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Posted: 14 years ago
wooow nice part like it plzzz update soon
Edited by nidhashad - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter:23
Alekh is trying to sleep but he keeps on thinking about Sadhana and in what condition she is in. He turns the lamp on and takes out a picture of Sadhana. Alekh: Hope you are okay Sadi. I love u soo much and i will die if something happens to you id die.
In the morning
Ranvir: Ragini, where are you? Ragini comes down looking worried. Alekh: What happened Ragi? Ragini: I dont know. What if something goes wrong? Ranvir: Nothing will go wrong darling. We will be 2 miles away with binoculars watching you. Here's the money. Ragini: Thanks. I will be going. Ranvir: Wait. And he kisses her. Alekh sees but he doesnt say anything.
Building 233
Ragini comes out of her car. A person with a mask comes with her. Person: Ragini? Ragini: Yes. Person: Come with me. Ragini goes up and sees 2 people sitting in a sofa. She's shocked to see Ambika Sareen and Mr.Mehra. Ambika: Ragini, your mother married you to someone else and now i can take my revenge. Mr.Mehra: Give us the money. She gives it. Ragini: Give me my parents and parents-in-law. Ambika: First go fetch Sadhana. Remember only 20 minutes and by foot. 2 miles. And...gooo.
15 minutes later: Building 243
Ragini reaches out of breath and sees Naveen. Naveen: Well my so-called to be wife u need something. Ragini: Just give me Sadhana. Naveen: Come with me. Ragini: Sadhana and they hug. Avni: Do u want your parents back? Here's a map and in this spot maybe your parents are there. Sadhana: Maybe? Avni: Its the 1st clue. 10 minutes by foot.
6 minutes later: Park
Near their X spot there's a note there which is a map to a mall. 20 minutes. They pass Alekh and Ranvir while running who wear a disguise and follow them. Alekh gets a phone call. Shishir: Hello Alekh u are missing your parents right? Well solve this riddle: What has a body and a head but no legs and arms? U have 5 minutes. Ranvir: Well a book only has a body and a back. Alekh: What about a bottle? It has a body and a head and does not have legs and arms. Shishir calls. Shishir: Do you have your answer? Alekh: Yes a bottle. Shishir: Correct but to get a bonus do u know another one? Ranvir takes the phone. Ranvir: A pencil. Shishir: Correct. I'll call later.
PRECAP: They reach the mall and Ragini gets a shock
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Posted: 14 years ago
next part next part next part

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Posted: 14 years ago
Guys im very busy i'll update monday

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: melahi99

Guys im very busy i'll update monday


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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter:24
The mall
When Sagini reach the place required to reach they found their parents tied up. When they untied them, Ragini got a shock. Standing in front of her was her best friend who betrayed her and went off with Sanjay. Ragini: What are u doing here? Sakshi: Its a free world Ragini. I can do what ever i want. But before u take ur parents and leave give me one reason why i was wrong? Ragini: U were my best friend and u betrayed me with my boyfriend. Sadhana gets a call. Alekh: Sadhana bring 25 lakh quick.
They reach the place Alekh told them to and Alekh gives them the money and in return they get Inderjeet's brother, Satyen back. Everyone go back home and there Sadhana and Ragini faint. They take them to the hospital and find out that they are pregnant. Everyone is full of joy.
Salekh conversation: Alekh: Thank u Sadhana for giving me a little child. This will be our identity. Sadhana: Yes Alekh i cant believe im going to be a mother.
Ragvir conversation: Ranvir: Hey junior this is the happiest person your dad talking. Come fast and make your mother's life busy. Ragini: Not only me even u will take care of our child. Ranvir: Of course i will
Over the next 8 months the caring husbands were always there for their wives.
Here's one time at midnight
Sadhana and Ragini needed water and they were getting up but a hand grabbed them from behind and made them lie down. Then they got up and got them water themselves. In the day Vasu and Kaushi always came to their bahus to ask about their health and to keep them company.
One time Sadhana was not feeling well and Vasu saw her. She made her lie down and rubbed water on her forehead. She called Alekh who came running from the office. He massaged her body and she woke up feelinSo Ragini u know if we have a boy im going to name him Arjun ang refreshed.
Ranvir:d a girl Anupama. Ragini: Yeah they are so good names. Ranvir: U are being sarcastic? Ragini: Ofcourse. If we have a boy his name will be Tushar and if a girl Tamanna. Ranvir: Wow u got good choices.
Alekh was drawing. He finished himself and Sadhana but did not draw their child. Alekh: What should i draw Sadhana? A boy or a girl. Sadhana: For now both. A boy Karthik and girl Khushi. Alekh: good names. You are very smart Sadi. thats why i married u.
PRECAP: GODH BHARAI

