***RaBir's FF***:Pyar-Ishq-Mohabbat!!!! PART 5 updated - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Hey when comes the next part...

I'm Waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
wow.. nice going...! plz continue soon!! And thanx for the pm :)))
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
waiting for next update 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MythilyRaman

waiting for next update 😃

me too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Hi every1...
I know I've updated very very late...
N am very very sorry 4 that😭
Kaan pakde...(I thought u all weren't liking my ff...😭)
Anywayz...won't take much of your time...so here u go..

***Part 5***
Kabir n rachna have a cute little eyelock...but out of nowhere rachna's phone rings they both come out of the eyelock..
Rachna goes 2pick her phone,she picks it up(its her mom)she turns around 2 look 4kabir but he is already gone.rachna on the phone.
Shail;hello rachna!!kesi ho beta?(Hw r u dear)
Rachna:hum achche hai aur aap keso ho?(I'm fine and u)
Shail:hum sab theek hai.beta tum apna kyal rakna achcha...( we all r fine..take care of yourself dear)
Rachna: haa mummy...(Ya mummy)
Shail;aur ha bahar ka khana mat khana or zyada mirchi wala bhi...phir tum bimar padhjaogi...(And also don't eat outside food also chilli then you'll get sick)
Rachna:haan mummy..(Ya)
Shail:ok chalo hum ab rakhte hai.apna kyal rakhna (ok I'll hng now.take care)
Rachna:ok mummy bye.


