Beete Pal..Angini SS,updated last chapter..pg 14

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It is said that absence makes the heart grow fonder. This is probably why lovers who are apart spend most of their time thinking about each other.the only way to be with each other is the silent unspeakable memories..

Beete Pal a short story of anmol-ragini..

A short intro of the story of Beete Pal..
The intro..Newyork..
Anmol entered his room and closed the door with a bang..he opened the window and breathed in the fresh air..he stood there motionless staring in the darkness..his heart still aching with the pain..grief.longing he has been carrying for almost two years.. tear drops escaped his eyes.the sound of his door opening ,anmol wiped his tears and turned around.

What was that anmol?..i had to handle everything..i don't understand you?kanchan and you got along from the first day you met each other..you have been working together. i'm still not getting it ?why you behave like this ?...you left from there without replying her..she expressed her feelings to you..anmol she loves you ...anmol...i don't love her..i don't have that feeling for her..she is just a friend that's it..nothing else...don't point a finger at me, I never said or do such thing to make her feel I'm interested in her beyond our friendship.kanchan is my friend nothing more..gaurav kept staring at him...anmol..what?..why you staring at me like this?...

Gaurav..you love someone else...am I right anmol?.. he turned around and moved back to the window..gaurav..you cant hide your feelings by turning your back to me.i asked you a simple question..yes or no anmol you love someone else..taking a deep breath and he looked back at gaurav.. anmol.. yes I love ragini and much much more .. gaurav..may be you have forgotten anmol but I remember you divorced her 2 yrs ago..
INDIA..
Ragini sitting on a bench lost in her thought watching the waves crashing back on the shore..she could feel the cool breeze on her face ...someone sat close to her on the bench..kya sochaa tum ne..kuch faisla liya..have you thought about it?..its time you take a decision ragini..you cant lead your life like this..ragini looked at her cousin sis damini...this look I know wat's it saying ragini...forget about him.he was never yours.2 years have you not gotten it yet..he divorced you ragini..like that.his mother asked him and he gave you a divorce.
Will anmol-ragini Beete Pal turn into a Haseen Anewala Pal ...
i do need your feedback to continue the story..😊
Here is an audio to relate with the intro..
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tj3Uge2kHGk&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by saveeta24 - 13 years ago

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Wonderfullife thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW MY FRIEND , You are back with a BANG.👏👏👏

I was grinning cheek to cheek reading the intro😃 .I just love this surprise.🤗

We all missed you and your fantastic post 😭but you are making us forget the days without you by giving us another FF.🤗

As always MINDBLOWING Intro.👏👏👏

Beete Pal lovely title 👏, it's completely different start from your other FF's.👏

From the first word i started to visualize my anmol and ragini.😍

So anmol and ragini are separated now😭 and they were a husband and wife 2 years ago.

When anmol still loves ragini why he have to divorce her just for his mother .😕Waiting for the next update to know more clearer picture.😊

Loved other characters too , Gourav ,damini and kanchan.👍🏼

My most favorite scene,😍

Anmol entered his room and closed the door with a bang..he opened the window and breathed in the fresh air..he stood there motionless staring in the darkness..his heart still aching with the pain..grief.longing he has been carrying for almost two years.. tear drops escaped his eyes.the sound of his door opening ,anmol wiped his tears .

Waiting for the next update my friend.👏




Edited by krithikas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@krithika..thanks for your feedback..glad you loved the intro ..😊
It will be a short story and a little bit different..
will update tomorrow..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome saveeta,i love it please continue. thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Saveeta !!😃😃

New FF so nice.. I liked the way you have started.. Anmol and Ragini.

Nice start, Anmol has divorced Ragini and is in NewYork.. And Kanchan who loves Anmol but he cannot forget Ragini..

Its a nice start I am looking forward to reading

And The song for start is fabulous !!👏👏👏

Please contoinue soon !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW..Savee amazing... You are back with a super duper surprise.. Like the story line... Looking foward to read it.. Wiling to read the next part savee... Continue it soon.. Missed you so much and happy to see you back my dear friend.. 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 1…

New –york..

Anmol entered his room and closed the door with a bang..he opened the window and breathed in the fresh air..he stood there motionless staring in the darkness..his heart still aching with the pain..grief.longing he has been carrying for almost two years.. tear drops escaped his eyes.the sound of his door opening ,anmol wiped his tears and turned around.

What was that anmol?..i had to handle everything..i don't understand you…kanchan and you got along from the first day you met each other..you have been working together. i'm still not getting it …why you behaved like this ?...you left from there without replying her..she expressed her feelings to you.. anmol she loves you …anmol…i don't love her..i don't have that feeling for her..she is just a friend that's it..nothing else…don't point a finger at me, I never said or do such thing to make her feel I'm interested in her beyond our friendship.kanchan is my friend nothing more..gaurav kept staring at him…anmol..what?..why you staring at me like this?...

Gaurav..you love someone else...am I right anmol?.. he turned around and moved back to the window..gaurav..you cant hide your feelings by turning your back to me.i asked you a simple question..yes or no anmol you love someone else..taking a deep breath and he looked back at him..yes I love ragini and much much more .. gaurav..may be you have forgotten anmol but I remember you divorced her 2 yrs ago…anmol..dont be sarcastic with me gaurav..i know we are divorced..i have never been able to forget her..her sweet innocent face..her smile ..her caring and loving side..she had a heart of gold .she has suffered a lot but never complained about anything..i have been so unfair to her..you do know in what circumstances I married her..i respected my father's last wish but once he died ragini was thrown out of sareen mansion..i left india and settled in new-york…in less than 2 years, I made it big in the business world here ..fame ..money I have it all still my life has a big void and he got tearyeyed..