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Posted: 14 years ago
After next chapter i will do a leap so u guys can see the interaction with their kids.
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Chapter:25
Godh Bharai
Took place in Sharma House.Ragini was weaing a blue saree and Sadhana a red one. The men begged to be in the Godh Bharai and Ragini and Sadhana agreed.
One day when Vasu came to check on Sadhana she was shocked to find her fainted on the floor. She immediately called Alekh and the Sharmas and took her to the hospital. Alekh came rushing in and went with her inside. The Rajvanshs and the Sharmas were standing tensed in the hallway. Ragini was sitting on the bench with Ranvir hugging her. Then they hear 2 babies crying. The nurse comes out and says "Congratulations. Sadhana has given birth to twins, one boy and one girl." The 2 families congratulate each other. Alekh comes out beaming with joy holding his 2 babies. Everyone peak in. Vasu: They are so beautiful just like u Alekh. Kaushi: They look like my Sadhana. Sharma: Alekh Babu, how's Sadhana? Alekh: She's fine. They are shifting her in the room. Nurse: You can meet Sadhana now. Ranvir: Congrats Sadi, u made me an uncle (mama). Sadhana: Bhaiya. Ragini: U alright? Sadhana: Yes next is your turn. Sharma: Now me and Kaushalyaji are nana, nani (grandparents). Vasu: And us dada, dadi (grandparents). Nurse: Patient needs to rest. One can stay. Alekh: I'll stay. Kaushi: no u look tired. i'll stay.
The next day
Alekh takes an off and brings Sadhana home. He sets her up on the bed where she feeds her 2 children. Alekh: Our Karthik and Khushi are looking so cute. Sadhana: Yes Alekh. Now we are mama and papa we have big responsibilities. Alekh gets a call. Ranvir: You and Sadhana reach the hospital. Ragini got labor pain. Alekh: Ok we are coming. He takes Karthik in his arms and Sadhana takes Khushi. Everyone is tensed about Ragini until they hear a cry. Nurse: Congratulations. Ragini has given birth to a girl. Everyone is happy and congratulate each other. Ranvir comes out holding the baby girl Tamanna. He gives her to Sharma. Sharma: Meri Tamanna. Kaushalya: Now we are dada dadi. Vasu: And us nana nani. They go to Ragini. Alekh: Now i am a mama. Tamanna will be loved by all. Ragini: See Sadhana i have given a girl. Sadhana: yeah Ragini. Vasu: I will stay with my daughter. Inderjeet: God bless Tamanna. The next day Ranvir brought Ragini home with Tamanna.
RAJVANSH HOUSE
Alekh and Sadhana were sleeping when they heard Kartik and Khushi crying. They both woke up and fed them. Then Sadhana sang a lullaby. Then they went to sleep. While Alekh and Sadhana watched them with a smile and then stared into each others eyes.
SHARMA HOUSE
Ragini woke up Ranvir as Tamanna was crying. Ragini: Could you get her milk? They fed her and she went to sleep. Ragini sang a lullaby for her. Ranvir: What about u? She kissed him on the cheek and ran to their bed.
One year later Ragini gave birth to a baby boy Tushar.
PRECAP: KHUSHI AND KARTHIK'S BIRTHDAY
Edited by melahi99 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
both chapters r vry good👏
leap😲 bt no death kk

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