Beete Pal..Angini SS,updated last chapter..pg 14 - Page 4

wow saveeta, getting very interesting. nice part. thanks

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Chapter 5..

Anmol ..mr sinha I trust you that's why I left everything for you to handle here in my absence..mr..sinha..phir bhi anmol sir please aap yeh documents check kijiye..anmol..ok fine I will do it later..thank you mr sinha for sending the driver..i have some personal matters to take care of so I hope you understand I wont be able to come to the office to meet the personals..i will do it later..mr..sinha.dont worry sir ..anmol.. meet my best friend gaurav..they greet each other…mr.sinha..i will take your leave sir and your car is in the driveway...anmol..thank you so much and we will keep in touch..gaurav..he is a nice guy..anmol..he has always worked for me and very trustworthy..he is always grateful of what I did for him in the past..nearly reaching the doorstep mr sinha turned and said ..sir I forgot to tell you..when should I confirm your appointment with mr.rishab..?..anmol...yes I must meet him about the construction of a new ward for children…the earlier the better..is it possible for today?..confirm it for 4 pm.. mr.sinha..sure sir..gaurav..who is rishab?..anmol...rishab is one of the administrator of a hospital here in mumbai..he wants me to invest in his new project.a new wing to be built and it will have children wards.we met in a business conference …he called me so many times and to meet him once I'm in india..we will go and have a look at the project..

Gaurav cell ringing…I'm sure its mom and be ready for some question time...hi mom yes we have arrived safely in india..mom I was tired so slept early because of jetlag…I was going to call you but you did it already..all this time anmol having a good laugh watching gaurav ..he threw a cushion at him…mom I just arrived yesterday and already you asking me about your bahu..mom I did not promised you anything..i'm not interested in marriage yet..mom listen..mom please..in a low voice to anmol her emotional blackmail starts..ok ok mom once I find a good girl I will let you know..it will take time ,I wont find her walking on the street..i'm not being sarcastic..what you don't trust me?..fine talk to anmol.. giving the cell to anmol and don't say yes to her…anmol..hi aunty.. I'm fine and don't worry we will take care of ourselves..sure aunty..i will convince him because I have decided to get married and he too should do same.. I will help him to find your future bahu..gaurav gave anmol a killing look..yes aunty a good sweet girl.bye aunty …gaurav..you are impossible…anmol..aunty is right gaurav.you should settle now..after simran wedding aunty feels lonely in that big house..your business taking most of your time and your coming home late..she has no one to talk...she cares so much for you..will wait till late to see if you had dinner or not..seriously give a thought about it..you have rejected so many proposal already not liking anyone of them..i don't understand why gaurav..they were from good families ..gaurav..anmol marriage is a life commitment and you should get the perfect lifepartner..i don't know not one of them made me feel she is the one for me..its same like you anmol…no one interested you as your heart and soul already chose the right person ragini.. the day I feel she is the one for me be sure mom is getting her bahu..

Anmol eyes shining with tears…gaurav..oh no anmol I'm sorry I did not mean to hurt you..anmol..hey why you saying sorry..its the truth of what you said..marriage is a commitment for life..i did not respect it the first time but I promise it will be for life this time..forever and ever with my ragini...

The hospital..

Ragini busy at the reception desk..her shift will be over in a few minutes..waiting for tanu to come and take over ,she attended another call…anmol-gaurav entered the hospital and walking towards the reception area when they met up with rishab..anmol welcome to india..at last I get to meet you after so many calls to you..anmol..meet my best friend gaurav..he has accompanied me to india..rishab..seems something special brought you both here..anmol in his thought someone special and precious to my heart brought me back..gaurav ..you can say so specially for anmol..…rishab..come lets go in my office..DR..anil ..sorry rishab can I have the file for that patient..i need it urgently..rishab..that file I left it at the reception desk..ask ragini she will give it to you..hearing ragini's name anmol got like a shock..rishab phone ringing..excuse me anmol,I attend this call and be back…

