***RaBir's FF***:Pyar-Ishq-Mohabbat!!!! PART 5 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks!!won't take much of your time so here you go.
**Part 4**
Kabir's mom is coming to his room.Rachna sees her n hides.
Rachna:ye dono to gaye...(This 2 r gone...)
Kabir's mom enters the room.
Mom:kabir!!
Kabir n neil r shocked, they both turn facing his mom,hiding the cigarrette behind.
Kabir:mom!!!...aap yahaan...kuch kaam tha?...(Mom!!!... u and here... did u have some work?...)
Mom:wo tumhara headphones dene ayithi mre room mreh gaya tha..(Ya.I had come 2 give u your headphones...they were in my room)
Kabir:ohh...aap yahaan rakh dijeye ...or sojaye bohot raat ho chuki hai.(Ohh...u keep it here... n go to sleep its late night.)
Neil:ha aunty bohot raat ho chuki hai hum bhi sone hi jarahe the..(Ya aunty its very late n we r also going 2 sleep..)
Mom:haa..jaarahi hu..(Okk..am going..)(She turns to go n then stops n turns to kabir n neil)
kabir(again scared):kya hua mom...(What happened mom...)
Mom:kuch jalne ki bu arahi hai...(I can smell something brning...)
Neil:nahi...aunty aap ko aisa lagta hai..(No..aunty u r just imagining)
Mom:nahi...kuch dhuwe ki bu arahi hai.(No..I can smell something like smoke.)
She starts walking near kabir n neil.Both r very scared.That's when rachna enters.
Rachna:wo iski hai aunty.(It is 4 this aunty)
Mom turns around,kabir n neil r slightly relieved.
Rachna has an arti tray in her hand.
Rachna:wo...aunty me puja kar rahi thi na uske waja se aapko aisa lagaa...(I...aunty I was doing puja that's y u got the smell...)
Mom:ohh!!(She goes near rachna as rachna is standing by the door she takes the arti)
Mom:thank u beta!or tum abhi tak soyi nahi.(Thank u dear! n u r still awake?.)
Rachna:wo me bas jahi rahi thi..(I was just going 2 bed..)
Mom:ok good night beta.(Ok good night dear)
Rachna:good night aunty!(Good night aunty!)
Kabir's mom leave from his room.Kabir is confused seeing rachna.
Neil:thank thank soo much rachna!!
Rachna:your welcome!!
Neil:kabir rachna ko thank u bol!!(Kabir say thanks 2 rachna)
Kabir:huuunnn
Rachna:no,its ok,actually me sorry kehne ayithi kabir se..(No,its ok,actually I wanted 2 say sorry 2 kabir)
Kabir was looking down n as he heard rachna's words he looked at rachna .
Neil:sorry??kis liye?(Sorry??4 what?)
Rachna:am sorry kabir!!wo kal tum sorry kehne ayethe or mene aapko kitna suna ya ..am really very sorry..(Am sorry kabir!!yesterday I said so much 2 u..am really very sorry..)
Kabir:its ok waise bhi mistake meri bhi thi mujhe check kar na chahye tha ki wo tumhara room hai ya mera...(Its o it was also my mistake..I should have checked whether it was my room or yours)
Rachna:ok so hisab barabar..(Ok so its balanced)
Kabir:ya barabar...now we can be friends?right(ya balanced... Now we can be friends right?)(forwards his hand for a shake with rachna)
Rachna:(gives aweird look then smile)yes(n sakes hnd with kabir)friends...
Kabir:thank u rachna...agar tum nahi ati to...pata nahi kya hoja ta...(Thank u rachna...if u hadn't had came...what would have happened)
Rachna:its ok n dosti me no thank u no sorry.(Its ok n in friendship no thank u n no sorry)
Neil:ya that's right.
Kabir:ok...
Rachna:ek baat kahu?(Shall I say something)
Kabir:ya kaho na...(Ya say)
Rachna:aap dono smoke kyun karte ho...agar aap ke mom,dad ko pasand nahi to kyun smoke karte waise bi soking is injurious to health..(Y do u both smoke...I mean if your parents don't lke then y do u smoke..)
Neil:me ise barbar kehta hu magar sun ta hi nahi.ok aj se no smoking samaj gaye kabir..(I tell him everytime..but he doesn't listen.ok from now no smoking)
Kabir:ok...hum n tumhari ek bat mani ab tum ek bat mano.(Ok...we listened 2 u now u listen 2 me)
Rachna:ok ab aap ka turn😆
Kabir:ha yahin baat..
Rachna:me kuch samji nahi??
Kabir:ab to hum friends hai to aap mat bulaw tum bulaw..ok
Neil:ya of course.
Rachna:ok...me ab jati hu good night sweet dreams!
Kabir:bye!
Neil:bye.
Rachna leaves from the room n ges to her room.
Neil:dekha mene kaha tha na itni buri nahi hai..or tu...(U c I told u she isn't that bad.. n u...)
Kabir:kya yaar...lekin ek baat to maani paregi ye hum bachane kyun ayi or sorry bhi kaha..kamal hai ye sherni billi kaise bangayi.(What dude...but there is 1 thing she helped us n also said sorry...its great how did this tigress become a cat.)