***9.00hrs in the morning***
Rachna is down in the hall...wedding preparations r going on...chaya is looking 4rachna n rachna aso looking 4 chaya.chaya sees rachna.she goes by her.
Chaya:kahan thi tum kab se dhund rahi hu tumhe...(Where were u...I was since looking 4u)
Rachna:me bhi...(Even I)
Chaya: kya hua kuch kaam hai?(U had some work)
Rachna:wo na mujhe kch chahye tha to socha ke market se leyawu...(I wanted 2buy something from the market)
Chaya:ohh ok me driver ko bhejti hu... lekin driver to papa legaye...(Ohh ok I'll send the driver...but dad took the driver)
Rachna:koi baat nhi me auto lelungi.(No prob I'll take an auto)
Chaya:nahin.tum auto nahi logi...ruko...kise kahu...mmm haan kabir...(No u won't go in the auto)
Rachna:kabir!
Chaya:haan kabir lejayega tumhe...usse to pura mumbai pata hai...or waise bhi tum dono ki achchi ajayegi...
Rachna:very funny...
Chaya:wht? ye kabir bhi kahaan hai(they looking 4 kabir)
From back kabir sees d 2 n plans 2 scare them...he goes near them n scares from behind...
Both get scared...
Chaya n rachna:kabir!!!!
Kabir:kya!!!tum kitni darti ho miss statue..junglee billi kahin ki..
Rachna:kya tum ne kya kaha.(N runs behind him)
They both run around chaya...
Kabir:chaya! mujhe bachaw tumhari dost se ...dekho sachme ye junglee billi ki tarah behave krahi hai...
Rachna:kya phirse kaha...
Chaya stops the two...
Chaya:rukh jao tum dono..
Rachna:aaj tum chata ki wajah se bach gaye warna...
Kabir:warna kya...
Chaya:kabir...dekho kabir tumhe rachna ko market lejana hai...
Kabir:arrey me kyun driver ko bolona...
Chaya:driver nahi hai tabhi to tumhe kaha hai
Rachna:haan mujhe koi shok nahi hai tumhare sath ghumne ka
Kabir:haan to mujhe bhi...samjhi..
Rachna:haa ha...
Chaya:tum dono phirse shuru mat hojana...jao rachna kabir ke sath...
Rachna:okk bye...
Kabir:bye...
Chaya:bye...
They both sit in the car...kabir drives off...
Its all silent all the way...then
Rachna n kabir(2gether):thank u(its rachna who said)sorry(its kabir who said)
Both look at each other n start laughing...
Kabir n rachna(2gether again):kisliye(why?)
Both again start lauging.
Rachna:tum kaho
Kabir: nahi tum kaho..
Rachna:okk...thank u kabir...wo aaj tumne mujhe gir ne se bajaya...
Kabir :your welcome...
Rachna:tum kya kehrahethe..
Kabir:am sorry mujhe tumhare room me aise nahi aanaa chahyetha...
Rachna:its ok...
They reach the market...
They go in some shops n buy clothes n some jewelery.
They both come back in the car,
Kabir:kitna buy kiya tumne.,..ye sab tumhare liye ya pure ghar ke liye...
Rachna:haan to tumse matlab...meri marzi...
Kabir:okk meri ma...ab chale...waise bhi hum late hojayenge...
Rachna:haan to mane kab roka...chalo...
Kabir starts driving...he takes a turn...
Rachna:areey yahan se kahan turn liya...
Kabir:to kahan se lu...yahin se to hum ayethe...
Rachna:lekin.
Kabir:chup!!!tum jati ho mumbai me konsa road kaha ka hai..to chup raho...samjhi..
Rachna:arrey but...
Kabir:chup...
Rachna:okkk...
Kabir goes the way he wanted n they reach where there is a lot of traffic...
Kabir:arrey shit yaar...ye traffic kahan se agayi...
Rachna:me ne kahan tha...
Kabir:kya kaha tha,tum to yahan pe pehli baar ayi ho to tumhe kaise pata ki yahan pe traffic hogi?
Rachna:wo mene gps pe navitor ko check kiya or...
Kabir:or tumhe pata chala...to pehle se nhi bata sakti thi😡
Rachna:me bata to rahi thi lekin tum ne chup rehne ko kaha to chup hogayi...😊
Kabir:abb kya karen...bohot late hojayega...or chaya bi gussa hogi..
Rachna:tumne meri baat nhi suni na isliye...
They both r arguing in the car...that's when rachna sees candy-floss.
Rachna:mmm candy-floss...chalo kabir..(Gets out of the car)
Kabir:arrey...miss statue suno khan jarahi ho(he also gets out of the car n goes behind rachna)
Thay both enter the park...rachna is going in n kabir goes by her...
Kabir:pagal ho gayi ho kya...kya karne ayi ho yahaan pe..chalo...
Rachna:plz plz kbir chalo na...
Kabir:kahaan...
Rachna:wahan candy-floss khana hai mujhe...plz chalo..
Kabir:ok..
They both go to the person n rachna buys one...
Rachna:tumhe nahi chahye...
Kabir:nahi...chalo..ab
Rachna:okk (she eating it while kbir is looking at her...
As she is eating it little bit of it goes above her lips...kabir sees that n is about 2 tell rachna about it then stops..
Kabir(in his mind):achcha hai rehnedo...dekhtahu ki karegi miss stautue n starts smilling..
Rachna sees kabir smiling:kya hua?
Kabir:kuch nahi
Some kids r playing in the park...they're ball falls near rabir...
They come 2 get it n start laughing seeing rachna.
Kids:didi!didi aap ki to much hai...
Rachna gets shocked looks at kabir...she gets angry...she cleans face...
Rachna:tumhe pata tha na kabir...isliye tum has rahe the na...
Kabir:wo(contoling his laugh)...
Rachna:tumse baat hi karna bkar hai..hunnn
N leaves from there n sits on the bench...kabir sees this n goes by rachna...
He sits down...n says:am sorry miss statua...sorry(holds his ears)plz mujhe maaf kardo...sorry...
Rachna:(looks at kabir n wants 2 laugh ):nahi karungi jao...

An ald couple r sitted at the opposite bench.they look at rabir...
Lady:kitna pyaar hai dono mein
Man:haan...dekhona...kitne pyar se mana raha hai...
Kabir n rachna listen 2 this n look at each other.
Lady(2 rachna):maan jao beti...itna achcha ladka phir nahi milega...
Tumse mafi magraha hai maf kardo...
Man:haan maf kardo...or kitna pyar karta hai tumse wo ki maafi bhi maag raha hai..
Both get shocked n look at each other..

Precap;kabir:ye sab na tumhari wajase huwa hai.
Rachna:meri wajase!!!Tumhari wajase...its bcoz of u

I know its short...but will update next sooon
Like n comments mean a lot..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Read all ur chapters now...how can u think we don't like it😡
its really superb especially Rachna's childish behavior..precap is interesting pls do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Ohh wauw i found it thank God
So happy update soon
Pm me
Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
just awesome...
i read last 2 parts now which i missed ,..

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Oh wow it amazing I don't know how I missed this update soon 😃 And thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
i just read all the chapters. wow👏 you are an amazing writer.👏mind blowing👏 update soon hun...🤗
Edited by --Jenelle-- - 11 years ago

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