Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49 - Page 17

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

one thing more actually i totally felt the pain of the foursome 😭 while separating but i know they will meet at the right time and the right place 😳 am waiting for the freshers party and one thng rachna and gunjan families are not bad they understood them 😳 but they also have a valid point

am waiting soo eagerly for the next part😳

Originally posted by: parmarA

@Saravathi,I have started to read this ff of Rabir and Mayan.

Your prologue is beautiful and can imagine the two good friends and two boys as rivals because of their attitude.

I really love Kabir and Rachana most.And want to follow this ff too.

Going to read the first chap

Originally posted by: saravathi

Right time right place will come soon,ok I will make sure to write t puttin all my best..N am so glad u mentioned not missin anything even small points too

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

how can i missed anything and that too of your ff .when the net ws gone i was cursing it to be the obstacle in between me and the ff 😆

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Actually..maybe I sound weird but I liked the twist. Now all of them might just fall in love with each other all over again.😆
Brilliant update and do continue soon. Want to see how Mayan and Rabir meet!😃

Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Ohh wht a twist!!!

I ws like not rachna or gunjan as the bride

But its a gud 1...

Continue soon...

Thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: saravathi

So sweet of you n I must say I am a big fan for ur pics or siggies u made