Beete Pal..Angini SS,updated last chapter..pg 14 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
read part 4, 5, 6 and 7...
WOW. savee... fantastic...
i was visualizing.. i had a mix emotion... when reading this updates.. you have written it well dear. friend...
continue it after your break savee...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Akela Hoon Mein VM
@Krithika: Very nice VM my dear 👏 this song is perfect for Anmol 👍🏼

I like it very much 👏 keep continue like this 👍🏼 loved your each & every VM ❤️

👏 👏 Applause for you 👏 👏

Edited by manoo.18 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: manoo.18

Akela Hoon Mein VM
@Krithika: Very nice VM my dear 👏 this song is perfect for Anmol 👍🏼

I like it very much 👏 keep continue like this 👍🏼 loved your each & every VM ❤️

👏 👏 Applause for you 👏 👏

Thanks a lot dear.🤗

The song and the picture suggestion was by saveeta.👍🏼

Glad you liked the VM too.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Chapter 6

Fantastic update Saveeta.👏👏👏

Ragini and damini's conversation was so well written .👍🏼ragini could not forget her past and that is her anmol ❤️,though he didn't accept her as his wife the love she has for him is so beautiful.❤️

I just loved reading these lines , so touching it was,❤️

ragini..sat on the edge of the bed…mein khudh nahin jaantee..kyun..why I cant forget him..why my heart still have feelings for him though I know he never loved me..the day I married him it was for life this relationship..he divorced me still I feel so connected to him..tearyeyed tum hi bolo damini kyun uss beete pal ka sayaa mere saath hein..ussi ki tasveer mere dil mein hein ..i tried so many times to let go of that past but I cant do it..i want to be strong but just a thought of him I become so weak …ragini tears rolling down her cheeks...damini consoled her.. giving her a hug..please don't cry ..please..ragini wiping her tears,I did not want to get married..i would have lived my life with my past..apni zindagi uss beete pal ke saath guzaarti ..

Anmol Gourav's scene was very funny as well as good 😆.Gaurav pulling his friend's leg ,there is a time for him too.😉Anmol can't wait to meet his ragini.😍His anxiety to meet his ragini was so well written ,i was all smile reading this,😍😃😍

.jaldi aa jaao ragini ..i have so much to say to you.so much forgiveness I have to ask to you..cant wait to propose to you and start our life afresh..he took out a jewellery box from his pocket and all smile looked at the diamond ring ..

The scene which i was waiting for long 😍, anmol ragini meet was MINDBLOWING. 👏👏👏

This whole scene was in front of my eyes 😍, The way you have written i was just visualizing reading it.😍Anmol and ragini so much love for each other but still not together, ❤️😭


the door was already opened and she hesitantly walked in..no one in sight ..ragini..noone here..may be he is upstairs..gaurav sir..waiting for a response she turned her back to the stairs looking around..anmol slowly coming downstairs never leaving his eyes from ragini..admiring her long straight hair …feeling a presence ragini turned around and completely shocked to see anmol standing in front of her..to herself.yeh saach nahin ho sakta..its my illusion..she closed her eyes and opened them again.anmol was still there looking so lovingly at her..😍anmol..ragini I'm back…hearing her name after 2 years from his mouth ,her heart started to beat faster..the build up emotions in her heart of seeing anmol so close made her hands tremble..the file dropped down from her hands and all papers scattering on the floor..she immeadiately bent down picking up the papers and anmol doing same..ragini could not stop herself but take a look at anmol so close to her..😍he turned his head and their eyes met..a complete silence with both lost in each other eyes…so much unspoken feelings being conveyed between them… ragini cell ringing brought her back to her sense..answering the call.jee rishab sir ..i have already reached here..jee sir…breathing a sigh,she turned around and without looking at anmol..yeh file rishab sir ne bejaa hein aap ke liye to study the project..he will wait for your call..she put the file on the couch and turned to go..anmol..ragini don't go..she closed her eyes and in her thought don't do this to me …I'm trying to forget you and your presence is making me weak..anmol came closer to her..please don't go..i have so much to say to you..we need to talk ragini..❤️
Ragini stared at him this time and thinking be strong you can do it…..finally ragini said..there is nothing to say or talk ..2 years back all was said and done anmolji..you have moved on with your life and I'm doing it also..woh ek beete pal tha ..its the past and over..its getting late and i have to resume work ..she walked up to the door ..💔

You ended with a suspense Saveeta,will read the next update now but post my comments later.😃






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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Wow saveeta awesome cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: saveeta24

Chapter 7..