Gaurav ..i never knew you were going through this pain all these years anmol.you kept all this to yourself..anmol..its my sin gaurav and I have to suffer for this..we were married and tied in a sacred bond..i heard her say once our marriage is sacred for her …she will get nothing in return of that marriage even that it was for life this relationship..indeed she got nothing…no love from her husband or respect from her in laws..she got only hatred and I avoided her working late nights..i have never talked properly with her in the beginning…with time, I began to habituate with her presence and when our eyes met everytime my heart will make that skip..i ignored it getting busy in work..day by day ,she was getting closer to my heart..she was always in my thoughts night and day but my mother and sister emotional blackmail made me ignore her again and again..dad died and the rest you know we got divorced.her shocked expression still haunts me gaurav when I asked her to sign the divorce papers…in her teary eyes, I could see the turmoil and pain she was going through at that moment..without any question to me ,she signed the papers..going out of the room ,she gazed back at me ..you know what gaurav there was no hatred in her eyes for me… i can tell you at that moment ,I really felt like the biggest sinner in this world… once ragini left I could feel the emptiness in the house..i felt her presence everywhere..her smile when she talked with dad..the only person she will smile and talk openly..so many times, I will listen to them and completely mesmerized by her talks and smile..once she felt my presence, she will be back to the reserved shy person..my mother and sister moved on happily with their life but I could not bear staying in that house without ragini..the only solution for me leave india and move on..no avail the distance has made my love for ragini grew more with each passing day..i'm not able to forget her ..how I wish I could rewind the time and express my deep love to her..yes I love ragini and no one will be able to take her place in my heart and life..

Gaurav.its never too late anmol..go back to india and tell her how much you love her..i have always been by your side… so you can count on me..lets go to india and get your ragini back in your life..anmol smiled.. yes she is my ragini…suddenly his smile disappeared and he said I have a fear in my heart ...gaurav..what?..anmol…2 years we have been separated…it was just a marriage for namesake.nothing happened between us..from first day she entered the sareen mansion ,we stayed in separate rooms..what if she has settled again with someone else?..just the thought of her being with someone else hurts me so much..i will not be able to bear it gaurav to see her with some other guy..…gaurav..anmol think positive and your love for her is genuine...trust me lets go to india..

Anmol going to india to get back ragini in his life..

What awaits him in india..will update next..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice saveeta, eagerly waiting for next part. thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update Saveeta.👏👏👏

Now it's clear who forced anmol to divorce ragini.😭

But i am very disappointed why he had to listen to his mother and sister when he loves his wife so much.😭

So Anmol's father brought ragini as his bahu.😊

It was so heart touching reading this,😭

Gaurav ..i never knew you were going through this pain all these years anmol.you kept all this to yourself..anmol..its my sin gaurav and I have to suffer for this..we were married and tied in a sacred bond..i heard her say once our marriage is sacred for her …she will get nothing in return of that marriage even that it was for life this relationship..indeed she got nothing…no love from her husband or respect from her in laws..she got only hatred and I avoided her working late nights..i have never talked properly with her in the beginning…with time, I began to habituate with her presence and when our eyes met everytime my heart will make that skip..i ignored it getting busy in work..day by day ,she was getting closer to my heart..she was always in my thoughts night and day but my mother and sister emotional blackmail made me ignore her again and again..dad died and the rest you know we got divorced.her shocked expression still haunts me gaurav when I asked her to sign the divorce papers…in her teary eyes, I could see the turmoil and pain she was going through at that moment..without any question to me ,she signed the papers..going out of the room ,she gazed back at me ..you know what gaurav there was no hatred in her eyes for me… i can tell you at that moment ,I really felt like the biggest sinner in this world… once ragini left I could feel the emptiness in the house..i felt her presence everywhere..her smile when she talked with dad..the only person she will smile and talk openly..so many times, I will listen to them and completely mesmerized by her talks and smile..once she felt my presence, she will be back to the reserved shy person..my mother and sister moved on happily with their life but I could not bear staying in that house without ragini..the only solution for me leave india and move on..no avail the distance has made my love for ragini grew more with each passing day..i'm not able to forget her ..how I wish I could rewind the time and express my deep love to her..yes I love ragini and no one will be able to take her place in my heart and life..

Though anmol was not a good husband but he repents for it now .I feel sorry for him ,why he let go his ragini when he loves so much.😭

Glad atlast he is coming back to India to get his ragini back.😃Wish ragini accepts him as he loves her so much.😊

Waiting for your next update Saveeta.⭐️


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Missed you loads dear !!🤗

Very interesting start ..
I read teh Intro and yes when you are away the longing starts to pour in !!
Anmol and Ragini divorced and both are at different places
Kanchan in Anmol's life but nothing significant for him while Ragini has a cosin Damini who has seen her go thought this ...

LOvely Its a short story so a lot on store
I will read the next part ...

And loved the VM u have used
One of my fav !!

Missing Angini so much 😭,, This VM has so much dard !!

Nice to see a story again !! 😃

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