Instantly ,he looked at the reception area and he saw ragini in convo with the doctor…she smiled with what the doctor told her and it made anmol slightly jealous…murmuring in a low voice, you are much more beautiful my ragini..gaurav..anmol is she the ragini you came back for?...anmol..yes gaurav she is my ragini..isn't she beautiful?.my angel…how could I have let her go from my life?.. … gaurav.. wow anmol now I know why you were never interested in anyone…sorry it will be like rubbing salt to your wound.you did a very big mistake giving her a divorce..…try your best buddy and get her back..she is worth it and yes your ragini is very beautiful..anmol smiled she will be mrs sareen again.i promise you..gaurav..then what are you waiting for go and tell her you are back..anmol smile fades away not seeing ragini …where is she?..anmol ran to the reception desk ..excuse me where is ragini?..tanu..jee her shift is over.. she has already left..any problem sir I can help…anmol..is she working tomorrow?...at what time will she be here?...tanu…dekhiye mein aap ko nahin jantee …I cant tell you about her….gaurav moved anmol a bit far…dont worry..we will ask rishab about her and you know now she works in the hospital..

Rishab office..

Rishab..anmol sorry ragini has already left and tomorrow she has a night shift..she knows all about this project..she is such a hardworker and manage all the important files.. anmol felt proud hearing how ragini getting praised for her hard work..i will give her a call and if you don't mind is it ok if she comes at your place with the project file..she can explain everything to you..once you study it you can take a decision about the investment..anmol with great difficulty controlled his happiness…ragini coming to meet him…rishab..not getting a reply from him said …anmol if it's a bad idea then..anmol..no..its ok with me..i will wait for her to come with the file..rishab…that's great..her night shift is at 6pm..is 5 o'clock ok for you?...anmol..yes perfect..rishab a favor from you..i have not let anyone know about my arrival here..in fact I'm on a personal visit here.. I'm staying at my new house …he jot down the address..you can say gaurav's name if she asked to whom she should deliver the file..i don't want anyone to know about my whereabouts for now..rishab..of course anmol.dont worry..anmol..how will she come? I can send the car..rishab..its ok anmol..my driver will drop her...anmol..i take your leave now..i will study the file and let you know in a few days..

In the car park…

Gaurav..why you asked rishab to say my name not yours?..anmol..think gaurav will ragini come if she gets hint that the file should be given to anmol sareen..the one who divorced her and never asked about her in these 2 years.. my dad was right its destiny..i came yesterday and today how things leading for us to meet again..cant tell you how I'm happy and scared too..happy to meet her and scared what if she does not want to listen to me..what if she does not trust me..my feelings for her..gaurav..dont think about all this and everything will be fine..lets go…

Finally anmol-ragini will meet after 2 years..

How will be the reaction of ragini ?..in next update..

Chapter 6..

Ragini's room..

Damini..what's the matter ragini?..i don't see the happiness that should be visible on your face ..ragini..kya matlab..damini..don't act ignorant ragini you do know what I mean…you just talk with the person you going to marry and look at you..no smile..no blush nothing..at the airport also it did not affect you one bit, he is leaving just after your engagement..ragini..he had a job to return to in Singapore..mein kya kartee..damini..you know why I stay here tonight to get the truth out of you..nowadays you completely lost in your thoughts.i have to repeat one thing 3 times for you to understand or listen to me..so tell me wat's the matter?..ragini..you are so stturborn.nothing is there to tell ..lets get some sleep..tomorrow I have a file to drop at some place for rishab sir then back to work..ready to get in bed when damini tells her..you love him..hein na ragini you love the one who threw you out of his life..ragini..you are mad I don't love him..damini..dont lie when you don't know how to lie..damini..i fail to understand why ..ragini..sat on the edge of the bed…mein khudh nahin jaantee..kyun..why I cant forget him..why my heart still have feelings for him though I know he never loved me..the day I married him it was for life this relationship..he divorced me still I feel so connected to him..tearyeyed tum hi bolo damini kyun uss beete pal ka sayaa mere saath hein..ussi ki tasveer mere dil mein hein ..i tried so many times to let go of that past but I cant do it..i want to be strong but just a thought of him I become so weak …ragini tears rolling down her cheeks...damini consoled her.. giving her a hug..please don't cry ..please..ragini wiping her tears,I did not want to get married..i would have lived my life with my past..apni zindagi uss beete pal ke saath guzaarti ..just for the sake of my mother's happiness ,I accepted that proposal.. prem is a nice person but I 'm unable to get that feeling for him in my heart..