Anmol..no ragini this time I cant nor will let you go from my life'ragini stopped and stared at him..i did a big mistake 2 years ago ..i regret it each day being away from you.i broke my dad's trust on me and divorce you..the guilt..the burden on my heart I have bear it during these 2 years..not one day you were not in my thought..when you left the house I cried so much ragini in your room..i was missing your presence and it was so painful 'it was unbearable to live in that house without you..i left india but my love for you grew more each day..i realised how deeply I love you when you were gone from my life..sorry is such a little word for the injustice I did to you..i'm sorry ragini..please forgive me..i'm back for you only ragini..i cant bear to stay away from you anymore..forgive me..cupping her face, I love you ragini.very very much and it will always be you forever..lets start afresh our life ragini..i want to marry and he could not continue as ragini removed his hands from her face and took a back step ..anmol so softly said her name..ragini'please forgive me'

Ragini tears streaming down her cheeks choked with emotions hearing the three words she always wanted anmol to confess to her.. .to herself..my bad luck ,he confessed his love for me when I'm going to be someone else..meri sagaai and I cant break this rishta now.. my past back in my life ,it will destroy the happiness in my family specially my mother...she will not bear it if I break my engagement with prem..she has such a fragile health'it will be a humiliation for my family 'kya karoun'.i should do something..anmol came closer to her and about to wipe her tears when ragini stopped him.anmol..i know you hate me of what I did to you but I was at a ..ragini..jee aap bhool jaaye yeh sab..what happened it's the past and it will be good if we don't bring the past back ..it will hurt more..i think its time you should move on like I'm going to do..taking her courage ,she gazed at anmol'I'm engaged to someone else and getting married in a few weeks..

A deafening silence in the room and anmol felt someone has moved the ground beneath his feet..this word echoing in his head..i'm getting married..ragini heart breaking into pieces watching his tears escaping his eyes..in her heart I'm sorry to hurt you but its too late..we cant be together now.never..i should be strong so as he can move on in life..mujhe chalna chahiye..she headed to the door when she felt a grip on her arms..anmol turned her to face him..his grip tightened on her arms..i told you I'm back only for you..i wont let you go away from me..we may be divorced but you are still my wife ragini and will always be forever..you are in my heart and soul..ragini again feeling weak with anmol confession but regained self control saying..mein aap ki patni thi woh bhi sirf naam ki ab nahin..meri shaadi prem se hi hogee..anmol pulled her closer to him and ragini's heart beating faster with their closeness..forget about him as you are only mine..with full confidence in his voice said tum sirf meri ho ragini..emphasising more sirf anmol ki ragini ho tum..noone can come between us and I wont let it happened..ragini lowered her gaze seeing such junoon in anmol's eyes and talks..anmol smiled and said look in my eyes and say you don't love me..ragini tried to get away from his grip but anmol held her close to him.. 'why are you scared to show your feelings?..i know you love me too and your eyes say it all..ragini let me go'anmol..how much you will run away from your feelings? '.ragini..you are wrong prem 'anmol pulled her so close that she could feel his breath on her face'tumhare zubaan par sirf mera naam honee chahiye...its my name that should be on your lips ragini not that prem..you don't know how much I love you and what I can do in your love.. I will wait for that day, you will say I love you anmol..ragini completely drown in anmol's eyes and such intense love for her..getting her sense back..wat's happening to me?..i should leave from here or else I when she sighs in pain'

Ragini please mujhe choriye its hurting'anmol realized how his tight grip have left some red marks on her arms..anmol..i'm so sorry ragini ..wait I will put some 'ragini'let it be ..yeh zakhm to kuch bhi nahin and rushed outside'she got in the car asking the driver to leave her at the hospital..anmol stood helplessly on the stairs outside watching ragini go away..you are mine ragini and you will confess your love for me..

The mall..

Damini waiting for ragini talking to one of her friend In one of the saree store...can you do a favor' fold these sarees for me..i will attend that lady or else she will create a scene if I let her wait..jaao I will do it'damini concentrated in folding the sarees ,when she heard someone say.. excuse me..she looked up and gaurav was standing in front of her..gaurav gazed at her and could not utter a word..damini murmuring ..why is he looking at me like this?..kuch karo damini..hello I think you said excuse me..so for what should I excuse you?can you please tell me..gaurav could only reply.. what..damini..are you ok?..gaurav..yes I'm sorry ..i want to buy sarees..can you help me please..?..damini murmured to herself he is mistaking me for the salegirl..kya soch rahee ho damini..it will be good time pass..smiling at him..jee aap kis ke liye saree karidna chahate hein..for whom you want to buy sarees'your wife..gaurav says 'what'damini..i said..gaurav said no not my wife..i'm not married yet..for my mother and sister..damini murmuring to herself ,so good looking and he seems well off 'not married yet..strange..well not my business..gaurav..you saying something.?.damini..jee nahin.. first you should tell me which color they prefer so I can show you and yelled 6.15pm..i'm dead'she took her hanbag rushing outside when gaurav said where are going?..damini..i'm not the salegirl..i work somewhere else and if I don't reach there in 10 minutes ..i'm dead..gaurav said what again..damini'do you know some other words apart from what what what..i will go crazy better I leave .

