Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49 - Page 16

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Great update as always!

I swear my heart dropped as I wondered if it was one of the girl's wedding, whew what a relief to find it was neither 😆

Rabir kiss...oh my😳

and finally kudos to the girls' college decision👏, why make it too easy on the heroes?

looking forward to the next update

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia

luv u . ..aaj bahut dinon baad free hin reqding will comment once i catch up

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

reading 😳

Very nice twist honestly I hope the girls really do have a college life and not be forced into marriage

actually saranya thats the best twist because it was so unexpected and i couldnt even imagine that something like that would happen and now such a big twist loved the lip lock and pallu between rabir 😳 i loved it a lot it is the sign of a great writer that bring something thats totally unpredictable👏hats off 😳

Originally posted by: saravathi

Waiting...

Originally posted by: sb1410

Very nice twist honestly I hope the girls really do have a college life and not be forced into marriage

one thing more actually i totally felt the pain of the foursome 😭 while separating but i know they will meet at the right time and the right place 😳 am waiting for the freshers party and one thng rachna and gunjan families are not bad they understood them 😳 but they also have a valid point

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

actually saranya thats the best twist because it was so unexpected and i couldnt even imagine that something like that would happen and now such a big twist loved the lip lock and pallu between rabir 😳 i loved it a lot it is the sign of a great writer that bring something thats totally unpredictable👏hats off 😳

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

sorry my net connection was lost