Damini..nahin ragini if that is the case then its better to break this engagement..neither you will be happy nor him with this marriage..before its too late we will tell all this to chachaji..he will understand..ragini..you forgetting ma..she will not be able to bear it and I don't want a guilt on my conscience..agar mere taqdeer mein yehi hein then I'm ready to go through this marriage..who knows prem love will make me forget my past one day..waise bhi that past will never be back in my life..damini..what if he is back and ask for forgiveness ..kya karogi..ragini just stared at her without a response then finally said he will not come back..2 years he left and may be has already move on with his life..damini..really ragini your love for him is beyond explaination..you are ready to live a lonely life just with his thoughts..i feel destiny have something else in store for you..ragini...dont tell me you can read the future now..damini..i'm serious not joking..your life will change unexpectedly..ragini..i'm feeling sleepy and lay her head on the pillow..to herself..kaash damini kaash yeh saach hota..meri shaadi se pehele usse ek baar dekhne ki tamanna hein..i have a wish to see him once before my wedding..

Next day..

Gaurav..anmol you had a very sleepless night..anmol..i cant wait to see her ..why the time not going fast today?..gaurav..anmol go get some rest .i will wake you up…you don't want ragini to see you in such state..drowsy eyes..go upstairs..anmol..ok I will go but you wake me up..gaurav..dont worry I will do so before I leave you two alone.. anmol climbing the stairs when he heard gaurav ..yeh pyar kaisa rog hein..sleepless night …restlessness..wait feels like eternity..thank god I'm not in love..anmol..i have heard everything..your day will come buddy..then you too will get that pyar ka rog.. gaurav..laughing anmol go to sleep..much later,anmol all fresh coming downstairs..gaurav with a teasing smile on his face…anmol.. that smile I know it..say what you have to say..gaurav...how many outfits you have changed before wearing this one..anmol..what you mean how many outfits?.gaurav..i'm sure your room is a mess up there..black designer jeans..armani polo shirt..kya baat hein..want to impress your ladylove..anmol..pull my legs buddy.your time will come one day jab tumhein uss pyar ka rog hoga…gaurav..i need to meet a girl first and its ain't happening anytime..its time I leave..i have such a long list from mom to buy...i cant believe I'm going shopping…let me check the address of the mall or else I will get lost somewhere on the street...after so many years I'm back in india..so many changes have happenned.i'm glad we came back..i should leave now before you kick me out ..walking up to the door, he turned around and said..you looking great buddy and your ragini will be impressed.all the best and walked out leaving a beaming anmol behind..jaldi aa jaao ragini ..i have so much to say to you.so much forgiveness I have to ask to you..cant wait to propose to you and start our life afresh..he took out a jewellery box from his pocket and all smile looked at the diamond ring ..

