***RaBir's FF***:Pyar-Ishq-Mohabbat!!!! PART 5 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice.. update soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its really nice ,continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks kiki!!😛 about the pro pic 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ya am working on the next update!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys!! am back!! sorry for the late update😭.Won't take much of your time so here u go.BTW I've introduced a new character.Here it is.
Neil:a young,vibrant and good-looking boy,kabir's best friend.
http://www.freevisuals4u.com/photos/2012/08/Kartik-1.jpg.

**Part 3**
After what all has happened,rachna leaves the room as well as chaya.Kabir is ashamed for he did nwants t pologise.He's goes out from the room n looks for rachna.Rachna is going on the terrace n her phone rings!!Its gunjan.Rachna goes on the terrace.
Gunjan:hey!!! ye kya rachna tune call bhi nahi kiya?
Rachna:wo...me karni hi wali thi lekin us bdtameez ki waja se nahi karpati.
Gunjan:kon??? koi handsome tha.
Rachna:kya gunjan tum bhi na.
Gunjan:kya rachna ab bahane mat nikalo,
Rachna:me bahane nahi nikal rahi hu,me sach kehrahi h.
Gunjan:achcha!! ta batao kya huwa itni chiri huwi kyun ho.
Rachna:(narrates the whole story, their airport meeting,then kabir to be chaya's cousin n lastly room story.)
Gunjan starts laughing.
Rachna:kya gunjan,iss has ne wali konsi baat hai.jao me tumse baat nahi karti.
Gunjan:achcha sorrry rachna oops miss statue.
Rachna:gunjan!!!
Gunjan:rachna tum uss ke liye apna mood kyun kharab kar rahi hoo.
Rachna:haan tum thik keh raho ho.
Gunjan:ab to me miss statue bula sakti hu na(starts laughing)
Rachna:gunjan!! n also starts laughing.
Gunjan:ok chal tumhare bhaiya bula rahe hai.kal bat karungi bye,apna khyal rakhna.
Rachna:ok bye!!
Kabir enters the terrace.Rachna feels its too late so she should go to bed.she turns n sees kabir there.
Rachna(in her mind):ye yahaan kya kar raha hai.haaan zarur sorry kehne aaya hoga,abhi ise bata hu ki rchna s pga lene ka anjam kya hota hai.
Kabir:wo... actually...me
Rachna:haan haan,sorry kehne aye ho aap,phir agar mene maaf kardiya to kahoge ki hum friends ban jate hai.
Kabir(in his mind):ise kaise pata??
Rachna:kya hua tum soch rahe hoge ki mujhe kaise pata to suno mein tum jaise ladko ko achche se janti hoo...anyway mujhe na tumhare sorry ki zarurat nahi hai ok!!or mera pas time nahi hai tum se behes karne ke liye.soo good... nahi bad night!!
Rachna turns around n smiles.she leaves.
Kabir is just shocked.
Kabir:ye kya hai,mene ise sahi naam diya hai miss statue,sorry kehne ayatha or...huummm.is se to baat karna hi bekar hai.
Just then his phone rings.
Kabir:hello!!!
Neil:kya huwa yaar itna gusse me kyun hai.
Kabir:kya batawu wohi miss statue,
Neil:kya huwa phir se.
Kabir:tells the room part then him coming to apologise her n what all rachna said.
Neil:kya baat hai!
Kabir:matlab?
Neil:boss ye pehli ladki hai jo tujhe chup karakar chaligayi.
Kabir:very funny tujhe to bohot hasi aarahi hai na.
Neil:ye tere takar ki hai mere bhai.
Kabir:ye choor,or bata ki kab aaraha hai.
Neil:kal sham ko.
Kabir:mein aajawunga lene
Neil:nahi mein aajawunga!ok bye.
Kabir:bye!!
**next day**
Rachna wore a beautiful white dress,with her hair open.
http://www.indianclothstore.com/productimages/white-full-sleeve-net-long-anarkali-salwar-kameez-anarkali-suit-15570.jpg
Kabir is in a casual t n blue jeans.
