*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1) - Page 82

Originally posted by: Nuritzur

You write same like me when I write story's. I just start and let my mind flow with it, I also don'tknow how much parts will be in it. but you still done great work

Originally posted by: Princess.S786

Both updates were awesome
Even I want 2 know how he survived
Hate gaytri 😡
Thanks 4 pm

Originally posted by: Nuritzur

Oh god this Gayatri

OK First of all I want to say to you Nivi that this chapter write well. I like this all Mysterious and I even can imagine the room.

Poor Kabeer it was in Shocked to see his father after all this years.

It was amazing how their father was fight for them with out that they know. I also want to know how he survived.

Hate you Gayatri. I hope you stay away from Rabir in the show too :p

thanks for pm me. great update

Originally posted by: hangok

wow you have again write it too well,
you wouldnt believe it how i have read the part...
hate this gayatri more and more, she cant be there mother,
and mayank is her son, now im not sure if kt and karan are really her sons,
hope this time she cant win against them...

plase let now kt be strong, he should fight with her for himself, rachna, karan and for his dad...

im just now confused, she is waiting for another guest, who could it be, for a moment i thought it would be seema or what her name is rachnas aunt...


oww this is sooo excited...

Originally posted by: nividances

Thanks so much Nurit! Glad you enjoyed it. 😊

Originally posted by: Nuritzur

All what I write and this you Replay... lol Just kidding keep on the good work

Originally posted by: RaBir

Take a bow Nivi. Your writing getting better with every part. I like how you write about Kabir emotion when he see dad heartbreaking but nice writing. Kabir dad feeling bad he mess up so many years.

I confuse about how he survive also. He inject with poison so why he no die? Gayatri too evil can't be Kabir mom Mayank her son. Mystery getting more good and confusing also. Who this guest they wait for? Update soon and thank you for pm.

Originally posted by: hailly

amazing update.Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: nividances

Lol I'm replying quickly to comments so I can go back and work on the next chapter 😛 😆

Originally posted by: sb1410

What a chapter mysterious, emotional girl you are too good, I can't wait for the next update, really hate that Gayatri 😡 make me wonder if she is a mother or evil stepmother every child's nightmare.