The driver stopped the car and ragini step out of it with the file in hand..her cell ringing and answering it ..damini haan I have reached the place..you wait for me at the mall, I will pick you up once I have finished here..ok bye..the door was already opened and she hesitantly walked in..no one in sight ..ragini..noone here..may be he is upstairs..gaurav sir..waiting for a response she turned her back to the stairs looking around..anmol slowly coming downstairs never leaving his eyes from ragini..admiring her long straight hair …feeling a presence ragini turned around and completely shocked to see anmol standing in front of her..to herself.yeh saach nahin ho sakta..its my illusion..she closed her eyes and opened them again.anmol was still there looking so lovingly at her..anmol..ragini I'm back…hearing her name after 2 years from his mouth ,her heart started to beat faster..the build up emotions in her heart of seeing anmol so close made her hands tremble..the file dropped down from her hands and all papers scattering on the floor..she immeadiately bent down picking up the papers and anmol doing same..ragini could not stop herself but take a look at anmol so close to her..he turned his head and their eyes met..a complete silence with both lost in each other eyes…so much unspoken feelings being conveyed between them… ragini cell ringing brought her back to her sense..answering the call.jee rishab sir ..i have already reached here..jee sir…breathing a sigh,she turned around and without looking at anmol..yeh file rishab sir ne bejaa hein aap ke liye to study the project..he will wait for your call..she put the file on the couch and turned to go..anmol..ragini don't go..she closed her eyes and in her thought don't do this to me …I'm trying to forget you and your presence is making me weak..anmol came closer to her..please don't go..i have so much to say to you..we need to talk ragini..

Ragini stared at him this time and thinking be strong you can do it…..finally ragini said..there is nothing to say or talk ..2 years back all was said and done anmolji..you have moved on with your life and I'm doing it also..woh ek beete pal tha ..its the past and over..its getting late and i have to resume work ..she walked up to the door ..

Anmol-ragini face to face after 2 years..

Anmol has so much to confess to her but will ragini listen to him?..

Chapter 7..

Anmol..no ragini this time I cant nor will let you go from my life…ragini stopped and stared at him..i did a big mistake 2 years ago ..i regret it each day being away from you.i broke my dad's trust on me and divorce you..the guilt..the burden on my heart I have bear it during these 2 years..not one day you were not in my thought..when you left the house I cried so much ragini in your room..i was missing your presence and it was so painful …it was unbearable to live in that house without you..i left india but my love for you grew more each day..i realised how deeply I love you when you were gone from my life..sorry is such a little word for the injustice I did to you..i'm sorry ragini..please forgive me..i'm back for you only ragini..i cant bear to stay away from you anymore..forgive me..cupping her face, I love you ragini.very very much and it will always be you forever..lets start afresh our life ragini..i want to marry and he could not continue as ragini removed his hands from her face and took a back step ..anmol so softly said her name..ragini…please forgive me…

Ragini tears streaming down her cheeks choked with emotions hearing the three words she always wanted anmol to confess to her.. .to herself..my bad luck ,he confessed his love for me when I'm going to be someone else..meri sagaai and I cant break this rishta now.. my past back in my life ,it will destroy the happiness in my family specially my mother...she will not bear it if I break my engagement with prem..she has such a fragile health…it will be a humiliation for my family …kya karoun….i should do something..anmol came closer to her and about to wipe her tears when ragini stopped him.anmol..i know you hate me of what I did to you but I was at a ..ragini..jee aap bhool jaaye yeh sab..what happened it's the past and it will be good if we don't bring the past back ..it will hurt more..i think its time you should move on like I'm going to do..taking her courage ,she gazed at anmol…I'm engaged to someone else and getting married in a few weeks..

A deafening silence in the room and anmol felt someone has moved the ground beneath his feet..this word echoing in his head..i'm getting married..ragini heart breaking into pieces watching his tears escaping his eyes..in her heart I'm sorry to hurt you but its too late..we cant be together now.never..i should be strong so as he can move on in life..mujhe chalna chahiye..she headed to the door when she felt a grip on her arms..anmol turned her to face him..his grip tightened on her arms..i told you I'm back only for you..i wont let you go away from me..we may be divorced but you are still my wife ragini and will always be forever..you are in my heart and soul..ragini again feeling weak with anmol confession but regained self control saying..mein aap ki patni thi woh bhi sirf naam ki ab nahin..meri shaadi prem se hi hogee..anmol pulled her closer to him and ragini's heart beating faster with their closeness..forget about him as you are only mine..with full confidence in his voice said tum sirf meri ho ragini..emphasising more sirf anmol ki ragini ho tum..noone can come between us and I wont let it happened..ragini lowered her gaze seeing such junoon in anmol's eyes and talks..anmol smiled and said look in my eyes and say you don't love me..ragini tried to get away from his grip but anmol held her close to him.. …why are you scared to show your feelings?..i know you love me too and your eyes say it all..ragini let me go…anmol..how much you will run away from your feelings? ….ragini..you are wrong prem …anmol pulled her so close that she could feel his breath on her face…tumhare zubaan par sirf mera naam honee chahiye...its my name that should be on your lips ragini not that prem..you don't know how much I love you and what I can do in your love.. I will wait for that day, you will say I love you anmol..ragini completely drown in anmol's eyes and such intense love for her..getting her sense back..wat's happening to me?..i should leave from here or else I when she sighs in pain…