Neil:dekha phirse shuru hogaya...use bura lag hoga ki jo usne kaha isliye...(U started again... maybe she felt bad about what she said...)
Kabir:okk...
Neil:waise tu use kitna janta hai..(Btw hw much do u know her..)
Kabir:kyun??(Y??)
Neil:aise hi kyunki mein tujhse kitni baar kaha k smoking chor de lekin tune nahi suna or usne ek bar kaha tune chor diya...(Just like that coz I told many times to quit smoking but u never listened n she told just once n u listened)
Kabir:kya yaar...tu soja bohot raat ho chuki hai..
Neil:okkk!!good night!!(Wht dude.. u go 2 sleep)
Kabir:good night!!
**Morning**
Its 6:30 am, n the alarm rings.kabir is sleeping he ers the alarm ringing..
Kabir(while sleeping):aahhh!!ye band kyun nahi ho raha.(Aaahhh!! Y isn't this switching off)(While sleeping he is hitting the alarm switch )
Kabir gets up n sits on the bed.He sees the time.
Kabir:ye 6.30 ka alaram kis ne lagaya...(Who kept the alarm of 6.30)
The alarm starts ringing kabir realises that its not his alarm.Then the ring stops.He gets up n goes out of room.
Kabir:ye miss statue ka hoga uske room me jke dekhta hu...(It must be of miss statue I'll go to her room n check.)
Kabir goes in rachna's room.He sees that rachna isn't in room.That's when he hears the water from the bathroom.
Kabir:khud to soti nahi hai or dusro ko bhi sone nahi deti...(She herself doesn't sleep n also doesn't let others sleep...)
He is sitting on the couch n falls asleep there.Rachna cmes out from the bathroom.She goes y the dressing table n starts drying her hair.She hasn't seen kabir yet.
She is drying n the water droplets fall on kabir's face as the couch is near to the dressing table.Kabir gets up.
Kabir:dekh kar nahi karsakti...(Can't u c n do...)
Rachna(shocked):tum yahann kya kar rahe ho?(What r udoing here?
Kabir:tumhari waja se...tum apna alarm band nahi kar sakti...meri puri neend kharab kardi...(Its coz of u...can't u switch off your alarm...destroyed my whole sleep...)
Rachna:to...to tum apne kaan kyun nahi band karte..(So...so couldn't u close your ears)
Kabir:oy hello..tum sab ki neend kharab krti ho phir mjhe datti ho...(Oh hello..u destroy others sleep n on top of it u r shouting me...)
Rachna:sab tumhare tarah late nahi uth te..(Every1 doesn't wake up late like u...)
Kabir:hann to..ye mera problem hai..(Ya so..that's my problem..)
As both r arguing the water from rachna's hair is falling o the floor.
Rachna:tumse na baat karna hi bekar hai...(Its useless talking 2 u...)
N is going by the door and due to the water she slip n is about to fall n kabir holds her from the waist.Kabir's hand is around rachna's waist n rachna's hands around kabir's neck.Both r looking in each others eyes n r lost.
Precap:wedding preparation


Do comment!!!!😉 n plz ignore my mistakes.thank u
Edited by cuteangelasya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Wow awesome.. update soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Superb update
Plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
nice to found another rabir story, pleaseee write in english i cant understan 😔
and pleaseee pm me when you update ...

i want to read this ff

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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: hailly

nice update ,continue soon


Thank u!!!
Yup l'll update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

I've updated check it out...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: MythilyRaman

Wow awesome.. update soon 😛


Thnx!!
Am glad u read it...😳
I'll update soon..😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Wow nice update next part plz 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sizzlingtrisha

Wow nice update next part plz 😃


Thnx trisha!!
Am glad u liked it.😛
Ya am working on the update...
Posting it soon😳
Edited by cuteangelasya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: hangok

nice to found another rabir story, pleaseee write in english i cant understan 😔
and pleaseee pm me when you update ...

i want to read this ff


Am so so sorry...😭
I u 4got 2 keep it in english...
I am very very very sorry n I mean it from the bottom of my heart...
I will edit my posts 2 add in english...
U can then read the FF😳

N as far as 4 pm then of course I will pm u when I'll update...

After I edit my posts do read my FF n comment how it is😉

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