*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: hangok
oww dear
this is amazing,
you have wrote it just too good,
so i have to say that i really like this lawyer pathak..
poor rachna, have to go all this again ,
the brothers are great,
im really grateful that karan is a nice guy, good that he isnt the evil..
so miss gayatri came to the court,
she could tell so much about mayan, how nice he is and so, that he is like a son, but we all know how nice she can be to her sons,
she want one of them to get divorced without his knowledge..

i want to see rachna strong in this court, it seems that the other lawyer will try everything to make her weak, and get scared..

great work and thanks for pm
waiting for the next part...

Thanks so much! Glad you liked this update...I was worried about whether or not this court room scene would turn out okay since I have never written something like that before, but it's good that you enjoyed it. Hopefully you will also like what I have planned for the next update 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: Nuritzur
Pathak is a smart lawyer I like him most of all I like this part
"Do give it your all Gayatri ji, but just remember that I had some CCTV cameras just recently installed in this conference room for security purposes. Oh and don't let the door hit you on your way out."
I really enjoy at I just Imagine Gayatry face...

I like the way you write all what happened in the court.
I'm not surprised to find out that Gayatry come to take mayank side
after all she will do every thing to Destroy. same lady same Thoughts.
I like parthak I hope he will win the case.
Poor Rachna I hope she don't let them broke her.
I like the eyes connect that you include in at and the way they talk to each other with they eyes.

thanks for the lovely update waiting to the next part.

Thanks Nurit! I really liked that part too with the eye connection. Honestly with scenes like this I try to picture how they would look on screen as I write them, and the eye connection just seemed so apt for that moment. Glad you enjoyed it 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: unishaz
awesome update..
Loving it..
Thanks for pm..

Thanks for your comment! Glad you liked it! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: Princess.S786
Awesome update
Can't wait 4 next part
Thanks 4 pm

Thanks Selina! I'll try to post the next part by tomorrow. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: crtkelly
Excellent update Nivi!

What a witch Gayatri is...so looking forward to her getting what's coming to her😡

Their lawyer is just great, loved his response to Gayatri!

Kabir at his supportive best and looking forward to Rachna's testimony, I'm sure that she will find the inner-strength to get through this difficult process and finally reclaim her life by seeing Mayank punished!

Is that a happy ending I'm seeing in the distance😃

No pressure, but I hope court in session over the weekend😉; really want to know what happens next!

Thanks for the PM

Thank you Kelly! Your hatred for Gayatri...can't say I feel any different though. And yes, I think it's high time that Rachna move forward in her life. Of course there's going to be a happy ending! But right now it is in the distance for sure. 😆

I don't really know how long this court stuff will take. I have a general idea of what I want to write but usually I just freehand each chapter as I go along, so I haven't really planned out everything that is going to happen in the next update. Anyways, let's see how it goes when I start writing the next chapter. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia
i thought u wud reveal secret mans identity. I just caught up and hv exams again . i luv ur stry want to leave detailed comments will do that aftr i am all prepared .
Overall u are gud as always

Anjali!!! Bae you're back!!! 🤗

I've missed you! Glad you got a chance to catch up.

Secret man's identity is the biggest twist I have planned...I can't reveal it so soon! 😉

I will be waiting for your comments! But all the best for your exams! I know you'll rock it! 👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia
mayank as molester i cant gulp it dwn but see iits no fault of urs i m so attached to this onscreen bro-sis jodi that imagining some scenes of ur stry brought tears to my eyes.
srry overflow of emotions :p

Aww! Sorry to disappoint you. 😔

I've liked Rachna and Mayank as bro and sis too, but for some reason I've always wanted to see Mayank as a grey or fully negative character. Maybe its the actor (Ankit) who plays it, but I feel like he would do a really good job as a villain.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia
thnks fr regularly taking the pain of sending pms

It was no pain at all Anjali! Your welcome 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: meenu_taarey
firstly sorry for a bit late
coming to the update
it was hell good n awesome
beautifully written each n every
line good going
n enjoyed the court drama
again as i say its interesting
eagerly waiting for next
update soon n pm me
take care!!!!!!

You're not late Meenu so you don't have to apologize. It just means a lot to me that you take time to read and comment.

Thanks so much! Glad you liked the update and found it to be interesting 😊