Outside she took her cell to call ragini..damini..ragini kahan ho..you remember me damini'its already 6.20 pm now..what you already reached the hospital..ragini you were going to pick me up..you forgot..wait what happened there..its ok I will take an auto or taxi..just cover up for me I'm coming..ending the call zaroor kuch hua hein for her to forget to pick me up..i'm sure that gaurav whatever is full of ego and has said something to ragini..gaurav..you know ragini..damini'.yelled ahhh and put her hand on her heart'you scared me and were you listening to my conversation..?.gaurav..what'gosh since I saw you I'm making blunders 'damini..about to say something when gaurav said to her ..dont say it I know more words beyond what..damini..i was not going to tell you this..i'm losing my time talking to you already I'm late for work..gaurav..i can drop you 'damini looked at him suspiciously..i don't know you and why you want to drop me..you can be a killer..a prisoner escaped from jail..what if you kill me and in a dramatic voice saying my family will be shattered losing their only daughter..ragini will be devastated too..gaurav..what are you talking about?.do I look as a murderer to you.?.and ragini who is she for you?..damini..i'm her PA..personal assistant..gaurav..what'damini..taxi and she got in..through the car window, she told gaurav..there is a book stall in the mall..buy a dictionary you will find words beyond what..gaurav could not help but laugh at himself..this girl has made you a fool and completely lost of words..damini nice name'About to enter the mall when he got a call from anmol..gaurav..what happened anmol?..wait I'm coming and calm down..i'm coming'

The hospital..

Ragini entered a room and closed the door crying her heart pain 'kyun aap doobara meri zindagi mein wapas aaye..why you came back in my life..it will hurt both of us..2 years I have waited for you with a hope and now you confessed your love but its too late..my family will never accept our relationship again..i cant break my engagement with prem..he accepted me and my family are so grateful towards him..she touched the red marks on her arm and gets flashback of their moment..how anmol has pulled her close to him saying tum sirf meri ho..wiping her tears..mein aap ki nahin ho sakti ..

Will anmol-ragini meet again or not?..

posted 3 new updates in a row...Will update after my break..will be absent for a week but will continue once I'm back..

Do press the like button and do comment if you find story interesting...😳

WOW WOW WOW My Friend.👏👏👏

The whole update was MINDBLOWING.👏👏👏

I just read it again and again and again.😍❤️😍

Angini scene was so well written 👏, It was just like watching it live.😍

I just love this story more and more now.😍❤️😍

Angini's meet was FANTASTIC with so much love passion longing for each other.👏👏👏You were Superbbb Saveeta , I couldn't ask for more.👏👏👏

Just can't wait for your return soon to read the next chapter and my angini's next meet.😍

Loved Gourav and Damini's first meet ❤️,it was so funny and completely different .👍🏼So Gourav fell for Damini in his first meet , 😉Damini's character is so lively .❤️

Missing you so much my friend 😭,come back soon.🤗



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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
plz update soon ...nd show the pic of prem ...ur tooo guddd jb ma tumhare story ko read krti hn tou ma such ma bidaai ko misss nhi krti is ly jaida jaida update kia kro na ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
She will be back soon just on some personal work. We are also waiting for her update
I am sure she has a handsome Prem in mind !😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: shanti05

She will be back soon just on some personal work. We are also waiting for her update
I am sure she has a handsome Prem in mind !😳

@ Shanti , saveeta always posts handsome guys picture in her FF😳.But for me no one makes me crazy than my anmol.😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Yes so true she gets some good looking guys in her FF..

I think she should be in the casting crew for the production house and we wil get the best shows ever..

Most of the time she tries to help Zee with the best guys in town , but the what happens is those guys end up getting their compatable better half and Zee is left heart brken

Only in Pyaar Ka ehsaas she finally got Zehir..

Otherwise Aryan was already lost to Nandini and the others in Taqdeer ka khel

Here also Gaurav is lost in the whaaat thought of Daamini si no chance for Zee

and waise we are always in line for Anmol after Ragini
But our sad luck since Ragini is always Anmols 😍

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