute gem in this update.
I love that when it came to crunch time, that he chose to go to Rachna; I so love him for this.
His complete understanding of her, even though she never voiced it exactly was so nice to read.
Our poor Rachna, I totally get that she just wants to get to a happy place in her life and that she just wants what they had the potential to be had she not miscarried. But I know Nivi is going to give me a happy ending 😉, so I won't dwell on this for long.
Awesome that they had located their father.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 44:
Having read this all I can say is update soon please!!!!!!
I confess to being at a total loss as to dad's hesitance, what else did they have to discover on their own, that is preventing him from reuniting with his sons?😕
Gayatri is the essence of evil😡
And now she is gathering everyone I guess to reveal everything to them all. I cannot wait to see what you have coming up Nivi.
Really great update.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hailly

nice update, continue soon.
Thanks for pm



Thanks so much! Glad you liked it. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nuritzur

Wow I have 3 Part to read. I read it first then comment about them


Nurit! You're back! Take your time to read...I will be waiting for your comments. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hangok

wowww

owww the beginning i loved it, they are just RABIR they dont need words and you have wrote it just amazing...

and karan, i have to say that i loved it how he spoke to his father,
but too soon came the evil, i have to admit for a moment before she came i thought that karans father would make him understand to not telling anything to kt,
but he called,
soo now im waiting for the entry of RABIR there...
great work


Thanks Bennu! 😳
The Rabir in this story started off as a slightly more mature version of the characters on the show but I think they have deviated quite a bit and developed their own personas as the story moved forward. I, as the author, am in love with the characters of this story and it makes me so happy to see that others are enjoying it too.
Rabir entry into the scene will be the focus of the next update for sure. Hope to post it soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sb1410

Wow amazing RaBir understand each other emotions they are so connected one look, silence speaks volumes. Omg can this Gayatri be more evil. Looking forward to the next update.


@bold: That is such a powerful statement and it is so true. 👏
Thanks for reading and commenting Sharlene. Glad you enjoyed it. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Catching up at last.

Chapter 43:
Awesome update!
Kabir and absolute gem in this update.
I love that when it came to crunch time, that he chose to go to Rachna; I so love him for this.
His complete understanding of her, even though she never voiced it exactly was so nice to read.
Our poor Rachna, I totally get that she just wants to get to a happy place in her life and that she just wants what they had the potential to be had she not miscarried. But I know Nivi is going to give me a happy ending 😉, so I won't dwell on this for long.
Awesome that they had located their father.


Yay you're back and all caught up! 😛
Yes, Kabir is a total sweetheart. In my mind, Rabir have a deep connection to each other and I thought that this situation was just perfect to display that. Glad you found it noteworthy as well.
Somewhere in the back of Rachna's mind, the insecurity of the miscarriage is always going to be present. In a way, it was a major catalyst to the Rabir separation and a lot of the confusion/chaos that occurred after that. The happy ending will definitely come; I will not disappoint you on that front.
Glad you enjoyed it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Chapter 44:

Having read this all I can say is update soon please!!!!!!
I confess to being at a total loss as to dad's hesitance, what else did they have to discover on their own, that is preventing him from reuniting with his sons?😕
Gayatri is the essence of evil😡
And now she is gathering everyone I guess to reveal everything to them all. I cannot wait to see what you have coming up Nivi.
Really great update.


I will try my best to update asap.
The dad's hesitance has its own reason and back story...to be revealed in the near future. 😉
Thanks for the comments Kelly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Here I am for give my comments about the Chapters
Chapter 42
I was know that same thing bad going to happened. from the moment that Rachna arrive to KT House before their marriage I was know it can make problem because Indian and every people say that the bride and the groom not allow to meet before the marriage.
The true about Rachna And KT secret marriage just add more fire to the Bonfire.
Hope Kt will set every thing right.

Chapter 43
Poor Rachna every thing happened in one time give her lots nervous. She just asking for a good life with her lover. I like the way KT Worry more about rachna and ready to give karan to find they father alone. but in the same time it confused me but I think you did it as for same reason.
The meeting of karan with his father was so lovely and sweet father and son meeting after so many times. but it feel like he hiding same thing from them and not ready to share at with them.
Poor Rachna she worry about so many thing. it sound like she little confused.
Btw Congrats about reaching 100 pages :)

Chapter 44
Dear Gayatri I didn't missing you at all.
I like how KT understand rachna with out that she tell him this how real love is. He so right about what he say what ever they pass if they have each other they can win every thing together.
I hate when I Right about Gayatri. I was right she did try to kill their father and he fake his death and stay away from his sons but still keeping an eye on them.
Like I say they is a reason that you make KT To be with rachna then all this was diffident.
I just worry what Gayatri will plan to them now...

Thanks for the lovely Updates dear
and thanks for PM Me I just was in Trip this weekend they way I replay now. any way waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nuritzur

Here I am for give my comments about the Chapters

Chapter 42
I was know that same thing bad going to happened. from the moment that Rachna arrive to KT House before their marriage I was know it can make problem because Indian and every people say that the bride and the groom not allow to meet before the marriage.
The true about Rachna And KT secret marriage just add more fire to the Bonfire.
Hope Kt will set every thing right.


The plan originally when I made Rachna stay with KT overnight was not at all done with the intention of Seema throwing a tantrum like this. The Seema twist is something I added in at the last minute to give some Rabir moments and add yet another layer of depth to their relationship. I hope I was successful in doing so.

That being said, you made a good point about how this was the perfect scenario for the twist that came because it's true that in India, people do look down upon the bride and groom meeting before marriage.

I think I have said this before but I don't write knowing exactly what the plot will be, I kind of just start writing and let the story flow. I still don't know myself how I will end the story or even how many more parts there will be; I will just write and see where things go. 😕😛

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