Ragini please mujhe choriye its hurting…anmol realized how his tight grip have left some red marks on her arms..anmol..i'm so sorry ragini ..wait I will put some …ragini…let it be ..yeh zakhm to kuch bhi nahin and rushed outside…she got in the car asking the driver to leave her at the hospital..anmol stood helplessly on the stairs outside watching ragini go away..you are mine ragini and you will confess your love for me..

The mall..

Damini waiting for ragini talking to one of her friend In one of the saree store...can you do a favor… fold these sarees for me..i will attend that lady or else she will create a scene if I let her wait..jaao I will do it…damini concentrated in folding the sarees ,when she heard someone say.. excuse me..she looked up and gaurav was standing in front of her..gaurav gazed at her and could not utter a word..damini murmuring ..why is he looking at me like this?..kuch karo damini..hello I think you said excuse me..so for what should I excuse you?can you please tell me..gaurav could only reply.. what..damini..are you ok?..gaurav..yes I'm sorry ..i want to buy sarees..can you help me please..?..damini murmured to herself he is mistaking me for the salegirl..kya soch rahee ho damini..it will be good time pass..smiling at him..jee aap kis ke liye saree karidna chahate hein..for whom you want to buy sarees…your wife..gaurav says …what…damini..i said..gaurav said no not my wife..i'm not married yet..for my mother and sister..damini murmuring to herself ,so good looking and he seems well off …not married yet..strange..well not my business..gaurav..you saying something.?.damini..jee nahin.. first you should tell me which color they prefer so I can show you and yelled 6.15pm..i'm dead…she took her hanbag rushing outside when gaurav said where are going?..damini..i'm not the salegirl..i work somewhere else and if I don't reach there in 10 minutes ..i'm dead..gaurav said what again..damini…do you know some other words apart from what what what..i will go crazy better I leave .

Outside she took her cell to call ragini..damini..ragini kahan ho..you remember me damini…its already 6.20 pm now..what you already reached the hospital..ragini you were going to pick me up..you forgot..wait what happened there..its ok I will take an auto or taxi..just cover up for me I'm coming..ending the call zaroor kuch hua hein for her to forget to pick me up..i'm sure that gaurav whatever is full of ego and has said something to ragini..gaurav..you know ragini..damini….yelled ahhh and put her hand on her heart…you scared me and were you listening to my conversation..?.gaurav..what…gosh since I saw you I'm making blunders …damini..about to say something when gaurav said to her ..dont say it I know more words beyond what..damini..i was not going to tell you this..i'm losing my time talking to you already I'm late for work..gaurav..i can drop you …damini looked at him suspiciously..i don't know you and why you want to drop me..you can be a killer..a prisoner escaped from jail..what if you kill me and in a dramatic voice saying my family will be shattered losing their only daughter..ragini will be devastated too..gaurav..what are you talking about?.do I look as a murderer to you.?.and ragini who is she for you?..damini..i'm her PA..personal assistant..gaurav..what…damini..taxi and she got in..through the car window, she told gaurav..there is a book stall in the mall..buy a dictionary you will find words beyond what..gaurav could not help but laugh at himself..this girl has made you a fool and completely lost of words..damini nice name…About to enter the mall when he got a call from anmol..gaurav..what happened anmol?..wait I'm coming and calm down..i'm coming…

The hospital..

