*Rabir FF: True Love...Note, Chap 55 @ pg 143, 145 (2/1)

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hangok

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

omg
what is this, how can be a mother so heartless, owww poor RABIR, hope even rachna inds out soon, that it was not kabir who sent the divorce papers..

great work thanks for pm and please try to continue soon
it is too excited now

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Nurit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Oh god even in your story Gayatri it a devil what a bad woman. how she did at behind his back.

where dadi when Kabeer need her.

Waiting to read your next update

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Thanks so much for the PM😊 I so enjoy your writing!

Great update, our poor Rabir subject to KT'sc , evil,manipulative, scheming mum even in fiction😡 (I'm you can tell how much of a fan of hers I am😉)

Looking forward to your next update!

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Cutie

@sidholic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Omg!!

Wht a twist...

Wow, masi's response 2 rachna ws just amazing...

N rachna hayee...

Wohooo kabir u r too fab here...shouting at his mom...

Luv it...

N the last of the accident..oh wht an end...

Continue soon

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Saranya

@saravathi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Thank god,I finally had some time to read this

U r superb Nivi,from the very second I came to know u r back with a new ff

I was too excited n am sure u would have more twist n suspenses in the story

But this was beyond my prediction

Every chapter was with twist

Rabir married,Rachna's parents death

The murder n now the divorce thing

I loved all ur chaps,Especially all the flashbacks of Rabir,short n sweet love

this story is moving too fast,Wondering what have u planned for next chap..Thanks for the pms

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: unishaz
omg.. New twist.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..

Your welcome! Thanks for commenting 😊

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Nivi ;)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: hangok
omg
what is this, how can be a mother so heartless, owww poor RABIR, hope even rachna inds out soon, that it was not kabir who sent the divorce papers..

great work thanks for pm and please try to continue soon
it is too excited now

Thank you! I'll be posting the update shortly 😊

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Princess.S786
Great update
Continue soon

Thanks so much for your comment! Glad you liked it 😊

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Nivi ;)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: sonmusk
Nice update,thnks for pm

Your welcome! Thanks for your comment! 😊

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

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Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Nuritzur
Oh god even in your story Gayatri it a devil what a bad woman. how she did at behind his back.
where dadi when Kabeer need her.
Waiting to read your next update

Haha, well there has to be some twists and turns right?

Will post the update shortly 😊