Everyone is busy preparing for the wedding.rachna's phone ring as well as kabir's.
Rachna:kesi ho gunjan.
Gunjan:am gud n u.
Rachna:am gud as well.
Kabir n rachna are busy talking n r walking as well.they both are coming from opposite sides n bump into each other.they're phones fall.as they both r having the same phone,their phones get exchanged.they both continue talking on the phone not realising the exchange.
Rachna:idiot,phirse mujhse takragaya,badtameez kahi ka,dekh kar hi nahi chalta.
Neil:wht???who is it?
Rachna(shocked):am rachna n u?
Neil:am neil,kabir's friend.
Rachna:am so sorry.mein abhi use phone deti hu.
Meanwhile...
Kabir:ye miss statue hai na,dekh kar hi nahi chalti...
Gunjan:hello!!!rachna!! who is it?
Kabir:am sorry!btw am kabir n u
Gunjan:abi tum jiske bareme baat kar rahe the na uski bhabhi gunjan.
Kabir:ohhh!am so soory,I'll give her the phone.
Both come back to the same place.
Rachna:ye lo aap ka phone.
Kabir(takes his n gives rachna hers):or ye tumhara.
Kabir:ya bol neil...
Neil:itni buri nahi lagti.
Kabir:kya!!tu kis ki baat kar raha hai?
Neil:jaisa tune kaha tha waisi to nahi lagti,wo... Miss statue.
Kabir:ohhh!abhi tu mila nahi hai na isliye,
Neil:ok!!chal bye!!
Kabir:bye!!
Meanwhile...
Gunjan:kya huwa miss statue??
Rachna:gunjan!!!... pata hai wo kal sorry kehne aayatha...
Gunjan:phir...
Rachna:phir kya!!! mein use maaf nahi kiya ulta use suna diya.
Gunjan:tumhe aisa nahi karna chahyetha,wo sorry kehne ayatha or tumne...ab jao use sorry kaho.
Rachna:lekin...wo maaf nahi karega,
Gunjan:wo sab me nahi janti...
Rachna:lekin...
Gunjan:bye
Rachna:arrey!! ab kya karu?mmm,idea kuch aisa karti hu ki wo thanks kahe.lekin kya?
Rachna is busy thinking of what to do.
**Its evening**
Rachna is downstairs.kabir is in his room.rachna is going out hits into a boy his bag falls down.rachna gets down to pick up the stuff.she picks it gets up gives the boy.
Rachna:am sorry,mera dhyan kahi or tha...
Boy:its ok...btw am neil or aap?
Rachna:am rachna...
Neil:ohhh!!to aap ho rachna.
Rachna:jiii!!!mein kuch samji nahi.
Neil:aaj hamari baat huwi thi subah ko...
Rachna(remember):ohh!! to aap kabir ke dost hai.
Neil:ya.
Rachna:I'll show u kabir's room
Neil:ok.
Rachna shows the room n leaves.
Neil:kabir!!
Kabir n neil hug.neil then meets every1.
Its night n rachna is going to bed,she hears kabir n neil's conversation,as there rooms are near.
Kabir:tu laya??
Neil:haa.
Rachna(to herself):ye kiski baat kar rahe hai.
Neil removes a pack of cigarette n gives to kabir.
Kabir:thnx yaar tujhe to pata hai ke mom ko agar pata chal gaya to...
Neil:janta hu,chal abhi karlete hai phir koi aajayega.
They both start smoking n turns their back to the door.
Rachna:ye dono smoke karte hai.
Rachna sees kabir's mom coming n hides.
Rachna:ye dono to gaye.
Kabir's mom enters the room:kabir!!
Precap:rachna n kabir become friends.😳

Thanks every1!!!!do comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Nice update ! So many neil fans woow !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Thanks for the PM.
Nice update...
Eagerly waiting for the next update... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
nice update .continue soon, thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Read all 3 updates they were awesome
Plz continue soon
Plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Thanks!!! Am working on the next!!
I will surely pm u all!!!!!

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