Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49 - Page 18

Originally posted by: parmarA

Rahome mile woh toh hansi fasana ban gaya

Dilne unhe dekha toh afsana ban gaya

Kaisee thi mulakat hai jo unse hum mile?

Pyaar me aage badhane ka bahana ban gaya.

Fab starting dear.

Kabir and Mayank in one room.Ghosh Hawa me bhi jyada garmi ho gai hogi.[I hope you better know Hindi]

And Rachana and Gunjan two naughty girls.I always admires Rachana's simplicity and her beauty.

Kabir's description you gave too beautiful for a very dashing man with allegant dress sense.

Rachana and Kabir's pair is one of the best pair i had seen.

Gunjan and Mayank too meet bec of Gunjan's coffee shout?

So,At last Destity met them in strenge way.

Going to read 2 nd chap

Originally posted by: parmarA

Haye yeh kaisee gadbad kar di Rachana ne?Saiyaan ko Bhaiyaa bula diya.

For her safety only.Hahahaha

I love Gunjan and Mayan's convo most that they both are too matured to handle the situation.

I must say Rachana is very simple and her simplicity and sanskars didn't allow to share her secrets with Kabir.

Gunjan's showing tummy to Mayank as the sign of hungriness was too cute.

And Rachana she is totally an angel in my eyes.I just love Rachana and Kabir both very much.

Originally posted by: saravathi

so sweet of u to comment for chaps separately..

along with u am recollecting story as well,Happy that u liking Mayan too n s even I like Rachna more in sslk.n I added links for every next part in the end off chaps hope it would b useful fr u to read

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Originally posted by: parmarA

Do Ajanabee yo ka jahaa deewana hai

Unke saso ka har nashq deewana hai

Kya kare e dil dekh nahi pate hum unhe

Humare dil ka har andaaj unka deewana hai

@Saravati,Beautiful chap indeed.

I got irrirate when Rachana call Kabir brother.And other side when Kabir unintentionally touched her she was feeling herself weak.

Rachana is a girl who couldn't trust any strangers so easily.Good quality Rachana.

I am in love with this fat Gunjan[ actually she is not fat but still her mind set this thought that she is fat]

Gunajan and Mayanks talk was treat to read.I throughtout enjoyed it.

At last Gunjan block the road and Rachana and Gunjan will met .

Originally posted by: parmarA

Humne mohobbat dhundne ko

Sara jahaa dhunda

Par wahaa toh dekha hi nahi

Jise log dil kehete hai.

@Saravati,i love Rabir so my eyes were serching and waiting for their turn.

Kabir came to know the truth behind Mayank menia of Rachana and Mayank revealed complete story of that two angels.

I am enjoying Mayan's enjoyment but was feeling that Kabir's internal care was more graceful.He is a man of high standard.

Actually like Rachana's restlessness too.She is too shy and feeling guilty herself.Isn't it true.

Last scene of Bus with Rabir remember me DDLJ scene of Kajol and Shahrukh KHan.

Though i am not big fan of SRK.I only like Sal man [more than anything]

But still enjoyed it.Want more romanc,trust,and understanding discover in Rabir