Ragini entered a room and closed the door crying her heart pain …kyun aap doobara meri zindagi mein wapas aaye..why you came back in my life..it will hurt both of us..2 years I have waited for you with a hope and now you confessed your love but its too late..my family will never accept our relationship again..i cant break my engagement with prem..he accepted me and my family are so grateful towards him..she touched the red marks on her arm and gets flashback of their moment..how anmol has pulled her close to him saying tum sirf meri ho..wiping her tears..mein aap ki nahin ho sakti ..

Will anmol-ragini meet again or not?..

posted 3 new updates in a row...Will update after my break..will be absent for a week but will continue once I'm back..

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wow saveeta, read all parts, so captivating ,will look forward to next part. this ff is the best. thanks

Awesome Saveeta...
Part 5 ,6,7 are just mindblowing 👏👏👏👏

I just loved this part where Anmol grabs Ragini, like its his haq..

A deafening silence in the room and anmol felt someone has moved the ground beneath his feet..this word echoing in his head..i'm getting married..ragini heart breaking into pieces watching his tears escaping his eyes..in her heart I'm sorry to hurt you but its too late..we cant be together now.never..i should be strong so as he can move on in life..mujhe chalna chahiye..she headed to the door when she felt a grip on her arms..anmol turned her to face him..his grip tightened on her arms..i told you I'm back only for you..i wont let you go away from me..we may be divorced but you are still my wife ragini and will always be forever..you are in my heart and soul..ragini again feeling weak with anmol confession but regained self control saying..mein aap ki patni thi woh bhi sirf naam ki ab nahin..meri shaadi prem se hi hogee..anmol pulled her closer to him and ragini's heart beating faster with their closeness..forget about him as you are only mine..with full confidence in his voice said tum sirf meri ho ragini..emphasising more sirf anmol ki ragini ho tum..noone can come between us and I wont let it happened..ragini lowered her gaze seeing such junoon in anmol's eyes and talks..anmol smiled and said look in my eyes and say you don't love me..ragini tried to get away from his grip but anmol held her close to him.. …why are you scared to show your feelings?..i know you love me too and your eyes say it all..ragini let me go…anmol..how much you will run away from your feelings? ….ragini..you are wrong prem …anmol pulled her so close that she could feel his breath on her face…tumhare zubaan par sirf mera naam honee chahiye...its my name that should be on your lips ragini not that prem..you don't know how much I love you and what I can do in your love.. I will wait for that day, you will say I love you anmol..ragini completely drown in anmol's eyes and such intense love for her..getting her sense back..wat's happening to me?..i should leave from here or else I when she sighs in pain…

Ragini please mujhe choriye its hurting…anmol realized how his tight grip have left some red marks on her arms..anmol..i'm so sorry ragini ..wait I will put some …ragini…let it be ..yeh zakhm to kuch bhi nahin and rushed outside…she got in the car asking the driver to leave her at the hospital..anmol stood helplessly on the stairs outside watching ragini go away..you are mine ragini and you will confess your love for me..

This is just mindblowing and the way Anmol grabs Ragini !! The whole picture we can see infornt of our eyes.. The junoon as you said was clearly visible !👏👏👏

A Ranging Anmol who could'nt believe that Ragini could become someone elses its like his life had crushed!!

Felt like reading on and on please continue soon !!👍🏼

MIND BLOWING !!!

Saveeta I read all three in a go !!
It was so good,
I always loved Anmol when he is angry and frustrated and indeed was when Ragini told him that she is leaving the past behind and now nothing is left
The hand grabbing and the pain she felt straight touched his heart infact pierced it since he could'nt control his anxiety that he has come back just for her and she cannot see the junoon in his eyes
Here I feel Ragini is also right she never thought he wud come and since he walked out of her life she stil has him somewhere in her heart but she wil compromise

Garva and Damini ka tho was so sweet
Nice balance you have kept
Kaash DKP RS and SP and the team see this and they take this for season two of Bidaaii or even a new storyline with ANmol and Ragini and Apurva and Parul playing the part

Now have a good break and wish to see another continuation soon !!👏👏👏