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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey bidaaians! This is my first ff so please bear with me and give me tips!
Here is the Index:

Characters:

Sharmas:

Prakashchand: (Mama ji, Bauji) An honest man who loves his daughters Akshara and Sadhana and his sons Ranvir and Vineet. Kaushalya: Mother of Sadhana and Vineet. She loves her children a lot. She also takes care of her sister-in-laws children and treats them like her own children.

Sadhana:.An independent woman. She is bubbly, sweet and beautiful. She can do anything for her family and her best friend Ragini whom she considers as her sister. She works as a college teacher in music. Loves her brother Ranvir a lot. (20)

Ranvir: The eldest child. He is caring and handsome. Cares a lot about his sister Sadhana. He handles all the business work along Vineet and can do anything for his family and his best friend Alekh. He works as a college teacher in Art part-time. (22)

Vineet: The brother of Sadhana. Cares a lot about his sisters. Supports his family. He can do anything for his family especially Akshara. He works in his father's company. (21)

Akshara: A sweet, talkative and pretty girl. She is the youngest so is protected by her older brothers. She is still in college. (19)

RAJVANSH FAMILY:

Vasundhara Rajvansh: A strict woman from the outside but from the inside she cares deeply about her sons Alekh and Naitik and her daughters Ragini and Malti. She will do anything to get her way.

Inderjeet Rajvansh: The owner of the multimillion company Rajvansh Industries. Is completely dominated by his wife Vasu. Has a soft spot for Alekh but loves Ragini the most.

Alekh: The eldest child. Works in a college as a sports teacher. But whenever his dad's company needs him, he doesn't hesitate. He's a handsome, charming and sweet young man. He loves his sisters (22)

Ragini: The older daughter. Works in a college as a computer teacher. She is a beautiful, sweet and bubbly girl. She loves her brother Alekh the most. (21)

Naitik: Works in his father's company. Whenever his sisters need him he rushes to their rescue. He is protective of Malti and loves her the most.(20)

Malti: As the youngest daughter, she is protected by both her brothers, especially Naitik. She is rather funny and always tries to put a smile on her siblings faces. Loves all her siblings.(19) She is still in college.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice introduction plzzz update d chapter as soon as possible❤️
btw wats ur name?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: melahi99

Hey bidaaians! This is my first ff so please bear with me and give me tips!
Here is the Index:

Characters:

Sharmas:

Prakashchand: (Mama ji, Bauji) An honest man who loves his daughters Akshara and Sadhana and his sons Ranvir and Vineet. Kaushalya: Mother of Sadhana and Vineet. She loves her children a lot. She also takes care of her sister-in-laws children and treats them like her own children.

Sadhana:.An independent woman. She is bubbly, sweet and beautiful. She can do anything for her family and her best friend Ragini whom she considers as her sister. She works as a college teacher in music. Loves her brother Ranvir a lot. (20)

Ranvir: The eldest child. He is caring and handsome. Cares a lot about his sister Sadhana. He handles all the business work along Vineet and can do anything for his family and his best friend Alekh. He works as a college teacher in Art part-time. (22)

Vineet: The brother of Sadhana. Cares a lot about his sisters. Supports his family. He can do anything for his family especially Akshara. He works in his father's company. (21)

Akshara: A sweet, talkative and pretty girl. She is the youngest so is protected by her older brothers. She is still in college. (19)

RAJVANSH FAMILY:

Vasundhara Rajvansh: A strict woman from the outside but from the inside she cares deeply about her sons Alekh and Naitik and her daughters Ragini and Malti. She will do anything to get her way.

Inderjeet Rajvansh: The owner of the multimillion company Rajvansh Industries. Is completely dominated by his wife Vasu. Has a soft spot for Alekh but loves Ragini the most.

Alekh: The eldest child. Works in a college as a sports teacher. But whenever his dad's company needs him, he doesn't hesitate. He's a handsome, charming and sweet young man. He loves his sisters (22)

Ragini: The older daughter. Works in a college as a computer teacher. She is a beautiful, sweet and bubbly girl. She loves her brother Alekh the most. (21)

Naitik: Works in his father's company. Whenever his sisters need him he rushes to their rescue. He is protective of Malti and loves her the most.(20)

Malti: As the youngest daughter, she is protected by both her brothers, especially Naitik. She is rather funny and always tries to put a smile on her siblings faces. Loves all her siblings.(19) She is still in college.


plzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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CHAPTER 1:
Sharma House
Sadhana is sleeping and Ranvir is admiring how peaceful she looks when she sleeps. He thinks " Its like she loses all her tension when she sleeps" "And what an idiot i am for not sleeping" Sadhana's alarm rings and she finds
Ranvir staring at her. "Bhaiya u didnt sleep did u?" Ranvir looks embarrassed. "I know u didnt prepare for teaching and u did it all last night. I told u to do it before" "Okay Sadhana spare me the lectures and get ready. Sadhana goes and wakes up Akshara. "Akshara, get up have to go to college. "Okay di" She says yawning. Vineet:"Good Morning" Sadhana"Good Morning" "Ma has made breakfast so come down fast"
Rajvansh House
Ragini is trying to get Alekh to wake up. "Bhaiya, we have to teach" He gets up. "Why werent u waking up?" He doesnt reply. "Ragi, let me change" She goes. Alekh: Wow Ragi u look like u're going to a fashion show instead of going to teach at a college Ragini: Thanks bhai. Vasu: Come for breakfast
Sharma House
Sadhana: Ma bhai didnot sleep yesterday. Bauji: We know he will never change. Ma: He'll always do things last minute. Ranvir: hey im right here u know. His parents: We know. Akshara and Vineet come. They finish their breakfast. Sadhana: Wow ma amazing food. They all agree.
Rajvansh House
Alekh: Thanks for the delicious food, mom. Vasu: Welcome. Now don't u have to go? Ragini: Yes. Inderjeet: Come on Naitik we have an important meeting with the Sharmas. Naitik: Lets go Dad.
In Ranvir's Car
Sadhana: Bhai, u just did a very stupid mistake. Ranvir: Are you continuing this mornings lecture? Sadhana: No, this is new. They stop at a signal. Sadhana: Look closely at your pants. Ranvir looks and finds a stain. Ranvir: Shit. Sadhana: Dont worry after you drop Akshara i'll go and get clean pants. Ranvir: Thanks sis.
PRECAP: The 4some meet

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Posted: 14 years ago
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My name is malaika. And i'll try to post chapter 2 ASAP pls tell me if u like it. Dont criticize but u can give me tips. Appreciated😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: melahi99

And i'll try to post chapter 2 ASAP pls tell me if u like it. Dont criticize but u can give me tips. Appreciated😊

Guys if u didnt like Chapter 1 tell me so i dont work on other chapters bc it will be a waste if u dont like it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Your FF is really good Malaika
It's not Bad at all
I really like your FF
Upload really soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: melahi99

Guys if u didnt like Chapter 1 tell me so i dont work on other chapters bc it will be a waste if u dont like it

Don't Worry Malaika
I'm Sure people will like you FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kinrul143

Don't Worry Malaika
I'm Sure people will like you FF

Thanks Kinrul143 u are very nice and thanks for liking my ff i will update ASAP Chapter 2 probably tomorrow
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice ff hun ! ragini and alekh bro and sis and ranvir and sadhna nice change !

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